Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2019 11:59 AM · On: Part 4
I’m so glad they had that heart to heart and that Justin took a chance with him. They are meant to be aren’t they. However I’m worried about Brian’s last words in this chapter I hope it’s not bad news 😟
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 12:09 AM · On: Part 4
lol now what. he's going to throw him away of course for the company and crappy
Reviewer: Gemstones (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 02:29 AM · On: Part 4
Brilliant!!! Love it! And i especially love the clippings! Hope more Stories to come from you! AU ones would be nice! X
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Part 4
Great, until the end. I'm still betting on a happy ending though! :)
Author's Response: I wouldn't write anything else, trust me!
Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Part 4
"If I had known, I never would have fucked you" Oh my god! How could you end the chapter like that?? Is this means Brian's gonna back off and...? No! That can't possibly be, huh?! Right?! **Read again the chapter** Noooooo... **chuckles** You wouldn't, would you!?
Author's Response: "Oh my god! How could you end the chapter like that??" I know!!! I'm evil :( But that was too good to pass :p
Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Part 4
The flashback was brilliant. Great Brian and Justin talking and very hot sex scene. You can almost feel Brian's releif at finding someone he wants to see again, then that last sentence just throws cold water over it! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the flashback. I'm always trying to not write flashbacks because sometimes readers get lost in the middle, forgetting what was the point of it, lol. But I realize I can't help myself. Most of the time, it's also the better way to explain why a character reacts this or that way to a person, an event. It's easier to write a scene 'showing' the why, than to have the character verbally explain to someone else why he is like he is. At least, it is for me :)
I'm glad you still like this story and that you're looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for your comment :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Part 4
You know I like this version way better than the filmed version. Why oh why couldn't you have been one of the writers for the show. Now about that last line. So classically Brian. At least how I remember him. Now I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out what happens next. So many possibilities.
Author's Response: Thank you! But I'm not sure I would have been a good writer. I would probably have messed up with B/J's storyline a lot more :(
Anyway! Yeah, the last line was a killer line, and I hate when writers are doing something like that, lol. that's why I stopped reading WIPs. It was too difficult to wait (sometimes looong months) for the next chapter. But honestly, I love it when everything is not perfect. And it was really too tempting to end the chapter like this ;) I hope you won't be disapointed with the 'possibility' I chose for B/J :)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Part 4
I spent hours yesterday trying to find this story elswhere so that I could read. Shoot, didn't find. So, I'll patiently wait for the next chapter...well, I'll try...
Really enjoy this fic, it's very well written and love the plot.
Author's Response: Your waiting is over. Part 5 has been poste!
Thank you for loving this story and saying so :)
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Part 4
lovely chapter. now all that's left is for brian to decide which he wants more a new intern or a new lover. if he's smart he'll have both.
Author's Response: Thank you :) The only question you have to ask is "What would Brian do to have Justin in his life?" ;)
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Part 4
way to end the chapter. the rest was hot :-)) rose
Author's Response: Yeah, I know, but I couldn't resist ending the chapter that way ;) Glad, you find it hot! It was very difficult to write.
Thank you for your comment.
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