Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Bon Appetit
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 12:25 PM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

Omg ....i loved this fic very much...fantastic.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I enjoyed writing it, and especially tormenting the chef - ha! Thank you for reading, and for all the comments!  ~Kim

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 12:10 PM · On: Add Two Cups of Cream Sauce

Fabulous...no one messes with brians sunshine...lol.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Thank you for all the comments!  I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.:)  Brian will make sure to get his 'point across' before the story is all done. Thanks for reading, and especially for all the feedback.  I am very grateful for your support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 10:01 AM · On: A Heaping Cup of Forgiveness

Awww....that was fantastic...finally..i love it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 09:52 AM · On: A Little Dash of Sunshine

Brian is soo damn funny after drinking...lols..

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 09:48 AM · On: A Little Shot of Jim Beam

Thank god...brian is going to get it now from sunshine.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 08:38 AM · On: Just a Little :Pinch of Truth

Thank god or should i say thank u Em...brian is sooo regretting now.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 08:32 AM · On: A Heaping Serving of Comfort

Ohhh...sunshine...great em is on mission beware...mr.kinney ...haha.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 07:08 AM · On: Boiling Point

Ohh poor justin...this was painful...my god Brian was so angry ...he did not mean what he said.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 07:02 AM · On: Mix With a Little Jealousy

Jealous Brain is super HOT...😘

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 06:55 AM · On: How Do You Say "Get Lost" in French?

Omg...that was fantastic...poor em soo clueless sometimes..justin is little spitfire..i love it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 06:29 AM · On: The Chef Cooks Up a Plan

Ooohhh...chef likes sunshine...hmm...certain someone is not going to be happy about it...cant wait for more.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 06:21 AM · On: Showdown

Omg ..that was helarious...u go sunshine...haha...thank u it was super.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 06:06 AM · On: Something's In the Air

Justin is soo damn naughty...we can only imagine how he was in his school days...love him...awesome.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 06:01 AM · On: Introduction to the Chef

Interesting...i love em and justin together as frnds...great start.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2016 02:42 AM · On: A Heaping Cup of Forgiveness

That's what I'm talking about. All the guys needed was  communication and trust to get them back on track. Love how Brian found the courage to express his feelings.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2016 02:35 AM · On: Boiling Point

I knew this chapter was going to be a train wreck but I couldn't not read it anyway. Brian thinks history is repeating and Justin is  caught in the middle. Please fix this fiasco for us readers. Thanks...

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2016 02:18 AM · On: Something's In the Air

 Justin & Emmett are giving  Chef Merchant a run for his money. If he can't take the heat, he needs to stay out of that kitchen! This chapter is hilarious...



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim! I'm so happy that you're enjoying this one. I love writing stories with friendships between Emmett and Justin, and could envision the two of them at a cooking class together.  Brian?  No way - ha!  Thank you for reading, and for all the comments! I greatly appreciate that. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2016 05:24 PM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

That was great Kim! I loved it! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2016 11:44 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

What fun this story was to read- nothing more enjoyable than laughing out loud at our boys antics:-)

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2016 01:38 AM · On: Something's In the Air

Gotta love a story which makes you laugh out loud:-D



Author's Response:

Hi, Nicky!  I know this response is SUPER late, but someone was just reading this story, and I realized you had left a review I wasn't aware of way back in February.  I'm so sorry for ignoring it; it wasn't intentional.  Just wanted to say thank you for reading, and for the comments.  I appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 05:26 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

I've decided to reread some of your older stories as your writing is just that good. :)

Not sure if I ever commented before on this one (and I'm too lazy to go through all the comments to find out LOL) but this is really a great story.  Lots of humor and a bit of angst which made for an entertaining read. Plus it's different from other stuff out there.



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much, Shari! I am very honored. I am glad that you enjoyed this one. I loved putting Justin and Emmett together, and terrorizing the pompous chef.:)  THANK YOU for supporting me, and for the comments. Much appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2013 01:15 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

LOL.  Emmett had way too much fun helping Justin put two and two together.  Thank goodness Justin took it all in just the right way.  The blue ribbon you received for this story was well deserved.



