Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 01:07 PM · On: CCR5 Delta 32 DNA Mutation

This is wonderful news for Justin and Brian.  I'm glad Brian straightened out Deb about Ryan.  Isn't it great to be a blond with blue eyes????



Author's Response:

The CCR5 delta 32 mutation is possible in many types of people but mostly blond and blue people from Scandanaivian countries have it and some people in England and/or their decendents. The mutation is believed to have happened to battle Smallpox and later the Black Plague in the Middle Ages. Thank you for commenting balrogtweety.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 04:07 AM · On: CCR5 Delta 32 DNA Mutation

Once more Bob you have peeled back the lack of knowledge on HIV with your story. As a gay man some of this I already knew but far too many know nothing of the data you have added to this story which paints a much clearer picture of HIV and AIDS in the world today. Not to mention this is a great plot to read.



Author's Response:

This was my primary intention Steve; to tell a story and share the info about HIV/AIDS without boring my audience or being preachy about it. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 03:14 AM · On: CCR5 Delta 32 DNA Mutation

Very interesting and informative chapter JT. I am glad Michael and Brian made up.



Author's Response:

Knowing your ex-best friend might die was enough to make Brian change his mind about Michael. Thanks for commenting very much.

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 02:37 AM · On: CCR5 Delta 32 DNA Mutation

i finally get a lunch break and can comment good to see Justin will be ok and well without meds michael is one sick puppy on more than one level looking forward to next chapters learned a bunch here



Author's Response:

We established an extreme of Michael being super-infected and Justin having the best set of circumstances with HIV possible to date medically speaking. All of it is true. Thanks Gary for your comments very much.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 01:52 AM · On: CCR5 Delta 32 DNA Mutation

Tons of great HIV information with the contrast of Michael and Justin's infections. PEP treatment is good to know if anyone ever thinks they have been exposed to HIV. I have read about this before with police and medical personel doing it after exposure to HIV. It's wonderful doctors have that options for people.



Author's Response:

The hamster has been spinning in overtime for this story and we both are enjoying the process very much. Thanks for commenting dear.

Reviewer: r (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2010 12:45 AM · On: CCR5 Delta 32 DNA Mutation

ilove it



Author's Response:

:) thank you!

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2010 12:08 AM · On: CCR5 Delta 32 DNA Mutation

you are a well of information--so informative.  really good chapter i hope your gay readers are absorbing all this info and taking it to heart--  necessary for them to know this for now and their future health.  off to ca. to meet the "family".  nervous but hey i'll put on my happy gay boy face and try to fit in. lol and happy holidays to you and the fuzzy one.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it Brian; more to follow as the plot demands it without the preaching about HIV or AIDS. I always enjoyed my family visits since I don't have to stay around very long and put up with all the real bull they have for very long :) Have a wonderful holiday too my friend.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 10:50 PM · On: CCR5 Delta 32 DNA Mutation

Wow, what a mind blowing chapter! Where to begin?  An amazing amount of information!  I can't believe the education I'm getting!  The different strains of HIV, the DNA aspect, the meds.   So much to absorb!

I understand now why you infected Michael so badly, so that you can explore all the different kinds, treatments and ramifications of the disease.  The difference between HIV and AIDS and even the differences with in those two classifcations.  So complicated, yet you are unraveling the mystery perfectly, and clearly.

For once I'm glad Debbie has a big mouth!  She's learning.  And I'm glad Brian went to talk to  Michael and his paying for his plane ticket to see his duaghter. Michael is just pathetic.... He not only hurts others, he hurts himself.

And I was happy to see Ryan giving Brian and Justin time alone together. I think it's important to keep balance, as you stated.

Excellent, excellent chapter!  I'd give this chapter a blue ribbon on it's own if I could!



Author's Response:

There is a lot of new information on HIV/AIDS and I hope to spoon feed it to the readers without being preachy or overwhelm them with all the data. Let the details come in as they apply to the plot. Billions have been spent and are being spent on this condition and they are getting outstanding results from the research globally.

Thanks for reading and commenting Gina. Love the new video on your LJ page too :) "Wild Horses". I posted it on my profile page at another website.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 10:20 PM · On: CCR5 Delta 32 DNA Mutation

Wow!  Deb, Deb, Deb. <knocking head against screen>  Always one to start the drama.  Makes for a good chapter though.  I love how Brian is so protective of Justin, making him go to the doctor when the condom broke.  I won't say poor Michael.  Maybe he'll grow up now.  Now that Justin has CCR5 delta 32 Mutation, can they use his blood like a vaccine?

The information in this chapter was really great.

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Author's Response:

There is an American in Germany who they believe is cured of HIV by a stem cell transplant with a donor that has the CCR5 delta 32 mutation. He has been free of HIV for over 3 years. It's cutting edge research and more about it can be found HERE. Thank you for commening YumYumPM.

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 10:27 AM · On: No Other Options

loved it

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 10:26 AM · On: I won't tell…..

read the chappies, here are the review hits
loved it

Author's Response: Thanks bunches :)

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Big Man on Campus

loved it



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 10:13 AM · On: No Other Options

Very fun chapter with Ryan for Ted and Blake. Michael is in a world trouble and has no one to blame but himself. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Might be a couple of days. RL has my attention for a while. Thanks for the comments and hits Steve.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 08:57 AM · On: No Other Options

LOL!!!  What a great start, giving Ryan to Ted and Blake.  Love the puppy named Ryan.  Pics not bad either.  The information on the tat was great too.  Poor Michael <smirk>  not only does he have just about every strain one could get, he doesn't have any insurance.  No matter how you look at it Michael's Doomed.  Isn't Emmett from Atlanta?  Wouldn't it be funny if Michael met them and...there I go again.  Love this story, where else could you get a wealth of information and lots of SEX!



