Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Payback
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 04:58 AM · On: The Bigger They Are, the HARDER They Fall....

Freaking Fabulous....Unbelievble ...mindblowing.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 04:42 AM · On: He's Done Playing, Isn't He??

Splendid

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 05:40 PM · On: Cut It Out!!

Well in kinney's words...* aren't u a creative little women...*lols...amazing.



Author's Response:

So happy that you're enjoying this sequel to "Arms Open Wide."  Thanks again for all the comments!!  And thanks for leaving so many reviews for all the other writers, too. ~Kim

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 05:33 PM · On: Some Cheeky Humor

OMG...I CANT EVEN...DAMMIT...THAT WAS HILARIOS ...TOOOOOO FUNNNNYYYYYY...HOT COSSED BUNS...LOLS...LOVING IT.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 05:10 PM · On: Sunshine, Anyone?

Dirty mind people...tsk tsk...love it anyways...lols.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 04:39 PM · On: The Opening Salvo

Now u will see brian...payback is a bitch...soooo true.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2017 01:59 AM · On: The Bigger They Are, the HARDER They Fall....

 Poor Bri--Jus in a hard hat and a tool belt, Bri could go up in flames! No way Bri won't get his twink. 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2017 01:44 AM · On: He's Done Playing, Isn't He??

Oh Brian sweety, your thinking with your cock or you would catch on to Grant Hardwoods--really!! After you finally fuck your man maybe your brain will start to work again, all the blood that usually rushes to your head seems to be stuck in your cock.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2017 01:35 AM · On: Cut It Out!!

  Well Mr CEO does your twink have you playing with paper dolls, oh how the mighty have fallen. That would have Cynthia and Ted smirking all day.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2017 01:30 AM · On: Some Cheeky Humor

,Poor Brian, Jus with his Kiss the Cock apron and his hot crossed buns ought to be enough to make Brian squirm. Remember Bri you started this and Jus is your equal in many ways ,he knows which buttons of yours to push, I don't think exercise is going to help with your problem

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 09:27 AM · On: Sunshine, Anyone?

 It seems like Bri's little blond twat is making him a tad of trouble Brian has problemly hasn't used his right hand this much since his teen years.Remember Bri, you brought this on yourself.



Author's Response:

LOL!  You are absolutely right! And never fear; I think Justin can give as good as he gets. :)  Glad that you are checking out the sequel!  Thank you again for the support, and for all the comments! I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 08:12 AM · On: The Opening Salvo

 Brian will learn payback is a bitch, especially after Jus walked the streets with a hard on for 14 days! I loved '' little Brian''. As time passes the smirk will leave his face and a hand job will be his only relief.

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2015 02:53 PM · On: The Opening Salvo

OMG I started reading and couldn't stop laughing, Jus turn the tables!! :D I read with pleasure the next chapters!! Kim, thanks for mentioning to the sequel!! Greeting El. xx

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 12:58 PM · On: The Bigger They Are, the HARDER They Fall....

Now that was a surprise.  Ted and Cynthia have been naughty and should be suitably rewarded. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 12:23 PM · On: He's Done Playing, Isn't He??

Poor Brian, even Ted and Cynthia are conspiring against him. Wonder what the next chapter holds.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 12:14 PM · On: Cut It Out!!

That has to be the most elaborate paper dolls ever seen.  Brian is getting mushy in his old age.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 07:09 AM · On: Some Cheeky Humor

If I were Brian I'd be worried about who took those pictures.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I don't think that occured to him here. But knowig what an exhibitionist he can be, he might think it's hot in a kinky sort of way. Don't worry, though; his Sunshine will make it up to him in the end.;)  Thanks as always for the comments and for reading.  Hope you enjoy the rest of this.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 02:24 AM · On: Sunshine, Anyone?

Tit for tat.  Brian's not the only one with creative ideas.



Author's Response:

LOL! And Brian better watch out - this is an artist at work; I think they're innately sneaky.;) Thanks so much for reading and for giving the sequel a try; I do hope you like it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 02:20 AM · On: The Opening Salvo

Hahaha.  Payback is indeed a bitch.  Brian doesn't remember blocking Justin's calls?  I can see this is going to be fun.

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 09:34 AM · On: The Bigger They Are, the HARDER They Fall....

OMG!  These two are something else!  I can just hear those corny comments comng from the two of them!  Great job.

