Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2022 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Do you have more?

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2021 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ Ghosts of Boyfriends Past…

Reading this again and realized that Ted was with Blake in the beginning of the story but then he just seemed to disappear and Ted starts dating David....what’s the deal?

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2019 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Just love it.  Thank you



Author's Response: Oops! It looks like I missed your comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed my fic! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2019 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Just love it.  Thank you

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2019 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Just love it.  Thank you

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2019 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Just love it.  Thank you

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2019 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Just love it.  Thank you

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2019 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Just love it.  Thank you

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2019 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Just loved. Thankyou

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2019 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 17 ~ United We Stand

I do like Jamie, he is cute.  I do not know why but Gus goes goes in my nerves, always did.  Netflix stopped QAF, cannit find it anywere, pisses me off

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2019 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Almost Perfect…

Love your pictures in the story

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2018 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

I'm waiting here too, so... I volunteer for the spanking :p :lol

Reviewer: tataniastorm (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2017 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

I am wondering if the will be contiuned. I miss this story. 



Author's Response: Yes, I really do planning on continuing this one... But, what can I say, my muse needs a spanking... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: xiaozheng6666 (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2017 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Christmas Presents…

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Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2017 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Love this story so much.  It's such a joy to read.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a perfect way to start my day! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BritianLover88 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Love it, so happy to have a new chapter of this story. Love that we got to met their new baby, can't wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response: Yes, baby Nicky id finally here! I'm so glad you're enjoy this fic... Hugs Darling~ Kathleen

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2016 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

OMG! I almost went into cardiac arrest when I saw this update lol. I am sooooo happy about this. It was definitely worth the wait ( like forever haha ) and I would of waited even longer if necessary. I love the pictures But most of all I love that Nicky is here!

Looking forward to the next update, how ever longs it takes!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The pictures really made their honeymoon/vacation come alive, and Nicky is such a cute little butterball... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2016 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

This was a wonderful update, we saw what was happening in everyones life. The pictures were beautiful! I think mikey is as dumb as he looks it would serve him right if Maryann ran his life, at fourty he's unable to realize why people have stayed away from visiting him, he could always phone is mother or others friends if he stopped buying all of Maryann's BS.I hope B or J have a baby girl to complete their family. I was so happy to see your working on this story again, hope you'll find time to do a small update on The Offer Still Stands, like Christmas Presents I check daily to see if any thing new has been written, they are such good stories and like your other works just fun to read.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, and thanks for hanging in there with me... I loved all those pics, wouldn't it be great to take a whole summer and island hop... Mikey has always been a chameleon, changing into what ever his current partner wants him to be. I don't think he really know himself at all, so he depends on others to point him in the right (or wrong) direction. I know, a baby girl, sweet! I kind of gave you a glimpse of them in the future in "Daddy Dearest". I just started working on a new chapter of "The Offer Still Stands" but I'm going to go back and re-read it to refresh my memory. I know I even get confused sometimes...ha, ha, ha... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2016 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Wonderful chapter.  I agree with Brian, a daughter would be nice for them.   Nice idea to surprise everyone with the new addition.  Bill



Author's Response: Thanks so much! They really are great father's, and I think a house full of mini-me's could be fun seeing all the chaos that ensues... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2016 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

Lol loved this chapter of Brian smoothing everything for Justin and just silently laughing at Justin but protecting him every which way he can

Author's Response: Brian's done a good job of training him to be a fashion Queen, drama and all... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2016 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

I hate Justin! Three weeks after giving birth and he's wearing midriff bearing tees? Just kidding...loved the update it was a pleasant surprise.



Author's Response: I know, he's such a brat... Thanks! I'm so glad you're enjoying the lull before the storm... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2016 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 28 ~ Nicholas Declan Taylor-Kinney

That's a nice present even if it isn't Christmas. Another son. Thanks for updating us on what everyone is up to. Will Mikey realize he's made yet another mistake? What do you have planned for your next chapter? Love this.

Author's Response: Just an early Christmas Present... It was just a brief overview, the next chapter should be more detailed, let the drama resume... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Marie-France (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2016 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

Je suis très heureux que vous continuez cette histoire, nous allons rencontrer leur nouveau bébé



Author's Response: Merci, Ceci est ma première tentative d'écriture d'une fic mpreg. Je vous souhaite une bonne celle-là ... étreintes Darling, ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BritianLover88 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2016 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

I love this story read it in like one day.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting... I'm so happy you enjoyed it, more coming soon... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2016 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

i am looking forward reading the next chapter of this amazing story your are a wonderful writer great job

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really made my morning! I'm so glad you're enjoy Christmas Presents, a new chapter should be up this week sometime... Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2016 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

So happy to see this update, the pictures were so beautiful. I was thrilled  about Jamie and Gus were on their own adventure with their daddys. Can't wait for the little butterball to appear. Hope they have a magical honeymoon, their past year has had such a loss and near loss in their family. Thank you so much for this lovely update.



Author's Response: Yeah! It's back! The pics really do add so much to the story, so glad you enjoy them. I don't think Justin could handle being away from the kids for very long, both him and Brian are really embracing fatherhood with open arms... Thanks again for the positive comments... Later darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2016 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

I missed this story so much, I'm very excited to see this new chapter. Our boys seem to be having a great time hopefully this will continue once they return home.



Author's Response: Sorry about the wait, but here it is at long last... Yes, they couldn't be happier, but of course things back in Pittsburgh might not be runny so smoothly. Lindsay in Jail/Psych ward and Michell engaged to a evangelical christian, maybe he'll be joining Linds soon... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2016 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

And it's not even my birthday... Thank you for continuing with this story. Here's hoping for a baby girl unless I've missed that they are having a boy.



Author's Response: Well, Happy Birthday to you, no matter when your birthday is... Yes, finally a new chapter. Hmmm, is it a boy or a girl? Time will tell... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2016 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

Aww Thank You for updating this story. I've missed it so much. I'm so glad that Brian and Justin are marrie and content. I'm so proud of Brian, in this chapter it sounds like Brian misses being pregnat himself. But he is also happy that Justin pregnacy is going well. They both love there kids so much. I'm loving Gus in this story. Please post more soon.



Author's Response: You.re so welcome, thanks for being so patient. Yes, Brian and Justin in a good place in their relationship, and very happy with their ever growing family. Brian's finally found the security and love he's always needed. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2016 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

Thank you!!!!!!! My day soooooo much better now because I saw a much anticipated update.
I love this story. :) (all them, actually )!!!

Author's Response: Squeals! You're so welcome, thanks for being so patient with me... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2016 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

What a wonderful honeymoon for them all. Much deserved!!! Nice to see an update for this. Have been missing it. 

Any more updates of "Kisses"?



