Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Shell Scott (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2016 10:40 AM · On: Take a Bow, Jason! Conclusion

i do love a jealous Brian



Author's Response:

Me, too! Thanks for reading this one.  It was one of my earlier ones, and in quality it probably shows. ;)  But I'm still glad you read and enjoyed it. Thank you for reading, and especially taking the time to comment.  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2012 10:02 AM · On: Take a Bow, Jason! Conclusion

Decided to read some of your earlier stories while we are waiting for updates of your wips.  This was a good one.  We all loved it.Brian in protective mode again. lol



Author's Response:

Hi,Sweetie!  Hi, Peeps!  I've been waiting myself for word on the contest; it is over?  I thought of another one just in case in honor of the red color:  Blazing Saddles - LOL!  BTW - I'm finished with the Elvis story - yay!  I'm posting the first of two chapters soon.  I probably won't get the last one up until tomorrow, though, and then I promise to update the others!  Thanks for caring enough about my stories to re-read them; I am very honored.:)  Say hello to everyone for me.:)  *Hugs* to all of you!  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2012 09:05 AM · On: Take a Bow, Jason! Conclusion

Hi. I usually leave you rave reviews, but I'm afraid this one is more ambivalent. It was a cute and entertaining story, but I felt like it was really OOC. Brian was always an asshole in the show, but he was never a hypocritical one. Your Brian in this one was jealous and demanded Justin sleep with no one but him, but fucked around anyway? I like an OOC monogamous Brian, but not one who asks for what he isn't willing to give. I also don't think he would've sucker punched anyone. So, all in all, I enjoyed the story, but I kind of hated Brian in this one, and didn't really think Justin owed him any angst... Sorry!! *cringing* PS But I absolutely love HD and PHK!! I'm holding off on PT til you get closer to the end.

Author's Response:

Hi, Kate - that's okay.:)  I can understand your viewpoint.  If it's any consolation, this was one of my earliest stories, so I imagine at this point I was still "fine-tuning" Brian - ha!  I'm not sure if I would agree about him not punching someone out; after all, he DID do that to Michael when he provoked him at Mel and Lindsay's party, and I think from a protective standpoint it could have been in character for him to do that if he thought someone was threatening Justin. After all, he DID let Hobbs have it with the bat after he had assaulted Justin.  At any rate, sorry you were a little disappointed with this one, but I DO apprecitate the feedback and the fact that you're enjoying some of the others.  BTW - I promise to update both HD and PHK soon; I know they're past due, but I'm trying furiously to get both "Framed" and "Hunka" done first so I can devote more time to updating the longer stories. Thanks again for all the reviews - I appreciate that.:)~Kimberly

Reviewer: Lady Luciole (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Take a Bow, Jason! Conclusion

I love it !! So amazing ! And the ending is just so funny !! I don't know Footloose but you make me really want to see it !



Author's Response:

How wonderful to see a new review for this story - thank you so much!  Yeah, I couldn't resist the ending - had to let Brian have a little fun - LOL!  And I so enjoy making our "I don't do jealous" Brian do just that - ha!  The soundtrack for Footloose is very catchy and has several well-known songs if you ever get a chance to listen to the CD.  Thank you again for reading and especially taking the time to review - I'm very appreciative.:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 04:23 PM · On: Take a Bow, Jason! Conclusion

You're Welcome!!!....I am not a writer so I realize how difficult it is to write so I always make sure to let people if I like or dislike something....lol.... Thanks again...

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:49 AM · On: Take a Bow, Jason! Conclusion

I am sooo glad that Brian doesn't do "Jealousy"....  LOL..... I loved it... Thanks...



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews, my friend.  You don't realize how much I appreciate it.  I can spend hours writing one chapter of a story and see hundreds read and/or at least check it out and can count on one hand the number of reviews I receive sometimes.  It can get very discouraging at times when that happens and makes you question whether there are that many readers that are actually enjoying it.  That makes readers such as yourself who DO take the time to leave their thoughts very special and for that I thank you.:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:33 AM · On: Sunday Morning Resolutions

I am glad that they talked things out....since Jason turned out to be such an Asshole....why can't Lance do the encore performance???



Author's Response:

Stay tuned - you're about to get the answer to that - LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:21 AM · On: Brian and Justin Hash It Out

Amazing.... no matter how drunk or mad he is....Brian will always come to Justin's rescue....lol....



