Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2020 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 10

This is the 2nd time o have read this! I absolutely love it!!!

Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2020 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 10

This is the 2nd time o have read this! I absolutely love it!!!

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2020 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 10

Love it

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2018 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 10

Thanks for writing

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2018 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 10

This was a great story!!  And I loved Brian's tattoo.   That alone says the three words he can never say out out loud!!

Reviewer: TatyBacher (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2017 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 10

Such a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it.  <3



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.  Angst and B/J love just seem to go hand-in-hand.  I really appreciate your comments and thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2017 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 10

Once in a while I come back to this story and always read the last chapter twice as a reward for all heavy angst I had to endure :)

I love it! Thank you!

Author's Response:

Your comment gave me the biggest smile today, thank you so much!  I sincerely appreciate getting your comment, they are few and far between.  It's a heavy, angst-ridden story but I hope the pay-off is worth it.  Thanks for reading and all the best. 

Laura

Reviewer: Suffajet88 (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2016 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 10

Wow wow  woow.  Someone referred me to this and I get it.  So deep and well written I couldn't stop reading. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  Sorry about the very delayed response, my health hasn't been the best in the last couple of years.  All the best. 

Laura

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2016 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 10

I loved this story. Great job and thank for sharing. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you liked the story and I appreciate your kind words.  Thanks for leaving comments, it is so very appreciated!

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2016 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 10

No I want everyone to know

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2014 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 10

God, you have no idea how much I love this story. Horrible things happening, but so much growth. And still in character. I've read it a dozen times and this is a Brian I can identify with as canon, and yet still find a little fuzzy love for. And a strong but still boyish Justin!

I'm a huge fan of getting Justin/Brian away from the family. I love them, but I'd off myself if I had to deal with a family that much up in my business. I understand that some other people find that much interferring a comforting thing, but for me it's invasive and so potentially damaging.

Thanks for this. I'm putting it aside to read for the thirteenth time when I want to feel the love. ;)

Roni

 

Reviewer: tonton (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2013 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 10

The last sentence is perfect, because they belong together.  This story is so moving and it is real.  I am not a writer so I can't express what I feel but it is such a great story.  It deserves the ribbons.  I have actually read this many times and decided to comment on all the pages.  I hope you will write more and soon.

Reviewer: BJ4ever (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2013 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 10

I just realized that I read this story before, but it's been awhile. Hahahahah!  I saw it mentioned at get it here livejournal and thought I want to read it.  This is so fine and so wonderful.  I think I reviewed it before and I wonder why you don't have hundred of more comments.  I love this story and that's for real.

Reviewer: kimi (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2013 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 10

This was heart wrenching and heart warming at the same time..i really enjoyed.reading.it..thnks for sharing

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 10

I just discovered and finished this story.  I really enjoyed it and was happy to see Justin and Brian getting their lives back together.  I also, loved the Doc Joe character and the fact that Brian took the time to go visit with him.  



Author's Response:

A big hug of thanks to you for reading and commenting on this story!  It was my first QAF story and the 2nd fanfiction that I ever wrote.  I'm glad you loved Doe Joe, he's actually patterned after someone I once worked with. 

You're so kind and I can't thank you enough.

All the very best, my friend,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2013 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 10

That was even better the second time reading it... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thanks so much for reading the fic again!  But, I'll never be able to thank you enough for reading and leaving a comment, especially since this was a second time of reading it.  That is so kind and so very, very appreciated.

All the very best,

Laura

Reviewer: Claypool (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2012 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 10

I don't know if I have left a comment b4 but I'm leaving another this is like the 100th time I read this fic and every time it gets to me. I love it sooo much. I was wondering if you plan to write another fic cause I will definitely be reading it. :)

Author's Response:

Wow, my head is spinning, what a wonderful compliment.  I'm so glad that you enjoy the story and have read it more than once - I'm extremely flattered. 

