Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Remember Me
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 04:45 PM · On: Love: The Ultimate Cure

Do you love to pour on the major angst routine! HA! The new Justin will be livid and Brian will be in a world of trouble for doing this to him.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 04:21 PM · On: Pain Therapy

I tip my hat to the good doctor for setting Justin up for the emotional breakthrough he needed to experience; for Jim Beam to loosen up Brian before hand, and for a persistant little blond who knows how to best repair want's wrong with him. Now they are getting somewhere :P

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 03:42 PM · On: An Unwelcome Intrusion

Once again oh what a tangled web we weave.....reading on to see how this plays out.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 03:12 PM · On: The Pains of Separation

Enter Dr. Killdare I assume is near......

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 02:31 PM · On: Reality and Hope Collide

Well I didn't see that coming at all, but under the circumstances I can understand. Maybe absence can make the heart grow fonder for Justin. Like he said, he needs some space.

And maybe it will be harder to find him for Dr. Bradley since he won't be at the loft :)

Or I see a plot set up coming that brings that Dr. Meddler into the fold at Justin's weakest hour. You are so wicked girlfriend!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 01:51 PM · On: His One Constant

Dumb doctor! That was not the way to handle the first visit so soon. That time of memory loss can be hours, weeks, months, or years, or never for trama injuries. Psychotherpy could help too but you didn't mention it.

There was no reason the doctor couldn't dange some real hope the first year.

I'm up to 12 cents now :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 01:24 PM · On: Preparing for the Doctor

GOTHA! You said they were eating at Kinnetik, not the loft in the last section's title.

I had to pounce on that since your very rarely make such a mistake :)

Do I get a free dinner at Chili's or something? :D

 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Britin

I thought Britin would ring a bell for Justin and it rung a couple of them.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 12:31 PM · On: Baby Steps

I'm sure Justin can fake it with Gus well enough to get by. He can claim to have been in an accident and got a boo boo on his head, but he was feeling better. That's enough for a six year old. My 2 cents :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Emmett and Clearing the Air

I just had a thought how Justin survived the train wreck. Had he been outside the cars between them or at the very back looking out during the ride he could have been thrown clear of the wreckage. Just a thought.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 11:20 AM · On: A Grudging Apology

That was very bold of Ted canon wise. Of course he rarely gets one up on Brian and anyone would see he was thinking about what Blake went through too. I was half expecting a diner scene in this chapter :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 10:29 AM · On: Next Stop: Memory Lane

Gee I wonder if a public appearance is wise at this point? Who knows who might spill the beans to the media. Just a thought. Maybe Emmett can show up too huh?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 10:02 AM · On: Swirling Lines Coalesce

Maybe some close encounters of the erotic kind is just the thing to jog his memory back. I think intense emotional memories are the best to bring forward again. Once they start returning they are usually a tidal wave of memories for someone with Justin's condition if I recall hearing about them in RL.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 09:39 AM · On: A Slow and Gradual Awakening

He remembers Brian!  He remembers Brian!  Woohooo!!

>

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 09:37 AM · On: A Heart to Heart Talk

I like how you did Cynthia here and didn't repeat too many facts again. You sometimes do that (if I can offer some friendly advice writer to writer :)

Now I should get ready for some angst since you warned me about it too. Eventually the good doctor will rear his ugly head soon. And we still have Emmett to make his appearance :D

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 09:13 AM · On: Daphne's Turn to be Shocked

A first I wanted to slap the shit out of that girl and then I realized it was just like her to jump to conclusions too. You have a true master of canon and it shows in your writing. You sure are racking up some featured blue ribbons sweetheart :)

I'm not surprised either; you're a real asset to the MW community. Now if most of our regular readers take the time to find out. This is some of the most entertaining reading I've had in quite a while from a fresh voice in the fandom to us here.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, my friend.:)  I'm so happy that you and a lot of the other readers are enjoying my stories - I get a lot of pleasure out of writing them and it thrills me to see them acknowledged!  The blue ribbon was a surprise for this one - I didn't even know it was there at first, but I'm absolutely thrilled by it as well as the others - it helps makes all my hard work worth it.  Thanks again to you and all the other readers for all the reviews and for making me feel welcome here.:)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2011 09:12 AM · On: Poppa's Back!

