great story. Loved it

Thank you for writing this. Couldnt wait to read the sequel

I have tears in my eyes reading this chapter then the birds incident happen LOL... this chapter is so romantic and funny. Finally they are married and they have all people who love them witness it

Phew im so relieved everything out in the open and brian didnt get angry at justin. He knew sunshine meant well

Wow this is unexpected twist. Its even better. 

I have so enjoyed the journey you have taken us on, the more I read the more I realize the story really is a special "present" to the readers. I adore Fin/Tony and what their characters have added, also a big thank you for staying true to Brian & Justin and not straying from the characters we all fell in love with!! Your writing style is so creative, I have laughed and cried many times then I can count!  I can't wait to start the sequel!  Candy

P.S. Your story is what pushed me to register on MW so I could let you know how much I enjoyed your writing! 

 

Author's Response:

Hi, Candy! First of all, welcome to Midnight Whispers!  it sounds like you've been reading for some time, but the fact that you registered simply so you can leave me a review really made my day! I'm so happy that you enjoyed that story. I, too, really adore Fin and Tony's characters as well, and you will find in the sequel that they play a very dominant part, along with Brian and Justin.  I came to love those characters so much that it seemed like they had been there the entire time. The sequel is even longer than the first story, and I do intend to write a third story at some point where this sequel left off.   But just knowing how much you enjoyed the story really means a lot to me and is very motivating as a writer, so I thank you for not only registering, but taking the time to leave me a review. I'm honored that my story was the first one you chose to leave a comment for.  Thanks again for your support! I hope you continue to enjoy some more of my stories.  a86; ~Kim

Dear Kim,

I found this story listed in someones favorites (it might have been Vic's) , a great way to find some great stories : -) And since a haven't read it before, I did just that - and really enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing!

And to think there is a sequal waiting ... :-)

Author's Response:

Hi, Steff!  I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for letting me know.  I hope you enjoy the sequel, too. Thank you for reading, and for the comments! ~Kim

Aw no it can't be finished, this story can't be over but hearts desire is there. I can't wait to see the pony ride with Fin, Brian and Gus I hope you wrote it. This is one of my all time favorite stories

Author's Response:

Hi, Vicki! I want to thank you for all the reviews you left on this story! I appreciate that so much. I wish I could have responded individually to each one, but lack of time precludes me from doing that. But I want you to know how much I am grateful for your feedback.  I'm so delighted that you enjoyed it, and now you are reading the much longer sequel.  Thank you for all the encouragement and support!  ~Kim

Way to go Emmett, you did the grooms proud, everyone should have a venue created by you. OMG he said dad, now just say it to his face please

Oh my God that was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. You had me crying again with happiness. I am lost for words it was so beautiful 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

This was amazing you did a brilliant job x

I'm getting excited for the wedding now and all this build up is great. I am loving Sean and Kathy and Fin and Tony so much

That was some heart to heart, so moving you moved me to tears again. I pray they become closer I think they would be really a duo and mess with everyones head in a fun way.

I can feel this building and building, so emotional and brilliant. I hope they meet soon and it goes well.

Oh Brian why are you so stubborn, please, please go talk to your dad

Author's Response:

Hi, Vicki!  I am so thankful as well as touched by all your review comments. Thank you!  You are allowing me to relive parts of the story myself, and I am enjoying it immensely.  I really love Fin and Tony's characters, and I hope by the time you read this story, you will feel that way, too.:)  One day, I will definitely come back and revisit this 'verse.

 

BTW, I'm sorry to hear that you're struggling with your own stories.  I know how it can be to develop writer's block!  I hope you find the inspiration you are looking for soon.  Perhaps go back and rewatch some of the eps if you can?  I'm assuming you already belong to a DS FB group?  If so, perhaps they could help as well. But I'm here for you, and broadcasting positive thoughts that you will soon find the inspiration you need. :)  Thank you again for all the comments!  And don't worry; stubbornness runs in the O'Connor/Kinney genes.  He (both) will come around eventually. :)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Thank god Fin you are doing the right thing. I pray the reunion with his son goes well

OMG I wept reading this, my heart soured and broke and soured. I hope things go better soon and I can't wait to see him with the grandparents, I hope it's good for them all.

Oh Fin please wake up, you are losing everyone. I love the grandparents they are great, I hope Brian like them. I Gosh I hope he takes the news well as well. Fin getcit your son now....