Author's Response:

You really didn't think they would give the real Ryan away did you? Hell no! Michael is needed as a character who is super-infected for the story. The fact he's a middle aged man with a mid-life crisis becoming a whore to get sex like there's no tomorrow also shows how some idiots in the gay community act too. More soon YumYum and thank you very much for commenting.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 07:52 AM · On: I won't tell…..

Ryan was very naive to tall to Debbie. Everyone knows about him and that could get ugly down the road. The gossip group was full speed ahead once Debbie got started.

Author's Response:

Isn't that about how gossip runs anyway? And for folks with HIV the talk never ends.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Big Man on Campus

Must suck to be beauiful and get crap from people who aren't. Ted was way funny here and lusting for Ryan. Love the twists and turns you write in your stories.



Author's Response:

I call that the hamster's roller coaster plot theming. He's known to throw major plot curve balls.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 07:17 AM · On: No Other Options

When the chapter started out saying Ted and Blake got Ryan I nearly fell out of the chair. That was sneaky of you JT and the puppy Ryan was adorable. I would have loved to seen Ted's face when it was springed on him. Michael is very sick it seems. Are you going to kill him off?



Author's Response:

Spoiler: Michael will live but serve as an example of the super-infected with HIV.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 06:42 AM · On: I won't tell…..

This was very funny since people do gossip just like this on anything worth talking about. Have to see what happens to Ted next.

Author's Response: Since the chapter is written you don't have to wait to find out. Enjoy!

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Big Man on Campus

So jocks in college still act like they are in junior high school. Glad Brian got a bodyguard for Ryan. Ted is just dumb talking to Ryan like that. He should have talked to Brian about his concerns. He means well but he puts his foot in his mouth all the time.

Author's Response:

You're the second person to say that justinsgirl. Ted never was very bright on social matters. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 17, 2010 11:31 AM · On: No Other Options

so cute.  i love the puppy story.  what a way to get back at them.  very original and i thought it very funny. take that!!! michael got what he deserved.  they tried to warn him--did not listen or didn't want to.  he's so dumb at times.  no  matter what some of your readers review that don't understand the gay life style--this story is educating them.  some don't have a clue about hiv/aids or don't appear to.  you keep going man this story is da bomb.  you'll never guess what i'm getting for christmas!!! lol



Author's Response: I hope to make this entertaining and informative at the same time. If all some folks know about the gay world was watching Queer as Folk they ain't seen nothing yet! hehehe Let me guess; will you get your present in bed :P

Reviewer: Ana (Anonymous) · Date: December 17, 2010 01:55 AM · On: No Other Options

I am going to assume I am just slow and can't follow. This story went from wow, this is interesting to WTF. I may have missed something but, it seems all your stories have the same theme, big cocks, multiple lovers and some kind of mystical happenings. The purposely giving some one HIV does nothing for me either, this is just my feeling, not trying to be negative or start some crazy stuff.

I will look for your next story, i do love your writing style and the tone of your story telling.



Author's Response:

What can I say. Big cocks is a gay guy thing. I know because I'm a gay guy. Maybe I make it a little thicker than reality with artistic license :) There are guys that big in the world too.

One extra lover isn't multiple lovers. Established powerful gay couples sometimes have a permanant third lover between them. It happens in the real gay world. We're not straight people. That's allowed in our world if all parties can emotionally handle it, and can afford to do it.

In previous stories I got mystical but nothing like that has happend in this story. Ryan's very beautiful and makes the kind of big money a top shelf model in advertising can make. It's not mystical.

No one purposely gave Michael HIV. They also didn't stop him from getting it either. We don't know if he got it from Ryan; he could have. And with his behavior in the backroom and baths after losing Ben he was going to get very infected (super infected) anyway. Michael made himself an enemy of Brian and Justin by running his mouth and almost destorying them in the process. So they just said to hell with him and stopped caring for him. Even Ben threw in the towel about Michael. His HIV status was left to fate. After living with a man with HIV he knew better than to act the way he did and swallow. He didn't even try to spit it out with Ryan. Remember?

Saying suggestive words to a near 36 year old man doesn't make it real unless he wants to follow the suggestive thinking with his lust. Michael did it to himself; if you followed the lines leading up to his "date" with Ryan or Reactor. Anyone with half a brain would know that something was very wrong with that picture, but not Michael who didn't listen to anything but his own voice foaming at the mouth.Had he read beteen the lines they were telling him the score but he only saw a hot boy with a big one and he wanted it. He even paid for it. Duh?

I needed someone superinfected to continue the story's purpose to educate about HIV. Michael became that someone and you don't know how his horrible situation will turn out yet. It just beginning to be part of the story with the latest chapter. Don't assume the worse Ana.

Ryan isn't in the story just as an extra hot lover. He also presents the reality that the very young and beautiful also get HIV in the real world and have to deal with it, and sometimes they get it by incest at a very young age; boys and girls. I also didn't want Justin getting HIV from Brian for my story since that emotional baggage would have dominated the plot and that's not the direction I went into.

This is a complex plot and you're not slow at all. I hope I've been able to bring this very difficult story theme to a better understanding for you.

The bottom line is a truthful story about HIV/AIDS, with real facts, no myths or sugercoating, and hopefully an entertaining story along the way because preaching about HIV isn't reaching many people.

Sometimes the hamster gets carried away with his imagination. I'll try to keep him from making the story too weird for readers like yourself. Your points are vaild.

Thank you for your comment.

