Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 6

Justin's back <happy dance>  I didn't know he had his own gallery.  Very nice.  Brian's last line doesn't quite make sense, but I think I know what you meant.  When's the next chapter?

Author's Response:

thanks alot for all your great comments

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 4

Yeah!!!! Brian and Justin are still talking to each other. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

Some things never change do they?  Poor Brian, he's still acting like he's 29.  LOL

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ok, now we are getting somewhere.  So far so good, though I can see that there is so much more to be written about.

7 years huh?  So where is Justin, in New York?  -- or someplace else.

Anyway, this should be interesting.  I find the format ok, though i wouldl think it is not easy to write. Is each character going to talk for himself?

DavidR

Author's Response:

i love writing screenplays i wrote a full length one when i was 15 including 12 songs for it. its going to have the same flow like in the original series.