Oh I love Fin and Tony already, I hope Brian does as well and I pray Fin comes out its only fair for Tony. Excited to read more now x

Author's Response:

Hi, Vicki!!  Thank you for choosing to read this story, and for all the comments!  I really grew to love Fin and Tony in this story, as well as in the sequel, and I'm glad you like them, too.;)  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, and then you'll have an even longer sequel to read if you choose.;)

Thanks so much for reading, and especially for all the feedback!  I truly appreciate that. ~Kim

 

OMG this had me emotional and I love them already. I hope Brian loves them

Justins love for Brian is so wonderful and I love Emmett here you write him so well

Gosh I really hope Justin knows what he is doing and it doesn't blow up in his face

awwwww, loved it

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I am almost done with the sequel, "My Heart's Desire."  I should have the last part posted later tonight. I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for all the reviews, and for the encouragement.  ~Kim

Wonderful story, full of the love our two boys have for each other, their friends and their families. Looking forward to the continuing journey:-)

I don't think I've ever laughed and cried at the same time before, this was simply brilliant:-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I always get nervous when I have to write their wedding vows, but I did like the way this one turned out, with both the touching scenes as well as the humorous ones.  Thank you for choosing to read this story, and especially for taking the time to review! I greatly appreciate that.  If you haven't read it, I hope you will enjoy the sequel. I should have that one finished fairly soon.  ~Kim

The first time I read this story, I am not finished until the end. It happens to me when the story long, I'm always deter new short stories.Now as I enjoy their love and understanding.I can see that below a label "violence", I'm afraid of what can happen to any of them, when the race for governor has heated up.Otherwise I'm going to finish reading this because a wedding going on.Thank you!    

Author's Response:

Hi, Orchida!  I hope you won't be frightened off by the 'violence' part.  It is mild, and is only a brief interlude in the story, so I don't think you will be too upset over it (hopefully).  Let's just say that it's a way to deepen the bond between father and son - and the friendship between Tony and Justin.  I know it's a long story, but I do hope you decide to read through to the end.  Thank you for reading up to this point, for the comments, and for the support. I do appreciate that. ~Kim

Loving this x

I'm so happy *happy tears*

I am so happy he's going to get the grandparents he deserves and that they LOVE ON HIM x

And I cried. I was so worried they'd reject him aw. But how will Brian react??????

Oh god, I hope his mom was forced to give him up - and I hope this ends well. SO NERVOUS <3

OHHHHHHHHH! Adoption papers? But why adopt a kid and be so cruel to the, *cries for Brian*

I just wanted to let you know I read this a while back way before I had an account and I absolutely loved it. I thought I might have commented as a guest but I didn't see anything so I wanted to say great job and that I will be reading the sequel soon :)

Author's Response:

Thanks again, Anne, for the lovely comments; as you know, that is sweet music to a writer.;)  I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. It's funny how the sequel has wound up being a lot longer, and is STILL not finished.;)  It's getting close, though, so if you want to wait then you could read it in it entirety.;)  If you do, I hope you enjoy that one as well. Thanks again for reading, and especially for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

This story desserves 200 reviews and more!!!!

Author's Response:

Awww....thanks, Sorcha! That means so much to me!  And I like that nice, even '200,' too.;)  This is a special story to me, and I continue to adore Fin and Tony's characters.  I'm planning on featuring Tony with Justin in the next installment of the sequel, "My Heart's Desire," as he goes into more detail about how he and Fin met and fell in love.  I'm so happy that you liked this story, my friend.  Thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave me feedback. That means a lot to me - and thank you for all the support you constantly have given me.  I hope I continue to write stories that you will enjoy.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Woo, that was a heavy chapter! I'm glad that Brian now knows the truth and is looking forward to meeting the Blackwells. I know that I'll shed some tears when Grandma and Grandpa come to Britin... but I don't mind happy tears! :)

Will I find out eventually if Claire knew that Brian was adopted or if the Kinney's lied to her too?

Author's Response:

Hi, Nancy - Yes, she will.  And Claire will get a little 'smack down' of her own, too, from a certain hubby's protector.:)  Thanks so much for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Alrighty, I'm beginning the journey of reading this story and its sequel. I'm interested in what the piece of paper Justin found has on it. Onto chapter 2 I go! :)

Author's Response:

Hi, Nancy!  Well, you are one brave lady to be doing this while trying to tackle your own WIP stories, but I'm delighted to know that you will be reading it.  I really enjoyed writing this story, and the two other main characters you will be meeting soon have been very near and dear to my heart, so much so that I feel like they have been characters all along.  I do hope that you enjoy it!  BTW - I noticed that you have started posting your new story - that's great!  Can't wait to read it!  Thanks again for checking this one out and for the feedback.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Perfect end to a wonderful story.  I still say Emmett has horrible timing, but he knows how to throw a wedding and reception party!

