Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2020 03:54 AM · On: Peace at Last!
Wow, I just finished this part of the saga. I was so glad that everything worked out and Lane and his brother both ended up in the big house, though Lane truly deserves to be there. There is something just not right about that guy. But I was just happy for Brian and Justin. They were really put through the ringer by Lane and they deserved their happily ever after!!
Reviewer: Shell Scott (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2016 04:41 PM · On: Peace at Last!
wonderful
Author's Response: Thank you, Shell! I see you found the next part. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The last one in the trilogy is darker than the first two, but it will end on a good note. I can't think of B and J as anything but happy by the end. :) Thanks again for both reading and commenting; I am grateful for that. ~Kim
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 11:06 PM · On: Peace at Last!
Home safe and sound, but I have a feeling this is just the lull before the storm... Now of to read the next part...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2014 05:34 PM · On: Honeymoon On Mykonos
Now that I've found time to get back to this story, I'm loving it... Aah the honeymoon... It sounds absolutely beautiful...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Hi, Kathleen! So happy you're still enjoying this story; thank you for all the comments. I really enjoyed writing about their honeymoon.;) I think this was the longest story that I've written so far, so I'm grateful you're still hanging in there with it. Thanks again for the support and encouragement. And I'm keeping you in my thoughts and prayers as you go through the loss of your furry loved one, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2014 05:25 PM · On: The Acting Role of His Life
Okay now all the plans are set, hopefully we'll have two Prescott's in jail soon...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2014 02:41 AM · On: Wrapping Up Loose Ends
A Conviction, a Proposal, and a Honeymoon... What more could you ask for... Loving it...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: I'm so glad, Kathleen! I really enjoyed writing the ups and down in this one.;p) Still some drama to go, too! Lane's not done yet!;) Thank you again for reading, and for taking the time to comment; I appreciate that so much. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2014 04:54 AM · On: Deliver Me From Evil
Oh thank God they found them... Lane really is delusional... I'm loving this story ~ On to the next chapter...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2014 02:04 AM · On: Not to Be Deterred
It's definitely getting creepy... At least Brian's knows about it, and Carl's on the case...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Hi, Kathleen! Yeah, should have warned you this is a LONG sequel.;) 47 (?) chapters, I think? And yes, Lane definitely starts to turn creepy here; even creepier in the next sequel (Double Jeopardy). I do hope you enjoy it. And if you like romance, you will definitely like the ending (hint, hint). Thanks so much for choosing to read this one, Kathleen, and for your feedback. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2013 05:07 AM · On: Peace at Last!
Very entertaining! But, methinks the boys doth protest too much about how 'it's all over now . . .' You did mention a second sequel, didn't you? Off to read. Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response: Hi, Tag! Thanks for the comments and for reading, my friend.:) And yes, "Double Jeopardy" awaits, and a certain, obsessed man is definitely not finished yet. Hope you enjoy it; it is much darker than the other ones, but you know I'll put it right before I'm done. Thank you for all the support, Tag; it is so appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2013 01:26 PM · On: Blissfully Unaware
Brian is just so OOC in this chapter - but soooooo romantic and I loved it. You know he'd only ever be this demonstrative with Justin and never if the rest of the gang had been around. Brava! TAG
Author's Response: Hey, Tag! I see you're tackling that long story quickly! Thank you for your latest comments. Sigh...I know; Brian is bordering on sappy-sweet here, but after all, he did just get married, so I hope you'll overlook my indulgence. Sometimes I wish I could write Brian as the more ruthless type, but it's just not in my romantic soul, I suppose. Thank you again for the feedback, my friend; I do appreciate it. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2013 10:14 AM · On: Gone for Good?
I didn't think Prescott would just accept defeat graciously. Watch your tush, Brian! TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2013 09:18 AM · On: Fear and Resolve
At your suggestion I'm reading the sequel on my bus ride home. =)
Ack - "Nothing's going to happen to me, Brian. Not when you're around to protect me."