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear friend!  Thank you for all the comments you placed on this story; you are so thoughtful.  I am very happy you enjoyed this story, and I hope you will continue to enjoy reading what I write. Thank you again for all the feedback; it is most appreciated.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2013 12:57 AM · On: Add Two Cups of Cream Sauce

Even though I've read this before, this chapter still came as a surprise.  Brian going to cooking class - with Mikey!   I could picture Mikey backing away as he waited for Mt. Kinney to blow.  You played the scene well.  Let's hope Justin appreciates Brian's effort.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2013 12:44 AM · On: A Heaping Cup of Forgiveness

Yee Haw!  Brian finally admitted, with words, that he loves Sunshine!!!!  And he's putting Justin before work.  Will miracles never cease!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2013 12:36 AM · On: A Little Dash of Sunshine

No fair!  You peek our interest and string us along.  Of course you do do it well.  What will Little Brian say once Big Brian's awake.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2013 12:27 AM · On: A Little Shot of Jim Beam

Darn I was hoping that Em would tell Brian where Justin was and things would be settled right away, but I see you have other plans and I'll just have to trot over to the next chapter to find out what it is.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2013 12:16 AM · On: Just a Little :Pinch of Truth

Way to go, Emmett!!! And good for Ted for backing him up even though he thought that dealing with Brian wasn't a good idea.  Now to hurray to the next chapter and hope it is not too late!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2013 12:09 AM · On: A Heaping Serving of Comfort

I feel for Justin. Upset that Brian wouldn't listen, that he didn't believe him.  Thank goodness he has Emmett to fall back on.  Poor you, you get these comments and with all the stories you've written you have no idea what you wrote in this particular chapter!  lol.  That said, you make me want to rush to the next chapter in the hopes that Emmett somehow straightens this out.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2013 10:37 PM · On: Boiling Point

Sigh.  Poor Justin, things conspire against him.  How can he get Brian to see the truth?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2013 10:14 PM · On: Mix With a Little Jealousy

Oh boy the picture of Gaston and Justin has serviced and it does not look as if Brian is happy!  Please say he doesn't make his usual mistake of not waiting for all the facts to come in? 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2013 11:07 AM · On: How Do You Say "Get Lost" in French?

What will Brian say when he see's that picture?  Poor Emm, at least Teddy was there to console him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2013 10:56 AM · On: The Chef Cooks Up a Plan

I love your cooking metaphors.  It's not nice of Gaston or should I say Pepe LePew to use Emmett like that, not to mention what will happen when Brian returns!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2013 10:46 AM · On: Showdown

Oh lord, now Justin's done it.  The Chef is taking an interest in him and this cannot turn out well.  Of course if Justin finds out they were sabotaged the Chef may find himself in hot water.



Author's Response:

Tee hee...I couldn't resist the creative use of chocolate souffle - ha!  So glad you're re-reading this one and enjoying it!  Thank you for all the wonderful comments!  And yes, Brian has not incurred Emmett's wrath, but he will! I always loved it when Em got his feathers ruffled on the show - love that character!  Thanks again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2013 09:20 AM · On: Something's In the Air

LOL.  Even while Emmett wants to do well in class, he can't resist getting into trouble with our little trouble maker.  At least the French Chef has noticed Emm so maybe there is hope there.



Author's Response:

Poor Em...in puppy love with the arrogant Frenchman, who only has eyes for our little blond.;)  And poor Brian when Em gets ahold of him later! Thanks so much for the comment. BTW, don't know if you're reading along with "My Heart's Desire," but I FINALLY posted an update.;)  Thanks again.  *hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2013 07:58 AM · On: Introduction to the Chef

As much as I love TEmmet, I adore when Justin and Emmett get together.  There is always trouble and it's always fun.  Gotta admit this is one of my favorites and I plan on enjoying rereading it once again.  You'll just have to put up with my comments :P



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Well, you can comment anytime you like.  I adore readers like you who not only read my stories, but go that extra step to motivate me by leaving feedback.  Thank you for doing that.  I enjoyed writing this story, especially with Emmett involved.  I think he and Justin make a great pair of friends. Thank you for choosing to read this story. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 10:43 PM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

Lmao!

