Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2010 10:28 AM · On: I won't tell…..
whoops wasn't how i thought it would go. never tell deb anything you don't want repeated she has diarrhea of the mouth. it's the domino affect. brian doesn't sound too upset, but he will have fun with ted soon. going to ca for xmas to meet the family!!!yikes--am a little on the nervous side about this. wish me luck lol
Author's Response: Brian knows Debbie like the back of his hand; Ryan didn't know better but he will from now on. Brian loves to mess with Ted and this is a new reason to fu*k with the man. Love CA, lived in SD for 8 years after gettting out of the Navy there. Try to have fun anyway. Good luck with Boston; you're in the finals it sounds like. Thanks so much for commenting Brian.
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Big Man on Campus
maybe ted thinks he's helping ryan--but he better watch out if brian finds out about his little talk with ryan there will be hell to pay. you don't mess with brian or his boys!!! ted should know better. dumb ass move on his part. maybe he has an ulterior motive!!! have to go back to boston for more interviews this is getting to be nuts. i wish they would make up their minds already--need to know where my life and career are going. lol
Author's Response: Ted will soon regret his indiscresion with Ryan no doubt but it's all harmless fun for Brian. Boston sounds promising for you. Thanks Brian for your chapter comments.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 08:54 AM · On: I won't tell…..
Arghhhh, what happened to 'I promise not to tell anyone'!!!! At least it wasn't Ted. Though it looks like Brian's going to have fun with Ted about that. Telling Melanie was not a good idea, she wanted to sue Ryan!! Can you do something evil to her?
It would be a twist if it turned out that Michael doesn't have HIV or AIDS. Maybe the tests could come out wrong?? Never mind me, I get like this with a little creme sherry. <giggle>
Author's Response: Mel was just being a lawyer thinking out loud; she didnt really see a lawsuit but it's her nature to see things from a legal perspective first. Michael will soon have his test results. Be careful with that sherry; remember how much it messes up Joan :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Big Man on Campus
If I didn't know better, and I probably don't, I'd thing that girl deliberately told her boyfriend because Ryan didn't lust after her. The bodyguard was an excellant idea and now Ryan's got a new friend. What's up with Ted. Will he be able to keep his mouth shut? I best get to the next chapter fast, fast, fast.
Author's Response: I never thought of that but since you mentioned it, yes, a girl could behave that way if shunned. Ted will survive it and not run his mouth but Ryan makes another mistake next chapter. Thanks so much for your chapter comments YumYumPM.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 05:43 AM · On: I won't tell…..
I double down what Gina said. I'm still laughing at the way Debbie couldn't keep her big mouth shut. Ryan was too trusting and he has to learn from this. With Brian on top of it no real harm done so far. I hate to admit it but women are huge gossipers for real.
What's in store for Teddy? This could get rich and go on for days! LOL!
Author's Response: Once I get past some home issues going on the next chapter will be written and posted. Right now RL is in the way. Thanks for commenting Jo.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 05:30 AM · On: I won't tell…..
family gossip, gotta love it. I hope Ryan learns a lesson from this, NEVER tell your secrets to family. They can be the worse gossipers! I hope Michael doesn't get any ideas about suing Ryan. As much as I hate Mel, she had a point. If Ryan knowingly gave Michael HIV, he could be in trouble. Now I know he didn't technically know, but the boys knew. They introduced him as reactor, (or something like that. I remember you telling me the name was code for someone infected, and Michael should have piced up on it) If Micheal remembers that, the shit could hit the fan. Though like Mel said, I doubt he'd have any case, much less a weak one, since he's been fucking and sucking everythign in sight.
Such a mess... But I'm glad Ted wasn't the big gosspier. I like Ted. And I cant' wait to see how Brian teases him about trying to 'steal' his boy. lol
Author's Response: Ryan will surely learn from this as you mentioned. Michael isn't bright enough to smell fresh coffee much less an old brew. Mel was just being a lawyer thinking out loud. There's no real threat of suing Ryan here. I like Ted too and he's a fun character to write about. Love you for the comments Gina and for reading this.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 02:50 AM · On: I won't tell…..
It's amazing how gossip can get out of control especially with Deb at the wheel. Great update.
Author's Response: That was just a taste of the crap people with HIV have to deal with all the time too. Everyone talks behind your back and soon the news in town is you have 3 months to live, and anyone who ate at your house is infected and God help anyone known to have sex with you in the last 5 or 10 years. Their reputation is shot too. I've seen gossip get so bad guys move out of town or attempt suicide. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Big Man on Campus
Ted is going to mess up if he tries to come between the boys.
Great chapter.
Love and kisses.
Author's Response: Congrats on being the 200th reviewer and getting the next chapter dedicated to you Lorie. I have to go out of town for a while and will answer all my comments upon returning.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Big Man on Campus
"If he's cute maybe I can use him when I don't have either one of you around to get me off." Ryan said with a boyish grin that was too adorable.
"One young hopelessly ugly straight security goon coming right up." Brian took out his phone and called his security company for Kinnetik.
LOL Loved that! Jealous Brian is always a turn on. Looks like Ted might be trouble. The family is still meddleing. I'm surprised at Ted, he should have talked to Brian about his concerns, not Ryan! *shakes head* when will they ever learn?
Another great chapter. I hope you're feeling well, I love the quick updates, but please take care of yourself.