Author's Response: Thanks Darling, Yes Kisses is still being reviewed by my beta, she's been busy this last week. (I'm not the only one she beta's for... Imagine that!) So I have chapters stacking up on my desktop... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Henri (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2016 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

I really enjoy catching up with this story. Please update again soon 😉



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you're enjoying it... More to come... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

How wonderful to see more on this story.  A honeymoon in Greece and they've got the kids with them!!!  The pictures are perfect.  More soon?



Author's Response: Yes, the honeymoon is a great get-away and just what they needed, time alone with the kids... So glad you liked the pics... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2016 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

Nice to see an update. Great family time with all the boys together enjoying family and adult activities. The pictures are great. Love Brian "the family guy".  Hugs, Bill



Author's Response: Thanks Bill, It's hard to believe that Brian is actually happy being a husband and father. But I think the reason fought so hard against it, was because he was afraid he would never have it, than along came a young blond who changed everything... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2016 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 27 ~ It’s All Greek To Me…

8 months between updates is to much for me.

I'll wait until you finish this story before reading it again.

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2016 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

Please update this story soon 



Author's Response: I'm doing just that, so glad you're enjoy this story... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sue (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2016 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

It seems this story will not be finished even though last August we were told "it will be up in the next few days to a week."  This is why I normally wait until it's completed. What a shame it was a great read...



Author's Response: I apologize, I had planned to get back to this one and it slipped away from me. But I'm reviewing where I left off, and I'm working on completing the next chapter... Thanks for hanging in there... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2016 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

English is not my language but I have a lot of fun reading fanfic, I like this story and I am wondering why you had not post another chapter since August. This is very good, hope you finish the story.



Author's Response: I've been working on other fics, but I plan to get another chapter completed soon... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sue (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2016 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

This is just a sidebar of Christmas Presents, their honeymoon… A more detailed honeymoon chapter will be up in the next few days to a week.    Remember this !

 



Author's Response: Yes, and I'm sorry it's been taking so long... But I'm hopeing to have it completed and off to my beta this week... Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2015 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

 I have truly enjoyed your many stories lately that have one and sometimes 2 chapters, but I always search to see if any chapters have been added to this story. I'm waiting to see if Justin has a boy or a litle girl. I wonder how Melanie is doing without JR and if she is growing closer to Brian  and Justin. Gus and Jamie are so cute wonder if they want a sister or brother. I hope Lindsey is either jailed or put away, as far as mikey goes let him marry that nurse and lets see him try to get out of a marriage when she intrudes in every friendship he had ever had. You have a great story please finish.



Author's Response: Yes, I really am over due for an update on Christmas Presents... Thanks for hanging in here with me... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2015 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

HAve caught up now with the story. Not sure why I fell so far behind....

Terrific as usual. Loved the wedding. Very much A brian thing to do, making Justin so happy.

So may arcs here to keep up with. No idea how you do it. As a reader I have to keep it straight in my head, can't imagine how all you writers do it.

Michael..........well....not sure what to say about him. What a bizarre twist1 looking forward to where you take this, and how long it lasts, and how much more trouble he's going to get in as his storyline unfolds. somehow I don't see anyone making headway with him as ted did with Emmett.

Lindsey Lindsey Linsey..........what a mess. My heart broke for Mell! Again, curious how youtake this one.

Well....loving it. Looking forward to next update, whenever RL allows it. :)  Good things come to those who wait, so I'll be patient.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response: Oh no you're all caught up! I better get writing and finish this next chapter... Yes there is a lot going on, Michael has completely lost his mind turning straight. Lindsay has gone insane, completely delusional and jealous, and like you said poor Mel, she's been through so much... Yes the wedding was so romantic, and they're both so in love and happy... It is hard keeping it straight sometimes, but I cheat, I keep a notebook when I brainstorm ideas, so I have a reference to look back on. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2015 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 ~ Baby J

I have often wanted to tell Lindsey off but I could never have done as good a job as you have. 

I hope you will continue writing this wonderful and moving story.

Thx...

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much Jane, I'm so happy you're enjoying this one. I'm planning on continuing it for a very long time, showing Brian and Justin and the boy's over the years and they grow older... I know, Brian actually growing older, how dare I... He, he, he... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2015 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

Wonderful continution of Christmas Presents. Perfect timing as I've had a rough week...indulged myself in re-reading the entire story. Can't wait for the next "ridiculously romantic" chapter. :)



Author's Response: Wow, you have been busy... I hope you relax and enjoy the weekend, and let last week fade into the background... More ridiculously romantic moments from their honeymoon coming right up... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2015 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

YEAH!!!! an update!

YEAH!!! It's the Hooneymoon!

YEAH!!! More to come!

p.s. PLEASE MAKE IT SOONER THAN LATER!!!

Author's Response: YEAH! Sooner it will be... So glad you enjoy this brief look at our boys... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2015 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

Beautiful sidebar! So happy to read this verse once again, looking forward to next chapter. Thanks for sharing!

Fangirl always,

JoAnn



Author's Response: Thanks Daring, I'm so glad you enjoy the pics filled sidebar to their honeymoon... The longer, more detailed account is coming soon... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2015 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

I was glad to see an update. I glad they married and the hell with Lindsey and dum dum Mikey . b/j deserve their happiness. 



Author's Response: This is really just a preview of their honeymoon to come. I wrote this for the EKG-Club August challenge... So glad you liked it... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2015 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

Beautiful photos, great story.  Thanks,  Bill



Author's Response: I know these pics make you daydream of vacationing in Greece... So glad you enjoyed this sneak peek into their honeymoon... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2015 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

I can't do anything but smile my friend!

Author's Response: So glad I could put a smile on your face... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2015 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

Oh boy.  I feel like I got a present.  Love the pics, some of them have a fairy tale quality to them.  Love the one with the cat!  More please.



Author's Response: This is just a little taste, to wet your appetite for the real honeymoon chapter... I love all the pics too, and of course I love kitties, so that one was one of my favorites as well... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2015 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 26 ~ Romantic Sunsets...

Yay I can't wait for more



Author's Response: This was just a little interlude written for the EKG-Club monthly challenge, more honeymoon madness coming very soon... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2015 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 25 ~ From This Day Forward…

Aww I love their wedding.  Please post more son. Let Lindsay and Michael stay away



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working on the next chapter now. I might need to show there reactions to the news of their wedding, but neither one will be free anytime soon... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2015 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 25 ~ From This Day Forward…

I love all the detail you put into the wedding, it really made it come alive. It also showed how much Brian and Justin really love each other. I am glad they were finally married! They soo deserve some happiness. But why do I feel like it is not gonna last? I look forward to how everything else develops with the story after this. Love the story, it really pulls me in. Good work.

Author's Response: Thanks, it was a beautiful wedding, and they really are sooo in love with each other... You said "But why do I feel like it is not gonna last?" They may have there ups and downs, but if you've read a few of my fics you'll know I'm all about the love... So no need to worry... I'm so glad you're enjoy this one, more coming soon... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 25 ~ From This Day Forward…

That was lovely. I can see a wedding betwee Brian ustin being very like this. Loved it. Nice touch with Adam Lambert. Happy to see the new chapter. I'll be very much looking forward to your next chapter. Happy it won't be as long of a wait though a month is enough to drive me crazy lol. Looking forward to more as always!!