this is without a doubt one of the best stories i have read on mw.  the last three chapters about tore my heart out.  i am such a sucker for these happy endings.  i guess i am just too sappy--but i love these kinds of stories and this was one of THE BEST!!!.   please finish your others soon. thanx for my reading pleasure.  you are special. lol



Author's Response:

Wow!  What a wonderful review - I'm going to get a big head now - LOL!  I'm so glad you liked it.  I know it was a very emotional story, but I think it really helped show how Brian could change for Justin, as well as how well he knew him.  And don't worry - I will be updating all of my stories on a regular basis.  Thank you so much for reading and especially taking the time to review!:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 09:08 AM · On: Release and Imprisonment

How nice that Cynthia doesn't want to leave Brian alone.  Love the discription of Andrew's apartment, but I hope that Justin doesn't get too comfortable.



Author's Response:

Well, for now Andrew's a safe haven to him; but things are going to be changing......in ways none of them can foresee...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 08:49 AM · On: New Memories Forged

Me thinks Dr. Bradley has just given us a hint that he's gay and doesn't know it.  It is kind of him to offer to take Justin in.



Author's Response:

I think you're on the right track.....this man's going to figure pretty prominently for some time to come in the story....:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 08:39 AM · On: Lost Love, New Starts

I can't blame Brian for not wanting to attend a memorial for Justin.  That would be giving up all hope too soon.  "Jacob" certainly has a way about him, perhaps  the good doctor will be able to help, but I gather it won't be any time soon. <sigh>



Author's Response:

Hold onto your hat, my friend - you're about to go on a roller coaster ride of emotion!:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 08:29 AM · On: Insecurity Rears Its Ugly Head

Good ole Dr. Bradley...every plot needs a villian I guess, a troublemaker, a wrench in the gears, a third wheel, but really; this guy should know he doesn't stand a chance.

I love how you are slowing bring them together too.

 



Author's Response:

Ah, yes.....but it's not over yet! LOL!  Angst alert coming.....

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 08:01 AM · On: Three's A Crowd?

HA! I knew Debbie would be a crash! That was priceless. Reading on.....

Reviewer: pathetical (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2011 07:21 AM · On: I Won't Give Up

tears................ tears................. tears................

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

love this story.................

thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - yes, it's got some difficult moments to go through, but I hope you will find the ending more than makes up for it.  I feel honored that you are reading this and it is affecting you so emotionally.  Thank you for the review and for letting me know you like it.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 06:41 AM · On: Best Tranquilizer in the World

A fitting first night together. As I look ahead at the chapter titles I ponder how this will unfold.



Author's Response:

They're still going to have some ups and downs until the end of the story - but I think you will find it is worth it in the end...:)

Reviewer: crazykitty (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 05:50 AM · On: Poppa's Back!

this was such a beaufiul story :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I know it was a real tearjerker, but I made sure they had a happy ending as usual....so glad you had faith that I would, and took the time to read and especially review - thank you.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 05:46 AM · On: A Mother's Miracle

Shit it's hard to read with tears in your eyes. Outstanding writing as usual.



Author's Response:

The case of virtual Kleenex is on its way!  Thanks for the compliment, too....I tried to do her reaction justice.  There's more reunions to come soon....:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 05:15 AM · On: Back in the Pitts at Last

Now that the loft is done, the next part will be very interesting to read.



Author's Response:

Now you wouldn't expect me to make it TOO easy on them, would you? - LOL!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 04:46 AM · On: Sow With Tears, Reap With Joy

Brian has a project on his hands no doubt but he wouldn't have it any other way.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 04:12 AM · On: Filling in the Gaps

The first night; a perfect starting place. I wonder why Brian hasn't called Jennifer yet?



Author's Response:

He's getting there - everyone's going to be a mess now!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 03:52 AM · On: Where is Home?

I'm almost a sobbing mess over here. Fantastic writing and plot development executed perfectly. Oh and maybe one typo :)



Author's Response:

I'm sending you a virtual case of Kleenex right now - LOL!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 03:32 AM · On: I Won't Give Up

Shit, major tear jerk warning needed on this chapter. I guess that says how entertained a reader I am. Too into it to write much; got to read on....