I really appreciate that you took the time to leave a comment, and a lovely one at that.  Thanks so very much!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: awan_angel (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 10

Hi,
I enjoy this story. It's quite ending you made. Justin cut all of communication from his friends other than Brian and his mom. Too sad though he's happy with his new life in Michigan. I just can't stand if any of my friend no longer wants any contact with me anymore. I wish you could make them come back to Pitts and start a new life.

And for Ethan doing such violence thing to the person he loved? I think that he didn't love Justin that he's just using him. But I hate that the justice just punish him like that. Such thing makes us don't trust the system anymore T___T

~awan



Author's Response:

Hi There!

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story.  Yep, this fic had some surprising twists, but I wanted to veer away from the norm and try something different.  I don't Ethan really loved Justin, either.  I think Ethan lived in a fantasy world and that was sad for Justin in the TV show and dangerous for Justin in this story.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 10

Yes I really liked this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it.  I'm so glad that you liked the story.

All the best!

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 10

I have OCD and don't like uneven numbers, so I left another to make it 170.  Hehe. 



Author's Response:

Oh, okay, not a problem. 

Thanks!

Laura

Reviewer: BJ4Ever (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 10

Thuis was so amazing.  I think one of the best ionthe whispers site.  I just had to go back and writ reviews.  there are not enough.  I don't know why, but there shold be.  so good, the best.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, thanks for reading!  Your kind words are very appreciated!  I'm grateful for any and all comments and I am so glad that you went out of your way to leave them.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2012 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 10

I fell in love with this story with the first chapter and the last was just as engaging. Lumberjack Justin, HAHAHA! Very romantic and perfect ending. Please don't hesitate to provide another story or more Lumberjack Justin.

 

Thanks for the ride.:)



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the story.  I loved that, "more Lumberjack Justin."  From pictures I've seen, Randy looks great with a full beard and it's a good beard too.  Not a scrappy one. 

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 10

Loved it... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Glad you enjoyed the fic.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: mariana (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2012 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 10

I've read it in one go and enjoy it very much.

Are you sure you don't want to continue?.......lol

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it!  I don't intend to do a sequel but am working on some other fics, hopefully you'll enjoy them, too.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 10

I waited until I had time to read this from start to finish only to discover that I had already read it some time ago. When I first started reading fic’s I didn’t leave reviews but I’m so glad this is the featured story for November 2012 as it gives me the opportunity to tell you how much I enjoyed it. Congratulations on the blue ribbon.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Thanks for coming back and reading again and leaving a comment.  It's very much appreciated.  And thanks for the well wishes, I'm stunned to be honored and I really appreciate the site's generosity.

All the best to you,

Laura

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 10

I read this story from angsty beginning to end in one sitting. For a first fic, you definitely struck gold.

I absolutely love how they forced the family by omission, to stay out of their relationship especially while Justin was healing. It allowed Brian to realize that Justin was and always will be in his heart.

Nice work JP

Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words, I really appreciate that you read and commented.  Sometimes the family just got in the way, even when they had good intentions.

Again, thanks for reading.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2012 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 10

Absolutely beautiful.......



Author's Response:

You are too kind.  Thanks so much!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2012 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 10

Congratulations on the best fanfiction award and for your story being featured as the story of the month.



Author's Response:

Kim,

Thanks for the well wishes.  I didn't know that it had been made the featured story until I saw your comment - so that's a double thank you!

I really appreciate that you went out of your way and took the time to say something.  It was very kind of you.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 10

I really love this whole story alot.I love that brian got the tattoo too :)



Author's Response:

Yvonne,

Thanks so very, very much for reading and leaving a comment!  I really appreciate that you took the time to be kind and say something nice. 

Again, thanks so much and all the best to you!

Laura

Reviewer: speks (Anonymous) · Date: March 06, 2012 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 10

Second time trying to leve a comment.  Last try.  Really liked this, it was one of the best stories i've read.  So many are too long and dull or sloppy, stupid.  Write more.  Maybe a sequel?