Author's Response:

Hi, Tay!  I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!  I love to feature Emmett in stories when I can, and I got a kick out of them playing with their food as Justin tormented the pompous, French chef.  I'm so happy you liked it.:) Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave a comment; it is greatly appreciated.:)  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: MAXIE (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2012 09:09 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

OH MY WORD.  I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH.  EMMETT IS JUST THE CAT'S MEOW.  I LOVE HIM IN THIS STORY.  I CAN PICTURE IN MY MINDS EYE HIS MANNERISMS AND THE WAY HE TALKS-SO CUTE.  I REALLY DON'T THINK HE GOT ENOUGH SCREEN TIME DURING THE SERIES.  I THINK NOW I WILL BE FINISHING STIRRING UP TROUBLE.  I REALLY HAVE TO CORRECT PAPERS NOW.  JUST A TAD BEHIND.  SORRY ALL YOUR FAULT. TEE HEE!!



Author's Response:

Hi again, Maxie!  That's okay - I'll gladly take the blame!  I'm so happy you enjoyed this one!  Emmett is in the other story a lot, too (Stirring Up Trouble), so I hope you enjoy that one as well.  I got a big kick out of writing the food fights between him and Justin in this story while Justin antagonized the French chef - ha!  I adored Emmett on the show - how I wish they had shown more interaction between him and Justin, who he seemed to have a genuine affection for.  I can still remember the episode where Justin was asking Emmett if Brian wasn't paying attention to him because he was either too old or he didn't like his hair, and Emmett replied, "Honey, I LOVE your hair!"  They were so cute together!  Thanks again for reading and for taking the time to comment, Maxie!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:55 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

Thank you for this lovely and funny story!!! It was really good entertainment!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, Sorcha!  I'm so thrilled to see that you've read this story.  I had such fun writing it, especially when Emmett and Justin were engaging in the food fights and Justin was doing whatever he could to provoke Marchant.:)  Thank you so much for leaving feedback for each chapter, my friend; that was very kind of thoughtful of you.  And thank you for all the support you've given me over the last few years that I've been on this site; it is greatly appreciated.

BTW - I can't recall if you are following "Parent Trap," but I'm almost ready to update that one - maybe tonight.  It will be one of two chapters that I will be adding before I move onto "Tame the Wild Stallion."  Thank you again for everything!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:52 AM · On: Add Two Cups of Cream Sauce

LOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:51 AM · On: A Heaping Cup of Forgiveness

Ok no need to burn the vette, he said the right things!!!! great chapter!!!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:50 AM · On: A Little Dash of Sunshine

Justin is too kind!!!! really!!! I would have burnt his vette first, then I would have been ready for forgiveness. Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:49 AM · On: A Little Shot of Jim Beam

Yes Brian has to do some serious groveling!!!! loved it

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:48 AM · On: Just a Little :Pinch of Truth

Emmett!!!! Emmett!!! loved it!!!! Silly Brian I hope Justin will make him pay a little

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:47 AM · On: A Heaping Serving of Comfort

Emmett is such a good friend!!! Love his relationship with Justin in this story!!! loved the chapter

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:46 AM · On: Boiling Point

Brian is such a meanie, poor Justin, that was hurtful!!!! Loved it

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:44 AM · On: Mix With a Little Jealousy

Brian + Jealousy =  trouble for sunshine!!! Loved it

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:43 AM · On: How Do You Say "Get Lost" in French?

Poor Emmett!!!!! great chapter

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:42 AM · On: The Chef Cooks Up a Plan

Méchant Gaston using Emmett like this what a j***!!!

Loved it

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:41 AM · On: Showdown

Justin is priceless!!! it's really hard to make a soufflé!!!! Loved it

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:38 AM · On: Something's In the Air

Gaston is so funny! so full of himself, I loved the line about the wine.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2012 04:34 AM · On: Introduction to the Chef

Loved it!!!! French cuisine is the best (I'm not saying that because I'm french of course!!!)

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2012 08:30 PM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

What a funny chaper this was.Had a good giggle.Great story.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetie! I loved the idea of Justin and Emmett as friends in this one as well as the food fights and Justin playing with the food.  I could SO see the two of them taking cooking classes together like two little housewives.:)  Thanks so much for reading and for leaving feedback!  *Hugs*  Kim

Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 02:11 PM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

Hey. I loved the story, specially Justins torment of
Pepe. It was very funny. Thank you for writing and posting.
Sasha

Author's Response:

Hi, Sasha!  Thank you for reading and for the kind words, my friend.:)  I loved writing about Justin and Emmett being friends; I always enjoyed the small glimpses of them together that we saw on the show and wished they would have placed them together in scenes more often.:)  Thanks for all the lovely comments you've left me, Sasha!  I appreciate that so much.  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Infatuated_BJreader (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 12:05 PM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

I loved reading this story!! Your writing is immaculate, the way you describe emotions and feelings is pretty engaging. And i love your chapter names..haha..i think they're ingenious..i love jealous brian and u captured that really well..thank you for sharing this story..your a great writer..ps.i was reading this story everywhere and anywhere these two days on the bus..in classes..haha..a sweet distraction..thank you..