Good to see Brian and Fin taking baby steps.  Brian deserves to have a father's love.  And Fin is really trying.  I think Brian finally sees that ;o)

Now on to the sequel.  Looking forward to more of Brian/Justin/Fin/Tony and whoever else you throw into the mix.  I'm sure it's gonna be an interesting journey ;o)

Author's Response:

Ahh...at last you made it!  Thank you for all the comments!  Now get ready for a roller coaster ride, at least after the boys come home from the honeymoon...and I have lots of pictures of that.:)  Thanks again, my friend!  Hope you enjoy the intrigue coming up.  I'll be getting it updated, BTW, very soon as soon as I'm done with Tricky wreaking his havoc on Brian - ha!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Finally Emmett got to see a side of Brian that all of us had seen and loved all along.  It was obvious from the very beginning how much he loved Justin!

The wedding reception is fabulous!  Loving everything about it from their first dance (At Last indeed!), to Chanda Leer (Go Darren!) to the dance between Fin and Tony.

And you ended this chapter perfectly with Justin finally getting through to Stubborn, Jr. and getting him to agree (as much as Brian Kinney ever agrees) to stop being such a prick when it came to Fin and Tony.   I don't think he's going to be doing cartwheels for them anytime soon, but at least it's a start.

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I always thought Emmett would be the perfect wedding party planner - and I thought he made a 'kick-ass' business partner for Justin in the wedding cake business in "Stirring Up Trouble" for the same reason.:)  I'm delighted that you enjoyed their reception, and I thought Chanda Leer was an appropriate addition to it.  Poor Tony is still very wistful about wanting what Justin wants, and that will come up again in the sequel.  What happens, though, will be up to my plot bunny.  I have an idea where I want to take it, but I suspect it will take me a while to get there.:) 

Like your name for Brian, BTW ("Stubborn, Jr.") - LOL!  Perfect title for him.  I figured a true father of Brian's would have a lot of traits in common with his son.  And as I mentioned before, I don't think it's realistic to except father and son to get all lovey-dovey all of a sudden, but I DO see them growing closer as time goes on and Brian determines he can, indeed, trust his father to treat him like a true son unlike Jack. 

Thanks again for all your comments, Nita!  And hang in there, my friend; things WILL get better.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

I'm bawling here!  Such beautiful vows from both men.  If anyone had any doubts about how much Brian loved Justin, or vice verse, those vows would have cleared it up.

And then you threw in the well-timed humor with the bird and the banter, and Debbie.  Perfect!

Loved everything about this chapter.  So glad they finally did it, and I love the picture with the left hands wearing the rings ;o)

 

Author's Response:

Thanks, Nita!  I was proud of this chapter, too; my father has actually used that bit with the paper bag from time to time to scare off hawks around our house - it makes quite a loud, booming sound.:)  I'm so glad you enjoyed this one.  They'll be a few more photos for the reception, along with some uniquely B & J moments of celebration as only they can do (wink, wink).  Thanks so much for all the comments - you're in the home stretch now.  Then it's onto the honeymoon in the sequel before the boys get entangled into some dirty old politics.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

OMG this was WONDERFUL!  So glad Brian is finally opening his heart at least a little bit.

That had to be hard for Sean and Kathy, but like Tony said, the whole business of coming out is complicated (at least for most of us). Fin was just trying to fit in back then, and I think on some level he really did love Lydia and had imagined maybe having a future of some kind with her.

You had me laughing at the ice cream comment.  I can only imagine Jennifer's face when Brian told Fin that!  Poor Jennifer, they always did love to tease her!

And a Daphne/Justin moment!  I love those ;o)

Just a great chapter in every way.

Author's Response:

LOL!  Well, you know Brian - he tends to speak sometimes before he thinks first - ha!  I think while Jennifer's used to it, not sure about the rest of their company.:)  Thanks again for the lovely comments, my friend.:) 

OMG the "I am, aren't I" from both of them had me laughing so hard!  Poor Tony and Justin!