Haven't we heard this line before? Maybe right before the Prom? Heavy foreshadowing and now I'm scared!
TAG
Author's Response: LOL! As Yoda once said, 'eh....you should be; you should be.' Yes, Lane is not done with our favorite blond. This is 47 chapters, too, so he can create a lot of havoc there! So glad you're giving this one a go, Tag. Thank you for reading and for letting me know. Hope you enjoy the rest! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: loveislovebj (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 01:06 AM · On: Wrapping Up Loose Ends
oh, the smile on my face when brian took out those rings! although i have to say it killed the mood slightly when he called justin baby since i have a slight aversion to brian using that word because i feel that it's something he would never say no matter how far they come in their relationship. other than that, great story so far! i've read many of your stories and i have to say i really like your way of writing and it seems to fit with the characters and it is always well written which is something i, as a hobbywriter and slight grammar-nazi appreciate muchly! great job so far!
Author's Response: Hi, Nora - thank you for taking the time to let me know that you've been enjoying my stories; that means a lot to me. I do occasionally have some boo-boos pop out inadvertently, but I DO try to keep them to a minimum. I think we're alike in that I'm a stickler for good grammar and spelling, too.:) And yes, I don't normally go the 'baby' route, either, and you're probably right, in true-character form, Brian would probably never use it.
I suppose I guess on rare occasions I could maybe see Brian use it in private with Justin, but I understand the 'aversion,' also - LOL! I should warn you that it does pop up just a couple times or so in "Double Jeopardy," but other than that you won't normally see it in my stories. I'm glad you've been able to 'overlook' it in the meantime - ha!
Thank you again for the lovely comments; I hope you continue to enjoy some of my other stories as well.:) And a slightly belated welcome to the site! *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 09:41 PM · On: The Mystery Begins
It seems Lane is on the proul again.
Can't wait to see how Justin kicks him to the curb!
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Hi, Vin! Oh, you're going to be busy - this is one of my longest stories! Hope you like it.:) Before you get too much into it, I'd better warn you - I think there's one "baby" in there and one in the sequel to the sequel (Double Jeopardy). But it's later in the story and I think I only use it one time in both if that's any consolation. Just thought I'd give you a heads up since it's one of your pet peeves. Normally I don't use it, either, but there have been rare occasions when it just felt right for Brian to say it for some reason, normally when he's either feeling especially sentimental or protective. But I think there's just one instance of each in the two stories if that helps.:) Thanks for the feedback and for giving this one a read.:)
Reviewer: randyfan (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2011 12:35 AM · On: Decisions and a New Delivery
Sorry...I forgot my name!:) Hi! Now it is scary! I hope Justin tells Brian the truth! This is a wonderful story! Many greetings...
Author's Response: Hello again.:) Yes, Justin will wind up doing the right thing and telling Brian. This story will deal a lot with the trust and love they have for each other, and how that helps get them through some hard times. Thanks for reading and for the feedback!:)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2011 12:31 AM · On: Decisions and a New Delivery
Hi! Now it is scary! I hope Justin tells Brian the truth! This is a wonderful story! Many greetings...
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! So great to see you again, and to know you're reading the sequel. Thanks for letting me know. I'll be interested to see how you like it!:)
Reviewer: Randyfan (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2011 05:00 AM · On: More Questions Than Answers
OMG! That was Lane! I'm really afraid of Sunshine! Lane is really strange, but I hope that's all! But that's probably wishful thinking! :)
Author's Response: I'm afraid you're right - he's going to be around for quite a while. In the next story, he becomes quite menacing - but not to fear, our boys will always come out together by the end.:) Thanks for all the comments - that makes me very happy.:)
Kimberly
Reviewer: Randyfan (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2011 04:34 AM · On: The Mystery Begins
Hi again! Oh oh, is the chocolate from Brian or Lane? I hope at Brian but i think from Lane! This is strange! I have an uneasy feeling! Sorry for my bad englisch! But I come from germany! And i'm a big big fan of Brian and Justin! I love them both!