Author's Response:

I know - I love a protective and bull-headed Brian, don't you?  Ha!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:49 AM · On: Jason Makes His Move

Jason soooo deserved to be slapped....he doesn't know how to take no for an answer.... off to read the next chapter..



Author's Response:

Yes, he's a persistent little dickens, isn't he?  Emphasis on the "little dick" part - LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:40 AM · On: Turmoil

That's it Justin go get your man...lol... off to read the next chapter...



Author's Response:

At least he has his priorities on straight - ha!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Justin's Debut

Poor Justin...I could just imagine what must be going through his mind...when he saw Brian..... off to the next chapter.... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:17 AM · On: The Lie Uncovered

OMG.... leave it to Lindsay to let the cat out of the bag..... I hope "Andy Hardy" doesn't jump off the stage when he sees Brian in the audience...lol...off to read the next chapter...



Author's Response:

I'm impressed you even know who Andy Hardy is - LOL!  Justin's about to find out someone's in the audience but at least it's AFTER his performance - ha!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:01 AM · On: Justin's Audition

Lance may have a  concussion...but... Justin's the one that's going to have a big "headache"... lol... once Brian finds out whats going on... off to the next chapter....



Author's Response:

Ah, but Brian doesn't do jealousy, does he?  LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Lindsey's Favor

It looks like Justin will get to play... "A singing painter"  afterall....lol... this looks like another great fic.... BTW... how do you come up with all your interesting ideas and plotlines ???   off to read the next chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you're reading this!  I enjoyed writing it and if you like a jealous Brian, you've come to the right place.  This was one of my earlier works so it's perhaps not quite as elaborate as some of my more recent ones, but I liked it just the same.:)  Not quite sure where I get my inspiration with these - LOL!  In this case, I noticed a while back that Randy Harrison actually had a very nice singing voice and had acted in some musicals and it just came together I guess when I saw the CD I had of "Footloose."  I always thought with Justin's creativity that he would have been a shoo-in for a musical number!  And it didn't hurt that "Let's Hear it for the Boy" was in there, too - plus the song "Dancing in the Sheets" came in handy, too (you'll find out soon....).  Thanks again for taking the time to review; I'm so appreciative.:)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 05:12 PM · On: Take a Bow, Jason! Conclusion

Now i have found your store of wonderful stories I am going to work through them lol.

This was a good story it had me mesmerised till the last chapter I loved that every one saw Brian's jealousy and even Brian had to concede his feelings for Justin. We all know Brian Kinney does not do ordinary jealousy he does his own version of MINE MINE lol cheers Chris



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Chris!  I love a jealous Brian story, too!  That look of death he shot Justin on the dance floor during the King of Babylon contest still resonates with me - "I don't do jealousy."  Yeah, right, Brian, keep saying that - LOL!  Thanks for leaving the review, too - it is so appreciated.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 05:25 PM · On: Take a Bow, Jason! Conclusion

HA! That was rich and a fitting ending for Jason in this plot. Fun read indeed dear.



Author's Response:

I thought that was how Brian would have "applauded" him - LOL!  Thanks fo reading and reviewing - this story's one of my earlier ones so it's not as "meaty" as some of my others - thanks for hanging in there to read it, though - and now onto the next part of "Wedding Present!"  Got about a third of it written so far - hope to get it posted by the weekend....!:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 05:21 PM · On: Sunday Morning Resolutions

Sex restriction would have worked on Brian too :)



Author's Response:

Ha!  Should have thought of that plot detail - worked for the Barcelona chair - LOL!  And they both involved Vic's House - would have certainly been appropriate!:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 05:07 PM · On: Brian and Justin Hash It Out

There's a glimmer of hope for the future so far....

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 05:02 PM · On: Jason Makes His Move

Jumping out of the frying pan into the fire.....

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 04:54 PM · On: Turmoil

Interesting plot indeed; reading on .....

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 04:45 PM · On: Justin's Debut

For crying out loud Brian; it's only acting. It isn't like Justin fu*ked the guy on stage. What now?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 04:33 PM · On: The Lie Uncovered

Oh God!  I sure hope Justin doesn't freeze up on stage at the sight of Brian there. Heaven forebid he lays an egg the first time performing live.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 04:20 PM · On: Justin's Audition

Oh dear; it would be better to tell Brian up front instead of hoping he doesn't find out. Me smell a plot of jealousy growing here :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 04:03 PM · On: Lindsey's Favor

Chapter one has done its job getting my total interest in the plot. Once again I marvel at the publishable quality of your work.

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