Author's Response:

Hi, Marie!  Thank you so much for reading and for the review!  Yes, I had fun with the story titles on this one, too - ha!  I'm so glad you enjoyed this story -I really like including Emmett and Justin together when I can - I think they had a lot in common.  Thanks again for the kind words - these boys ARE addictive, aren't they?

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2011 12:52 PM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

Another good one!  Loving your writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Kate! I'm so glad you liked this one.:)  I love making Brian jealous and placing Emmett and Justin together as "partners in crime.:)"  I love food fights, too, don't you? LOL!  Thanks for taking the time to leave a review, especially on one of my older stories.  I don't see them too often, so each one of those are especially wonderful.:)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 04:47 PM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

Another fantastic story I lol several times and then sad when Brian acted out. Brian eventually learned that Justin is his special cupcake.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I like to include Justin and Emmett as friends a lot of times - I think they were a lot alike in so many ways!  Loved the part about Justin being his "special cupcake!"  Wish I had thought of that and I could have had a new pet name for him - ha!

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2011 02:34 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

Again, a great story that I couldn't put down until I finished reading it, at bed time.  I just love fics with a jealous Brian involved and you hit the nail on the head with this one.  When I read your stories, I can hear the characters actually speaking in my head. 

Keep on writing.  Trying to decide what to read tonite.  LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you, Cheryl!  So glad you're enjoying the stories!  I'm going to have to write faster or you'll catch up with me - LOL!  If you're looking for a funny story with some romance mixed in, you might like "Arms Open Wide" if you haven't read it already - I had a lot of fun with that one and its sequel, "Payback."  Thanks again for reading and especially reviewing - it is greatly appreciated!:)

Reviewer: J (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2011 04:10 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

Loved this one as well...  :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for all the reviews - keep them coming - I love it!:)

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 08:15 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

I really enjoyed your story. There was humor and angst and ramping emotions to go around, all in all a representative story for our lovely couple.

It was frustrating seeing Brian giving into his vulnerability, but what the hell, this vulnerability, his mistrust in powerful emotions if you like, is what makes him the Brian Kinney we all love to read.

And I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed a story where Mikey did not have a large role to play in the lives of our couple.

Furthermore, I really liked the side of Emmett who stood by his friend, and came in to save the day when cofronting, at his own peril, the beast Brian Kinney.

Ergo, an excellent story!

Marla



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review, Marla!  So happy you liked it.  I'm thrilled to be a part of this writing community and I appreciate the warm welcome everyone has given me.  Thanks for taking the time to review this - it's one of my own favorites.:)

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 10:42 PM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

I just read this story and I have to say that I loved it ;) It was really refreshing ^^ Loved how Brian took care of the french ass xD 
hope to read more of you soon 
Hugs 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much - so glad you enjoyed it!  I have a sort of warped sense of humor when it comes to these boys - I think they're to blame - I'm never like this anywhere else - LOL!  Thank you for taking the time to review - hope you will enjoy some of my others and let me know what you think.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 05:51 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

I wrote a very long glowing detailed review at the end of the story but due to some outage of this website in the USA (including for me) I lost the post and Firefox wouldn't let me copy and save it (bangs head on desk crying like a little fay).

I went on and on about how much this story entertained me; how much I admire your writing skill; how my I laughed, cried, worried, and wasn't able to stop and pee knowing another chapter was waiting for me :) I spoke about MW.

In short summary; I loved this story and thank you again for publishing on MW for us. I don't publish or read stories anywhere but here since I can increase the font sizes for my vision, and the ability to publish my dime store novels here is so easy a dummy can do it and I'm a Dummy about a lot of code matters still to learn. Yes, the banners are a nice thing too, but there's so much more.