 

 

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 12:07 AM · On: No Other Options

You had me going there thinking Ryan was going to live with Ted and Blake. That was too funny for words. Excellent plot!

Michael is very sad but he knew better than to behave like that and had to know the risk of his sexual behavior. I can't foresee how you're going to take the Michael subplot next. He is such a whiner I think he may do that first and who knows what can happen to him?

Give the hamster a cookie because this is very good.



Author's Response:

Ted got his puppy Ryan which is what he wanted, right? :) Michael is my character to be superinfected and we can explore what HIV/AIDS is for someone like that next and see some of the latest medical breakthroughs with this disease by his example. Cookie delivered and thank you!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 11:45 PM · On: No Other Options

"What does Ryan say about it?"


"He doesn't say much; he just chews and sucks anything you put in his mouth."


I laughed so hard when I read that...of course at the time I thought Brian was talking about Ryan!  lol  Nice joke on Ted.


I never knew about the tattoo, that's what I love about this story. I learn so much.  I wonder if the boys are going to 'come out' and get one.  Big brave move.


I have to admit the Michael scene was very disturbing to me.  The most infected person in the world?   I can't imagine how sick he's going to be...and possibly die.  It's very, very tragic.  As much as he's a fuck up, I do hope they help him in Atlanta.  No one deserves to die a horrible death from Aids. 


Great, great update.



Author's Response:

Brian's a master of the spoken word and persuasion. Ted shoud have seen that one coming but all he had on his mind was teenage Ryan so he missed it, thus he got a new puppy!

The tattoo is the real thing in the gay world and the HIV community, straight and gay.

Michael is the most infected in the USA, not the world. There are many prostitiutes in Africa worse off than he is. I needed a superinfected person and Michael is the one. Hint: He lives.

Thanks Gina for your comments very much.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 07:35 PM · On: No Other Options

That look on Ted's face would have been priceless.  As for Michael, well...  I'll leave it at that.



Author's Response:

I can't hurt our Teddy bear, but messing with his head is too delicious to avoid that temptation :) Michael will be able to show us the latest in HIV/AIDS research and how the superinfected are dealt with to save them. I needed such a character in the story. There is one more type of HIV infected person to introduce later and Justin will fit that example. Thank you for your comments balrogtweety.

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2010 09:17 AM · On: I won't tell…..

I love the story.

Cannot wait for Brian  to get back at Ted for spreading the word or trying to

get Ryan to live with Blake and him.

Glad to see Michael and Graig out of the picture too. Never did like them in the show.

You are a gifted writer.

Have a nice holiday!!

Debbie



Author's Response:

Ted didn't talk but Debbie did and so did other women. However Ted and Blake have the hots for Ryan but so does everyone. Glad you're enjoying the story. This will be a Cajun Turkey Christmas for a change. I love to cook when I'm up to it and my roommates sure like my cooking too. Happy Holidays to you too Debbie and thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2010 10:28 AM · On: I won't tell…..

whoops wasn't how i thought it would go.  never tell deb anything you don't want repeated she has diarrhea of the mouth.  it's the domino affect.  brian doesn't sound too upset, but he will have fun with ted soon.  going to ca for  xmas to meet the family!!!yikes--am a little on the nervous side about this.  wish me luck lol



Author's Response:

Brian knows Debbie like the back of his hand; Ryan didn't know better but he will from now on. Brian loves to mess with Ted and this is a new reason to fu*k with the man. Love CA, lived in SD for 8 years after gettting out of the Navy there. Try to have fun anyway. Good luck with Boston; you're in the finals it sounds like. Thanks so much for commenting Brian.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Big Man on Campus

maybe ted thinks he's helping ryan--but he better watch out if brian finds out about his little talk with ryan there will be hell to pay.  you don't mess with brian or his boys!!! ted should know better. dumb ass move on his part.  maybe  he has an ulterior motive!!!  have to go back to boston for more interviews  this is getting to be nuts.  i wish they would make up their minds already--need to know where my life and career are going. lol



Author's Response:

Ted will soon regret his indiscresion with Ryan no doubt but it's all harmless fun for Brian. Boston sounds promising for you. Thanks Brian for your chapter comments.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 08:54 AM · On: I won't tell…..

Arghhhh, what happened to 'I promise not to tell anyone'!!!!  At least it wasn't Ted.  Though it looks like Brian's going to have fun with Ted about that.   Telling Melanie was not a good idea, she wanted to sue Ryan!!  Can you do something evil to her?

It would be a twist if it turned out that Michael doesn't have HIV or AIDS.  Maybe the tests could come out wrong??  Never mind me, I get like this with a little creme sherry. <giggle> 



Author's Response:

Mel was just being a lawyer thinking out loud; she didnt really see a lawsuit but it's her nature to see things from a legal perspective first. Michael will soon have his test results. Be careful with that sherry; remember how much it messes up Joan :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Big Man on Campus

If I didn't know better, and I probably don't, I'd thing that girl deliberately told her boyfriend because Ryan didn't lust after her.  The bodyguard was an excellant idea and now Ryan's got a new friend.  What's up with Ted.  Will he be able to keep his mouth shut?  I best get to the next chapter fast, fast, fast.



Author's Response:

I never thought of that but since you mentioned it, yes, a girl could behave that way if shunned. Ted will survive it and not run his mouth but Ryan makes another mistake next chapter. Thanks so much for your chapter comments YumYumPM.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 05:43 AM · On: I won't tell…..

I double down what Gina said. I'm still laughing at the way Debbie couldn't keep her big mouth shut. Ryan was too trusting and he has to learn from this. With Brian on top of it no real harm done so far. I hate to admit it but women are huge gossipers for real.