Well done!

:)



Author's Response: Thanks Darling, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Adam was a nice surprise for Justin, and it was the perfect end to their romantic wedding... Thanks for hanging in there with me, waiting so patiently for the next chapter. It may not be a month, I'm already writing the honeymoon right now... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2015 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 25 ~ From This Day Forward…

It was a long hiatus, but you wrote a beautiful wonderful chapter with beautiful pictures. Gus was so cute, I love the way you write his character. The wait was so worth this remarkable chapter, more chapters, please.   



Author's Response: Awe that was so sweet of you to say, I'm so glad it was worth the wait. But I promise to post in a more timely manner from now on... I'm so glad you liked the wedding, Gus was adorable, and I love writing his character and his interactions with Brian. The pics really do ad so much to the story, and I added lots of them to make up for my absents, and because there just so damn hot together... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2015 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 25 ~ From This Day Forward…

woohoo more of this great story.  I loved the wedding it was aaaaaamazing can't wait for the honeymoon glad you are back writing the story I love



Author's Response: Thanks! It makes me so happy that you're loving the wedding, and the honeymoon should be fabulous too... More coming soon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 25 ~ From This Day Forward…

I literally squealed when I saw the update when I got home from work!  Loved this chapter and everything about the wedding was perfect.  Adam Lambert!  I am re-reading this and The Offer Still Stands right now.  I love them both!  Can't wait for more!

 

Thanks so much!

 

:)  Amy



Author's Response: It seems you're in good company, several of you almost trigger accidents seeing a new chapter posted... Thank you for sticking with me, I truly appreciate your support. Yes, the wedding really was so romantic, and so will the honeymoon. Adam Lambert was a great surprise for Justin, and him singing 'Save The Last Dance' triggering his memories, and recreating new ones... Enjoy re-reading the stories and hopefully I'll have a new chapter up soon for both... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 25 ~ From This Day Forward…

Beautifully done!

Author's Response: Thanks you so much, and thank you for being so patient with me... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 25 ~ From This Day Forward…

Thank heavens for another chapter.  This was really great and I hope that you can update a little sooner than 4 weeks!!!!   I'm gonna read the whole thing over again to remind myself how things have gone down.



Author's Response: I know, and I promise to update regularly my muse seems to have returned for it's extended vacation. I also re-read it from the beginning, and it helped get me back in the writing mood, enjoy and I'll be back soon... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 25 ~ From This Day Forward…

"OMG!!!!" I nearly choked on my sandwich that I was eating when I logged on and so a new chapter update that I have been praying on FOREVER! lol

And as ALWAYS :) I was not disappointed.

YESSsssss They Wedding happened!!!!
I loved the part when Ethan showed up, I thought that was hilarious, I thought for sure Brian was going to throw a punch haha.

I love this story. I can't wait to find out about what happens with crazy Michael and Lindsay. I can't wait to go on the honeymoon!!!! The surprise Brian has for Justin !!! I can't wait for the baby to be born!!!!!is it gonna be a Girl??? I JUST CANT WAIT!!! Lol!!!!

Author's Response: So glad I didn't disappoint you, and that you survived lunch... Yes it was hard for Brian to resist not punching Ian, but I'm pretty sure he made Ian uncomfortable enough, and threaten just by his presents. The honeymoon is going to be so romantic, and beautiful and maybe a little greasy... I'm so glad you're still loving my story, now do you think Justin's having a girl or a boy? It will be a few more chapters until we find out, but now as long as you've waited for this update... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2015 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

LOL Just re read again ( lost count on how many times haha) to refresh my memory for the new updates!

Coming soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad your memory is now fresh. I just did the same thing, I'm about to start the next chapter... Thanks for being so patient... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2015 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

Is there going to be an update for this story soon?

I'd love for you to finish this, It's one of my favourites.



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you're still liking it... Yes, I just finish the writing challenge I was working on... So soon, very soon... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Wicker77 (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2015 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Christmas Presents…

Still waiting and hoping for more!!!!



Author's Response: Sorry for the long wait, more is really coming thanks for your patience... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Twinkminded (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2015 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

I like this story. I like the beinginng most though. It almost starts to feel like Brian is a sugar daddy, even though I know a lot of couples where only one person makes money. Maybe Justin should have a show or at least sell some paintings? Just my opinion.

Loving the story though and can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response: I like you're idea... Justin may love parenting Gus and Jamie but he's also a very talented artist, I thinks it's time for a little recognition... Thanks for the idea, and I'm so flattered you love my fic.. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2014 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

WTF! how could anybody make bail after killing one child and almost another one as well. Then presume to want custody of the one that managed to live! As for Mikey once a ass wipe always an ass wipe-let him wreck his life, he has managed to wreck everyone else's. By the way I'm still reading every word you write and enjoying it even if it makes so mad I want to strangle so people.



Author's Response: Sorry I didn't see your comment until now... Blushes... I agree it's ridiculous and absurd for Lindsay to think that she deserves custody, but she not a stable person these days... I'm pretty sure her and Michael both need a vacation in the loony-bin. I'm so glad you're still liking this story, it always makes me happy to know you're enjoying my writing... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2014 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

I liked the update! Lots going on.

Thank you for posting.

Author's Response: Yes its was a very busy and a bit crazy chapter, hopefully not to over the edge... So glad you enjoyed it... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2014 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

Wow Michael and Lindsay have both lost their minds! Lindsay is living in denial and her parents sure are in for a shock. Michael's nurse needs to be fired and they need get him into serious therapy. Feel so bad for Mel hoping she takes time away from everything to heal. Looking forward so much to the wedding and whatever else happens next. Thanks for the update!

:)

 



Author's Response: Maryann is using Michael taking his words and twisting them, making him believe that his lifestyle is unnatural. He's always been so gullible, but her manipulations will only cause him harm. Therapy is just what both Michael and Lindsay need. Although Lindsay's may be through the prison system, she needs to be held responsible for her actions... Wedding bells coming right up~ Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2014 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

No way is Lindsay getting Gus, but If she still think she can get Jamie, she's complet4ely mental. Even if Jamie is taken away from B/J for some crazy reason, she is nothing to the baby. What makes her think she'd get him over Jennifer Tyler, his blood grandmther? She needs to be locked up.



Author's Response: You're so right, Lindsay is so unstable once anyone has a conversation with her they'll never consider her a candidate for parenthood. They'll see she needs to be held responsible for her actions, it looks like the women's prison will have a new inmate soon. Yes Jennifer would make a great parent, but Brian and Justin are doing an awesome job so they have nothing to worry about. Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2014 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

lindsay living with her parents is not going to get her custody of gus, and especially not of jamie. her parents are in for a surprise. for all they're doing she should be in jail. accidental death still carries jail time.
i think it's time for mel to take a short trip. two hours at the movies isn't enough.
michael, let him go. deb and his "family" will grieve his death, but they'll move on.
can't wait for the wedding.