And I love your stories...
Author's Response: Your English is fine! Thank you for reading and for commenting! Yes, I'm afraid he's back....! And he's going to be VERY persistent! So glad you're reading the sequel.:P) I hope you enjoy the ride - it's going to be a wild one.:) Thanks again for your kind words.:)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Peace at Last!
Im finishing reading this with a foolish smile on my face!
Very cute! I'm really looking forward to reading the next sequel.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for all the reviews, Michelle! I really appreciate that. I should warn you about the 'sequel to the sequel' - it's very dark and features non-con sex - you can probably figure our who that involves. But rest assured, it WILL end happily for the boys in the end - it will take a while to get there, though (actually, they're still trying but it's getting better - this one as I'm sure you're aware is still a WIP....). Thanks again for taking the time read and especially review for me.:)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 06:06 PM · On: Seasick with Love
I just CANT imagine them sailing...although, being upper middle-class, Justin's family could have afforded a summer cottage...and Ontario IS an awsome place to vacation and sail on the lakes....But Brian????
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 04:04 PM · On: Honeymoon On Mykonos
Oh, I wanna go!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 02:30 PM · On: Preparations
Someone ALWAYS gets sick on our vacations...Im convinced that we catch stuff from the recycled air in the airplane. Poor Sunshine.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 02:15 PM · On: Diving for Treasure
YAY! RAW!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 01:59 PM · On: Blissfully Unaware
It was actually very nice to have the boys marry in traditional fashion. I'm surprised at my reaction because I also believe they dont need vows...though I always kinda liked the idea of rings. :P
I miss Jennifer and Gus...wish they, at least, could have been there...but it would be quite impracticle. :o( If only they could have gotten married in the Pitts.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 05:22 PM · On: A Surprise Encounter
uh oh
Author's Response: Hi, Michelle....! Yes, Brian is not a good person to encounter when he is defending his man! Stay tuned.....! So glad you're still reading this one - thank you so much for all the reviews!:)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 04:35 PM · On: The Cross Examination
I'm glad Matthews explained what he was about asking those questions...usually a lawyer would have gone through every single question he plans to ask with his witnesses, and 'coaches' them on how to answer.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 03:34 PM · On: Filling in the Gaps
Picking up the fork, he stabbed an apparent imitation sausage link nearby and waved it in front of his lover's face. "Open up, Sunshine," he sing-songed. "You can fill your little tummy up and practice your cock-sucking skills at the same time," earning a soft laugh from the blond.
*SNORT*
I am glad that Justin is aparently healthy and well. Have they discovered the angel charm yet? It makes me squicky thinking of Justin being partially undressed and touched while unconcious.
Author's Response: Yes, I know - I deliberately made it that way; and no, the charm actually doesn't really get addressed until the sequel, "Double Jeopardy.":)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 03:20 PM · On: Worthy of Protection
How frightening it must be not to know what may have happened while he was passed out. But why is he experiencing pains? Is it those muscle spasms the dr mentioned? How is his hand affected?
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 03:03 PM · On: Deliver Me From Evil
Geeze! Brian is going to have a heart attack!
GHB. I'm betting Brian is remembering Ted's overdose and near death...
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 02:50 PM · On: Dread and Desire
It should be realatively easy to find the boat on a lake. Or is it the river? Either way. I wish they checked out if Justin indeed had anything to drink...because being carried out of the restaurant is extremely suspicious. Perhaps enough to get the local police involved?