What's in store for Teddy? This could get rich and go on for days! LOL!



Author's Response:

Once I get past some home issues going on the next chapter will be written and posted. Right now RL is in the way. Thanks for commenting Jo.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 05:30 AM · On: I won't tell…..

family gossip, gotta love it.  I hope Ryan learns a lesson from this, NEVER tell your secrets to family.  They can be the worse gossipers!  I hope Michael doesn't get any ideas about suing Ryan.  As much as I hate Mel, she had a point. If Ryan knowingly gave Michael HIV, he could be in trouble. Now I know he didn't technically know, but the boys knew.  They introduced him as reactor, (or something like that. I remember you telling me the name was  code for someone infected, and Michael should have piced up on it)  If Micheal remembers that, the shit could hit the fan. Though like Mel said, I doubt he'd have any case, much less a weak one, since he's been fucking and sucking everythign in sight.

Such a mess...  But I'm glad Ted wasn't the big gosspier. I like Ted.  And I cant' wait to see how Brian teases him about trying to 'steal' his boy. lol

 



Author's Response:

Ryan will surely learn from this as you mentioned. Michael isn't bright enough to smell fresh coffee much less an old brew. Mel was just being a lawyer thinking out loud. There's no real threat of suing Ryan here. I like Ted too and he's a fun character to write about. Love you for the comments Gina and for reading this.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 02:50 AM · On: I won't tell…..

It's amazing how gossip can get out of control especially with Deb at the wheel.  Great update.



Author's Response:

That was just a taste of the crap people with HIV have to deal with all the time too. Everyone talks behind your back and soon the news in town is you have 3 months to live, and anyone who ate at your house is infected and God help anyone known to have sex with you in the last 5 or 10 years. Their reputation is shot too. I've seen gossip get so bad guys move out of town or attempt suicide. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Big Man on Campus

Ted is going to mess up if he tries to come between the boys.
Great chapter.
Love and kisses.

Author's Response:

Congrats on being the 200th reviewer and getting the next chapter dedicated to you Lorie. I have to go out of town for a while and will answer all my comments upon returning.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Big Man on Campus

"If he's cute maybe I can use him when I don't have either one of you around to get me off." Ryan said with a boyish grin that was too adorable.

 "One young hopelessly ugly straight security goon coming right up." Brian took out his phone and called his security company for Kinnetik.

LOL Loved that!  Jealous Brian is always a turn on.  Looks like Ted might be trouble.  The family is still meddleing.   I'm surprised at Ted, he should have talked to Brian about his concerns, not Ryan!  *shakes head* when will they ever learn?

Another great chapter. I hope you're feeling well, I love the quick updates, but please take care of yourself.



Author's Response:

Next chapter is posted and surprisingly it's not Ted who spills the beans. Brian knows Ryan won't trick out on their special relationship but he was having fun with the banter. Jealous? Probably but he won't admit it to save his life. Love you girl.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Big Man on Campus

Even if he wasn't a model someone as beautiful as Ryan might need protection anyway. Ted is so sick. I bet he and Blake wanted Ryan for their sex toy too. A horny man has no morals. I may be a married woman but I think I know men. I've had friends of my husband hit on me behind his back.



Author's Response:

Jo I can't believe you said that online! What if your husband ever sees it? Do you know the shit that would cause you guys? Ted's a gay man and Ryan's too hot to resist for any gay guy. Love you for all the comments dear.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Big Man on Campus

Being famous comes with a price.  I hope Ted keeps his mouth shut.  Man!!!



Author's Response:

Next chapter is posted and Ted isn't at fault for once. Love you.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA

Now I get caught up on all my reviews with this chapter. I loved the details how Justin and Brian took care of the Craig situation and did it with such permanent success. Joey and Molly can see each other and Justin can still see his sister. Ryan, Leo Brown and Kinetic are safe again. Craig gets a bed, three meals a day and all the prison punks he wants to love. Justice can be very sweet.

Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you for the chapter comments justinsgirl. Let me answer this one for them all in detail. I know how much easier it is when you have many chapters to read and I'm glad to have been able to make that possible for you. When the hamster's hot we kick them out provided I'm in good health to work at the keyboard. I have such a reserve of knowledge and experiences to use for this plot this story practically writes its self. My only concern is how to organize the events for the novel to unfold with the best entertainment value for my readers. Good folks like you motivate me to write since you care enough  to comment for each chapter. I do that too when I read a story since I know how much it means to a writer to get that kind of feedback. On average only two people comment out of a hundred sometimes and that's just sad.

You're a sweet heart dear. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Craig

I was so mad reading what Craig was saying to Justin and knew he was making a big mistake threatening them. Brian is too powerful to stand by and allow that to happen to him.



Author's Response:

Yep!

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Recovery

Glad that Ryan was ok after being shot by his dad. It looks like the three lovers have a wonderful life together and Ryan is very much loved.



Author's Response:

Oh yeah; that kid gets all the fun he wants now.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Charles

Very shocking chapter and sad that Ryan loses Charles again just after they get back together. Ryan's father is a sick man and needed to die for what he did and for trying to hurt Ryan. He won't be missed.



Author's Response:

Very true

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:30 PM · On: A Star is Born

Was Justin getting a little jealous of Brian's attention to Ryan? Having Gus visiting is a good thing for Brian. It gives him another reason to live and take care of himself. The boys get cars and boys love cars too. I can see each one in his vehicle.



Author's Response:

Jealous? not really but they play around with it.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy

Good of Ryan to help his family and Brian to help Joan. Sad to read about Cam and what he did to Ryan. He should be punished for it. Interesting medical facts from the doctor and fits in with a story about HIV and AIDS. Funny about Molly and Joey too.