Author's Response:

I know - I was so bad at the end - had everyone thinking Justin wasn't going to agree to it, didn't I - LOL!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 03:02 AM · On: Doing What's Best for Him

Damn girl you can write a masterpiece!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 02:42 AM · On: Pieces Falling Into Place?

Now the thick plot is thinning out a little and we can get somewhere. No doubt for mental health reasons you're going to drag it out a little more :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 02:31 AM · On: Brian's Shocking Discovery

OMG! What a small world indeed. Reading on.....

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 02:12 AM · On: Disbelief and Fate

So into the story I have to read on and write less :)



Author's Response:

Just don't forget to eat, sleep and go to the bathroom along the way - LOL!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 12:48 AM · On: Trying to Grasp Reality

This is sooooo good. Reading on still and reviewing less.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 12:27 AM · On: Drawing Closer Together?

At least you aren't repeating too many of the same facts this story :)

Lierary critc at work now  :D

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 12:15 AM · On: Lines Converging

Have to read on. Leaving another review just because :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 11:56 PM · On: Babylon Revisited

Blake is the first. Now I have to read on and see how this unfolds.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 11:37 PM · On: Here in Your Heart

Damn you're breaking my heart over here. That was so intense with Gus mentioning Poppa.



Author's Response:

Yeah, this chapter got to most readers, I think - that darn Gus tears at the heartstrings, doesn't he?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 11:14 PM · On: Looking for Answers

Heart breaking with Gus involved now. I am for ever amazed at your skill writing.

Reviewer: Maria (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2011 10:45 PM · On: An Interrupted Reunion

This is the best B/J fic I have read in awhile. It took me 2 days to read it all, once I started I couldn't stop. Your story took me on a roller coaster ride, and I loved ever mintue of it. I didn't want it to end, but atlast it had to. Thank you so much for writting this story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Maria!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it - thank you for leaving me a review, too - it is very much appreciated.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 10:35 PM · On: Haunted

This is an amazing story. Well I love all your work but this one is first class and perfect. I haven't found one typo yet too.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Questions Unanswered

Debbie gave him some good advice.  I know it's going to be hard to follow.  Why do I have this strange feeling that Michael is going to take advantage of Brian's loss for his own gain?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:22 PM · On: Talents Rise to the Surface

You queen of angst; closing Babylon on Justin before he arrives. I have to wonder how the trip will go now. Will he go to the diner?

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:16 PM · On: Poppa's Back!

It'S a beautiful story ;) More of that please 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!  I'm delighted you enjoyed it - and I appreciate you taking the time to review, also.:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:06 PM · On: Heartbreak and Revelation

This chapter was indeed hearbreaking and took me longer to read than normal.  At least we got to the part where Justin is still alive <sigh of releif>  But will have to wait to find out how he hot out, what happened to his companion, and more important when will someone realize that he is Justin Taylor.  I'm assuming that's gonna take awhile?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 08:18 PM · On: A Slow and Gradual Awakening

I'm impressed the good Dr. hasn't jumped his bones yet :)

It could be just the thing to jog his memory better :D

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 07:51 PM · On: Release and Imprisonment

Good of the Dr. to help him out. I wish they did more to let others know of someone like Justin in the media or use his fingerprints for ID. They would be in the police database from his arrest. Just a thought.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 07:20 PM · On: New Memories Forged

The good Dr wants some blond boy ass no doubt. Well I have a feeling he won't get any :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 07:05 PM · On: Lost Love, New Starts

Great parallel events here to follow. Loving the story so far and getting hooked rapidly.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 06:47 PM · On: Questions Unanswered

Looks like over 40 chapters of pure B/J torture ahead of me with this one :)



Author's Response:

Oh, I'd say only about 39 or so - LOL!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 06:24 PM · On: Heartbreak and Revelation

Now we have an idea how bad off Justin may be. Looks like another major masterpiece of prose from you here.