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 02:37 PM · On: Danger
Oh no he DIDN'T! Poor Justin!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 02:17 PM · On: The Epiphany
omg. I knew this was coming, but with so many chapters left to read, Im feeling a bit scared for what is going to be happening to Justin...and how upset Brian is. :o(
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 02:06 PM · On: Deception
Well. This all feels horribly ominous. I'm glad at least Emmett has an idea where he is going. I'm actually surprised that Brian hasn't checked in with the Security company by now and found out the cancellation. :o(
Your imagination better not be too wicked to my lovely Justin!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 04:33 AM · On: False Sense of Security
Why is it that only machiviallian crazy people have all the money?
I think the world would be a better place if a benevolent nun wone the biggest lottos around and spent all her time investigating the best causes and people to invest that money in...all anonamously, no stings attached.
Author's Response: Ooh, I like your idea, Michelle! We could certainly use some more kindness and generosity in the world, couldn't we? (sigh)....
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 02:52 AM · On: Worry and Duplicity
Where did you get the picture of Lane? Is he a model or actor? He really is beautiful. But you have definitely made him sinister and creepy.
I still like Brian better though. When you get a look at him being all vulnerable - like when he walked into the prom, all big eyes and softened features - NOTHING is prettier!
Author's Response: Hi, Michelle - Yes, what a pity Lane wound up being such a bad boy - he is quite handsome! I believe it was some sort of stock photo I found, and I thought it described him well the way I pictured him. I agree, though, it's hard to break up the boys' love for each other, although I always thought Justin would have been pursued more on the show than he seemed to be. Again, thanks for all the reviews and for reading - glad you're enjoying it!:)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 03:00 PM · On: Fear and Resolve
He realized the intensity of his feelings, the hatred he was beginning to feel for this unknown stranger, was actually beginning to frighten his partner. That was the last thing Brian wanted to do to the man he loved so deeply.
Careful Brian...or Sunshine might stop telling you things, things that are too important not to share.
Interesting take on how jealous Brian would get. I definitely imagine him having a lot of insecurity, but him being so vocal about it is surprising.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews and for the insightful comments! I like to think that Brian changed over the years as his relationship with Justin deepened.:)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 02:43 PM · On: Heart to Heart
Its nice to see Kinney so riled up, lol. But Im glad he simmered down real fast after Justin pointed out that he is not interested in any admirer. I don't think Horvath is such a bad idea.
Im sad to hear that the boys dont hang with the gang as much. That group of 'family' is so important to them.
You skipped the bombing, and the girls' great northern escape, did they happen in your world?
Author's Response: Good point - I guess I wasn't concentrating on that area of their lives - I suppose it would have to be considered at least partly an AU then...:) But part of their group DOES get involve later on....! Stay tuned....!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 02:31 PM · On: Decisions and a New Delivery
Brian going ballistic or not, Justin has to go with his instincts...if he feels creeped out, then maybe he is dealing with a creep. Or Lane. Same dif.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 02:14 PM · On: More Questions Than Answers
Now you BETTER tell Brian ALL of the truth this time!
Author's Response: I think Justin's learned his lesson this time - both of them have.:)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 02:03 PM · On: The Mystery Begins
Tisk tisk. One shouldn't take candy from strangers!
Author's Response: But it was such GOOD candy, especially in light of the price of gold - ha!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2011 12:30 AM · On: Peace at Last!
I loved it...... they're married and the "Psycho" brothers are in jail... it doesn't get any better than that!!!!! ..lol.... Thanks....
Author's Response: Thanks for the review - glad you enjoyed the story!:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2011 10:21 PM · On: Loved and Hated
Well it looks like Aiden may be "Crazy"...but....he's not "Psycho" like his brother.... lol...
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Blissfully Unaware
They did it!!!!!.... lol....
Author's Response: Yes, I love marrying these boys over and over again - LOL!:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2011 06:10 AM · On: The Prosecutor's Deal
Thank God..that Kingsley had enough sense to contact Matthews about what ... "Psycho" asked him to do.... it figures that Lane's brother is as Crazy as he is..... they could have a family "reunion" in prison.... lol....
Author's Response: You just may get your wish - LOL!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2011 05:40 AM · On: Gone for Good?