Author's Response: Next chapter is posted and surprisingly it's not Ted who spills the beans. Brian knows Ryan won't trick out on their special relationship but he was having fun with the banter. Jealous? Probably but he won't admit it to save his life. Love you girl.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Big Man on Campus
Even if he wasn't a model someone as beautiful as Ryan might need protection anyway. Ted is so sick. I bet he and Blake wanted Ryan for their sex toy too. A horny man has no morals. I may be a married woman but I think I know men. I've had friends of my husband hit on me behind his back.
Author's Response: Jo I can't believe you said that online! What if your husband ever sees it? Do you know the shit that would cause you guys? Ted's a gay man and Ryan's too hot to resist for any gay guy. Love you for all the comments dear.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Big Man on Campus
Being famous comes with a price. I hope Ted keeps his mouth shut. Man!!!
Author's Response: Next chapter is posted and Ted isn't at fault for once. Love you.
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA
Now I get caught up on all my reviews with this chapter. I loved the details how Justin and Brian took care of the Craig situation and did it with such permanent success. Joey and Molly can see each other and Justin can still see his sister. Ryan, Leo Brown and Kinetic are safe again. Craig gets a bed, three meals a day and all the prison punks he wants to love. Justice can be very sweet.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for the chapter comments justinsgirl. Let me answer this one for them all in detail. I know how much easier it is when you have many chapters to read and I'm glad to have been able to make that possible for you. When the hamster's hot we kick them out provided I'm in good health to work at the keyboard. I have such a reserve of knowledge and experiences to use for this plot this story practically writes its self. My only concern is how to organize the events for the novel to unfold with the best entertainment value for my readers. Good folks like you motivate me to write since you care enough to comment for each chapter. I do that too when I read a story since I know how much it means to a writer to get that kind of feedback. On average only two people comment out of a hundred sometimes and that's just sad.
You're a sweet heart dear. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Craig
I was so mad reading what Craig was saying to Justin and knew he was making a big mistake threatening them. Brian is too powerful to stand by and allow that to happen to him.
Author's Response: Yep!
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Recovery
Glad that Ryan was ok after being shot by his dad. It looks like the three lovers have a wonderful life together and Ryan is very much loved.
Author's Response: Oh yeah; that kid gets all the fun he wants now.
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Charles
Very shocking chapter and sad that Ryan loses Charles again just after they get back together. Ryan's father is a sick man and needed to die for what he did and for trying to hurt Ryan. He won't be missed.
Author's Response: Very true
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:30 PM · On: A Star is Born
Was Justin getting a little jealous of Brian's attention to Ryan? Having Gus visiting is a good thing for Brian. It gives him another reason to live and take care of himself. The boys get cars and boys love cars too. I can see each one in his vehicle.
Author's Response: Jealous? not really but they play around with it.
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy
Good of Ryan to help his family and Brian to help Joan. Sad to read about Cam and what he did to Ryan. He should be punished for it. Interesting medical facts from the doctor and fits in with a story about HIV and AIDS. Funny about Molly and Joey too.
Author's Response: Molly beautiful and so is Joey. It only makes sense there's an attraction there.
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Family Emergency
I have heard of people losing their benefits if they sell drugs. it's very sad when innocent children get hurt for it however. A sick Brian is nothing good because he has so much life in him. I loved how Justin took charge and demanded he be admitted into the hospital for proper care.
Author's Response: Justin's the bottom in sex and the top were everything else matters.
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Rodney
This was so sweet that Ryan and Brian comforted Rodney in his final hours. This boy is even more loveable for being so kind to a dying man.
Author's Response: Ryan is more beautiful on the inside.
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Ryan makes Three
It was very good of Justin not to be mad at Ryan for his HIV. Looks like Ryan will fit right in and be a beautiful third lover for our boys.
Author's Response: Smart gay guys know better than to get mad at HIV. Shit happens and it takes two to catch it.
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve
You can't punish Michael enough to upset me. He was always one of my least favorite people on the show. Glad Ben dumped him and it would fit Michael to become a slut once free again.
Author's Response: Michael is having a middle age crisis at the same time he lost his husband. The result is to be a whore so he can think that he can still get all the sex he wants. Stupid but guys sometimes act like that.
Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Saving Private Ryan
My computer has been in the shop for a week due to infections. How they got there I have no idea. I got it back today and see 11 more chapters to this wonderful story! I've read them all and want to now comment on each one.
Ryan is a dream boy come true. The story description says Brian/Justin/Other in the categories and me thinks Ryan is going to be the other as I read this chapter.
Author's Response: Yes Ryan is the other and there will not be another "other" with B and J in this story. Ryan is all the 3rd our boys can handle and then some.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA
ROTFLMAO! How sweet is gay revenge! Maybe Craig can learn to appreciate a pretty boy in prison. This was too much fun and very good to know that the threats are over for them. Can I have Ryan's phone number?
Author's Response: Over Brian's dead body you may have his phone number :D
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Craig
Straight people can be so evil and mean to us and family can be the worse at it since they can hurt us so much. To threaten them like that is beyond any intellegence or understanding. Reading on to see how they deal with Craig and his threats.
Author's Response: Knowing Brian and Justin, Craig is in deep doo doo.
Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA
if we gay guys had a secret network with the balls to fight back like that we wouldn't be getting stepped on by republicans and christians all the time this was a great chapter very much fun to read
Author's Response: My thoughts exactually. There's a reason other minorities don't get messed with anymore and respect for what they will do to haters is one of them.
Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Craig
if i had hiv and my dad talked to me like that i would what to kick his ass good the next chapter is up i can see where this goes
Author's Response: Professonal Gay Network Rapid Response Unit to the rescue.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA
*Doing a Happy Dance all over the room*
Loved this chapter and the skill our boys used to take Craig down. It's always a pleasure to read the details of your plots as they hatch. I can go to sleep now with a smile on my face knowing they are safe again.
Author's Response: :) I had to tie it up too before sleeping good myself. Love you girl for all your wonderful chapter comments.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Craig
Craig is insensitive and cruel. I hope you really let him have it.
Author's Response: Brian and Justin will ram it in with no grease or warning provided. I promise Craig will feel it forever.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Grief and Denial
Was that really a "Blog" or did you write it? The thing with HIV, we somewhat have control over getting it. We don't have total control because others can always lie to us. Like you mentioned, other diseases one can get at anytime and we really don't know why or how, or have any treatment/cure for them.
I like how you remind us, most issues have a lot to do with how we choose to deal with them and choose to live the healthiest lifestyle as possible.
I'm very fortunate that I haven't had any serious medical issues.
*Just a side note! I didn't like how they had Brian deal with getting older or getting cancer on the show and I don't like how he's dealing with this. I understand his "issues" but he's too intelligent of a person, too analytical, and too in control, I think to react like this. I'm referring to the show due to that is where everyone gets their basis for writing about this character. Hopefully, his way of "dealing" won't last very long! :)
Author's Response: "It's only HIV.....Get Over It!" is a real blog posted on the HIV/AIDS social network website called poziam.com. It was republished here with permission from the writer. Brian starts out badly dealing with it and gets better real soon. I just woke up from a long needed sleep and will catch up on review comments and try to write the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 04:23 AM · On: June 1, 2005
Hmmm....... Sounds like they each got it from elsewhere and not each other, which I think would be better. less guilt and blame for each of them. This is the main thing I want to know, if one gave it to the other.
At this point, not sure how much I will read. It's going to be based on chapter to chapter. I'm sort of dissociating myself from this so I don't end up a total mess by reading a FICTIONAL story! :)
Author's Response: They didn't infected each other in any way. The story only starts out sad and quickly changes. It shouldn't tear you up at all :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting Susan.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA
Now that was justice. Great update.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And many thanks for your chapter comments which inspire me to write more for you.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Craig
Great update. Carig can be an asshole to paraphrase Brian. He'll get his if I know you and how you write.
Author's Response: Oh hell yeah! :D
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA
Nice to see Craig get fucked over, he deserves it for his attitude.
Great writing. XXXOOO
Author's Response: Sadly it is also an example of how some people think and react when confronted with HIV. Fear brings out the worse in people.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Craig
Some people are born to be horrible, Craig is one of them. Justin should have refused to answer his questions, none of that was any of his business.
Love and kisses
Author's Response: Justin just woke up and was reacting in shock. Love and kisses back and thank you for all the comments Lorie.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Recovery
Great chapter.
Author's Response: :) I appreciate you saying it.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Charles
It was great that Jade put Joan in her place about The boys.
Very sad about Charles.
Great chapter
Author's Response: Someone needed to tell that to Joan. In a sense Charles saved Ryan's life twice before he died.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:51 AM · On: A Star is Born
The sex is great.
I'm glad Ryan and Gus get along.
Love and kisses
Author's Response: I have to write some sex scenes since you girls love them so much :D As one of the oldest in his family Ryan knows how to deal with kids really well. Love and kisses back.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy
Love this story.
Hugs and kisses for you and the hamster.
Author's Response: :) Thank you and the hamster is blowing you kisses.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:56 AM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA
i love it
Author's Response: :D thank you much
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA
omfg!! i don't know what to say. you are so sneaky. that was priceless. that's why you are the master. i just loved this chapter of retribution. don't mess with the boys they will get you every time. sooooo good. lol
Author's Response: I just woke up from a long sleep and had to answer my review comments. Yours waited the longest and I'm sorry for the delay but I was wiped out. Threatening them or their family is a sure fire way to get the wrath of Brian and Justin on your head. In the past Craig was ignored but not this time. Love you Brian for reading and commenting and best of luck with Boston my man.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA
Wicked, wicked. This went down even better than I could have expected. I can just imagine what would Craig have said if he ever learned his assistant manager was gay. Hopefully there is no way the Craig can find out who's responsible for his down fall. Alls well that ends well!
Author's Response: Craig will never find out and if he did there isn't anything he could do about it with no evidence to back it up. Next to bashing Michael, slamming Craig is my guilty pleasure. Love you for reading and commenting very much.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Hot Stuff in Pittsburgh PA
life in prison for arson? With no parole? Was anyone killed in the fire?
I guess this is a lesson. Don't fuck with Justin or Brian.
Nice to see Molly showing restraint with Joey.
Author's Response: First degree arson with very major damage can earn a life sentence should the court decide the quilty deserves it in some states. Molly wants to be able to see Joey and they will both behave. Thank you for commenting Gina.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Craig
craigs a prick, though I have to say, as a parent, I'd be concerned about my daughter having sex at her age. Did anyone even talk to her about safe sex? Maybe Justin should.
I hope Ryan continues to model. It would be a sin to waste all that gorgeousness.
Author's Response: Craig misunderstood his daughter; she hadn't had major sex yet. Just knew the boy was endowed so to speak and he took it wrong.
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Craig
oh oh trouble in paradise. knew things were too good. need to bump craig off or do some dasterdly thing to him. need him gone. boys need to be left to live their life without that basdtard screwing up everything. good chapter man. lol
Author's Response: Brian and Justin don't take threats lightly and will find a way to save their interests in abundence. Thanks Brian.
