Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Something Right
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2021 03:03 PM · On: Epilogue

Loved this story!!   And I'm glad that Justin stood up for Brian to Debbie and Brian stood up for himself with Michael to let him know that he is not the same guy anymore and that he and Justin are happy and together. 

Reviewer: Nanna Nat (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 01:14 PM · On: Epilogue

A terrific read. Thanks for sharing. x

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2019 08:41 PM · On: Epilogue

Seeing it was Thanksgiving today, and after checking the Thanksgiving tags, I chose your story. I wish you would have had your pics uploaded to MW, because they were all gone in your story. Especially, when you pointed out to not read in CSSZen, and they stll weren't there. All that said...

Frickin' Michael. I hate that guy. He never get told to "just shut up!"

I loved your story though. I always enjoy reading a Brian who sees there is more to life than tricking.


HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2019 04:38 PM · On: Epilogue

Love it, great

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2019 12:36 PM · On: Epilogue

Oh wow that was beautiful, I’m so glad for Brian he needs someone good in his life and that is Justin. Please write a sequel to this amazing story 💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2019 12:23 PM · On: Part 5

Lol this was brilliant and so funny. I loved that Jennifer was talking with Brian and didn’t even know it. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2019 11:59 AM · On: Part 4

I’m so glad they had that heart to heart and that Justin took a chance with him. They are meant to be aren’t they. However I’m worried about Brian’s last words in this chapter I hope it’s not bad news 😟

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2019 11:37 AM · On: Part 3

My heart is sad for Brian the way they are treating him bringing Justin to the dinner. Brian is doing his best to find a better way to live to give himself a chance at finding the one. I hope things gets better and Justin gives him a chance. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2019 08:42 AM · On: Part 2

Brian is really captured by Justin isn’t he, I’m excited to see what’s going to happen and what the gang will think of the blond. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2019 08:22 AM · On: Part 1

Oooh very good, I loved The flirty banter between Brian and Justin and can’t wait to find out if this goes anywhere.

Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2018 03:16 AM · On: Epilogue






Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2018 05:35 PM · On: Epilogue

I am so glad for Brian

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2018 05:00 PM · On: Part 3

with friends like this who needs enemys

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 10:27 PM · On: Epilogue

That was a wonderful story.... thank you for sharing it with us

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 06:07 PM · On: Epilogue

This story was a lovely romantic way to start the day. Heading off to work with a smile on my face :-)

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2018 12:51 PM · On: Epilogue

Loved this AU you created. You gave us a kinder, gentler, wiser Brian. You saved our Justin from years of angst and insecurity. I will add this one to my favorites. Nicely done!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2018 10:59 PM · On: Epilogue

This was a great story!!  I love it!!

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2018 05:58 AM · On: Epilogue

Super cute story

Reviewer: TatyBacher (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2017 02:05 PM · On: Epilogue

I really enjoyed reading your story. Thanks for sharing it. <3

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2016 01:02 PM · On: Part 1

Excellent first chapter, I can really feel Brian's pain 

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 05:28 AM · On: Epilogue

Damn Mickey!   Lol.   i would scream sequel

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 04:55 AM · On: Part 5

lol i loved that.   At first i thought she was meeting that little gay dude that hates brian but she met BRIAN so awesome.    love.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2016 12:09 AM · On: Part 4

lol now what.  he's going to throw him away of course for the company and crappy 

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 11:20 PM · On: Part 3

that's always one thing i always hated.  They were supposed to be Brian's friend but they act as if they never knew what he'd gone through as a kid.    Everyone knew but in the end they still chose to treat Brian that way and abuse him emotionally.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 11:09 PM · On: Part 2

oh this is so cute.   but the party Ted knows who justin is.  i guess he'll tell him, then again maybe not.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2016 09:14 AM · On: Part 1

Oh Brian wants to find love.   it's 5 am but i already know i must finish this one.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2016 02:10 PM · On: Epilogue

Lovely story. Great to see Brian not allowing his so called friends to manipulate him into not having the relationship he always craved.

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2015 01:46 AM · On: Epilogue

Dear Alysandra,

I don't know if you are still around sometimes, but if you are: I really enjoyed reading your story. I like it so much when the two of them show each other that they care and don't act horribly cruel and deeply hurt each other. Life could be hard enough, this was something heartwarming. Thank you :-)

Reviewer: 35nanou (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2013 01:19 AM · On: Epilogue

Je viens de finir cette histoire et je la trouve remarquable dans le caractère des personnages, l'histoire et surtout la façon de l'écrire qui est directe, sans ajout à répétition de mots ou d'expressions n'apportant ren de plus à l'histoire.


A bientôt.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 06:55 AM · On: Epilogue

Just read this fic in one sitting and absolutely fell in love with it. It has duly been added to my favorites. Hope you keep writing!

Reviewer: awan_angel (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2012 11:12 PM · On: Epilogue

Hi, my name is Awan, I'm new to this site and still just surfing and picking stories to read.

This one catch my attention and it was sweet. You mix the Canon and your own plot nicely. I like that. Give me some kind of de ja vu.