Don't tell me that the detective is going to actually go through...with what that "Psycho" is asking him to do??? I should have realized with so many chapters left...something else was going to happen....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2011 12:20 AM · On: Wrapping Up Loose Ends
WOW..... that is great news..... not only are they getting married...but... "Psycho" will be behind bars for 55 Years!!!! now that's a fantastic wedding present from the Judge.....lol....
Author's Response: Yes, they will definitely be getting married and have the honeymoon of a lifetime - but is this the end of Lane? (wink, wink...)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 10:32 PM · On: The Verdict
WOW...you had me worried for a minute....when they voted Not Guilty on the first two counts....BUT....they got him on the most serious charges... Assualt and Kidnapping..... thank goodness "Psycho" will be in prison for awhile... lol....
Author's Response: I know - I'm evil! LOL!
Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 05:48 AM · On: Peace at Last!
That was again GREAT!!! I didn't expect any less since i've read your other stories and the prequel to this one!
I REALLY hope to read more from you in the future. ;o)
Best wishes
Diana
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Diana! And thank you for taking the time to review! I can see a lot of people read the stories, which I really appreciate, but it's readers like you who take the time to let me know they are truly enjoying them that provides me with the motivation to keep writing - I appreciate it more than you may realize. I just updated "I Don't" and will be updating "The Wedding Present" this week. Stay tuned for a couple of new stories I have in the works (have to reduce some of the current ones, first, though....) Thanks again.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 03:38 AM · On: Worthy of Protection
I just hope Lane won't hire an expensive lawyer and get off Scott Free...like Hobbes did.......
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 03:23 AM · On: Deliver Me From Evil
I hope Justin will be OK..... and that S.O.B. Psycho won't be able to buy his way out of things this time....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 03:06 AM · On: Dread and Desire
"The Blond Angel" .... they better call Dr. Phil and have a straight jacket ready for "Psycho".... lol...
Author's Response: I know - someone needs to throw him overboard - and to think, you only have 33 more chapters of lunacy to go - LOL!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 02:53 AM · On: Danger
Brian and Carl are never going to get there in time..... I wonder where Psycho is taking Justin....
Author's Response: Watch out! I think I've seen too many "Miami Vice" reruns - LOL!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 02:35 AM · On: Deja Vu
I think Justin lost his appetite.......
Author's Response: Get ready for some major angst - Lane is definitely out in the deep end of insanity - LOL!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 02:20 AM · On: The Epiphany
It looks like the SHIT...is really hitting the fan now...... I hope Emmett tells Brian what he knows...
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 02:10 AM · On: Deception
Well at least Emmett knows where and who Justin will be with.... since he probably won't be coming back...
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 01:56 AM · On: False Sense of Security
WOW... this guy is beyond "Psycho" he is using everyone he knows or can buy to get Justin alone...Brian is going to have a nervous breakdown..
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 01:45 AM · On: Freedom With a Price
OMG... what a sneaky Bastard that "Psycho" Lane is....pretending to be Teddy to cancel Justin's security.... this can't be good....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 01:25 AM · On: Not to Be Deterred
It seems as if Carl can't help afterall.... I hope that "Psycho" Lane doesn't do anything to hurt Justin or Brian....
Author's Response: Get ready, my friend! He's about to get even more desperate to be reunited with his "Angel....."
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 12:50 AM · On: Fear and Resolve
They need to call Horvath or hire a Private Investigator.... this is getting out of hand...
Author's Response: Brian's about to call Carl - but it won't do much good, unfortunately. Besides, what would a good story be without a lot of angst? LOL!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 12:37 AM · On: Heart to Heart
I wish Justin would have listened to Brian and called Horvath.... just the fact that the "Secret Admirer"..knew exactly where Justin was at all times...should have made him call Carl A.S.A.P...