Author's Response: Lindsay's parents have no idea about the rude awakening there in for, and knowing them they won't be very supportive. I doubt that once her lawyer learns the specifics of her case he won't be able to get her off without serving some jail time. You're so right Mel really needs sometime off, sometime to collect herself and reevaluate her life's direction. The wedding is just what everyone needs at this point, something to celebrate and feel good about. It's coming soon... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2014 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

I have mixed feelings about this chapter...as much as I want Michael to get help and change, I can't see him making this making this much of a drastic change. Nope can't see it. But if Lindsay thinks that living with her parents is going to get her Gus back, child please. She needs to accept what she's done and the punishment coming to her.

Awesome update my friend.

Author's Response: I know I've taken Michael in a crazy direction. But I'm pretty sure he'll see the error of his ways, it just might take a while. I'm pretty sure once Lindsay's parents spend much time with her they'll come to the conclusion that she's in serious need of psychological help. And then there's the child welfare services, there not likely to forgive and forget her senseless actions, they'll hold her responsible. Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2014 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

Hi I've mssed this fic. Please Michael away from my boys. I'm wondering if Justin is going to ant jump Brian soon why pregnant. please come back soon



Author's Response: Sorry I was gone so long, but I'm back now... I pretty sure in Michael's state of mind he's only interested in showing his friends and family the way to God. He's now so convinced that homosexuality is a choice these days, he wants everyone else to jump on the band wagon with him... Thanks for commenting ~ Later Darling Kathleen

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2014 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 24 ~ What’s with Michael?

I love your fic. But as much as I love Michael and Lindsay bashing, it's getting tiresome that they keep bouncing back like some cartoon supervillians messing up the lives of others and not learning a damn thing. Please just stick Lindsay in jail where she belongs and Michael (and Linds) in real thearpy and maybe this story can move forward.



Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying my fic, and I understand about the Michael/Lindsay bashing. But I need to at least get them through the current turmoil and then send them into therapy. Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2014 11:51 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Three ~ Daybreak…

Very thorough chapter. You covered all the little details. nice

Author's Response: Thanks Hon, so glad you liked it... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2014 04:32 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Three ~ Daybreak…

Hi I love the update and I'm glad that Gus is okay. I'm sad that JR died. I still don't feel sorry for Michael or Lindsay. I'm hopping Michael doesn't cause trouble Brian and Justin. I'm hoping that Brian and Justin will put Michael Lindsay there places. I'm hopping Justin will get Brian pregnant again. I'm glad that Mel gave Brian and Justin full custudy. Please post more soon.



Author's Response: I do feel bad about JR, but Gus is making a full recovery. Thank goodness that both Michael and Lindsay won't be anywhere near the wedding, that's the last thing Brian and Justin need right now. Brian pregnant again, now that's something to ponder... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2014 11:19 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Three ~ Daybreak…

wonderful chapter.
time to celebrate the good. debbie was right about that.
does this nurse caring for michael know he's gay? have a feeling she doesn't.

can't understand why no one told lindsay about the children she hit who died and about jenny before mel spoke with her.

both michael and her need to realize that brian's be family comes first and he isn't/can't won't always be there for them.

Author's Response: Thanks Hon, so glad you liked it... Lindsay should have realized she was putting Gus and JR's life in danger when she left them locking in the car, although she was in denial when the police had her left for observation at the hospital. The children being hit by her car is in 'The Offer Still Stands', I know the stories do seem to parallel each other and I'm trying to change that... Yes Michael needs to grow up and realize that Brian is now the father of two small children, with a third on the way. He won't be able to always be there for him and fix everything. Maryann is soon to find out about Michael's past, but being a good christian girl she can forgive, but she also has other ideas of just what Michael needs in his life. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2014 08:04 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Three ~ Daybreak…

Unbelievable.  Michael still things Brian should be with him in spite of everything.  Brian did try to get Mikey to leave that apartment, but no Mikey wouldn't.  At least Deb is not blaming Brian in any way.  Now Lindsay's still in denial.  Now that she knows what she's going to be charged with I bet she's gonna try to put the blame on Maria.  She somehow managed to cause trouble for Maria with immigration!  Thank goodness Brian had copies of the paperwork.  I was soooo glad to see another chapter on this story and look forward to more!



Author's Response: Mikey... Some things never change, or will they??? He's about to take a strange turn, if that's even possible for him. Deb seems to seeing things a little clearer these days than she used too, even she's had enough of Michael's shit.... Lindsay a real piece of work, but they'll be no getting out of this one. Maria was really there for Brian when he needed she, and he was all alone and pregnant. She really has become part of the family. More coming soon. Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2014 06:51 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Three ~ Daybreak…

So glad Gus is going to be ok. Lindsay is insane and I hope she is in prison for many years ( but then I wish that for anyone who leaves a child in a hot car) Mel is so strong I am shocked Mel actually should not have been answering the phone she should be sitting Shivah for the baby with family and friends around her. 

I can't wait for the wedding and I am also very curious to know what Justin is having and what they will name the baby. 

I hate waiting for updates so I hope we get to find out soon...



Author's Response: I tried to read up on Jewish customs, sorry if I didn't get them all correct. The wedding is coming up quickly... Now should they find out the babies sex, or wait? Hum... I'll try and update soon... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2014 01:20 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Hopefully what ever the injuries mikey has,  be it head injuries or stroke will render him mute, I'm so tired of the whineing and his insults and delusional  thinking. I know, bad me. I'm so glad Bob stepped in to the review you received, blaming peoples dislike of mikey, the character caused the killing off his child--how silly it was- an action taken by Lindsay and the way it happened was so much in the news lately, it's tragic but watch tv or pick up a newspaper its in the headlines weekly. I love your story, and hopefully maybe people will learn some facts about abuse, and caring for their children.



Author's Response: Mikey, Mikey, Mikey... He's a true camillian and he's about to change again taking on the attitude and beliefs of his future wife... Oops the secret's out, but it should make for some interesting story arcs... That's partly why I wrote this into the story, because it does seem to be in the new all the time these days, and of course it fit with where Lindsay head is at in this fic. I'm so glad you're loving my writing that makes my day... Thanks so much Hon ~ Kathleen Now... Yes its to bad that, that comment was left on this story. But this wasn't the first time they've commented on some of my stories, and they never sign with their real name. I've stopped being sensitive to they're remarks, they really are just trying to push my buttons and get into a little war of words. They obviously don't like my writing, and are very sensitive about anything anti-Michael. I just can't understand why they even bother reading my fics, other than to stir up trouble, but I'm not biting... To each there own...

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2014 01:44 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

I love thia story. I really feel bad for Brian and Justin, and the children too. I'm hoping Gus and JR pull through. I hope Michael and Lidsay lose custdy of the children. I want Mel to keep custdy with the boys. Oh the stress isn't good for Justin and the baby on the way. I can't wait to read how Brian is going to deal with this. 