The Midnight Whispers reading and author community is by far the nicest bunch of people you might find on any BJ fanfic site. Rarely do they get ugly or flame anyone. Emotions can run high but not thermonuclear like I've seen on other sites. You don't have 100,000 competing stories for the readers online; you can find great reads suggested by several methods here. You can raise font sizes, and if you have a limited Internet access you can even block photos and banners for telephone Internet connections as many of our global readers only have.

I know this website has more than doubled in the approx. year I've been here and it is still growing. The QAF community has a safe haven here for their archived stories without fear of it suddenly going away for months/years for unknown reasons. You don't have to know text code to post stories or deal with that crap. I love the software, the people and the stories here. And it isn't cluttered trying to be too fancy a website. It's like a quiet easy going peaceful library for us to enjoy without the fanfare or hype of other websites (no need to name anyone here).

Midnight Whispers is my home. I hope you make it your favorite home too.

I predict your popularity will soar; you're a very gifted writer and witty to no end.

And you love our boys so that qualifies you for greatness in this wacky world of QAF fanfiction we have.

There; a long detailed review comment of pure love. You will get more of them here. I know you're that good Predec2.



Author's Response:

My dear friend - I don't even know how to begin to thank you for that review - there are no words quite adequate for it, but I will try.  (If you haven't figured it out by now, lack of words does not seem to be a problem with me, at least in chapter lengths - if you haven't read it, wait until you see the average chapter length in "Wedding Present."  "Bon Appetite" was very short compared to THIS one - I think the last chapter for Wedding Present was close to 10,000+ words! - LOL). 

I have noticed that there does seem to still be a very active community of fans outside of the US for QAF, of which I am very grateful. In fact, I'm very jealous of France's recent QAF convention where Randy attended; I would have LOVED to have been there for that!  Since I discovered these two wonderful characters after the show ended, if it wasn't for the diehard fans both here and abroad, these characters and the wonderful stories that have populated the web might not have continued.  But I am very heartened to learn from you how this site has grown over the past year; as long as readers enjoy what I am writing, that will continue to provide me with the impetus to keep them coming (one of Brian's favorite words, no doubt! Ha!).

I had to laugh over the fact that you couldn't even tear yourself away to pee; you really need a wireless laptop - LOL! And don't think I haven't already figured out the wonderful feature of the larger-size fonts - trust me, my friend, I have already found them AND used them - LOL!  As for making this my writing home, it is fast becoming just that, due in part to your welcome as well as those of a lot of the others.  Thank you again for all the reviews and your encouragement, as well as your large contribution toward my award of a blue ribbon for this story.  I look forward to hearing from you a lot more in the future.  Happy New Year to you and all the other readers and writers here!:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2011 05:13 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

I really think "Pepe" will make sure never to give cooking lessons in Pittsburgh ever again...lol... and now Justin knows  for sure exactly how  Brian feels about him..... great ending.. Thanks...



Author's Response:

Thank you - delighted you enjoyed it!  I don't think "Pepe" will be returning any time shortly....! Thanks for taking the time to review.:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2011 04:57 AM · On: Add Two Cups of Cream Sauce

I love it.... "Pepe le Pew" in Cream Sauce...lol.... I would have paid money to see Brian and Mikey taking a cooking class...



Author's Response:

Yeah, I can just see that one....and BRIAN always complained about Justin making a mess, although I noticed in Season 5 that he actually complimented Justin on his tomato sauce as well as his "cream" sauce; of course, that was just before the "penicillin tart" and the syphyllis bomb was dropped - LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2011 04:00 AM · On: A Little Shot of Jim Beam

I hope Brian sobers up quick..before Justin gets back to Emmett's...lol...



Author's Response:

Nah.....you know Brian; he can drink anyone under the table - ha!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2011 03:31 AM · On: Just a Little :Pinch of Truth

WOW...Emmett and Ted sure told Brian off.... now it's up to him to make up with Justin.......



Author's Response:

Yeah, I LOVE Emmett's loyalty to his friends - off course, Brian being Brian, the man's not going to just march over there and grovel! LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2011 03:19 AM · On: A Heaping Serving of Comfort

Poor Justin.....I hope Emmett can talk some sense into Brian..... 



Author's Response:

Not to fear - Mr. Honeycutt's on the warpath!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2011 03:07 AM · On: Boiling Point

It looks like Frenchy really messed things up for Justin ... and of course Brian is too stubborn to wait for an explanation....