Author's Response:

Molly beautiful and so is Joey. It only makes sense there's an attraction there.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Family Emergency

I have heard of people losing their benefits if they sell drugs. it's very sad when innocent children get hurt for it however. A sick Brian is nothing good because he has so much life in him. I loved how Justin took charge and demanded he be admitted into the hospital for proper care.



Author's Response:

Justin's the bottom in sex and the top were everything else matters.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Rodney

This was so sweet that Ryan and Brian comforted Rodney in his final hours. This boy is even more loveable for being so kind to a dying man.



Author's Response:

Ryan is more beautiful on the inside.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Ryan makes Three

It was very good of Justin not to be mad at Ryan for his HIV.  Looks like Ryan will fit right in and be a beautiful third lover for our boys.



Author's Response:

Smart gay guys know better than to get mad at HIV. Shit happens and it takes two to catch it.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve

You can't punish Michael enough to upset me. He was always one of my least favorite people on the show. Glad Ben dumped him and it would fit Michael to become a slut once free again.

Author's Response:

Michael is having a middle age crisis at the same time he lost his husband. The result is to be a whore so he can think that he can still get all the sex he wants. Stupid but guys sometimes act like that.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Saving Private Ryan

My computer has been in the shop for a week due to infections. How they got there I have no idea. I got it back today and see 11 more chapters to this wonderful story! I've read them all and want to now comment on each one.

Ryan is a dream boy come true. The story description says Brian/Justin/Other in the categories and me thinks Ryan is going to be the other as I read this chapter.

Author's Response:

Yes Ryan is the other and there will not be another "other" with B and J in this story. Ryan is all the 3rd our boys can handle and then some.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA

ROTFLMAO! How sweet is gay revenge! Maybe Craig can learn to appreciate a pretty boy in prison. This was too much fun and very good to know that the threats are over for them. Can I have Ryan's phone number?



Author's Response:

Over Brian's dead body you may have his phone number :D

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Craig

Straight people can be so evil and mean to us and family can be the worse at it since they can hurt us so much. To threaten them like that is beyond any intellegence or understanding. Reading on to see how they deal with Craig and his threats.



Author's Response:

Knowing Brian and Justin, Craig is in deep doo doo.

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA

if we gay guys had a secret network with the balls to fight back like that we wouldn't be getting stepped on by republicans and christians all the time this was a great chapter very much fun to read

Author's Response:

My thoughts exactually. There's a reason other minorities don't get messed with anymore and respect for what they will do to haters is one of them.

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Craig

if i had hiv and my dad talked to me like that i would what to kick his ass good the next chapter is up i can see where this goes

Author's Response:

Professonal Gay Network Rapid Response Unit to the rescue.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA

*Doing a Happy Dance all over the room*

Loved this chapter and the skill our boys used to take Craig down. It's always a pleasure to read the details of your plots as they hatch. I can go to sleep now with a smile on my face knowing they are safe again.

Author's Response:

:)  I had to tie it up too before sleeping good myself. Love you girl for all your wonderful chapter comments.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Craig

Craig is insensitive and cruel. I hope you really let him have it.

Author's Response:

Brian and Justin will ram it in with no grease or warning provided. I promise Craig will feel it forever.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Grief and Denial

Was that really a "Blog" or did you write it? The thing with HIV, we somewhat have control over getting it. We don't have total control because others can always lie to us. Like you mentioned, other diseases one can get at anytime and we really don't know why or how, or have any treatment/cure for them.  

I like how you remind us, most issues have a lot to do with how we choose to deal with them and choose to live the healthiest lifestyle as possible.

I'm very fortunate that I haven't had any serious medical issues.

*Just a side note!  I didn't like how they had Brian deal with getting older or getting cancer on the show and I don't like how he's dealing with this. I understand his "issues" but he's too intelligent of a person, too analytical, and too in control, I think to react like this. I'm referring to the show due to that is where everyone gets their basis for writing about this character. Hopefully, his way of "dealing" won't last very long!  :)

 

 



Author's Response:

"It's only HIV.....Get Over It!" is a real blog posted on the HIV/AIDS social network website called poziam.com. It was republished here with permission from the writer. Brian starts out badly dealing with it and gets better real soon. I just woke up from a long needed sleep and will catch up on review comments and try to write the next chapter tonight.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 04:23 AM · On: June 1, 2005

Hmmm....... Sounds like they each got it from elsewhere and not each other, which I think would be better. less guilt and blame for each of them.  This is the main thing I want to know, if one gave it to the other. 

At this point, not sure how much I will read. It's going to be based on chapter to chapter. I'm sort of dissociating myself from this so I don't end up a total mess by reading a FICTIONAL story!  :)



Author's Response: They didn't infected each other in any way. The story only starts out sad and quickly changes. It shouldn't tear you up at all :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting Susan.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA

Now that was justice.  Great update.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And many thanks for your chapter comments which inspire me to write more for you.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Craig

Great update.  Carig can be an asshole to paraphrase Brian.  He'll get his if I know you and how you write.



Author's Response: Oh hell yeah! :D

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA

Nice to see Craig get fucked over, he deserves it for his attitude.
Great writing. XXXOOO

Author's Response:

Sadly it is also an example of how some people think and react when confronted with HIV. Fear brings out the worse in people.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Craig

Some people are born to be horrible, Craig is one of them. Justin should have refused to answer his questions, none of that was any of his business.
Love and kisses

Author's Response:

Justin just woke up and was reacting in shock. Love and kisses back and thank you for all the comments Lorie.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Recovery

Great chapter.