 

I don't feel bad for Michael at all. He brought this on himself. Please post more soon.



Author's Response: It is very sad for everyone that the kids have suffered by such neglectful actions. Sometimes tragedies like this bring families together, and hopefully Mel, Justin and Brian will grow stronger. It's hard to feel sorry Lindsay after her senseless and selfish behavior, and Michael is simply a idiot. But this should open his eyes to his naive outlook on life... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2014 08:36 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Has it come to this?  The author hates Mikey and Lindsay so much that it's now permissible  to kill children just to make them suffer?  This is going too far. Others may think baby killing is okay as long as the baby isn't Gus,  but the author has lost me as a reader.

Your review made me read the chapter to see if it was like you discribed. I found no basis to support your claim that this story went too far. Drama sometimes has tragedies and the author was delicate in the wording. Perhaps you got the death of JR, and the final death scene mixed up. They are two different events and were handled very differently. ~bob, senior admin



Author's Response: Good-Bye... PS Thanks Bob for your support...

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2014 10:40 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

I was delighted to see the new chapter, it was packed with action. The passing of JR was sad, but lately there have been many cases of children left in a hot car with much the same results. Lindsay always gets away with things,she's drunk or mentally not responsible for her actions, she is just a spoiled woman who wants her way at any costs. I don't see Brian,Justin, Debbie or Mel ever forgiving her. I felt bad for Mel she loves Gus almost as much as JR. I think Brian,being the man he is now, will maybe include Mel in his little family, knowing how lost he would feel if anything took Gus from him. Thank you for a wonderful chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, my muse was working overtime...Children being left in hot cars does seem to be on the rise, and it just seemed to fit Lindsay actions these days. You're right I don't see anyone forgiving her, or coming to rescue, this time she's gone too far. I do feel for Mel, I know she'll be heartbroken for sometime to come. So yes I think this accident will bring her and Brian closer. Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 02:27 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Wow...Lindsey is officially psychotic. She is so obsessed with Jamie and Brian and Justin, she didn't even consider Gus and JR. Poor Melanie, she doesn't deserve this. You are evil. Good story though, looking forward to more updates from you.

Author's Response: It's true Evil Kathleen strikes again... I do feel bad for Mel, I can only imagine her pain. Psychotic and Obsessed, I can't help myself... My muse is a drama queen... He, he, he... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2014 04:35 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Wow - what a chapter. It had me on the edge of my seat through the whole thing. It's so sad what happened to JR but the reality is that it really does happen in RL. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter - need to know that Gus is alright as well as what's going to happen with everyone else.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, yes this chapter is full of drama... Losing Jenny Rebecca is truly a shame, and Lindsay will pay for her senseless behavior. Gus is going to be fine, Brian and Justin be there for him as he makes a full recovery... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2014 04:12 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Wow, Lindsey is so psycho!  Glad Gus is ok, poor Mel and Deb. I hope Mel is able to accept support from the family. Mikey is going to be totally devastated JR is gone, Keith put him in ICU and is dead.   Great chapter!! I can't wait for the next update...



Author's Response: Thanks so much, I appreciate all your comments. For once you can't help but feel sorry for Michael; him, Deb and Mel will be devastated by Jenny Rebecca's death needing time to heal. Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2014 04:07 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Very emotional chapter. Poor Mel. I hope Lindsey gets what she deserves. Please let Gus be okay. At least Brian and Justin can now raise all their children together. Great writing.

Author's Response: Thanks Hon, I'm glad you liked this chapter. I feel for Mel, losing a child is a real tragedy. But don't worry Lindsay will pay for her senseless actions. Yes, Brian and Justin's family is growing all the time and they'll be great parents. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2014 03:52 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

poor mel. to lose a child for no reason. other than jealousy is...there are no words.the loss of a child. damn well better throw the book at her or allow her to kill herself and do them all a favor. mel will never forgive her, brian and justin will never forgive her, and let's not forget about. deb. michael will be needing the psych ward once he's somewhat recovered. can it. help? how more heartache can they take? gus needs to pull through, for all their sakes. what is mel going to do now? think it's time to tone down the wedding to just a small family affair.



Author's Response: Lindsay truly is consumed with her jealousy of Justin and his and Brian's pending marriage. Suicide is to good for her, she needs to rot in prison with only her thoughts. It is a tragedy and Mel, Deb and Michael will feel that pain of her actions for some time. Mel's heartbroken, and she'll have a lot of soul searching to do to be able to heal. Brian and Justin will be there for Gus, as he makes a full recovery. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: jax (Anonymous) · Date: October 09, 2014 03:23 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Great chapter! I know this story is not Lindsay/michael friendly, but i really hope after finding out that she killed JR lindsay will realize everything is her fault and the fact that she killed her daughter, if she even thought of JR is her daughter, will make her feel pain. Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response: Yes Lindsay has some real issues, with her need to control everybody, and everything. It just may cost her, her freedom, as it should. It this point the only pain she feels is her own self pity. More coming soon... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2014 02:29 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Wow. Just wow. I can't believe what Lindsay did. I feel so bad for Mel she and the baby didn't deserve that. Not surprised about Michael though I am glad Keith is gone. Hoping Gus is alright and that Brian and Justin get full custody. Looking forward to more as always!

:)



Author's Response: It looks like my first reply somehow didn't make it... Lindsay really is out of control, her time is coming. I feel bad for Mel, its heartbreaking to lose a child. Thanks goodness Keith is out of Michael's life, he really was a bad guy. Gus is going to pull through and with Brian and Justin there by his side he'll know that he's loved... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2014 02:10 AM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

I've said it before - I am so freaking happy that you are still doing this story!  Awesome chapter!!!  I didn't see this coming at all, but I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!  Excited for the next chapter!  Thanks a bunch!!!  :)



Author's Response: So glad to make you happy and guessing what coming... Definitely an action packed chapter... More coming soon, I promise... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 11:05 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Thats crazy... Lindsay shouldnt be admitted to the psych ward, she should be put in the prison because she obviously had a plan and was conscious when she was setting up her little lie. Hope Gus will be fine. And for Michael, he is just stupid and delusional. I can totally see him blaming Brian when he wakes up.. probably. And although I love your story it took you too long to update!!! 