And then you had me laughing even harder with the banter from our two favorite men.  I kept waiting for Justin to say something along the lines of, "Well if you bottomed more often, you wouldn't be so sore!"  LOL

I felt sorry for Fin toward the end.  I honestly still can't fathom why it's anyone's business what we do in our bedrooms.  People really need to get a life!

Another wonderful chapter.  Gonna try to finish this one over the weekend, and hopefully start the sequel next week.  I'm loving it more and more!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  I'm so thrilled that you're enjoying this story.:)  Some of the ones that I write just seem to resonate a little more with me and this was one of them, so I'm very pleased that you like it, too.:)  I wish I had thought of that sentence for Justin, BTW - that would have been great!  LOL!  Thanks again for al the wonderful comments.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

So glad Fin finally found a way in.  My heart goes out to Brian.  He's been hurt so much, so it's completely understandable that he's wary of being hurt once again.

Leave it to the blonds!  They usually get what they want in the end.  And yes, I'm speaking from personal experience on that one! LOL

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  So glad to see you reading the next chapter!  Maybe I should dye my hair blond - LOL!  Yes, I imagine Brian would be hesitant to become involved with the father he didn't even know, but he will eventually warm up to Fin.  Thanks again for all the feedback - Hugs!  ~Kimberly

You know, I actually am beginning to feel sorry for Fin.  He knows he made a big mistake and he's trying hard to make up for it.  And he's right.  They're both way too stubborn.  

Oh, and what's up with the Italian furniture?  Is there a gene for that or something? LOL

So glad Brian has Justin.  This whole situation has to be killing him inside.  A good roll in the old loft bed will cure what ails him though ;o)

And you ended it on yet another "oh shit" moment.  They'd better pray Debbie isn't working.  She'd pounce on them so fast they'd think the media were nothing! LOL

Author's Response:

Ha!  Hi, Nita!  Glad to see you reading again.:)  You're right - Debbie is like an unstoppable freight train!  Thanks as always for your comments, my friend.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Just as I feared.  I know they'll eventually come around, but it was painful to read.  Brian had every right to feel that way.  I know justin was disappointed, but I would have been more surprised, and downright worried, if Brian hadn't acted that way after everything he's been through in his life.  It was just one more disappointment.  And then the abrupt change in the senator's attitude would probably have made anyone in Brian's shoes suspicious.

Now, for Lindsay.  Can't stand her.  Never will like her.  And I have to wonder what business is it of hers, and how can she of all people pass judgement?  Wasn't she the one who made sure Brian knew about the magazine article on Justin, knowing full well he'd push Justin away again?  Wasn't she the one who after knowing the man's partner was leaving, left herself and took his son to Canada?  So who is she to say anything about how anyone treats Brian?

Just had to say that because dispite this being the only lesbian couple on the show, I just simply can't stomach them!

Another great chapter.  I'll be back in a bit to read more after I eat a little dinner.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us.  It's simply amazing.

Author's Response:

Hi, Nita!  Now you know you're not allowed to have a dinner break - LOL!  Yes, as far as Brian goes, it will take some time for him to warm up to Fin.  And I agree - it wouldn't have been realistic any other way.  I actually am not fond of Lindsay, either - every time I come to her scenes with Mel on my DVDs, I normally promptly use the fast-forward feature - ha!  At least she is not featured too prominently in this story but mainly when the plot requires it if that helps to stomach her a little better.:)

 

Anyway, thanks again for all the comments and for reading!  I really appreciate that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

WOW!  I was a little worried there for a minute that Tony was going to walk away before Stubborn, Sr. had a chance to finally say what he was feeling.  What is it about the O'Connor men anyway?  I mean, geeeeesh!  Talk about a father/son resemblance that has nothing to do with looks!

Glad he finally came around and won Tony back.  And now he's ready to finally meet Brian.  Oh boy, I can only imagine what that's going to be like when Stubborn, Sr. and Stubborn, Jr. meet up.  I hope Justin and Tony have both paid all the premiums on their partner's life insurance.  Something tells me they might need to make a claim soon! LOL

Another great chapter.

Author's Response:

Ha!  Good names for them!  I have to agree with you about father and son.:)  You can see why Tony and Justin would need to join forces to stay sane around their men - LOL!  Thanks again for the lovely comments, my friend!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Ok, I'm crying here. First of all, it's about damned time Fin woke up and smelled the coffee, hot cocoa, or whatever the hell he was smelling. He'd better get his act together because now that Brian knows the truth about why he refused to go see him, it's going to be that much harder to convince Brian his feelings are for real. Good luck, Fin! Brian can be just as stubborn as you can.