Author's Response:

I can't thank you enough for commenting.  I get readers but no commenters, I don't know if people are experiencing your problem or they don't like it or they just don't care enough to leave a comment.   So anyway, I really appreciate you going out of your way to leave a comment.  You're keeping me sane.  LOL.

Thanks and all the best.

Laura

Reviewer: Maiqu (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 10

Amazing!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the comment.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story. 

Happy New Year, I hope it's a good one for you.

Laura

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 10

Thank you ALWAYS for this amazing story :o)



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much for reading it.  And you are my hero for leaving a comment.  This fic is off the beaten path here at MW and I'm so glad that you found it and so happy that you enjoyed it.

All the very best to you and again, thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura

Reviewer: Karleigh-q (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

I'm sorry I never reviewed on this story the first time I read it. Or maybe I did and I forgot. I LOVE IT!!!! The way you wrote Brian is so accurate you should be a writer if CowLip pulls their head out of their ass and does a reuinion!!! Kudos on many many MANY levels. I'm sending you christmas cookies because I feel there are no better cookies!!! Please write more stories. I love your style.



Author's Response:

Hi There!

Thankls so much, times a thousand for reading and re-reading this fic.  I was so thrilled to read that and so grateful that you left a comment.  I know it's a pain but it is so appreciated.  I know you've read that before, but from me it's sincere.

I hope to write soon but have learned a lesson.  I need to have the story completely written before I post.  Long delays waiting on a lazy muse is very irritating for the reader.

I'm flattered by your kind, supportive words, and truly cherish them.

Again, thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the very best,

Laura 

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2011 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 10

I just finished reading this story, on my kindle, just yesterday.  I found this story very well written.  I like to read multi-chaptered stories after they're completed.

I truly enjoyed reading it but it's screaming for a sequel to maybe introduce Justin back into Pittsburgh society, so to speak.  Maybe let some time go by with Brian still visiting Michigan, but the gang getting suspicious of some of his traveling. 

I look forward to reading more of your writings.



Author's Response:

Hi Cheryl,

Wow, you were able to download it to your Kindle, how great is that?!  Thanks so much for the kind words, I really appreciate that you went to so much trouble to read and then left a comment.  I sincerely appreciate it.

I don't know if I'll write a sequel, but it's for kind of you to recommend it.

Again, thanks so much for reading and commenting.

All the very best.

Laura

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2011 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 10

Beautiful bittersweet ending.

It's obvious that Justin still has issues to work out, but it's wonderful that he and Brian will work on them together.

Thank you for the story!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.  Yep, I have to agree with you, Justin will be healing for some time, as will Brian.  After all I put them through, I knew a wonderful Disney ending wouldn't read true.  But I felt like I did push the envelope by adding some extra moments of warm and fuzzy - they desired it, right?!

I really appreciate your reading and commenting, your support was invaluable.

All the best,

LAura

Reviewer: Nightvision55 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 10

Ah, I knew they'd end up together eventually!

I liked the way you made Horvath such an important character - he tends to get left out from most fics.  And I love Brian's second tattoo!

Great job

Nightvision



Author's Response:

Well hello,

You're on my love-that-writer's-fic list.  I really appreciate that you read and comment, it means very much to me.  I feel like a crossed a marathon finish line when I posted the last chapter.  Such a feeling of relief, accomplishment, and some blue clouds, because it was over.

Horvath was fun to use, it was a great inspiration from my unreliable muse.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: JASMINE (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 10

I was going to wait till the weekend and read this last chapter of this beautiful story, but being the impatient sort that Iam, I read it last evening. WOW!! Can I just say, you did save the best for last. What a wnderful ending, at last our boys are together, with Brian proclaiming his love like only he could. I'll miss this story my talented friend, it was fresh, and new and well deserving of the blue ribbon. I hope that there are many stories that you plan to share! Take care and please write more!!!



Author's Response:

My Guardian Angel!

Jasmine, I can't thank you enough for all your support, warmth, encouragement, and kindness.  You helped me work through writer's blocks and helped me about of the dumps when life was a heavy load to carry. I'm glad that you liked the ending, I have to admit that I felt a little apprehensive when I posted it... you never know how people will react.  But, so far, so good.

