Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 09:04 AM · On: Showing the house to the boys
Love it..
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 08:10 AM · On: Mel and Lindz
I still do not trust Lindsey
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 08:25 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
That’s really good, I hope the boys settle in and enjoy living there. The boys really thought of everything they could to make them comfortable there.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 05:43 PM · On: The party
Sigh, that was beautiful they truly had an amazing wedding. Those guys deserv to be happy.
Beautiful work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 11:15 AM · On: The wedding
Wow wow wow happy tears to infinity. That was more than perfect, their wedding was spectacular you should be so proud of yourself with this. I didn’t want this to end.
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 10:59 AM · On: The night before the wedding
That was a brilliant night before the wedding both boys have great friends so this was perfect for them.
Beautifully written x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 10:12 AM · On: The Manor of his dreams
Justin really is great for doing that for the boys so I hope they get approved to have them.
Charlie really was disappointed wasn’t she lol but sorry girl aBruan loves only one that’s Justin.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 10:12 AM · On: The Manor of his dreams
Justin really is great for doing that for the boys so I hope they get approved to have them.
Charlie really was disappointed wasn’t she lol but sorry girl aBruan loves only one that’s Justin.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 08:45 AM · On: Ghosts from the past
Wow what a chapter, that was some news from Joan wasn’t it. I’m sure the boys will do fine if they ge the boys and it will be a loving caring home for them. Lol Ethan really was surprised wasn’t he lol
can’t wait for more x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2018 01:00 PM · On: What to call Justin
Awe man my heart melted with Gus doing that he truly is a wonderful child and Justin will be a great pops xx
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2018 08:38 AM · On: Best man
Ted really is a good friend to Brian and he needs that right now. I’m so glad they asked their moms to do that such a sweet moment 💕
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 08:35 PM · On: Mel and Lindz
Brian needed to do that didn’t he. For to long they have just assumed he didn’t care and couldn’t be hurt but can and he has a heart he proved that by telling Justin that he loved him.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 09:38 AM · On: Mikey's reaction
My heart broke for Brian reading this. It must have been so difficult to have to tell Micheal a few home truths about his feelings and how the way Micheal has treated him made him feel. His trust and heart was bruised by him. I hope in time those bruises will heal and the close friendship can be saved.
Powerful and and beautifully written x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2018 07:28 AM · On: Rehersal dinner
Loved it, Lindz and Micheals reaction was just as I thought it would be. They need to buy a clue don’t they.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2018 06:52 AM · On: The Meeting
Love the name of the art gallery and the reaction of Mel lol that was brilliant
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 05:31 PM · On: The morning after
Awe Brian is so great here I love seeing him like this.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 11:44 AM · On: Don't push
I loved this conversation between them so much heart. Thank you for this m.
Brilliant work x
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 01:56 AM · On: Showing the house to the boys
John has his uncle's snart, I think it will take a while but I think Justin will reach them, then Brian. I think being brought up by Claire was a whole lot like Brian and Joan,kinda living in the same house but no attention really sounds like Claire learned to be mother from Joan and she wasn't very good at it
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 11:53 PM · On: The party
Daphe's speech was so cute and Jen's so loving. Ted called it right Brian was the last to know he loved Justin-Debbie's pure Deb. Dancing to their song just let everyone know how much in love they were
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 09:43 PM · On: The wedding
Wedding scene written so beautifulf. The men both of them wanted this so badly, fresh start with mikey and Linz behaving so far
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 04:27 AM · On: The night before the wedding
Was happy Ted and Em kept Brian company knowing he would be a loss ends without his Sunshine.Justin had Daph to be with him incase the nerves set in. Big day tomorow
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 04:09 AM · On: The Manor of his dreams
Guess Charlie Brown was tad disappointed, was thrilled Leo is so supportive of Brian and so taken with Justin's artwork. Brian seemed totally pleased by Justin's action of taking charge and making John and Peter feel welcome by doing a room he felt they would like
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:44 AM · On: Ghosts from the past
Joan's visit is always an experience Brian could do without-loved Justin's sarcasm with Joan and ''Ian'',I'm glad the men are going to help John and Peter, talk about an up hill battle! As for Ian. it's past time to take out the trash!!