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Recovery
i tyhought ryan would be ok as charles body stopped the bullet. this story is vert good all these twists and turns for the unexpected--this is why u r soooo!! good man. lol
Author's Response: Hehehehe Me and the furry hamster aim to please our beloved readers without delays.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Craig
Brian's improved so much, then Michael has to step in and try to spoil it. Michael should have a sign that reads 'open mouth insert foot' How dare he make accusations of that nature, when he's in a much worse position!
Ryan's sooo popular. All the top companies want him!!!!
I'm interested in the plans you've got for Baby brother, Joey, and Molly. Do you suppose you could give Craig the same type ending you gave Ryan's father??? I can see the headlines now "Attempted Murder of Famous Brown's Athletic Model Fouled Once Again - News at 11" hehe.
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Author's Response: Molly deserves to have some happiness too. Trust me YumYum; they thought about taking Craig out and Justin comes up with a better plan. Thank you for reading and commenting; it inspiries me to write for you. The next chapter is well underway.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Recovery
Oh, the life of the Rich and Famous. As Ryan found out it's not all it's cracked up to be. Ryan either has a Guardian Angel watching over him or he's plain lucky. It's a good thing he's got Brian and Justin watching his back.
Brown's Athletic came through...promising to keep Ryan out of the limelight once his contract ended.
Now mom doesn't have to worry about dad showing up and spoiling everything.
Author's Response: Ryan does seem to have an angel on his shoulder indeed. Sad about his father and Charles but at least no one else got hurt badly in the event.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Recovery
Ryan's ok but I didn't think you'd kill one of the stars of the story like that. Still made for a great read JT. I don't blame him for avoiding the public. Get back to work and write more. You have spoiled us to expect a lot from you.
Author's Response: I'm working on it as we write. Thank you so much for all your great chapter comments Jo Ann.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Charles
First you make me love a new character and then you wack em. You are a demon writer JT.
Author's Response: :D
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 05:40 PM · On: A Star is Born
Boy you really write fast. I look away for a few days and three chapters are waiting for me. I wondered if Brian's flu was something else. It's good Gus can visit them for the summer weeks. Brian accepts Ryan inside him and it is hot to read about it. Justin gets a great car too. The automobles at Britin have grown. Fun informative chapter.
Author's Response: LIfe isn't all about dealing with a disease; often it's just normal stuff and sudden problems to deal with for all of us.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Recovery
Nice to see Ryan is ok. I don't blame him for not wanting to be in public.
Author's Response: Things do get better for Ryan; thank you very much for commenting balrogtweety.
Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Recovery
good that ended well and we can go forward again wondering what is next
Author's Response: As one event closes a new pile of shi! comes forward :)
Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Charles
Intense shit here reading on
Author's Response: :D We aim to please you.
Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:04 PM · On: A Star is Born
good details moved in the big house ryan is a media hit which I expected to happen justin gets a benz lucky boy
Author's Response: They are great cars but cost a fortune to have them worked on. Thanks for all the comments Gary.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Recovery
Glad Ryan is ok. I'd be a mess to go through all that drama myself. Take care of yourself Bob, you ain't young anymore you know.
Author's Response: Yes Steve as my body reminds me quite often of that. Thanks for caring.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Charles
Powerful chapter and I'm glad not to wait for the followup.
Author's Response: Glad to make it work for you.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Recovery
A very touching emotional chapter. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you Gina and I hope you like what follows. The hamster's on a roll.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Recovery
i love it
Author's Response: :D Thank you love very much for all your comments.
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Charles
see what happens in chicago!!. hope ryan is ok. has bad luck--high hills deep valleys. glad brian is better. computer crashed. old got a new one. taking a business class for a few weeks--guess you can never have too much knowledge so rob says. lol
Author's Response: Was very tired and had to sleep. Will wake up later, finish reviews and next chapter, Ryan will be ok. Thank you for commenting and sorry about computer brian.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Charles
I guess success comes with troubles. Sorry to see Charles die. But will Ryan be ok? Guess we'll see. Great update.
Author's Response: Charles saved Ryan's life; next chapter underway at this time. Thank you for commenting very much.
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 03:28 AM · On: Charles
very sad story but also beings hiv awarness
i can not wait to read the next chapter of this very good story
i glad gus is staying with brian and justin
i look forward toreading more of this story
Author's Response: Thank you jm c. The next chapter is started already; I had to sleep again.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Charles
i love it
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Charles
i love it
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 01:26 AM · On: A Star is Born
love it
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Charles
OMG! I just caught up on these chapters and WOW! You do know how to create drama! Poor Ryan! That's the second older man to die in his arms. With his life being bigger than life right now, his HIV status, the emotional family shit going on, I hope he doesn't snap. Poor kid, he is after all just a kid! I think some time home, away from everyone (except his two men) is in order. Lots of TCL from B/J is the best medicine.
I have to say though, as I was reading the last chapter, I was wondering if Justin is a tad jealous of Ryan and Brian. But then I realized, I'm the one whose jealous! lol. But seriously, having a friend who was in a poly situation, there was issues of who loves who more. I know our boys are more confident in themselves, and their importance to one another...but still I wonder if that green eyed monster is going to rear his head anytime soon? I'm not sure JT, you really do surprise me with these twists and turns! I LOVE it! lol
This story is progressing so nicely. Lots of surprises, never mundane. I look forward to each reading, wondering what you'l have in store for us next!