Author's Response:

Of course - how ELSE would the man react? LOL!  But what great angst and fodder for the story plot.:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2011 02:37 AM · On: How Do You Say "Get Lost" in French?

I hope the person who took Justin and "Pepe's" picture doesn't have it printed.... because I don't think Brian will understand what's going on...



Author's Response:

Yep - you know a certain brunet, "I Don't Do Jealous" all too well....!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2011 02:18 AM · On: The Chef Cooks Up a Plan

Just what is "Pepe" planning to do "with" Justin?? it's a good thing Brian is out of town...because I don't think he would be too happy with Frenchy... lol..



Author's Response:

"Pepe's" up to no good - he's got a little blond eclair on his menu....LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2011 02:03 AM · On: Showdown

It looks like "Pepe le Pew" is more than a little interested in "Monsieur Taylor"...lol....



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think "Pepe's" intrigued with our little artiste.....LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2011 01:11 AM · On: Introduction to the Chef

OMG..... Justin is sooo right...Chef Marchant sounds exactly like..an "arrogant Chef Boyardee wannabee"...lol..... and congratulations on your Blue Ribbon....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I was so excited to receive it as well as flattered to be in such illustrious company - it was mainly due to JTSecrets, to whom I am very grateful, as well as other readers such as yourself who have taken the time to read and especially review - thank you!:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 12:54 AM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

I found they can tolerate it better if you don't get graphic with them having sex with someone else. Since canon did show them tricking with others until almost the end of the show it is very fitting within the established norms of QAF. Just many readers here have this "bubble mentality" about Brian/Justin and love to read them together. Don't let it deter your creative spirit or stop you from posting your stories here. Brian/Michael and Justin/Ethan is a kiss of death however for gathering a large reading audience.; in fact it might bring out the flames!

Once they get the idea you are leading up to their happy B+J union you might melt their frozen hearts to B or J /Other pairings for a short while of angst. Your talent deserves a fair chance no doubt IMO.



Author's Response:

That's good - in some of my stories, Justin may share a kiss or two with someone else but it's short-lived and fleeting.  And my stories ALL end with B & J together.  I know there's also a Brian and Michael camp, but I could never see that.  These two belong together in my opinion - their chemistry was off the page!:)  And Ethan?  Okay, all I can say is Yech!  Enough said?  LOL!  Although I WILL say I have one story where they meet again down the road, but again, it's mainly just to move the plot along so a certain stubborn brunet sees the error of his ways and it's a strictly platonic meeting by chance in New York.  Will try to get that one posted at some point (in my spare time, ha!). Thanks again for the support and the advice.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 12:45 AM · On: Add Two Cups of Cream Sauce

Here I was expecting steaming make-up sex and you surprised me totally with this delightful turn of events. I never expected Brian, but I did expect Justin to do something. Very well done and off to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you  - don't worry - there's some of the good stuff in some of the other stories if this one doesn't steam up your windows too much - LOL!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 12:26 AM · On: A Heaping Cup of Forgiveness

First of all you need a Kleenix warning with this chapter since you had me almost in falling tears too. If Justin cries so do I since he's my favorite character. I read you teach English so perhaps it was your major in college too or at least a minor for you. That explains your master of the language. French? What litttle I know can't be repeated in polite company :) I'm totally a user of Google Translate too for my stories from time to time. If I'm delighted to find your work here I know others will soon discover you too. The blue ribbon is very deserved and your work is an asset to our community.

All of your stories will find readers in time with perhaps one exception; the one that starts out with Brian and Justin with /Others won't be well received here. This bunch is fercely loyal to Brian/Justin and don't accept any other pairing even for a short time. I've learned that with my own writing and their responses.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the friendly warning about the "Justin/Other Character" matching - I may have to rethink how I post them initially, but at the same time I don't want to mislead anyone.  I do from time to time put Justin with another character only to develop some angst on Brian's part and to move the plot line along.  But I know what you mean - the slant with another character in "I Don't" didn't go over real well in Chapter 8, mainly I'm sure because of that.  But hopefully they'll jump back on board with Chapter 9.  I have some other stories I haven't dared post yet - one is 45 chapters long and some of the others are woven together too tightly to post independently, I feel - but they all involve Justin with someone else, at least temporarily.  I think, though, that that is what binds Justin and Brian so much more closer together in the long run, but I admit - it IS very painful until it does!  But I think it strengthens the story eventually.  Thank you again for all the encouragement!:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 11:41 PM · On: A Little Dash of Sunshine

How patient of Justin; most anyone else would have left Brian to rot in the Vette all night. I noticed the generous number of adjectives and adverbs in your sentence structure, and the theme development of each paragraph is extremely well done. You had formal fiction training at least in college I believe. If not you have a real talent for creative writing. Does it flow out for you or do you labor on each sentence to tweak it just right? It varies for differrent writers.