Author's Response: I'm sorry about the wait... My bad, my bad, my bad... But the good news is the next chapter is already sent to my beta and should be up this week. Don't worry Lindsay will be in a prison cell very soon, she definitely knew what she was doing. I'm pretty sure when you look up the name Michael in the baby book of names its actually says 'Stupid and Delusional'. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Elaine (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2014 10:23 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

WOW!! I mean......WOW!! that was amazing! Really thrilling. Loved it. Very much well worth the wait!! (not that I want to wait that long again mind you. lol )

 



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so happy you enjoyed it... I'm so sorry about the wait, hangs head in shame... But the next chapter is already off to my beta, and should be posted later this week... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2014 09:30 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

wow you were gone for so long and then this chaptrr and so much happens kids in hot cars is a major pet peeve of mine there is no time or reason to leave a kid alone in a car poor JR so sad i hope Gus is ok  Lindsay is insane and Michael is stupid Thanks for a long intense chapter can't wait for whats next



Author's Response: Sorry about the wait, my damn muse went on vacation... I know what you mean about all these children being left in hot cars, its totally insane. Who ever leaves a child alone in a car, I mean Ever... My bad for killing off JR, but don't worry Gus is going to be just fine. Stupid and insane, yup that's Lindsay and Michael in a nutshell... More coming soon, later this week... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 09:20 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Damn...fucking Lindsay...because of her twisted obsession poor little JR is dead. Mikey should have listened to Brian, now he's in bad shape.I just hope Justin doesn't go into early labor because of the stress.

Author's Response: Twisted obsession is right, she's totally self-center. Sorry JR... Michael has never listen anyone when he doesn't like what they are saying, but he'll pull through. Don't worry Brian will keep Justin safe and sound, far away some place warm... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: karlita411 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 07:57 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

Omgoodness poor J.R andMel Brian right Lindsey knew what she was doing. Is Maria gonna be fine?I hope Lindsey gets what's coming to her. Feel bad for Michael. I hope Gus will be ok. Updated soon. Very sad chapter. Update soon



Author's Response: Mel is devastated by Jenny Rebecca death, but I guarantee Lindsay will get what she deserves. Michael's just luck he got out with his life, Keith was a total psycho. Brian and Justin are there for Gus, and he's going to make a full recovery. Maria may be frightened by what's happened, but Brian's got her back and she's going to be fine. A new chapter should be up this week. Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 07:34 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

What a great chapter . I love how crazy Lindsay is ,but it sucks that she hurt the kids.

Author's Response: I know I feel bad that I killed off JR, but a crazy Lindsay is the best! I'm so glad you've enjoying it... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 07:23 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

WOW.  There is a lot happening in this chapter.  JR's death is pretty shocking, hope Gus will be OK. 



Author's Response: There really is a lot going on, but my muse couldn't please it self. I know, I'm bad, JR really didn't deserve to die. But don't worry I promise Gus will pull through... More coming soon... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 06:55 PM · On: Chapter Twenty Two ~ She Did What!

My goodness.  Mikey is sooooo stupid.  Lindsay is responsible for attempted kidnapping, child endangerment and the death of JR!  Mel will never be able to forgive something like that.  Really gotta know what your plans are for those two.  Emmett needs his boyfriend for comfort.  Poor Deb, she never thought her family would come to harm like this.  Gus is a charmed child, I'm sure he will be okay - right? 



Author's Response: Mikey is dumb and naive, you won't believe where he's going next... Lindsay is in soooo much trouble, and she can forget her relationship with Mel. That's over once and for all... Josh and Em, I love then together. Don't worry I'll keep them safe. I know I sent Gus to the hospital, but I've never take him away from Brian and Justin... I've been working overtime on this story. I'm already sending the next chapter off to my beta today, it should be back sometime this week. So more coming very soon... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2014 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Christmas Presents…

I miss this I hope you are going to put out another chapter soon.



Author's Response: Yep, writing it right now. Hopefully it will be up this week... ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: karlita411 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2014 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

 

lindsey has snapped

love gus and justin and baby jamie together

will micheal finally wake up?

update soon



Author's Response: Lindsay really just can't help letting her jealousy shine through... Justin's a great dad, he's finally has the the life he's always wanted with Brian... Michael, he just might be a lost cause... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2014 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

This fic is so Wonderful, with so many mini dramas.  Hope to read more soon!  Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response: Thanks ;) Everyone needs a little drama now and then... So glad you're enjoying it... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Cassenoisettes (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2014 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

I think making Lindsay's problem a sort of mental illness is too easy. She need to take responsability for her shit.

I'm so glad of how Brian dealt with her in this chapter but it's the third time she came after him. Usually, he would already find a way to push her away. Melanie never liked Brian but when things doesn't go well with Lindsay, she always goes to him to fix the problem. I understand that Brian promised to not tell her anything about Lindsay losing her job BUT nothing stop him to tell Justin, Emmett, Ted or Debbie and repeat it to Melanie. It's childish but Lindsay is pissing me of. Brian "allowed" Michael to mess with his and Justin's family life. Is he willing to take the same risk with Lindsay ? Well, I'm sure that Justin will take her down.

I hope Brian will open up to Justin and the others about his issue about Lindsay and not let her go to far.

 



Author's Response: I agree she needs to feel the ramifications of her actions... He was trying to spare Justin all the drama. But now he'll have to confide in him just so he knows how crazy and deranged Lindsay is... Once the gang finds out about her behavior, I'm sure they'll have a lot to say... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2014 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

brian needs to keep on his toes around her. she wants to work at kinnetik, she wants to be his housekeeper, she thinks she's. jamie's mother, glad he picked up on that, she wants brian. for all the money she can get. it's about time she learned the truth. about him and justin, about her art about how he's really starting to feel about her.

now michael. i can't understand why he doesn't see what kind of situations he gets himself into. blinded by love? wanting to belong? i just don't know. once he's out keith's apartment, deb will never leave him out of her sight.
can't wait for the wedding.

Author's Response: Brian really put her in her place. I'm not sure anyone's ever been this direct or honest with her. She's lived a life of privilege, always thinking she was just a bit better than the others. It was time she heard the hard cold truth, about her talent, her place in Brian's life, and finally about taking personal responsibility for her actions... Love must be blind. He's never learned to see the forest for the trees, and without Brian looking out for him, his judgement is for shit... The wedding coming up fast! Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Maya (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2014 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

Love the story. One question: You wrote that Lindz said, "Mel mentioned that you’re changing your living will and life insurance. That you’ve already added Justin to all your bank accounts.” Isn't it against the law or at least unethical for Mel to tell Lindz about Brian's affair since they were under attorney/client privilege? I wonder why Brian didn't catch on that. Hope Michael can for once open his eyes and get himself out of the quandary before it's too late. Though I dislike him in the story, no one deserves to be abused like that. Deb, Deb, Deb........ I thought she was in tune with everybody's feelings, as she liked to remind us all the time in the show. Guess I was wrong. She wasn't even in tune with her son's feelings. Love Emmett and Josh. Good original charactor and good chemistry. Thanks for the update. It's getting curiouser and curiouser.



Author's Response: Yes it was unethical for Mel to disclose Brian's personal issues, but she's not always thinking when it comes to Brain and Lindsay's friendship... With everything that Lindsay was spewing about her opinion of Brian's plans, he let it slide, even though he might have to have a word with Mel about it later... Now would be the perfect time for Michal to get a clue about Keith, and his illegal activities. But then again we're talking about Michael, not the sharpest tool in the shed... Thankfully he'll have a few days without Keith so maybe he'll finally think about what's in his best interest... Debbie likes to think she knows what's best for everyone. But she's blind when it comes to Michael, he can do no wrong in her world. Josh really is good for Em, he's caring and affectionate and he's damn gorgeous... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2014 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

This was a great update.  Loved how Brian handles Lindsey but she could be up to something.  Hope Michael is alright and Carl finds him first.