Author's Response:

:) I appreciate you saying it.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Charles

It was great that Jade put Joan in her place about The boys.
Very sad about Charles.
Great chapter

Author's Response:

Someone needed to tell that to Joan. In a sense Charles saved Ryan's life twice before he died.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:51 AM · On: A Star is Born

The sex is great.
I'm glad Ryan and Gus get along.
Love and kisses

Author's Response:

I have to write some sex scenes since you girls love them so much :D  As one of  the oldest in his family Ryan knows how to deal with kids really well. Love and kisses back.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy

Love this story.
Hugs and kisses for you and the hamster.

Author's Response:

:) Thank you and the hamster is blowing you kisses.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:56 AM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA

i love it



Author's Response:

:D thank you much

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA

omfg!!  i don't know what to say.  you are so sneaky.  that was priceless.  that's why you are the master.  i just loved this chapter of retribution.  don't mess with the boys they will get you every time.  sooooo good. lol



Author's Response:

I just woke up from a long sleep and had to answer my review comments. Yours waited the longest and I'm sorry for the delay but I was wiped out. Threatening them or their family is a sure fire way to get the wrath of Brian and Justin on your head. In the past Craig was ignored but not this time. Love you Brian for reading and commenting and best of luck with Boston my man.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA

Wicked, wicked.  This went down even better than I could have expected.  I can just imagine what would Craig have said if he ever learned his assistant manager was gay.  Hopefully there is no way the Craig can find out who's responsible for his down fall.  Alls well that ends well!



Author's Response:

Craig will never find out and if he did there isn't anything he could do about it with no evidence to back it up. Next to bashing Michael, slamming Craig is my guilty pleasure. Love you for reading and commenting very much.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA

life in prison for arson?  With no parole? Was anyone killed in the fire? 

I guess this is a lesson. Don't fuck with Justin or Brian.  

Nice to see Molly showing restraint with Joey. 



Author's Response:

First degree arson with very major damage can earn a life sentence should the court decide the quilty deserves it in some states. Molly wants to be able to see Joey and they will both behave. Thank you for commenting Gina.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Craig

craigs a prick, though I have to say, as a parent, I'd be concerned about my daughter having sex at her age. Did anyone even talk to her about safe sex? Maybe Justin should. 

I hope Ryan continues to model. It would be a sin to waste all that gorgeousness.



Author's Response:

Craig misunderstood his daughter; she hadn't had major sex yet. Just knew the boy was endowed so to speak and he took it wrong.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Craig

oh oh trouble in paradise.  knew things were too good.  need to bump craig off or do some dasterdly thing to him.  need him gone.  boys need to be left to live their life without that basdtard screwing up everything.  good chapter man. lol



Author's Response:

Brian and Justin don't take threats lightly and will find a way to save their interests in abundence. Thanks Brian.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Recovery

i tyhought ryan would be ok as charles body stopped the bullet.  this story is vert good all these twists and turns for the unexpected--this is why u r soooo!! good man. lol



Author's Response:

Hehehehe Me and the furry hamster aim to please our beloved readers without delays.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Craig

Brian's improved so much, then Michael has to step in and try to spoil it.  Michael should have a sign that reads 'open mouth insert foot'  How dare he make accusations of that nature, when he's in a much worse position!

Ryan's sooo popular.  All the top companies want him!!!!

I'm interested in the plans you've got for Baby brother, Joey, and Molly.  Do you suppose you could give Craig the same type ending you gave Ryan's father???  I can see the headlines now "Attempted Murder of Famous Brown's Athletic Model Fouled Once Again - News at 11"  hehe.

 

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Author's Response:

Molly deserves to have some happiness too. Trust me YumYum; they thought about taking Craig out and Justin comes up with a better plan. Thank you for reading and commenting; it inspiries me to write for you. The next chapter is well underway.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Recovery

Oh, the life of the Rich and Famous.  As Ryan found out it's not all it's cracked up to be.  Ryan either has a Guardian Angel watching over him or he's plain lucky.  It's a good thing he's got Brian and Justin watching his back.

Brown's Athletic came through...promising to keep Ryan out of the limelight once his contract ended. 

Now mom doesn't have to worry about dad showing up and spoiling everything.



Author's Response:

Ryan does seem to have an angel on his shoulder indeed. Sad about his father and Charles but at least no one else got hurt badly in the event.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Recovery

Ryan's ok but I didn't think you'd kill one of the stars of the story like that. Still made for a great read JT. I don't blame him for avoiding the public. Get back to work and write more. You have spoiled us to expect a lot from you.



Author's Response:

I'm working on it as we write. Thank you so much for all your great chapter comments Jo Ann.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Charles

First you make me love a new character and then you wack em. You are a demon writer JT.



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 05:40 PM · On: A Star is Born

Boy you really write fast. I look away for a few days and three chapters are waiting for me. I wondered if Brian's flu was something else. It's good Gus can visit them for the summer weeks. Brian accepts Ryan inside him and it is hot to read about it. Justin gets a great car too. The automobles at Britin have grown. Fun informative chapter.



Author's Response:

LIfe isn't all about dealing with a disease; often it's just normal stuff and sudden problems to deal with for all of us.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Recovery

Nice to see Ryan is ok.  I don't blame him for not wanting to be in public.



Author's Response:

Things do get better for Ryan; thank you very much for commenting balrogtweety.

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Recovery

good that ended well and we can go forward again wondering what is next



Author's Response:

As one event closes a new pile of shi! comes forward   :)

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Charles

Intense shit here reading on



Author's Response:

:D  We aim to please you.