All the best to my dear, and I hope the world treats you with kindness and gentleness.

Laura

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

So this is how happiness looks like? I have often questioned myself the same thing and up until this moment I don't think that I have seen it yet.

I enjoyed the story even though that Ethan twist was kind of frustrating, I would have killed the bastard in prison.

Great job.

Marla



Author's Response:

Hi Marla,

Yep, what does happiness look like, I think I've seen it at times, unfortunately it doesn't seem to be a constant.  I agree with you about Ethan, he desired a lot more than he got and he did get roughed up in jail, but was it enough -     nnnnnnooooooo! LOL

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate that you took the time, sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story - if it didn't already have a blue ribbon - I would have awarded it one.



Author's Response:

Dear Lady,

Wow, I have to admit, when I saw this comment, I was gobsmacked.  I love your work, love your sites, and can't thank you enough for your generosity in providing sites for fandom fics.  You are an incredible, kind soul - lmay a lot of good karma come to you!

I truly appreciate your kind words, they mean a lot to me.  Last but not least - thanks for reading and commenting! 

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Schola (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 10

Best ending ever, so romantic i must say i dont easily get impress but this is a goog story with a perfect ending. WELL DONE KEEP IT UP !!!!!!! luv it.



Author's Response:

Hi Schola,

Thank so much for the kind words, especially since it's not an ordianary thing.  So glad you enjoyed the fic.

I appreciate that you took the time to read an comment, sincerly.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 10

I haven't had a chance to read this final chapter but wanted to write a quick note anyway. I'll miss this story my talented friend, and I just wanted to thank you for sharing this story with us. I plan to get a box of chocolates, tissues (to cry because this is the last chapter) and just veg out on the couch! I'll write a review when I finish. Take care!



Author's Response:

Jasmine,

I just had to thank you for this earlier comment, it was very kind that you took the time to write.

Hugs to you,

Laura

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 10

I have really enjoyed reading ths story - and these last chapters are amazing! Don't tell Brian - he would hate it if he knew - but it made me feel all warm and fuzzy! Our boys happy - away from the family who make them crazy and cause so many of their angst - I can just picture them contented for years to come!

Thanks

loving life

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi Charle,

I can't thank you enough for reading and reviewing.  I agree with you, I think our boys were/are in it for the long run.  I think that the family did a lot of harm to them both, though some meant well.  At least in this AU, I gave them a little more control of their lives, I hope it played well.

I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment, sincerely.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 10

LOVED the story. Great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

what an ending, although i was waiting for the kitten's arrival i guess brian's tattoo is so much better.



Author's Response:

Hi There,

Sorry that there wasn't a kitten scene, but glad the tattoo made up for it.  I just had to show them bickering at the end, just like a normal couple.  Though, Justin dives real low when he's upset.   And Brian is always looking for the closest exit, but he's trying to curb that response.  In all, just another normal, dysfunctioning couple.  LOL

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I sincerely appreciated it!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 10

wonderful story.  i started it moons ago and wasn't sure if it would be completed.  this chapter was wonderful.  so glad i saw it through to its completion.



Author's Response:

Hi Linda,

Thanks for hanging in there with the fic.  I had planned to have it completed several months ago, but best laid plans, right.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and I truly appreciated your patience and support.

All the best to you and yours,

Laura

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 10

Well, this was definitely worth the wait!  You truly have a way with words, and the scenario you laid out for Justin and Brian was so perfect.  Makes me question my own ability to be so descriptive!:)  You really should write more stories, my dear; this one was very witty as well as creative.  I hope you will consider doing that.  This site has been gifted with this one - I hope there will be another one in the future.



Author's Response:

Hi Sweetie,

Your compliments are like manna and I feel the same way when I read your lovely fics.  I have some shortees, 1 chapter ones planned, but not in the near future.

Many hugs and kisses for your support and encouragement.  I really have appreciated it.

Laura

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