Author's Response: Yeah, but at least he DID tell Brian - and he's going to definitely need his support shortly!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 12:27 AM · On: Decisions and a New Delivery
Poor Justin.... he is starting to get freaked out..... I hope he does mention it to Brian....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 12:17 AM · On: More Questions Than Answers
OMG..... HE's BACK......... It's going to be interesting to see if Justin..tells Brian what's going on...
Author's Response: You will find out soon if he does or not...:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 12:04 AM · On: The Mystery Begins
WOW....$508.00 for a pound of chocolates!!!..... something tells me that Brian didn't send them.... lol...
Author's Response: Believe it or not, this is a REAL company and it REALLY does cost that much - LOL!
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2011 09:49 AM · On: Peace at Last!
what a wonderful story. it was so good. i didn't review while i was reading as i couldn't stop reading. it's a good thing i'm a fast reader. i just love your stories. as i've said before your writing is so descriptive one feels they are where you are writing about. greece is a beautiful country very quaint in some areas and the people are very friendly. i spent as month there last year-fell in love with it. will be going again soon as i am in the process of buying a small refuge there. thank you for these stories. i really appreciate your writing. lol
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend - I'm envious you will be spending a lot of time in B & J's honeymoon locale - LOL! Thanks for taking the time to review and letting me know you enjoyed reading the story!:)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 02:24 AM · On: Peace at Last!
I read another one! I'm glad you didn't run this one with 10,000+ word chapters too :)
Author's Response: Thanks for hanging in there until the end - I'm glad I didn't either!:)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 02:12 AM · On: Triumph
Well played; now reading on to finish the story....
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 01:54 AM · On: Home with New Revelations
Loved it; reading on.....
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 01:46 AM · On: A Beginning and an Ending
I hope Debbie's wrong too.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 01:35 AM · On: Seasick with Love
Sailing...I'm licensed up to a 30 footer by the ASA. Was fun until I got too old for it. It's a lot harder physically than most people realize.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 01:22 AM · On: Loved and Hated
A twin brother turning into a rat. Very interesting developments here.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 01:09 AM · On: Babylon Revisited
Leave it to Justin to let a little song tear him to pieces. You write the sappiest endings to your chapters :)
Reviewer: GiggleBean (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 01:05 AM · On: The Mystery Begins
a very well constructed idea
nice work
Author's Response: Thank you very much - so glad you enjoyed this! (Sorry for not responding sooner - overlooked it!)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 12:54 AM · On: Fancy Footwork
Another Babylon how quant. I'm surprise the cops didn't send the PI to see Lane again in prison for more evidence.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 12:35 AM · On: Endings and Beginnings
Reading on for more :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 12:22 AM · On: Honeymoon On Mykonos
Interesting place you described on the island.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 12:12 AM · On: The Acting Role of His Life
That was good; now both brothers are hung.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 11:56 PM · On: All at Stake
Poor Justin; you have to really work your throat to make it sore :P
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 11:42 PM · On: Preparations
Looking forward to see how the sting works out, and the vacation.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:35 PM · On: Diving for Treasure
That was fun
Author's Response: Yeah, and what a bounty it was - LOL!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Blissfully Unaware
How sweet
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:38 PM · On: The Prosecutor's Deal
Good of the PI to have some sense. I like were this is going. {retracks shaking finger}
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:28 PM · On: Gone for Good?
OMG! You are so wicked to do this to Brian and Justin. Bad girl! {shakes finger violently}
Author's Response: Come on - you should know by now that I wouldn't wrap it up THAT easily - LOL!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:22 PM · On: What to Wear or Not to Wear
Vermont is beautiful.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:21 PM · On: Wrapping Up Loose Ends
That was too easy.....
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:15 PM · On: The Verdict
Kidnapping is very serious. He could get LIFE for that.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:10 PM · On: Who to Believe?
Excellent closing argument by the DA.