The line where Brian was stammering like a virgin fag was hilarious!

Ok, think I've got my laughing under control again.  On to the next chapter.  You've outdone yourself with this one, Kim!  Good God! LOL

Nita

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 09:13 AM · On: He's Done Playing, Isn't He??

LOL  I've always loved Ted!!!!! 

Brian does have vivid dreams, especially when he's not getting any and hasn't for several days (all the while being tortured with reminders!).

Our poor guy never stood a chance with Justin, Ted AND Cynthia all plotting against him.  He may as well raise that white flag because he is....for lack of a better word.....fucked (or at least he will be if he can survive long enough to get to Justin! LOL

Sorry, i couldn't help myself!

Another good one that has me laughing so hard.  This was the perfect treat during my  break from writing ;o)

Nita

 

PS:  Another Tricky story?  Yay!!!!  I LOVE Tricky!  But then I've told you that several times in the past, so you already know.  LOL

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 06:42 AM · On: Cut It Out!!

Poor Brian!  Justin is giving it back to him good! LOL  I'd say Payback is the perfect title for this story because he is certainly paying him back!

Love the idea of the paper dolls and accessories.  It covers just about every part of their lives, and reminds Brian (like he really needed anything to remind him) just how much he loves and misses Justin.

Love the countdown!  Just too funny!

Another great chapter.  Can't see what's in store for him next!

Nita



Author's Response:

Aww...thanks, Nita!  It took me a while to come up ideas for all those paper dolls, trust me!  LOL!  Glad you're enjoying it.  I really WOULD like to do a third installment of this, but don't know how long that will take.  I have a "Tricky" story I'm working on right now - maybe at some point.  Looks like you're got three more chapters to go - I hope you continue to enjoy it.:)  Thanks so much for the feedback, too!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Some Cheeky Humor

HA!  Oh this just keeps getting better and better.  Poor Brian.  He's missing his Sunshine.  I guess now he sees what Justin was going through earlier.  

I have a feeling the best is yet to come.  I'll try to get more reading time tomorrow.  At least I got halfway through it today!

Great job!

Nita

PS: I would LOVE to see the both of them on a scavenger hunt.  I can only imagine what THAT would be like! LOL  And I can certainly sympathize with the "no free time" problem.  There are never enough hours in the day for me.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nita!  I think Justin is just getting warmed up; after all, he had the master for inspiration! 

 

I may try that idea about the follow-up scavenger hunt - I'm thinking of combining it with a honeymoon, since the boys were engaged in these stories and it would be a logical step. When I went to the QAF convention recently, we took a day trip to Amsterdam, so I'm thinking of sending them there.  It was a little, shall we say, 'unique' to see women advertising themselves in red-curtained, basement windows (legally) as we walked down the street.  I was told that when they had a customer, the red curtains were drawn to let everyone else know they were 'busy.'  And so many!  Now I know it's not legal for males to do that in Amsterdam, but I think for this story I may just have to bend the rules a little bit - ha!  If JUSTIN could do some window shopping in the art galleries, why can't Brian do the same?  LOL! 

Thanks again for reading, Nita!  So delighted that you're enjoying it, my friend!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 08:56 AM · On: Sunshine, Anyone?

LOL omg Kim you are EVIL!  You and Justin can really come up with some really mean tortures for Brian.  Oh well, he deserves it! 

Loving this story.  But then, I've loved every one of them so far so that's not a surprise ;o)

Great job!

Nita



Author's Response:

Thanks, Nita!  I TOLD you he was just getting started.:)  I would LOVE to do a sequel to this one where his friends some them BOTH on a scavenger type hunt. Maybe in my spare time (as if I ever had any!) I'll work on that.:)  Thanks so much for the comments; I'm delighted that you're enjoying Justin's payback treatment for his partner.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: buttercup32409 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2012 03:55 AM · On: The Opening Salvo

LOL!  You go Justin!

Brian should have known WHY his number was blocked.  Didn't he do the EXACT same thing to Justin only days before?  His memory is getting bad in his not-so-old age.

And the stuffed ram was cute.  Cynthia's reaction was priceless!

Great start to what I know will be another hilarious story.

Nita



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks, Nita!  He's just getting started, trust me!  Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I liked writing Brian's torment - ha!  Thanks for the comments, my friend.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: gambitslove (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2011 09:40 PM · On: Cut It Out!!