Great pics.



Author's Response: Thanks again Hon for all your support, I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter... Brian has had it with Lindsay's overbearing attitude of I'm just trying to look out for you... He's not going to put up with much more, if she doesn't stop her stalking and nagging... It's questionable if Michael even wants to be saved, or of he still wants to hold on to a bad relationship... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2014 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

Things are getting very interesting.

I hope someone helps poor Mikey.

Lindsay needs to get a clue.

Author's Response: Both Lindsay and Michael seem to be holding on by just a thread of sanity... The question is will the fall off the cliff, or will they cling to the edge pulling themselves back into reality... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2014 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

Wow Lindsey Crazy party of one!  Hope Mikey pulls head out of his ass, but he won't.  Not usually a fan of Mel but she totally deserves better than Lindsay in this tale. 



Author's Response: Nurse at the sanatorium, "Lindsay party of one. Your padded cell is ready, please follow me..." You're so right, Michael will stand by his man and even believe that Keith was setup... Can you say village idiot? Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2014 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

Lindsay is scaring the shit out of me. Why am I thinking she is going to take someone Jamie or Justin and hold them till Brian does what she wants.  Also I think Michael is going yo be badly beaten when Keith gets out and no one will know.



Author's Response: She does seem that unstable, but she about to have more problems at home when Mel finds out whats going on... Let's just say, Michael's going to wish Keith was still in prison once he gets out and comes home... Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2014 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

Oh my...I think Brian is right about Lindsay. He definitely caught her little slip of the lip and he was none too happy about it. Maybe she should seek some professional help once she realizes that she has a real problem on her hands.

Author's Response: Slip of the tongue is right, she really showed her true feelings with that. Making Brian even more on edge, and wondering why she can't accept that he's changed, and he's happy... Hasn't he become the man they all told him he needed to grow up and become... Yes I think Lindsay is headed right for the sofa in the doctors office... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2014 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

Umm yeah I agree with Brian. Lindsay has gone off the deep end that's for sure. Is it wrong that I laughed about Lindsay losing her mind while reading this?

Love that Keith got caught. Not that I want Michael to get a break like EVER. But that guy really is awful. Maybe the few days of being locked up all alone will be good for Michael.

Looking forward to the wedding. That space looks and sounds amazing. Love that you include pics. Makes it so fun to read.

Can't wait for more as always!

:)



Author's Response: Thanks :) No I don't think its so wrong, she really is desperate at this point, practically obsessed with wishing she was Justin... Thankfully they'll be getting married and going away on their honeymoon soon. Maybe Michael will get a clue with Keith being away for a few days, but knowing Michael he might stand by his man... So glad you enjoyed all the pics, I really went overboard this chapter. But I just couldn't resist... Thanks for commenting. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2014 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

WOW. Lindsay has *lost* it. LOL. About time she showed her true face though. And I am glad to see that Brian would not fall for her manipulations. Things are going great for the boys and I couldn't be happier. Michael is in for some fun time too, I guess. Is he ever going to escape from Keith or what? Also, I am happy that Emmett finally has a good romance, Josh is great. :) Love the story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter... Lindsay is going to have to have a good long look in the mirror, and she might not like what she sees... She needs a reality check, and Mel's not going to be pleased with her either, let the sparks fly... Michael finally realizes he's made some mistakes, but will he be able to learn and move on or will he fall into defending Keith because he won't admit his failures... I'm really liking the Emmett and Josh relationship, he seems really good for Em, and yes the boys are doing great, they couldn't be happier and the wedding is going to be so much fun... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2014 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 21 ~ Think Before You Speak…

Wow!  Lindsay is a problem.  First she wants Brian to cancel his wedding, more or less, then she wants him to hire her for his art department(and I can see that now.  She'd be slacking off and using her friendship, such as it is, to get away with it), then she wants to replace Maria!  (Not happening)  She really needs to talk to Melanie.  Poor Michael, not only is he in a dispicable relationship(he can't even tell anyone), but he doesn't know that Josh's been arrested.  And Deb has her rose-colored glasses on and hasn't a clue.  The only bright side is that Justin and Emmett are pretty much finished planning the wedding and it sounds like it's going to be terrific.  Not to mention the pics you picked that are the perfect compliment for this story.  Dying to read about the wedding, and what you have planned for Lindsay and Michael.



Author's Response: Thanks so much Hon... I always love long reviews, Squeeze! Yes Lindsay doesn't seem to know if she coming or going, she's basically just unhappy and wants Brian to fix it as always... Can you say jealousy... Michael, Michael, Michael... At least he's seems to be wise-ing up and realizing that he's in an abusive relationship, now he just needs to learn to ask for help... Yes, the wedding is going to be perfect, beautiful, and I have even more in store, buts its a surprise, and then there's the honeymoon... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2014 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 20 ~ Commitments

i don't know what to say about michael's situation but hopefully josh will find out the keith really is the key to getting big jack. lindsay, better fess up soon. seems deb could use some help at the diner. she could work nights and be home during the day. that picture of 'jamie' with his tongue out is so adorable. please don't have debbie use them to replace the void michael being with keith is causing. they're in a good place now and don't need her around all the time to ruin it.



Author's Response: Josh is totally on to Keith, now he just has to catch him while he's up to no good... Lindsay's never been one to confess her sins. But I like to idea of her working at the diner, and you're right she'd have time during the day to spend with Gus and JR... Justin might need some help, but Maria's back now and she's the perfect one to help with Jamie, allowing Justin time to paint and rest when needed. As much as Debbie needs to fill the void Michael's left, she'll have to find something else to do... Brian and Justin couldn't be happier, and soon they'll be married, it does get much better than that... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 20 ~ Commitments

Wow...just so much is going on. I am so happy for Emmett, I like it when he is in live too. The boys are finally getting married, yay! And don't even get me started on Michael, he's an idiot. Love the story and all it's drama. :)

Author's Response: I'm happy for Em too. Josh is really a great guy, and a great catch... Yes wedding bells are in the air, its about time Brian made a honest man out of Justin... "Michael he's an idiot." Yep I couldn't agree more, is there anything else to say??? Ha, ha, ha... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 20 ~ Commitments

I can't believe I'm about to say this but, I'm really scared for Mikey. Keith is a terrible, sadistic fuck who won't be satisfied until he kills Michael. I cringed down to my very soul as I read how Keith forced Michael to submit in such a brutal way. Hopefully the bastard will get caught in time.