Author's Response:

Yes, I hope you can tolerate the rather sad plot mechanism of yet another amnesia fic - but I think this one will  hopefully hold your interest for a while.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 06:01 PM · On: The World Comes Crashing Down

Incredible. You really got me going here. I'm so happy you said it wasn't a major death fic but I fear how injured Justin may be in a fire.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I made sure to define that right away - personally, I get so involved with the characters, I can't normally handle death fics.  This one's going to have some heartwrenching moments in it, though, for a  while for Justin's friends and family and especially Brian.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 02:24 PM · On: An Interrupted Reunion

OMG! Opening chapter with a damn train wreck and a firey one at that.

I'm in the middle of transferring all MW files to a sister website for testing and backup. This allows me time to read too. We have nearly 2GB of data on the website and over millions of files. Quite a project indeed.



Author's Response:

Wow!  That sounds like quite a job you've got ahead of you!  Yeah, I thought I'd just get into the meat right away - ha!  Glad you'll be checking this one out....:)

Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2011 11:40 AM · On: Poppa's Back!

I loved this story and I had a few tearful moments but I didn't despise the the angsty aspect of it. I particularly loved Brian's commitment and voulnerablity ...fantastic story overall and thanks for writing it.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kim  - so glad you liked it!  Yeah, it was definitely a roller-coaster ride on this one.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 08:46 AM · On: The World Comes Crashing Down

It's a good thing you warned us that this wasn't a death fic.  Just how does Justin survive?  Guess I'll have to continue reading to find out.

>



Author's Response:

You will soon find out what's going on, but it's going to take some time for the boys to find their way back to each other; but you're in for quite a ride in the meantime....!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 08:40 AM · On: An Interrupted Reunion

This may take me awhile to get through, but because of all the warnings I've just gotta read this and oh no...a train wreck for the first chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for tackling this one - it's quite a ride - hope you're ready - LOL!  Would love to know your reaction to it....:)

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 08:19 AM · On: Poppa's Back!

So glad to find this gem.  I read your fics on fanfiction and was so glad to see that you're posting here.  Looking forward to more of your work.  I really enjoy your B/J fics - great imagination, writing, and characterization.

Another pat on your back, well done and very enjoyable!



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend!  Great to "meet" you over here, too - LOL! Glad to hear from a "familiar face."  Thanks for taking the time to leave your review - I'm very appreciative!:)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 12:21 AM · On: Poppa's Back!

Wowww you are fast * giggles * thanks for putting it on MW.
Lovely banner.

Beautiful story.

10+

 



Author's Response:

What can I say, Marny?  You inspired me!  LOL!  Thanks for the input and encouragement to do it!:)

Reviewer: kathy (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2011 05:38 PM · On: The World Comes Crashing Down

wow. So well written and constructed. i can't quite see what i am typing now, and need to calm down a bit before next chapter.

 

love your work. i have been reading it all over the christmas break. i hope you complete all the stories as I have readonce from 20 Dec onwards.

thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kathy - I will definitely be updating all of my stories on a regular basis, don't worry.  Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review.:)

Reviewer: Tanya (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2011 01:19 PM · On: Disbelief and Fate

I am really liking this so far, but, I have a question...or 2.

At some point wouldn't the police be notified of this "John Doe"?

Shouldn't some type of feelers be put out to identify who Justin is, picture or something?

Can this doctor really be trusted, is he really looking out for Justin?

Have to get ready for work, it's going to kill me to pll 12 hrs knowing this story is here.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Tanya.....Yes, I suppose you might to have suspend your belief just a bit about the "John Doe" part, or perhaps with it being in Harrisburg and not Pittsburgh, they may have already thought of that but it wasn't broadcast statewide.  Even if there WAS a "John Doe," with everyone thinking there were no survivors in the crash, I don't think Justin's family and friends would have put two and two together anyway.....As for the doctor, I will say he's pretty legit, but you will have to find out how their relationship evolves through the course of the story.  Do not fear, though, B & J will be reunited eventually!  Thanks for reading this!:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 07:19 AM · On: An Interrupted Reunion

I sent you an email spending 2 cents your way. Sorry not to know you were posting chapters and this was a finished story. I hope to read it as soon as I can make some time. I know it's going to be great.



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend - I just replied to your e-mail.....I totally understand.  I hope what I wrote back to you was okay as far as updating time.....thank you for being concerned enough to write - I couldn't agree more!

You must login (register) to review.