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:37 AM · On: What to call Justin
Well, Gus has his Pops! Litte devil tries to see get a milkeshake out of Pops--it didn't work but Gus was just happy to be with daddy and pops. Gus is the sweetest character.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:32 AM · On: Best man
So glad Ted will Brian's bestman and was very happy Deb was going to give Brian away even after she was told of his visit to Justin.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:25 AM · On: Mel and Lindz
Linz like mikey plays Brian, very bad idea, I'm not sure I believe in Linz's new atitude,and then there is Gus, who loves his daddy with everything he has and his love for Justin is so sweet and that he wants Justin to be his second daddy will have Justin's heart in his throat.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:20 AM · On: Mikey's reaction
mikey has no sense of reality--he's child like and quiet use to people giving in--I blame Deb, she never made him responsible for his actions, it was always someone else's fault.What he said to Justin was awful and I was glad Brian overheard it and called him on his 'actions. I could never understand him having a key to Brian's loft he was a voyeur.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:12 AM · On: Rehersal dinner
After telling everyone at the dinner their plans of course mikey and Linz are not happy, but who cares it's not their life. How Brian and Justin chose to live their life is no ones business and Brian says as much.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:08 AM · On: The Meeting
Ted has become a good friend to Brian, better than mikey. Mel has realize how deep Brian's feelings for Justin go. But by changeing the names, the will, p.o.a.'s,etc. Mel sees how important and how deeply the couple love each other.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:03 AM · On: The morning after
I'm so glad B & J have learn to communicate (ok Justin knew Brian was a little slower) They seem to be moving ahead with Ted's and Mel's help.I actually like Melin this story
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 02:36 AM · On: Don't push
I can't tell you how many times I've read your story and the follow up, I'm ashamed to say I didn't review. I always felt my review wouldn't be smart enough to do justice to your writing. After years of reading I decided it wasn't fair not to review and tell how much I enjoyed your storys--so I'm re reading a lot because you are one of my favorites and you deserve to know how much pleasure you have given me. This chapter always amazed me unlike the series Brian didn't throw Justin off the cliff, he late him stay and wanted to marry him---you got it right,Cowlip screwed up.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:30 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
No honeymoon?
Author's Response: Not at this time, later :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:28 PM · On: The party
Beautiful reception
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:27 PM · On: The night before the wedding
The night before the wedding. At least Mikey isn't there trying to get Brian to trick.
Author's Response: I think Ben might be physically sitting on him :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:26 PM · On: The Manor of his dreams
Leo Brown and family will be attending the wedding. How sweet that they are fixing up rooms for Brian's nephews.
Author's Response: They will :)
They decided to take them in, that means they will make a home for them! :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:25 PM · On: Ghosts from the past
So mother Kinney and Ethan both learn the news. Why is it not surprising that Claire is losing custody of her sons?
Author's Response: They do, do you think they were happy? ;)
Claire is totally unfit as a mother!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:21 PM · On: What to call Justin
So Justin has a new name. News of the wedding should spread fast now that everyone in the diner knows.
Author's Response: He does, and it should :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:20 PM · On: Best man
You picked the perfect best 'men'. I'm glad that Deb is finally seeing Michael for the twit that he is.
Author's Response: Thanks, I thought so too. Deb has blinders where her son is concerned, but she's not actually stupid
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:17 PM · On: Mel and Lindz
Awe, Lindsay came around. Shame Mike can't or won't. Someone should do a grouping of all the Clueless Michael pictures.
Author's Response: She might be a manipulative twat, but she's not stupid. Micheal on the other hand is stupid, but he thinks he's always right and that he knows everything about Brian better than anybody else, including Brian.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:13 PM · On: Mikey's reaction
You nailed this one on the head. Glad Brian took his key back.