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:04 PM · On: A Star is Born

good details moved in the big house ryan is a media hit which I expected to happen justin gets a benz lucky boy

Author's Response:

They are great cars but cost a fortune to have them worked on. Thanks for all the comments Gary.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Recovery

Glad Ryan is ok. I'd be a mess to go through all that drama myself. Take care of yourself Bob, you ain't young anymore you know.

Author's Response:

Yes Steve as my body reminds me quite often of that. Thanks for caring.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Charles

Powerful chapter and I'm glad not to wait for the followup.



Author's Response:

Glad to make it work for you.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Recovery

A very touching emotional chapter. I loved it.  



Author's Response:

Thank you Gina and I hope you like what follows. The hamster's on a roll.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Recovery

i love it



Author's Response:

:D Thank you love very much for all your comments.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Charles

see what happens in chicago!!.  hope ryan is ok.  has bad luck--high hills deep valleys.  glad brian is better.  computer crashed.  old  got a new one.  taking a business class for a few weeks--guess you can never have too much knowledge  so rob says. lol



Author's Response:

Was very tired and had to sleep. Will wake up later, finish reviews and next chapter, Ryan will be ok. Thank you for commenting and sorry about computer brian.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Charles

I guess success comes with troubles.  Sorry to see Charles die.  But will Ryan be ok?  Guess we'll see.  Great update.



Author's Response:

Charles saved Ryan's life; next chapter underway at this time. Thank you for commenting very much.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 03:28 AM · On: Charles

very sad story but also beings hiv awarness

i can not wait to read the next chapter of this very good story

i glad gus is staying with brian and justin
i look forward toreading more of this story



Author's Response: Thank you jm c. The next chapter is started already; I had to sleep again.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Charles

i love it



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Charles

i love it



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 01:26 AM · On: A Star is Born

love it



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Charles

OMG!  I just caught up on these chapters and  WOW!  You do know how to create drama!  Poor Ryan!   That's the second older man to die in his arms.  With his life being bigger than life right now, his HIV status, the emotional family shit going on, I hope he doesn't snap.  Poor kid, he is after all just a kid!  I  think some time home, away from everyone (except his two men) is in order. Lots of TCL from B/J is the best medicine.

I have to say though, as I was reading the last chapter, I was wondering if Justin is a tad jealous of Ryan and Brian.  But then I realized, I'm the one whose jealous!  lol.  But seriously, having a friend who was in a poly situation, there was issues of who loves who more.  I know our boys are more confident in themselves, and their importance to one another...but still I wonder if that green eyed monster is going to rear his head anytime soon?  I'm not sure JT, you really do surprise me with these twists and turns!  I LOVE it!  lol   

This story is progressing so nicely.  Lots of surprises, never mundane.   I look forward to each reading, wondering what you'l have in store for us next!



Author's Response:

Ryan's strong but this will test his inner strength no doubt. Some TLC with B and J is certainly in order next. Brian and Justin are very settled and in love and Ryan is no threat to them; in fact he compliments their love and they can easily center their affection on the young man who can love them both equally. The teasing by Brian and Justin is only that as to who gets loved more. I was wiped out and had to sleep a couple of days again but I'm back and writing the next chapter now. Love you Gina and thank you.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Charles

Ack!  Talk about angst.  I knew Ryan's father would turn up eventually, but I had no idea how...ugly things would get.  To find Charles again only to lose him!!!  At least he died a hero.  Tell the hamster to get moving, Ryan needs medical attention ...STAT!

 



Author's Response:

Working on it right now. Will post as soon as it's finished and edited. Love you Yummy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:44 PM · On: A Star is Born

 

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Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:43 PM · On: A Star is Born

Glad to see that Brian's feeling better and that Gus is at Britin.  Ryan's doing very well with his modeling.  He may need that Karate to beat off all his fans.  Justin seems to have done well for his birthday...maybe Brian should think about buying into a car dealership!  LOL.

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Author's Response:

They have enough 4 wheel toys for now. One has to have a good car in the winter snow of Pittsburgh. Karate is mostly for body tone so a person with lots of muscles doesn't look like a freak. Love you.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy

The family's moved in and Jade made a hit with Joan.  Why do I get the feeling that dear old dad is going to turn up like a bad penny?  Hope Brian gets better soon. 

Shouldn't the whole family have physicals in case there are any surprises?

Gee, I'm starting to think this family is real!!!



Author's Response:

I'm sure they got checked out; don't have to write every little detail or it may get boring. And I think you're psychic about the dad.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy

wow a dedication to me!! that is so cool-thank you."reading your favorite writer is a pleasure and an indulgance shared my many." this chapter so awesome.  hopefully helping and setting up ryan's family won't cause problems down the road.  sub-plots shaping up as there could be two or three nefarious people lurking in the shadows.  waiting to see how this plays out.  so good. lol



Author's Response:

Wealthy people have to deal with the snot in their lives from time to time. Mostly I hope to keep the story centered on the three main characters and their journey in life together, and of course dealing with the challenges of being able to actually thrive eventually with HIV, and not just coping with it. Thank you Brian so much for you faithful support.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 06:14 PM · On: A Star is Born

The email feature telling me when you update is great. Really enjoyed this chapter. Finally Justin got to get inside Ryan. I'm sure that made it all the more meaningful.



Author's Response:

Ryan was so good on top--Justin didn't mind; however, getting his ass was a priceless birthday gift.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 06:12 PM · On: A Star is Born

Sounds like they have a wonderful family.  Great update.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And you know how family can be; extended family that is.........

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy

Nice to see Ryan take charge of his family.  He's a great kid.



Author's Response:

Ryan's going to become an incredible man too.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy

Sounds like all will perhaps work out. I usually don't comment but this story is special and I have to support your effort to educate about HIV in a very entertaining way with fiction. I have learned a lot reading this and should probably get tested again. Keep up the great work Bob.