Author's Response: Ryan's strong but this will test his inner strength no doubt. Some TLC with B and J is certainly in order next. Brian and Justin are very settled and in love and Ryan is no threat to them; in fact he compliments their love and they can easily center their affection on the young man who can love them both equally. The teasing by Brian and Justin is only that as to who gets loved more. I was wiped out and had to sleep a couple of days again but I'm back and writing the next chapter now. Love you Gina and thank you.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Charles
Ack! Talk about angst. I knew Ryan's father would turn up eventually, but I had no idea how...ugly things would get. To find Charles again only to lose him!!! At least he died a hero. Tell the hamster to get moving, Ryan needs medical attention ...STAT!
Author's Response: Working on it right now. Will post as soon as it's finished and edited. Love you Yummy.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:44 PM · On: A Star is Born
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Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:43 PM · On: A Star is Born
Glad to see that Brian's feeling better and that Gus is at Britin. Ryan's doing very well with his modeling. He may need that Karate to beat off all his fans. Justin seems to have done well for his birthday...maybe Brian should think about buying into a car dealership! LOL.
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Author's Response: They have enough 4 wheel toys for now. One has to have a good car in the winter snow of Pittsburgh. Karate is mostly for body tone so a person with lots of muscles doesn't look like a freak. Love you.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy
The family's moved in and Jade made a hit with Joan. Why do I get the feeling that dear old dad is going to turn up like a bad penny? Hope Brian gets better soon.
Shouldn't the whole family have physicals in case there are any surprises?
Gee, I'm starting to think this family is real!!!
Author's Response: I'm sure they got checked out; don't have to write every little detail or it may get boring. And I think you're psychic about the dad.
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy
wow a dedication to me!! that is so cool-thank you."reading your favorite writer is a pleasure and an indulgance shared my many." this chapter so awesome. hopefully helping and setting up ryan's family won't cause problems down the road. sub-plots shaping up as there could be two or three nefarious people lurking in the shadows. waiting to see how this plays out. so good. lol
Author's Response: Wealthy people have to deal with the snot in their lives from time to time. Mostly I hope to keep the story centered on the three main characters and their journey in life together, and of course dealing with the challenges of being able to actually thrive eventually with HIV, and not just coping with it. Thank you Brian so much for you faithful support.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 06:14 PM · On: A Star is Born
The email feature telling me when you update is great. Really enjoyed this chapter. Finally Justin got to get inside Ryan. I'm sure that made it all the more meaningful.
Author's Response: Ryan was so good on top--Justin didn't mind; however, getting his ass was a priceless birthday gift.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 06:12 PM · On: A Star is Born
Sounds like they have a wonderful family. Great update.
Author's Response: Thank you! And you know how family can be; extended family that is.........
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy
Nice to see Ryan take charge of his family. He's a great kid.
Author's Response: Ryan's going to become an incredible man too.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy
Sounds like all will perhaps work out. I usually don't comment but this story is special and I have to support your effort to educate about HIV in a very entertaining way with fiction. I have learned a lot reading this and should probably get tested again. Keep up the great work Bob.
Author's Response: Hi Steve. Let me just answer this comment for all of them so I can go write the next chapter. Glad to see you reading my word old man. I know it's hard for you to get online and comment and I really appreicate you doing it for this story. With a little luck this will be a very successful piece of work. Please comment again and know I've read all your wonderful reviews Steve.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Family Emergency
The check isn't cashed yet and family needs money. Typical shit indeed.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Rodney
Ryan is such a wonderful boy and so sensitive to help Rodney like that. Few would have the skill or courage to deal with it especially for a stranger you don't know.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Ryan makes Three
Sounds like a match made in gay heaven for everybody.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve
Very complex and powerful chapter. Gays do this for real and not give HIV knowlingly so much but do the military talk.
Author's Response: Yeah Steve, I know and I've seen it. That's why I used it in the story. Thanks for all your comments man. And no one gave anyone HIV, Michael blindly walked into it. If I tell you to swallow seed and become a whore will you listen to me? Why would Michael do that unless subconscioiusly he wanted to be a whore and even punish himself for trying to hurt Brian and Justin? He knew better.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Saving Private Ryan
I would fiy that boy in the painting to come be with me in a heartbeat. Does someone exist that beautiful for real?
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Rat
Laughed hard at sex with mom on the phone. Funny stuff. Michael needs to be shanked.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:24 PM · On: First Challenges
Thrush is very painful and I remember someone who had it when they had cancer and the chemo wiped out his immune system. Michael won't listen to Ben.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:22 PM · On: The Journey Begins
Sort of a transisition chapter in a way. Good Brian went back to the dr.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:21 PM · On: The Group
Excellent insight on HIV in the gay world and the apathy and loathing of others.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Grief and Denial
Striking contast between B and J with HIV and AIDS. Informative too on emotional effects of the disease.
Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:20 PM · On: June 1, 2005
Very intense writing bob. I've already read the chapters but going back to comment for you.
Author's Response: Thanks my friend.
Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy
brians ok incest and hiv equals vomit ryan gets wheels every boys dream fun reading want more
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Family Emergency
I have seen people on public support lose it all for drug charges. That is real in the USA got to see how Brian is
Author's Response: yep
Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Rodney
that was heavy man
Author's Response: Dying has that effect on people.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy
So much interesting details you write. Cam sounds like scum. In an AU story you would probably take him out ;-)
Author's Response: You know me too well.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Family Emergency
Great chapter. I have to keep reading to learn how Brian is.