Author's Response: Thanks! Must have been from having worked for an attorney for 3 1/2 years; no, wait, that was for workers' comp - LOL! Then it must have been from watching too much Judge Judy - ha!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Crazy, or Crazy Like a Fox?
Lying bastard; that was the worse example of insanity I ever heard.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Decisions Made
Revoked bail is a very good thing, and he should be in jail clothes for the remainder of the trial. That should look good to the jury.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 06:29 PM · On: An Unexpected Showdown
That was interesting; Lane should have been charged too for terrorizing Justin.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 06:16 PM · On: A Surprise Encounter
Don't you love to mix up the plot with a little cliffie.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 06:05 PM · On: Test of Strength
Interesting.....being in court always sucks.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 05:40 PM · On: The Cross Examination
Now that I've ate something since you made me hungry, I can read on.....
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 05:22 PM · On: Brian Takes the Stand
Hummm.....what does the defense attorney have planned?
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 05:07 PM · On: In Pursuit of Justice
Why do I get the impression this might get ugly, if not funny :) ?
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 04:49 PM · On: Protect Me From Harm
That SOB will beat this since you have so many more chapters of angst and problems to read :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 04:39 PM · On: Filling in the Gaps
That breakfast is making me hungry now....
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Worthy of Protection
A man as rich as Lane will be hard to put down. Reading on......
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 04:06 PM · On: Deliver Me From Evil
Oh the sh!t you do to Justin :) What a wicked author you are at times.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 03:54 PM · On: Dread and Desire
I hope Lane gets lots of boys in prison, the 300+ pound variety who love to top in the middle of the night.
Author's Response: You are SO bad - LOL! But I like the way you think - ha!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 03:37 PM · On: Danger
Felony kidnapping. What a jerk.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 03:19 PM · On: Deja Vu
Oh shit; now the fireworks begins.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 03:11 PM · On: The Epiphany
The shark is approaching.....the blond swimmer alone in the water......
Reviewer: story (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2011 02:52 PM · On: Peace at Last!
i loved this i love all your stories and have read them all and more than once you are one of the best writers to come here in a long time if you could a follow on from the cake decorating story would be great keep up the great work i so look forward to your next story
all the best
justinrandy
Author's Response: Thank you so much, my friend! And thank you for letting me know you've read all my stories and enjoyed them - that means a lot to me! Stirring Up Trouble was one of my favorite stories to write. If I can think of some sort of sequel to it, I may very well do that. I actually have two other (new) story ideas in the works but I have to wrap some of these other open stories up first, which I will be updating soon. Thanks again for reading and especially taking the time to review - it is greatly appreciated.:)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 02:46 PM · On: Deception
Now things are in motion......
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 02:33 PM · On: False Sense of Security
How far will Lane go? Would he actually kidnap Justin? This is certainly building up to something.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 02:21 PM · On: Freedom With a Price
What a devil we have here. I do wonder how we went from just before Valentine's Day to a warm spring day :) in the same week.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 02:00 PM · On: Worry and Duplicity
The Gay World Turns, starring one determined asshole against another one :D
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Not to Be Deterred
Where did I put that puke bucket once beside my desk when dealing with such a villan?
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 01:32 PM · On: Fear and Resolve
It's a lot more fun to read your work than the technical crap I'm doing on the side.
Author's Response: I KNEW there was a reason why I needed to post this at one time - LOL!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 12:09 PM · On: Heart to Heart
Looks like the sh!t has just started to hit the fan.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 12:00 PM · On: Decisions and a New Delivery
Creepy indeed; Brian has to be told about this no matter how he might react.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 11:51 AM · On: More Questions Than Answers
Already I want to slap the sh!t out of a rich asshole.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 10:37 AM · On: The Mystery Begins
I see from the banner we have not heard the end of Lane Prescott. I can read and do my other work at the same time; multitasking sort of.
Author's Response: Yep, the omnipresent Lane Prescott is back and he's still obsessed - LOL! Prioritizing your duties is a good thing.....ha!
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