Author's Response: Thank you! He should have taken his key back years ago, as soon as Justin had one, Michael didn't need one anymore!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:03 PM · On: Rehersal dinner
Lindsay personifies the name dumb blonde. Poor thing she is so confused. Mikey of course is emotionally stunted. It's a wonder Ben stays with him.
Author's Response: Lindsay is a twat, there I said it, and manipulative! I have always wondered why two intelligent men like Dr. Dave (he was an ass, but still intelligent) and Professor Ben see in the childish, imature Michael, he's not even cute!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 06:55 PM · On: The Meeting
Love the name you picked for the gallery. Should be canon. Also like that Ted and Melanie are in their corner.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Ted and Melanie doesn't have any 'feelings' in the mix
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 06:48 PM · On: The morning after
This has to be my favorite chapter. Not only does Brian say the L word, they agree to marry and change their names. They also decide to share everything! Hurray.
Author's Response: Thank you :) If Brian does something he does it all the way!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 05:38 PM · On: Don't push
Now why didn't they have this discussion on the show.
Author's Response: Because CowLip lives vicariously through Brian ;) They wanted him to be 'free' to fuck around
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2015 09:18 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
This is just how it could have been, finally letting Brian and Justin have their "happily ever after". I'm sure we would have all felt a lot happier knowing for sure that they had a certain future together and that their love was strong enough to cope with all the obstacles put in their path -just like us fans always knew it would be:-)
Author's Response: Thank you! I always wondered if CowLip missed their youth where they played around, so they lived vicariously through Brian :D
Reviewer: khanspunk (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 02:25 AM · On: Don't push
Look how easy!! Fucking writers! *rolls eyes* We_could _have_had_it_aaall.mp3
Author's Response: Aww, thank you :)
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2013 01:22 AM · On: Showing the house to the boys
Good story! I am glad there is a sequel!
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2013 01:47 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
Great Story!
Reviewer: Ella (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Don't push
so sweet
Author's Response:
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 07:29 AM · On: Ghosts from the past
Ok, I generally love your stories, but the John/Peter thing? Don't think so. It's just all too neat and too sweet for my BJ taste. I mean, I can see the money/company even the name thing, but Brian agreeing to be foster parent of those too? And that fast without a second thought? Sorry, it just seems little bit too far fetched. :/
Author's Response: I'm glad you generally like it :)
It's ok that you don't buy the John/Peter thing, that's your prerogative :)
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 06:30 AM · On: Don't push
"...but my heart wasn't in it." :D lol I smiled so heart my belly hurts!!! I couldn't help but to picture him almost pounting, like a kid or smthg like that. :D
or "Christ Justin, I really fucked you up good, didn't I?" that was a good reaction at Justin's easy over his tricking. Excited about next chapter already. Think I'll finish this before morning class. :) Continue pls :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so very happy you like this. THis is actually one of my finished stories, and the sequel is finished too :D
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
I didn't realize this was the last chapter. This was perhaps one of your fiirst stories as I see your writing has changed since then perhaps (for the better). The plot idea was perfect as how they ended it was dumb. You're a very good writer with wit and humor at all the right places. Yes you have some typos but so do my stories so I'm in no position to be picky.
I enjoyed this story very much and I'm going to go read "Married at Last" now to follow up. Thanks for a great read Edom.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I do think/hope that my writing has gotten better, the first chapter of this story was the first thing I ever wrote!
I hope you'll like the sequel too :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
Yeah, raw is so much better; you got that right.
Author's Response: Yeah, now on to the sequel ;)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:42 PM · On: The party
The speaches were excellent. The ending dance a great touch to remember.
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:36 PM · On: The wedding
Great wedding scene; Babylon was perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Hope you'll like the party.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:14 PM · On: The night before the wedding
Hummm...I foresee a lamp post start perhaps. Well, that's how I'd write it. I like how you use canon without repeating it. We already know it. Well done.