 

The conversation between Brian and Justin was heartbreaking. Brian wanted to cry so badly, but as usual he held it in, and Justin was determined to be strong for his man. Beautiful!

 

Thank goodness Gus is on his way. We definitely need some Gus action! LOL

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  Yes, father and son may not know each other yet, but you will find a lot of similarities between them.:)  Stay tuned - things will be changing quite a bit in the near future and Tony & Justin will continue to find a lot in common with each other as well.:)  Thanks again for taking the time to leave your comments; I really appreciate that!:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Yay I have completed reading another of you fabulous stories!! I loved it 100% I love the images that you conjure up and how realistic your character descriptions seem to be. When I read your stories I can actually see characters speaking and can visualise scenes unfolding - all thanks to your talent with words. I apologise for reading so many of your stories once they are finished - I am not able to offer you encouragement as they are being written and for that I am sorry. Incidentally my youngest son is called Finn so I am glad the character turned out to be a good guy. I am going to start reading the story sequel now so I hope he stays that way!!! Thank you, love Kate xxx

Author's Response:

Aww...thank you for those very lovely words, Kate!  They mean more than you know, my dear.:)  I'm so glad you can see the story unfolding in your mind; that is one of the things I strive to do when I write them, so that makes me very happy to hear you say that.

Oh, and please don't apologize about wanting to read only completed fics - I can certainly understand your wanting to wait until they are finished.  I hate throwing my heart - and time - into a story only to discover that either it never was finished or hasn't been updated in forever.  That drives me crazy! Instead I am actually very thankful that you took the time to leave feedback after you read it; it seems that too often those that prefer to wait and then read it afterward don't always think to leave their thoughts, so I am very appreciate that you did that.:)

I'm honored, also, that you would start on "Heart's Desire" before it's done.  I can see that story as being quite a long one, due in large part to all the areas I want to cover in it.  And yes, I CAN assure you that Fin will, indeed, remain a good guy.  That was my intention from the start.:)  So thank you for having faith in me to see it through to the end; it WILL be updated regularly and finished in time, just like my other stories always have been.:)

Thank you again for all your support of my stories!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Just downgraded my opinion of the current Fin attitude from jackass to asshole. Oh he's going to regret his actions. I'm sure of it.

 

You go, Tony! A few years too late in my opinion, but at least you finally stood up to him and let him know he can't get away with treating you like that. Maybe it was the catalyst for waking the idiot up! I can't stand people who hide who they are. I for one fought too damned hard to be comfortable with myself. If someone can't handle who I am, then they don't need to be around me.

 

Getting off my soapbox now.

 

I'm loving Sean and Kathy more and more. They are going to absolutely love Brian and Gus! And Brian and Gus are going to love them.

 

Brian knows Justin so well. Once again you had the love shining through beautifully. If he keeps “punishing” Justin like that, the man is never going to do anything right again, just so he can take the punishment for it! LOL

 

Another wonderful chapter!

Author's Response:

Ha! Don't worry - I don't blame you about Fin.  But he will slowly be coming around, and I think you'll eventually warm up to him (I think....LOL!).  Sean and Kathy will be interspersed in the story off and on, and will show up eventually in the sequel, too.  I think it's important for Brian to have some support from them.  Thanks again for following the story and for all the wonderful comments, Nita.:)  *Hugs*

Well I didn't see THAT coming!  So he's gay too?  WOW!

I have a feeling when Tony and Justin tag-team him, he's not going to have much of a choice but to meet Brian! LOL

Author's Response:

Yep!  You're onto me; and you're right - you will find eventually that Tony and Justin will become good friends - not sure if it's because they have so much in common with two stubborn men, or if they have to out of necessity!  LOL!  Thanks again for taking the time to comment!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Beautiful!  Siimply beautiful!

So glad that they are willing to accept Justin and Brian as a couple.

And don't worry about me sticking with the story.  It might take me a couple of days, but I'm in it to the end ;o)

Loving this story!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetie!  I really appreciate all the support and encouragement!  I do hope you enjoy it.  I have some photos to go with the story, but they don't come up until almost the end. Thanks again for all the feedback.  *Hugs* 

OMG I hope they find his real parents and that they're willing to have a relationship with him.  It would be wonderful for Brian to have them in his life if they are good people.