And the Prince Lived Happily Ever After. The End.

Loving this more then the proposal.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the review - I'm so glad you decided to give this one a try.:)  It got a little hard coming up with ideas on this one and "Arms Open Wide," after a while, but I had so much fun doing it, though.:)  I'm very pleased you liked it.:)

Reviewer: Kemma (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2011 03:11 PM · On: The Opening Salvo

Loved it! Honestly, I've read the majority of your stories and have loved them all. Your characterizations of Justin and Brian are spot on and you do an excellent job with the tone of each piece -- though I typically prefer your darker, angstier stories I really like the lighthearted ones too. This definitely had me laughing out loud! Thanks :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave a review, Kemma!  I'm always so pleased to get one especially on an older story because I think at times a lot of readers don't think it's as important to do that on the more established ones, so each review I get for those is especially welcome.:)  I'm glad you enjoyed the story - I do like playing with their minds at times! LOL!  There does seem to be two types of readers - ones that like the darker, angsty stories and those that prefer the fluff - I'm glad you decided to take a break from the more serious stories of mine to read this.:)  I'm about to start working on the "Wedding Present" sequel and I can tell you that that one will definitely have some darker aspects to it at times, so I hope you'll enjoy it.  I should be starting on that one in the next few weeks as soon as I can wrap up one or two of the WIPs.  Thanks again for leaving me your thoughts -it is greatly appreciated!:)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 09:30 AM · On: The Bigger They Are, the HARDER They Fall....

I think "Mr. Grant" will be one of Brian's favorite clients...for a long long time....lol....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 09:24 AM · On: He's Done Playing, Isn't He??

"Grant Hardwoods"...lol... is that Justin's new nickname??....



Author's Response:

You're the right track - LOL!  When you're in love, you can be pretty dense - ha!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 09:16 AM · On: Cut It Out!!

How sweet.... Brian is counting the minutes till he see his...."Prince".... lol.. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I always thought he was a big bluffer - LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 08:59 AM · On: Some Cheeky Humor

OMG..... I think Brian is going to get hooked on Mr. Sominex...like Justin did.....lol....I know Brian started the whole thing in the first place....but... I don't think he can handle the "tension" as well as Justin...



Author's Response:

I don't know.....he's getting older now and Justin's hormones are still quite strong - ha!  Stay tuned - he's not done yet, but it will be worth the tension - LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 08:50 AM · On: Sunshine, Anyone?

WOW.... Justin can be evil when he wants to be..... lol...



Author's Response:

I know - he really knows how to push Brian's buttons, doesn't he?  LOL!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 08:18 AM · On: The Opening Salvo

Well they say Payback is a "Bitch"...lol.... but... at least Brian has "little Brian" to keep him company....



Author's Response:

Well, they're both "horny," anyway - LOL!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 09:26 AM · On: The Bigger They Are, the HARDER They Fall....

Very good scene. I like how you led us up to it too. You're a gifted writer.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 09:18 AM · On: He's Done Playing, Isn't He??

Now I'm very curious who Grant Hardwoods might be for real. Just a thought.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Cut It Out!!

You really know how to paint with words. Loving this story very much.



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it!  It's a good thing Justin's an artist and can adequately pay Brian back!  If anyone could adequately picture what Brian's missing, it would be him!  It doesn't to mess with creativity - ha! 



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it!  It's a good thing Justin's an artist and can adequately pay Brian back!  If anyone could adequately picture what Brian's missing, it would be him!  It doesn't to mess with creativity - ha! 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Some Cheeky Humor

LOL! Poor Brian isn't taking this near as well as Justin did. He had to know the blond would pay him back for his games. Serves him right.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Sunshine, Anyone?

OH this is good; this is very good.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:24 AM · On: The Opening Salvo

LOL! You go Justin; fix his wagon but good!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 06:39 AM · On: The Opening Salvo

I'll start with the first story and read all your work next. It is my intention to comment on each chapter as well. I can see you have an excellent writing style and can't understand why our readers haven't found you yet. Maybe it's just slow during the holidays.



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you so much for the kind words!  I appreciate the morale boost!  I love feedback - it helps motivate me to keep going.:)  Hopefully you're right and others will find time to read it after the holidays are over - thanks again.:)

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