Author's Response: You'll see :)
Thank you so much.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:07 PM · On: The Manor of his dreams
Justin is so thoughtful; creating the boy's rooms. Saying apart the night before is good luck for a marriage before the wedding; nice touch.
Author's Response: Justin is thoughtful :)
It is, thank you :D
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Ghosts from the past
Taking in the boys is that shoe I was expecting. Now Craig could be the other one. hehehehe
I love leaving reviews and raising your count and stars.
Not enough people leave reviews without blackmail (withholding chapters until they give you a review, etc.)
Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you liked my little surprise.
I love getting reviews and I do try to leave them too.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:39 PM · On: What to call Justin
Pops, how cute that is. Why do I expect a shoe to fall soon?
Author's Response: Thanks, I thought so.
You just have to keep reading :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Best man
"He always does." That line was loaded! Ted was the perfect choice.
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Yeah, he was :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Mel and Lindz
Well done. One more small typo: losing not loosing (just in case you might want to fix it). Love the story.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll look at it :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Mikey's reaction
Michael can be so stupid.
Author's Response: That he can :)
Thanks.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Rehersal dinner
I hate to be the grammar Nazi but it's bid not bit. I loved the exchange with the IC of Lindsay and Michael so open and raw.
Author's Response: Yeah, this story was from before I got my beta. I suspect there are a lot more mistakes.
I'm glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:03 PM · On: The Meeting
I like the gallery's name. I'm loving your take on season six very much.
Author's Response: Thanks, I thought it was a great idea for a name :)
Thank you so much.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:58 PM · On: The morning after
Great chapter. Gotta read more now.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Don't push
That is how Cowlip should have ended the story. WELL DONE!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
Do you know that there is a sequel? 'Married at last'
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Showing the house to the boys
I loved this story! It isn't my first time reading it, but since you finished Married at last, I thought I would re-read it and then re-read Married at Last. I love your stories and I look forward to reading more your stories. XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate that. I'ts always nice to hear that people enjoy my work.
Reviewer: sunshineface (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
Oh Married at last! How romantic this fantastic wedding is!
Author's Response: Thank you. Have you read the sequel? It's actuall called 'Married at last'.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2008 12:55 AM · On: Showing the house to the boys
This story was wonderful! Its what I wanted for Brian and Justin's show ending. The wedding was amazing, the first part was awesome...the recreation of their first meeting. Very clever and very B/J. Off to read the sequel!
Author's Response: Thanks Kat. I hope you like the sequel too.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 02:32 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
how sweet your story, love it!!!!!! this should be the real ending of brian and justin's love story. thanks!!!
Author's Response: You're welcome. Have you read the sequel?
Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2008 03:33 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
This was great on to the next ..sequal...hugs
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hop you enjoy the sequel.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2008 06:03 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
great story... I will immediately read the sequel.... thanks :-) rose
Author's Response: Thank you Rose. I hope you like the sequel too. Mia
Reviewer: TayTay4936 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2008 08:56 PM · On: Showing the house to the boys
Hey. I LOVE all of your stories, especially this one! I was wondering if you'd like a beta. I'd love to help you! Let me know. Thanks!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I might like a beta, thank you for offering.
Reviewer: Tammie (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2008 01:49 AM · On: Showing the house to the boys
this was wonderful, cant wait for the married at last story
Author's Response: I hope you like the story so far.
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2008 02:41 AM · On: The party
another great chapter, the speeches were great, I really love this story
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2008 09:48 PM · On: The party
OMG. it was so sentimental that i have tears runnign down my cheeks. the last two chapters were beautiful. the special touch before the wedding was nice. this is a wonderful story. now we'll get to see how john and peter react to it all. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you, I hope I can make their reactions beliveable.
Reviewer: Tammie (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2008 04:51 PM · On: The wedding
that was beautiful and perfect
Author's Response: Thank you so much Tammie, that means a lot to me.
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