On a lighter note, I can't wait for the wedding! I'm sure Emmett will come up with something beautiful, and Brian will plan the perfect honeymoon ;)

Author's Response: I know Evil Kathleen has taken over writing parts of this story, because no one should be treated this way... But then again its Michael, and... Well somehow he just seems to deserve it... But not to worry Josh will be keeping close tabs on Keith, waiting for the perfect moment to take him down... Justin and Emmett planning the big day, just how much of Brian's money can they spend? Ha, ha, ha... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 20 ~ Commitments

Yay update! 

Obviously Michael is going to be in deep shit trouble, but I hope that you wont make him become a victim and gaining everyone's sympathy at the end. Even though no one deserves to be in a absuive relationship, he should really learn his lesson since everyone has been trying to warn him. 

As for Lindsay, now she finally realizes that her idea of fighting custody with Brian and Justin is totally ridiculous since she cant even afford to take care of her two kids. 



Author's Response: Yea, needless to say both Michael and Lindsay aren't very fast on the uptake... Both living in the own little worlds of grand delusions, and wishful thinking... Lindsay is finally having to face reality, but Michael still has a long road a head of him... But sympathy? I don't see it, at least until his tunnel vision sees the light of day, and he makes amends.. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 20 ~ Commitments

What a joy to see this story!  But gee, I actually feel sorry for Michael and Lyndsay, who would have thought.  At least Brian and Justin are doing okay.  And that Jamie, he's just like his daddy, he just can't seem to stick that tongue in his cheek.



Author's Response: Thanks, I know its been a while. I hope to start cranking out more chapters a little faster, my muse is back from vacation dancing around in my head... Yeah I feel sorry for Michael and Lindsay, but then reality snaps back into place... Brian and Justin are doing great, and you can't help but fall in love with Jamie. He'll have to work on the tongue in the cheek expression... Ha, ha, ha... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2014 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 20 ~ Commitments

Love the chapter so much. I do have to make one correction Mel is a defense attorney the last thing she wants is convictions she wants acquittals or people to be found not guilty.  Also Mel is going to blow up when she finds out Lindsay list her job.



Author's Response: Oops... Runs to make the correction, thanks for pointing that out to me... Da... Blushes... It should be interesting when Lindsay eventually fess up to her unemployment... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2014 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 20 ~ Commitments

Michael seems to have jumped out of the frying pan and into the fire. Really enjoyed this chapter. I was happy to see an update.



Author's Response: Thanks so much... Unfortunately Michael just jumps before looking, he's so desperate for approval he'll take it in what ever way it comes... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: jax (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2014 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 20 ~ Commitments

Great chapter! I kinda feel bad for Michael (but not quite). I bet soon he will realize that he is in an abusive relationship and will expect Brian to drop everything and take care of him. Can't wait for another update of this story and offer still stands (when do you think it will be updated?)



Author's Response: Thanks so much, it makes me so happy that you liked it... I working on the next chapter for Christmas Presents and The Offer Still Stands right now, so hopefully sometime next week... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2014 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 19 ~ Choices

I thought there was a major earthquake, but it was only the masses yelling when mikey ask Em if he thought mikey was stupid? Only people like mikey with single digets for I.Q.'s would only answer no.I 've yet to understand why a chiropractor or a proffessor would take any interest in mikey on top of everything else he is truly fugly. I loved all the wonderful baby pictures and Gus playing monopoly he is really a mini Brian. Any chance for a brain scan for lindsey, I think her hamster has passed away. I am really ready for a few new chapters, you have introduced several new characters the cop and the nutcase and want to find out more about them, love your stories.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you're still interested and reading this... You're in luck, my beta has the next chapter and hopefully she'll be sending it back in the next couple of days... It always stumped me as why David, or Ben were interested, and or attracted to Michael... He truly is an immature boring dunsted... Lindsay seems so self-centered and uncaring of others, she deserves whatever happens to her... I'm so glad you're liking all the pics, they really do ad to the story, and you can't help loving Gus... He's truly a little mini Brian... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2014 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 19 ~ Choices

Mikey really is an idiot!! I like Josh so far, he'll be good for Emmett and hopefully keep everybody safe from Keith and Mikey if necessary.  



Author's Response: Yeah Josh is just what Em needs in his life right now, and Mikey, well Mikey is Mikey not the sharpest tool in the shed... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2014 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Payback’s A Bitch!

Nice mini cliffhanger!! I want to know what Mikey's note said. Glad Mel has some sense even when Linds is off the deep end. I'm really loving this story I laugh a lot while reading. Can't wait to see what happens next, hoping Ben leaves Mikey and that Linds finally faces reality. But I doubt she will.

:)

 



Author's Response: Both Lindsay and Michael need a reality check... At least Lindsay has Mel's to keep her from completely loosing it... It looks like Ben will be making an exit in a few chapters, unfortunately not a very pleasant one... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2014 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Payback’s A Bitch!

oh so now the psychotic duo see the error of their ways. They really should have thought about the ramifications of their actions before deciding to execute them.

Now let's see how long it takes for Brian and Justin to discover that they are about to add to the family tree ;)

Author's Response: Michael's always had a few screws loose, but Lindsay really should know better. Did they really think they could get away with threatening the master, without any consequences? Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2014 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Payback’s A Bitch!

I am enjoying this story a lot. The picture of Jamie is priceless.

Thank you for posting.

Author's Response: I also love that pic, he's so sweet... So glad you're enjoying this... Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2014 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Payback’s A Bitch!

What a wonderful chapter!  I still can't get over how much trouble Mikey's in.  And for Ben to find out that he hasn't been mailing out the checks!  Not to mention he still thinks he deserves to keep his house, his store, and his toys! 

Then we have Lindsay and her obsession with keeping 'Baby J' and trying to deny Gus the chance to stay with his dad.  At least Mel is seeing things for what they are.

Can't wait to see what sort of mischief you come up with next!!!



Author's Response: For once Mel has a clearer perspective on the situation than Lindsay and Michael... Hopefully they'll both be able to see things clearer in the future... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2014 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 5 ~ Delusions

I had to start from the beginning tosee what happened before.  I love this story very much.  I hope that Michael and Lindsey don't do what they think will be best for Brian and the baby.  Michael is a prick.  Great chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks Jane, When I decided to start writing this again, I also when back and re-read it to get me in the mood. Now it just seems to come to me so easy. I've already written two more chapters, so don't worry Michael and Lindsay will be put in their places... It's great to hear from you, Happy New Year! Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2014 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~ Christmas Presents…

The beginning certainly surprises me, of course in the possitive way:-Dz90;My interest is stirrrrrrred!



Author's Response: Great! I hope you continue to enjoy my fic... Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2014 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 5 ~ Delusions

I'm so glad to see a new chapter. And I seriously want to punch Michael in the nose. I hope you've got some good plans to bring him into line - not to mention Lindsay. Looking forward to the next chapter. Just one thing, if they're doing it raw are there going to be any other surprises.......

Author's Response: Payback is coming... No one messes with Brian and gets away with it... Yes, I think their little family will be expanding sooner than you think... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

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