Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2011 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Could This Get Any Worse!?

Good old Juditth, I miss her. Sigh....

Now, what in the heck is wrong with Olli?

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2011 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Could This Get Any Worse!?

Good old Judith - she was one of my favorite characters on VL, besides Chirolli, of course!

Other than that...what to say, what to say... I am not too fond of your making Olli such a complete ass, BUT, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. Hopefully, his six years at sea will cure him of being such a total dick. Christian deserves a nice guy, like the Olli we know and love.

I'd love to see where your story goes from here. Update soon!

:)

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 13 - OH SHIT!!!

Update again soon please? 

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 12 - What Just Happened? ........ As If You Didn't Know!!!

More please? 



Author's Response:

Still fine tuning the next chapter so hopefully I'll have it up by tonight.

Thank you for letting me know that you liked what I am doing with Chrolli.

Kuss und bis spater

RG

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Just A Little Fun And Games

I like this story so far ;) Und mach dir keine Gedanken wegen deinem Englisch. Das ist echt nicht allzu schlecht :P Also es ist echt gut. Ich komm irgendwie nur nicht so ganz hinterher was der Anfang mit den anderen Chaps zu tun hat. Aber das wird sich bestimmt bald klären ;) Ich guck die Serie nicht aber der Plot hat mich irgendwie angezogen hehe Hoffe du updatest bald 
Lg Tina 



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked my amateur work

Thank You so much

Kuss

RG

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