I so adore Emmett!  He is so much fun!  Just what Justin needs while waiting for such big news.  And I'd choose the vanilla cake, only without the coconut frosting! LOL

That last line is soooo true!  Anyone would be blessed to have Brian Kinney in their life.  His heart is as big as the ocean.  He just had to learn to trust, and to have someone love him for who he is and not what he can do for them (unfortunately the entire 'family' is guilty of that! Except for Justin of course)

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  I see you've figured out that BRIAN is the adopted one; I never DID think he looked like that idiot of a father.  I hope you like Brian's real father; I have become very fond of him to the point where he seems like one of the original characters.  Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment; I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  Kim

Oh boy, a suspicious and concerned Brian is never good when you're trying to keep something from him.  Totally loved the NPH reference though.  I love him and his family!  Those twins are adorable!

Anyway, I'm glad Carl was there for Justin.  Ever since he's learned that not all of us in the gay and lesbian world are mindless jerks, he's become a true fathe figure to most of the boys.  I'll never forget the scenes between him and Emmitt after the bombing.  Classic!

And that last line (actually the last word) makes me even more sure I've got this right.  Yep!  Brian's going to be totally floored ;o)

Just finished this wonderful story.  Even when I am feeling a little out of sorts I read your stories and feel so much better.  You take me to a better place and I am enthralled for that special time.  I just love Fin and Tony--Tony so much like Justin and Fin so much like Brian.  You did a good job matching these four up.  Now I am going to read Operation Birthday.  It looks like I would really love that one as I am a big b-day party thrower.  Your banner looks very inviting so that's next before I get into more Tony and Fin.  I took a writing class a few years ago to no avail.  I just wish I could write as you do.   Work now, read tonight.  I'll let you know later.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie! Thank you for reading so many of my stories, and for the wonderful comments!  I'm not sure what it is about Fin and Tony, but I have really become fond of them.  This story just seemed to almost write itself at times.  The sequel, "My Heart's Desire," is becoming much more involved actually than the first one; I think because they are so many different threads running through it.  I do hope you enjoy that one as well...I'm not sure if you want to wait until it's finished or not - I know some readers prefer that.  It DOES promise to be a long one before I've written about everything that I want to.:)

I hope you like the birthday story; be warned, it's probably way over the top for Brian, but I did enjoy writing it, though.:)  Sappily romantic.:)  Anyway, thank you again for all you wonderful comments; it means a lot to me that you're taking the time to leave your thoughts.  *Big* hug. ~Kimberly

Now I know how Hearts came about.  This was a lovely story  gb Justin.  I have been reading non-stop for a while with occasional snacks. ha ha!!  I have my house work done-bills caught up and it's cold outside-so thought I'd build a fire in my fire place and read.  Good relaxation to take yourself away from this world and visit with the boys.  I must reiterate what an exceptional writer your are.  Guess I should correct myself "author".  What you do is much more than just writing.  This story is so good, I find myself so immersed I forget where I am and what time it is.  I guess I'm having a Kim marathon.  I will probably read a few more before I stop.  It's good we are connected by name-even if it's spelled differently. ta ta for now!

Author's Response:

Hi, Kym!  Yes, it must have been fate for us to share the same name.:)  I like the sound of that - a "Kim marathon" - ha!  I know what you mean about the weather; I live in Southern Ohio and it's been gloomy and raining all day long - yuck!  But the highs are in the 50's here so it could be worse, although this time of year I would almost prefer it snow rather than rain.:)

Thanks for your kind words about this story.  This was another story that resonated with me and kind of wrote itself.  By the time I got done with it, I felt like Tony and Fin had been regular cast members on the show - ha!  I have really become fond of these two characters and I love to compare the similarities between father and son and their lovers/husbands.  I have a sneaking suspicion that "Heart's Desire" will run on and on for a good while; there are just so many plot points I want to cover in there it's almost mind-boggling!

I can't thank you enough for reading so many of my stories, Kym.  I hope you will continue to enjoy them for a long time to come because I still love these two characters even after writing about them for two years now and have a lot of new story ideas floating around in my head.:)  Thanks again, my friend.  And don't forget to take regular bathroom breaks while you're reading, too - LOL!:)

OMG that was one of my top 10 stories!  I am so glad your mentioned it in response to one of my other reviews on fanfiction.  I immediately found it and started reading non-stop!  Beautiful!  And I love Fin and Tony and Sean and Kathy.  I can't wait to read the sequel.