Author's Response:

You're very kind!  I'm glad you don't feel all the adverbs and adjectives are too superfluous; sometimes I think I get carried away, but I try hard to be as descriptive as I can so hopefully the readers can better envision the story I'm weaving.  I have a college degree but it's in elementary education, believe it or not (even though I'm teaching adults presently - first year teacher, actually - never got to really use the degree for teaching kids due to the job market). I have never had any writing courses, though - I just love to write and read!:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 11:24 PM · On: A Little Shot of Jim Beam

LMAO! This is such good reading and you are bringing it about perfectly. I'm most entertained and look forward to the next chapter. You write Emmett so well I had to laugh and envy it too. You're a very gifted writer. May I ask what country you're in? Your English is perfect; is it native?



Author's Response:

Yes, I live in America's heartland - the Buckeye State (Ohio).  Didn't even know about these wonderful characters until after the show had ended on Showtime.  Somehow stumbled over to You Tube and found them and was absolutely hooked.  Not sure if everyone would think my English is perfect, though - it's flavored with good old Kentucky hillbilly brogue from my relatives - LOL!  But if it counts, I teach English as part of an Adult Education course, so I guess I have a reputation to uphold - LOL!  Thanks again for all the support - I just got my first blue ribbon thanks to you and I'm so excited about it!!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 11:09 PM · On: Just a Little :Pinch of Truth

I was on the edge of my seat as this chapter unfolded. If Emmett had clawed Brian's eyes' out it could not have hurt him worse. The cutting words at the end had to sting the arrogant man to no end. At least he can see reason and hopefully finds his Sunshine in time to save the day for them both. I still think a French Chef is in deep Merde before this is over with.



Author's Response:

Okay, I'll have to go Google the French - you are far more fluent with it than me - ha!  I actually had to look up some of them for the story (like "Mon Chaton" for Little Kitten).  And not to worry, I think the chef's going to definitely get more than he bargained for shortly.  BTW - thank you so much for writing to the administrator on my behalf.  I am SO excited about that as well as grateful!  I get so much enjoyment out of my stories - it takes me to another world and I can imagine whatever I want happening between B & J, who I dearly love.  Seeng other people enjoying what I write is such a great high, as I'm sure you already know.  Thank you again for going to bat for me.:)

Reviewer: TECH SUPPORT (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 10:57 PM · On: Introduction to the Chef

A reader/author very strongly suggests your work here for our featured status. I have to agree after seeing your writing. Thank you for publishing at Midnight Whispers Predec2.



Author's Response:

Wow - I am so excited and grateful to JTSecrets for the recommendation - I am very honored and flattered!  Thank you so much!  That means so much to me.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 10:40 PM · On: A Heaping Serving of Comfort

Go Emmett! I can't wait to see how he reads the beads of a one Brian Kinney next. Your control of canon is perfect and the characters jump alive off the pages.



Author's Response:

What a nice compliment!  Thanks!  I LOVE Emmett's character - so playful and full of emotion but still so loyal to his friends.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 10:30 PM · On: Boiling Point

I forgot to mention you haven't dominated the website; only a little bit of the recent stories which will pass and no one is complaining at all. We are delighted to have you join our crazy MW family. I'm firing off an email right now to make your talent more noticed.

*grins*



Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you so much - you're very kind....I had some of my readers on the other site requesting I post here, so that's why I'm having to play catch up, so to speak....It's so easy to post on here, and it's great to have them posted almost instantly (although, I have to be careful - I already inadvertently deleted several chapters of one story in error the other day and had to redo them again after people had starting reading them - ACK!).  Thanks again for the encouragement - I really appreciate it.  I get a lot of joy out of writing these stories and I hope others do, too.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 10:27 PM · On: Boiling Point

Oh my; you do know how to write angst too I see. I could just see Brian and Justin both acting that way totally. There's a chef that better get the hell out of Dodge if I know Justin. OOPS! I keep forgetting who's writing this wonderful tale.