Author's Response: Ok
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy
i love it
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Busy-Busy-Busy
It's so nice that Ryan's family is helping Joan. I hope Cam or Ryans father doesn't show up.
Nice to see Deb taking care of Brian. Great update.
Author's Response: Often putting family's in need together is the solution to several problems at once. Brian saw that formula and put it into action. Debbie loves Brian very much and always has. They have a very long history together as you know. Thank you so much for reading and commenting Gina. I hope you and yours are well.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Family Emergency
Brian is very generous with those he loves.
Love the story.
Author's Response: Brian is a manager and fixes problems. Yes, he can be very generous too if he feels like it. Love you for reading and commenting Lorie.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Rodney
Great chapter.
Ryan did a very sweet and caring thing with Rodney.
Love and kisses.
Author's Response: Ryan's very sensitive and can read people's feelings. He's a real sweet-heart, and much more than just another pretty face. Love and kisses back.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Ryan makes Three
Love Ted.
Love Emmett.
Ryan seems like a sweet kid.
Love the story.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter and story; I'm still building up the plot.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve
Strange chapter. Since I have read all of your stories, I was able to figure out the meanings.
Is Michael so stupid that he doesn't know what they are saying or does he know and not care?
Love you and the hamster.
Author's Response: Michael could be smart enough if he would only listen but often he's dumb as a sack of rocks. As to his state of caring; he only cares about himself and soon every not that. Love you more.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Saving Private Ryan
I would love to slap Michael. He is such a prick. I'm glad that Ben is leaving him. Great writing. XXXOOO
Author's Response: Usually Michael is a villian in my stories. I despise him to no end for hurting Justin; well thats just me.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Rat
Justin talking to his mom while riding Brian hilarious.
What Michael did to his 'best friend' and his own mother was horrid.
Great chapter. Love and kisses.
Yes I'm an RN. I do private duty pediatric home care. I have been with the same child for almost six years.
Author's Response: Michael's actions were all too typical of many who learn someone has HIV or AIDS. They blow it way out of proportion and stir shit just to smell it stink.
I honor you for such a noble profession. I was a junior paramedic for nearly 8 years in California on a private ambulance and did many shifts without pay in the ER.
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Family Emergency
leave it to brian to fix everything. that's what he does for his friends and family. ryan is his family now. hope this setback on his health is short-lived. good chapter connecting families together. lol
Author's Response: Brian will bounce back and it wasn't the flu; answer in chapter 13 now being written after I catch up on review comments/answers.
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 07:08 AM · On: Family Emergency
sad but great story
i sad vic lover passaway i glad ryan was with him at the end snd also it was
very nice of brian to buy ryan's mom a home
i hope brian gets better soon
i can not wait to read the nezt chapter of this great story
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting jm c
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Family Emergency
Hope Brian gets better. Ryan sure loves his family. He definitely is a Godsend.
Author's Response: Brian will be in top form by chapter 13. Ryan is a real angel. Love you for commenting.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Rodney
Nice to see Ryan taking care of Rodney in his last moments. He's definitely an Angel.
Author's Response: I couldn't agree with you more.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Ryan makes Three
I'm glad everything is settled with Ryan. It's amazing that Brian accepted Ryan. Great update.
Author's Response: Why wouldn't Brian accept Ryan? Because he infected Justin? Gay men don't blame each other like that usually. Shit just happens and life is too short to stay mad. It helps that Ryan is so beautiful, and wants Brian who has AIDS. It's not like he still has all of Pittsburgh to bang anymore. Ryan compliments the love of Brian and Justin without being a threat to them.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Family Emergency
i love it
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 01:49 AM · On: Rodney
ilove it
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Family Emergency
Don't it figure. You make some money, and the family comes crawling out of the wood work. Where was his mother when he was in the streets? Brian is too good. I would have left them rot. lol. See, I got a mean streak too. :-)
I hope Brian is ok! I hate that he's sick. He carries the burden of everyone, and is the sickest. but Justin will take good care of him.
Author's Response: Funny how money makes that happen, huh? :) Ryan's father threw him out and his mother couldn't stop it. Brian didn't want Ryan to trash his trust fund saving his family and he needed to help Joan, so he killed two birds with one stone. Brian will recover better than ever.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Rodney
I feel so bad for Rodney, I always liked him. I am so happy the boys were there for him.
Looks like the 'toy boy' is now a milionaire! Love it! on to next chapter....
Author's Response: Exclusive modeling contracts can pay that much and much more. Ryan is that beautiful and he needs to cash in on that beauty until it's gone. Since he had the connection with Brian and Kinnetik he got his big break. Not that fantastical really; it happens to people all the time.
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Rodney
wonderful chapter. i'm just a mess reading stuff like this--what can i say i'm just a sappy little gay boy. brian comes to the fore as he usually does for his friends. rodney had a little peace before he went. on a brighter note--yup rob will go with me if i move. he has bucks and can work anywhere as he is free-lance. lol
Author's Response: Cool! You're the 100th reviewer for this story and the next chapter is dedicated to you Brian. I'm glad it's such a great reader and reviewer like yourself that got it.
Rob sounds wonderful man. I've had poor lovers, and rich lovers, and I have to say the men with dough were a lot more fun :) and usually much smarter which I liked as much as the endowment they had :P
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Family Emergency
You and the little hampster have been working overtime!!! Rodney gets a nice send-off. Brian's mother gets new neighbors. Brian gets sick and ends up in the hospital. Drama galore! Will Michael show up, high as a kite? Whinning, "He's my bestest friend you can't let him die!" Hysterics much! GAG!