Val

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review, Val - what a mood lifter!:)  I'm so glad you liked it - Fin and Tony have become two of my favorite characters, also.:)  I am definitely planning on starting the sequel soon - I just have to wrap up "She's Your Daughter" and "I Don't," both of which I see having one more chapter of each.  As soon as I get those done in the next week, I will be starting on the sequel, which will detail Fin's run for Governor, his deepening relationship with Tony and his ever-changing relationship with his son.  And don't forget, I still have a honeymoon to plan for the boys - ha!  I'm so glad you liked this one - it means a great deal to me.  And thanks for taking the time to leave a review for me - that means more to me than you know.:)

I am just writing to let you know how much i really loved this story and only pray that you do write the sequel very soon.In this love play with my babies B/J i came to love them even more and this is because of YOU,keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Oh, Lois - how very kind of you - I am so delighted you enjoyed this story - thank you so much!  This was one of my favorite stories to write and I really grew fond of Fin and Tony especially; after I got done I almost felt like they were regular characters from the show - LOL!  I, too, am so obsessed with these two - I discovered them after the show ended and I just love to write about them!  I am trying to finish up a couple of my current WIPs before I start on the sequel, but rest assured - there WILL definitely be one.  I have to send these boys on their honeymoon and get Fin through his campaign.  I have several plot ideas running through my head and hope to incorporate those into it, so please hold on just a little longer and I'll have at the least the first chapter up soon.  I anticipate this will be another long one so I hope you'll be along for the entire ride.  Thanks again for reading this story and especially leaving the review - you don't know how much I treasure those.:)

I really loved this fic.... especially  the addition of Brian's "real family"...Sean, Kathy...Fin and Tony ...  I can't wait to read the sequel and see where they all go from here..... I have to ask you a question that was never really explained.... why did Jack and Joanie adopt Brian in the first place???  they never really wanted him and they already had Claire... I am curious as to what their motive could have been.... Thanks....

Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews, my friend!  I may have to explore that issue in the sequel about why they adopted; I can't remember if Claire is younger or older, can you?  If she is older, it would make more sense, because I could see Jack Kinney wanting a boy to carry on his name, and maybe the "Ice Queen" being unable to have any more children.  Being Catholic they would have been encouraged to have more than one child and with Joan being so "religious," I could maybe see that happening to keep up their image.  There were a lot of readers that asked that same question, and if Claire is older than Brian, she may be able to provide some answers for him.  I should be starting on the sequel as soon as I can at least wrap up one of my open stories - looks like maybe "I Don't" might be getting close.  Not sure about "She's Your Daughter" or "Double Jeopardy," but those I see going longer than "I Don't."  I hope when I do, though, that you'll be along for the ride.  Thanks again for all taking the time to leave reviews for me - it is greatly appreciated!

I am glad that Brian listened to his husband and is making more of an effort to know Fin....

Author's Response:

Yes, Justin can be quite persistent when he wants to be, can't he?  LOL!

I loved it.....  leave it to Emmett to come up with one of his Aunt Lula's ideas to get rid of the Mockingbird.... and Debbie was too funny standing up to make sure no one said a word.... like Brian said their lives will never be boring... lol....

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments!  I'm glad you liked it!:)  I think nothing would have stopped them from getting married as long as Debbie was there - LOL!

After hearing the press conference....I hope that Brian realizes that his father is truly sincere about wanting to be in his and Gus's life....  

 

 

Author's Response:

He will get there eventually, but it's going to be a slow process.  And it won't be completely over at the end of the story - there's a sequel in the works (hint, hint...).  Thanks for all the reviews, BTW!:)

I love it...... the "senator" finally came to his senses and did the right thing.... I watched Mr. Limpet a long time ago..Don Knotts was great as a fish...lol... 

Author's Response:

I guess I'm showing my age, huh? LOL!  Glad you liked that fact that Brian's father is finally beginning to see the light!:)

Sean and Kathy are amazing people... and the best grandparents anyone could hope for.... and Brian and Gus definetly deserve to have them in their lives....

Author's Response:

I think so, too.:)  I wanted to give Brian a real family for a change that was actually accepting and loving toward him - so different than Jack Kinney and the ice princess mother!

I hope Brian's father realizes what's really important before he loses everything that he loves in his life..... 

WOW.... that's great news.... hopefully Lockwood will be able to find Brian's "real" parents before the wedding....