Author's Response:

Yeah, we all know (and love) a possessive Brian, don't we??  LOL!  And I also love Emmett when he gets fired up, too, so watch out, Brian!! 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 10:15 PM · On: Mix With a Little Jealousy

A picture is worth a thousand words they say. You have woven this very nicely and I fear what Brian will do next without thinking. I'm am so hooked into this story and have to follow it to the end. Thank you for posting all the chapters so I don't have to wait to see how you develop it.



Author's Response:

You are so welcome and I am so delighted that such a prolific (and popular) writer on here is reading this!:)  I'm glad I had this one written completely, too....it's one of my favorites.:)  LOVE the way I can make banners for them, too!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 10:04 PM · On: How Do You Say "Get Lost" in French?

OMG! Me think I see a horrible misunderstanding with Brian in the mist and a French chef who may be without balls before Justin is done with him. Pardon moi, I'm not writing this :)



Author's Response:

Oh, but you are definitely on the right track! Wink, wink....But remember, Brian doesn't DO jealous - ha!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 09:47 PM · On: The Chef Cooks Up a Plan

Poor Emmett getting used to get to Justin. You have a devil mind on you for writing this and I'm LOVING IT!!!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 09:35 PM · On: Showdown

Oh hell; this is rich, very rich. An assertive Justin is always a winner in fan fiction but this one deserves a medal for his boldness. Got to read on!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  He puts a whole new use to a souffle, doesn't he?  LOL!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 09:19 PM · On: Something's In the Air

Oh contrare; Emmett would be trying to choke the living sh!t out of Justin about now. I love your humor.



Author's Response:

Thanks - like the French, by the way - LOL!  Yeah, I guess I do have a warped sense of humor - I can so see Justin playing with the flour and the chicken, though, can't you??  And giggling through the whole thing, too.  Thanks for reviewing this!  Means a lot coming from another writer.:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2011 09:08 PM · On: Introduction to the Chef

LMAO! Very funny opening and outstanding writing style. It's a pleasure to find your work on Midnight Whispers. Give our crowd time to find you and I know you'll be very popular here.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words and the encouragement!  It means a lot to me.  Reality is about to set in for me - been off work for a week and have to go back on Monday now.:(  At least I won't be monopolizing the site quite as much - LOL!  Am trying to at least get the next chapter of "Wedding Present" up today....Thanks again for the welcome - I really appreciate it and I'm having so much fun working on the banners! 

Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: December 31, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Ding Ding, It's Done!!

I like it. so funny

Happy New Year



Author's Response:

Thank you so much - Happy New Year to you, too!:)

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Introduction to the Chef

Now this was down right delicious.  I loved Justin's antics in the class with the flour but the name Pepe le Pew was halarious.  MAN he was full of himself.   Nice touch on the cream sauce Brian threw.  Great story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review - I'm delighted you liked it!  Yeah, I figured a little creme brulee in the face was the Brian Kinney thing to do - LOL!  And I loved coming up with ways for Justin to continue tormenting the chef.  Thanks for reading.:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Introduction to the Chef

Love the banner.  I'm certain I've read this some of this before and now I have the pleasure of reading it again.  Bravo!

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Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm having a lot of fun coming up with ideas for the banners.  I'm having to use Microsoft Publisher for now but when I finally figure out how to use the Photoshop I bought recently I hope they will be even better - haven't had a chance yet to read the "Photoshop for Dummies" book I bought yet - ha!  Thanks for the review.:)

Reviewer: GiggleBean (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Introduction to the Chef

brillant as ever

nice touch with brian throwing the cream in pepe's face



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I really had fun with this story - especially Justin with the pranks at the cooking class - thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Introduction to the Chef

I haven't even started reading this story yet, but I know it will be wonderful. Your writing is great and the sex scenes are very hot.
I love skunks and pepe le pew is one of my favorites so I am adding you and this story to my favorites list.

Author's Response:

That's great to hear, Lorie - thank you so much!  I hope you enjoy it - I had a lot of fun with this one!!  And I always loved Pepe Le Pew, too, but I don't think Brian or Justin's going to like this particular version too much - LOL!

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