I love Drama and happy endings and you always supply both.
Author's Response: Very little about Michael will be in this story. He's scum, and not at all on par to the boys anymore. He really shit in his messkit and there's no going back this time. There is much more to happen in the coming chapters. As I said before; we know where this story is going; the trick is deciding how to organized the events for best entertainment. Almost every event comes from a personal memory or one from someone I once knew. Love you girl!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Rodney
Poor Molly, unrequited love! The parts about Rodney brought tears to my eyes. Thank goodness Brian can afford to make his last hours comfortable. I can imagine how shocked Brian was hearing that it was cancer not AIDs.
Ryan has such a kind heart, I hope he doesn't lose it.
Author's Response: No amount of success or fame can change the inner strength and beauty of Ryan. This is why he totally compliments the love of Brian and Justin and they fit together so well. Actually Ryan is a combination of many very beautiful people I've known in my lifetime making him a true treasury and gift to humanity.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Rodney
OMG! What an ending you wrote. I'm so taken by Ryan I can't express my feelings. I'm wiping a tear from my eye. If I had to go that would be the best way to do it.
Author's Response:
Ryan's beauty on the outside is only exceeded by his beauty on the inside. With Brian and Ryan's help, Rodney was made as comfortable and happy as he could possibly be at such a time.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Ryan makes Three
It is so nice they found each other. Ryan is very lucky to belong to Brian and Justin, and they are very blessed to have Ryan. You write such love in your stories JT and they always balance the dark parts out. I see you just posted a new chapter.
Author's Response: Brian and Justin have plenty enough love to add one more very special young man who has captured their hearts, and Brian sees major dollar signs with him at Kinnetik Advertising. He's so pretty it hurts to look at him.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Ryan makes Three
Ryan took it much better then I thought he would. Brian's alway been one to help someone. Gettin Ryan into school and modeling jobs, that boy has sure lucked up.
Ben deserves a reward for calming Deb,Jennifer & Molly down and explaining the facts of gay life. Great job there.
I wonder how Michael's going to feel once the light clicks on. I can here him on a whining jag of all times. Oh, and it not his fault. It never is.
I'm wondering what you have planned when Linds & Mel find out. There are just so many posibilities and I can't wait to see what you decide.
Magnificent
Author's Response: Usually young people handle the news of HIV better since they mostly haven't seen anyone die from it. The older men remember when it was a death sentence to get HIV with no hope to live and a horrible way to die. They take the news very hard at first. Mel and Linds will soon come into the picture. They only just found out since Ben started divorce proceedings with Mel as his attorney in Canada.
Thank you YumYum for all your wonderful comments and being a reader.
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Ryan makes Three
bright future for ryan. just hope brian's progress gets better as well as his health. he's the one i worry about the most. story getting interesting now as to where everyone's life is going. still waiting for results from boston. 9 people are being considered. will probably find out by christmas, hopefully. maybe i'm too young and not enough experience, but i am a freakin smart dude or so my co-workers say. i have confidence in my work and hope they see my work in a positive light. wish me luck. lol
Author's Response: Glad you like the direction of the story Brian. Be assured that Brian will recover in time. Sounds like you have a great chance to get the Boston promotion. You have to be good if they looked at you seriously at all. Will it separate you from Rob? Are you going to have a long distance relationship if you go? I admire you and all creative people very much. You guys make the world more beautiful and interesting. I wish you all the luck in the world. Keep me informed buddy.
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Ryan makes Three
JT I love this, you know what they say about adding a little mix flavor in the mix niceeeeee. OH and you fuck michael over real good. love you
Author's Response: Actually Michael sunk his own battleship. Ryan could make straight men think twice he's so special and attractive. Ryan will be a major character during the rest of the story. Thank you for commenting meme.
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve
way to go!! mr. michael finally got what he deserved. ben rocks. good chapter. lol
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed sweet revenge which is best served by nuclear twink torpedos that a stupid gay man can't resist :) That was enough crap for a while; good times in the next few chapters.
Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Ryan makes Three
three hot beautiful guys in love what more could a reader ask for thanks for the quick updates
Author's Response: The hamster and I are having a ball creating this novel for all of you. Thanks for your chapter comments Gary very much.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Ryan makes Three
ilove it
Author's Response: :) Thank you Rainbow
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Ryan makes Three
Loving Ryan...Hot chapter.
Author's Response: Usually I don't get turned on by gay cartoon characters but I'll make an exception for Ryan :P
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Saving Private Ryan
sorry man! guess my attempt at levity on le cage was crass.
Author's Response: Not at all Brian! No problem; I just wanted to make sure you knew I had no plans to see a wonderful boy like Ryan get used in any way at all. He deserves to get the best treatment life has to offer him. Thanks for commenting and being a loyal fan; I cherish you man.
Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve
Michael deserved what happened to him. I’m so happy with this treatment. I saw the code, it was so obvious but Michael is so stupid... And yet, he knows. At least, he should know. He lives with a wonderful man with HIV, he knows that Brian and Justin are also infected. No, his brain is completely sealed.