Author's Response:

Hi Steve. Let me just answer this comment for all of them so I can go write the next chapter. Glad to see you reading my word old man. I know it's hard for you to get online and comment and I really appreicate you doing it for this story. With a little luck this will be a very successful piece of work. Please comment again and know I've read all your wonderful reviews Steve.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Family Emergency

The check isn't cashed yet and family needs money. Typical shit indeed.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Rodney

Ryan is such a wonderful boy and so sensitive to help Rodney like that. Few would have the skill or courage to deal with it especially for a stranger you don't know.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Ryan makes Three

Sounds like a match made in gay heaven for everybody.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve

Very complex and powerful chapter. Gays do this for real and not give HIV knowlingly so much but do the military talk.



Author's Response:

Yeah Steve, I know and I've seen it. That's why I used it in the story. Thanks for all your comments man. And no one gave anyone HIV, Michael blindly walked into it. If I tell you to swallow seed and become a whore will you listen to me? Why would Michael do that unless subconscioiusly he wanted to be a whore and even punish himself for trying to hurt Brian and Justin? He knew better.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Saving Private Ryan

I would fiy that boy in the painting to come be with me in a heartbeat. Does someone exist that beautiful for real?

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Rat

Laughed hard at sex with mom on the phone. Funny stuff. Michael needs to be shanked.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:24 PM · On: First Challenges

Thrush is very painful and I remember someone who had it when they had cancer and the chemo wiped out his immune system. Michael won't listen to Ben.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:22 PM · On: The Journey Begins

Sort of a transisition chapter in a way. Good Brian went back to the dr.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:21 PM · On: The Group

Excellent insight on HIV in the gay world and the apathy and loathing of others.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Grief and Denial

Striking contast between B and J with HIV and AIDS. Informative too on emotional effects of the disease.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:20 PM · On: June 1, 2005

Very intense writing bob. I've already read the chapters but going back to comment for you.



Author's Response:

Thanks my friend.

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy

brians ok incest and hiv equals vomit ryan gets wheels every boys dream fun reading want more



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Family Emergency

I have seen people on public support lose it all for drug charges. That is real in the USA got to see how Brian is



Author's Response:

 yep

Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Rodney

that was heavy man



Author's Response:

Dying has that effect on people.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy

So much interesting details you write. Cam sounds like scum. In an AU story you would probably take him out ;-)



Author's Response:

You know me too well.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Family Emergency

Great chapter. I have to keep reading to learn how Brian is.



Author's Response:

Ok

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy

i love it



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy

It's so nice that Ryan's family is helping Joan.  I hope Cam or Ryans father doesn't show up.

Nice to see Deb taking care of Brian.   Great update.



Author's Response:

Often putting family's in need together is the solution to several problems at once. Brian saw that formula and put it into action. Debbie loves Brian very much and always has. They have a very long history together as you know. Thank you so much for reading and commenting Gina. I hope you and yours are well.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Family Emergency

Brian is very generous with those he loves.
Love the story.

Author's Response:

Brian is a manager and fixes problems. Yes, he can be very generous too if he feels like it. Love you for reading and commenting Lorie.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Rodney

Great chapter.
Ryan did a very sweet and caring thing with Rodney.
Love and kisses.

Author's Response:

Ryan's very sensitive and can read people's feelings. He's a real sweet-heart, and much more than just another pretty face. Love and kisses back.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Ryan makes Three

Love Ted.
Love Emmett.
Ryan seems like a sweet kid.
Love the story.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the chapter and story; I'm still building up the plot.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve

Strange chapter. Since I have read all of your stories, I was able to figure out the meanings.
Is Michael so stupid that he doesn't know what they are saying or does he know and not care?
Love you and the hamster.

Author's Response:

Michael could be smart enough if he would only listen but often he's dumb as a sack of rocks. As to his state of caring; he only cares about himself and soon every not that. Love you more.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Saving Private Ryan

I would love to slap Michael. He is such a prick. I'm glad that Ben is leaving him. Great writing. XXXOOO

Author's Response:

Usually Michael is a villian in my stories. I despise him to no end for hurting Justin; well thats just me.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Rat

Justin talking to his mom while riding Brian hilarious.
What Michael did to his 'best friend' and his own mother was horrid.
Great chapter. Love and kisses.

Yes I'm an RN. I do private duty pediatric home care. I have been with the same child for almost six years.

Author's Response:

Michael's actions were all too typical of many who learn someone has HIV or AIDS. They blow it way out of proportion and stir shit just to smell it stink.

I honor you for such a noble profession. I was a junior paramedic for nearly 8 years in California on a private ambulance and did many shifts without pay in the ER.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Family Emergency

leave it to brian to fix everything.  that's what he does for his friends and family.  ryan is his family now.  hope this setback on his health is short-lived.  good chapter connecting families together. lol



Author's Response:

Brian will bounce back and it wasn't the flu; answer in chapter 13 now being written after I catch up on review comments/answers.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 07:08 AM · On: Family Emergency

sad but great story

i sad vic lover passaway i glad ryan was with him at the end snd also it was

very nice of brian to buy ryan's mom a home

i hope brian gets better soon

i can not wait to read the nezt chapter of this great story



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting jm c

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Family Emergency

Hope Brian gets better.  Ryan sure loves his family.  He definitely is a Godsend.



Author's Response:

Brian will be in top form by chapter 13. Ryan is a real angel. Love you for commenting.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Rodney

Nice to see Ryan taking care of Rodney in his last moments.  He's definitely an Angel.



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree with you more.

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