I love the military language too. It’s a great idea... And concerning this matter, to answer your comment, the French Air Force General Tomas warns Admiral Bob that any interference in my pants will be taken as a declaration of war and any assailant of that Territory will be subject to Force de Frappe ;) :P
Love you
Author's Response: LMAO! Since my ship's canon can't reach the southern coast of France Tomas's territory is quite safe from me; however, you may from time to time be subjected to harmless intercontinential flirting :)
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve
Thanks for explaining that to me. I don't know gay code, but reading back, I see where there were many clues Michael should have picked up on. And bottom line, it was 'his' decision. Like you said, his backroom slutting was stupid and dangerous. And I should have expected this. lol You were never a Michael fan, Can't say I blame you. I wasn't critizing, really, I was questioning. I agree Michael deserves what he gets. He's a selfish prick that could have ruined Brian's life. And he lives and an HIV guy, he should know better.
Author's Response: The code is pretty much a guy thing; straight or gay. And yes Michael knew better but didn't behave to protect himself. Glad you're enjoying the story and commenting. I hope you're sleeping better, your son is recovering, and I get hear from you as the chapters continue. I really do appreciate all you have told me.
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve
Michael is so stupid! He was married to a man with HIV and was still dumb enough to swallow? Couldn't he hear them telling him over and over he was headed to distaster? Maybe he felt he deserved to be punished and accepted it cheerfully.
Ben was smart to let him go. He's too good for Michael anyway. I always thought that on the show. I love how they intend to help Ryan. He brings a new beauty to your story and he's so sweet and kind. I am really loving this one JT and hope you update real soon for me.
Author's Response: Next chapter just got posted. Michael never was the brightest lamp on the porch :)
Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Saving Private Ryan
Ryan is such a sweet kid. Brian and Justin are wonderful not to blame him or hold it against him for infecting Justin. I see a new major character in the story now which should be a lot of fun to read about.
Author's Response: Yes, Ryan is a new major character which will greatly inrich Brian and Justin's life for the better.
Reviewer: Gary (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve
I never review (lazy) but this is a great story
Everyone knows the code if he has a brain and michael is such an idiot
they set him up and he walked right into it
very powerful writing man
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve
you live by the ??? and you die by the ??? sad
Author's Response: true
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Innocent Ensign Ryan called to Serve
Oh that's so harsh even for Michael! And I can't stand him! Can he get HIV from swallowing the boy? Is that Brian's intention? I hope not.
Love Ben...hes a doll. Another great update.
Author's Response:
If a 36 year old gay man doesn't know and follow the code, that's on him. Once he lost the protection of Ben, and Brian's friendship he was doomed.
How many times was Michael warned of his situation of great danger? Did he not pay himself for his hot glowing trick that was clearly too hot to be real?
Here are just some of the code again telling Michael what was the score. Besides when gay men talk code, it's very serious and he should have seen that too.
damn you got a really big mouth. Can I fill it up for you?" (initial warning of revenge)
You have to swallow our secrets Michael. (their secret is HIV-he doesn't have to accept the suggestion)
"Do I have your permission to make sure you kept it in your mouth and swallow first?" (Michael accepts the command to swallow hot seed)
"Don't blame me when it hits you Michael." (bartender warns him too)
"You have to down it all at once Michael." (pay back is all at once and fast)
the hottest thing in the bar tonight; a real smoking twink if I say so myself.
Reactor; (what call boy would be named reactor as in nuclear reactor…duh!)
"Reactor's a professional call boy for the very wealthy Michael. He's offering you his AM or FM love tonight." Brian told him. (AM or FM….as in radio….active)
"Will you forgive me Brian? I'm really sorry man."
"Yes you really are Michael; own your life you're forgiven by me. Here's 6 hundred, a deserved gift so you can have a deserved meal tonight. Feel that boy's hot torpedo Michael." (deserved meal of poison, torpedo is a weapon)
"Take Michael and his glowing hot sperm date to the office and stay with them. Make sure he gets his money's worth, all of it." Next Brian whispered into Michael's ear. "For your just magical reward, eat all of him. You'll be blessed as you deserve by the rarest glowing hot boy sweetness on earth." (glowing hot sperm date..as in radioactive glowing hot)
"Have you had him Brian?"
"I'll get seconds; you first just so you know I don't harbor any feelings for you at all."
"Torpedo loading; safe...lead off, maximum yield set free" (the weapon is in his mouth, no one is protecting Michael now, he will be abandon by his protectors to be free sex in public)
"Stand by Officer of the Watch" Ryan whispered to the guard. "Novanty; your Navy career ends now. Torpedo Away!" (dishonorable discharge from the Gay Navy of the upper class)
Did you swallow their secrets forever?" The guard asked him. (Did you swallow their HIV?)
"Remember this day and how you paid me for it." Then Ryan quickly left the room and went down stairs to join Brian and Justin, and to leave the bar.
Michael was told over and over he was being set up, the boy was positive, and he still chose to accept the bead and his punishment. Only a total fool would not see this coming, and someone with no remorse who should expect to be punished for his actions.
Both Brian and Ben gave him the money and thus financed his punishment but it was Michael's decision to follow his lust and get punished.
What Michael did to Brian could have cost him his life but this was a lesser sentence in comparison.
Swallowing infected seed is very high risk but not 100% certain of infection.
Swallowing a dozen more men that night in the back room raised his odds however. And when Michael returns to Babylon, he will continue to be another bottom feeder in the back room totally shamed from that day forward, and no longer an Admiral's wife or best friend to another Admiral.
By the way Ryan is totally innocent. He's too young to know the code yet, and doesn't know his positive. If there's any guilt for doing this to Michael it's shared by Brian and Ben equally who both decided on his punishment of foxtrot thermonuclear gift. (fos-cute twink, trot-date, thermonuclear-HIV+, gift-payback)
Nothing like this will happen again in the novel.
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