This is so Brian and Justin, that Brian will probably does all those things--well I can't imagine how will he looks like while shopping and buying condoms at the store. *grin

I'll check your other stories next time I visit this site. I hope you still writing ;)


Reviewer: Gemstones (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 02:29 AM · On: Part 4

Brilliant!!! Love it! And i especially love the clippings! Hope more Stories to come from you! AU ones would be nice! X

Reviewer: Maiqu (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 12:51 PM · On: Epilogue

Absolutely Amazing!!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 02:57 AM · On: Epilogue

This story is selected to be a Best Fan Fiction Classic on Whispers.

Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 12:51 PM · On: Epilogue

OMG! I loved the story! So good. Funny and Brian was Brian, well not completely but at the same time he was. I liked it very much. Thank you! I would love a sequel!!!! And more of your stories like this one. Keep up the good work. Hope to read something from you soon :)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you loved the story and that you found that Brian wasn't too much OOC :)

I'm still writing on another of my stories but since it's far from being over, I don't know when it'll be posted. Sorry :( And... there won't be a sequel for Something More. This was meant to be a short, sweet one. The next one now is rather long (it's half written and I would say it's already 2 (almost 3) times the length of this one) and should be a little more angsty ;)


Thank you for your comment!

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Epilogue

I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing it :o) one of my favs!

Author's Response:

I'm honored! Thank you :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Epilogue

I hope you write another story soon! I'm a sucker for nice stories without a lot of angst! Thanks fro sharing this with us! :)

Author's Response:

I'm writing another story but won't post it until it's finished. And I don't think it'll be finished soon, sorry :( But I'm trying!

Thank you for your comment :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Part 5


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Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Part 4

Great, until the end. I'm still betting on a happy ending though! :)

Author's Response:

I wouldn't write anything else, trust me!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Part 3

Love!! Truly enjoying this story! SO glad I came across it! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Part 2

Absolutely loving it! nice to read a light, fun story! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you Susan :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Part 1

I am SO hooked on this! Really excited it's completed! :)

Author's Response:

I hate it when I start reading a story and after waiting for months for an update, I find out that it'll never be finished. That's why 1) I never read WIP and 2) I'll never post something that is not completed :)

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2010 06:51 AM · On: Epilogue

Great job.

Author's Response:


Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Epilogue

I loved the heartbroken crowd after the confession of Kinney.

And that Mikey, well you really had him as the whinny, annoying, egotistical, self centered, sanctimonious asshole that he seems to be. (I think I am channelling a bit of Brian Kinney here LOL)

This was a great story and I liked the fact that it did not have to much angst involved, I needed something easy and funny to reading today.


Thank you


Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked that story! Thank you for your feedback :)

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Part 1

A very enjoyable story!  Thanks for not abandoning it, and I hope to read more of your B/J work. :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Epilogue

Congrats, that was fun.  I enjoyed it. 

Author's Response:

Thank you Kate! Glad you had some fun reading it :)

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Epilogue

It was well worth the wait for you to finish this one - I awarded it a blue ribbon - it was well written - and a story I completely enjoyed.

Author's Response:

Wow, I'm honored! Thank you a lot for the ribbon, and the praise :) I'll definitely try to finish my other fic!

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Epilogue

**laugh** I really can imagine how hilarious the faces of the patrons were like when Brian said 'we're monogamous and I asked him to move in with me'! I absolutely loved the entire speech of Brian when he told Michael what he needed to because Michael is sooooooo delusional it's more than pathetic sometimes... Anyway, I like the way you write, your style is very interesting and unique and you're really the first to integrate news paper in all the fanfics I read, even thought it was mentionned maybe once or twice very quickly in some of them, in your story it's like an important piece of the plot and something I can easily imagine to be incorporate in 'Queer As Folk: the film' (if it ever comes to this, and how I wish it will...). I hope what I said makes sense because I'm in a rush and I don't have time to re-read it (and, I'm french so it may have big mistakes that I'm not aware of...).

Author's Response:

Well, first of all your english seems fine to me, but since I'm french too, I could be as delusional as Michael ;) Mon anglais en revanche doit probablement être plus que moyen puisque je n'ai pas de beta sous la main pour mes réponses aux commentaires que je reçois...

Bref! Je suis heureuse de savoir que tu as apprécié l'histoire ainsi que les éléments graphiques que j'y ai ajouté. Je pense également qu'ils sont une partie importante de l'histoire. Parfois, une image vaut bien plus que de simples mots. J'aurais probablement eu beaucoup plus de mal à écrire/exprimer ce que je voulais dire si je n'avais utilisé que des mots, et l'impact sur le sujet aurait été moins fort.

Je ne suis pas certaine de bien voir en quoi mon style est 'intéressant et unique', mais c'est une bonne chose, non? Si tout le monde écrivait de la même façon et sur le même sujet, ce serait vite lassant! Et puis bon, c'est sûrement parce que je suis française écrivant en anglais! C'est la 'french touch'!

Merci beaucoup pour ton commentaire, Jessikaa :)

Reviewer: Riggeshh6 (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Part 1

One of the best stories I have read in a very long time. Don't be a stranger, keep up the great work. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Author's Response:

Well, it took me almost 6 months to write this one, and the other one has been started in April 2008. I'll try to not be a stranger, but it still may take some time before you see something else from me ;) Plus, since I really have a hard time writing in english, I really can't start posting what is already written and make the readers wait months before another update. Especially since the place the story is stopped right now would be really hard (and not in a good life affirming kind of way) for most of the readers ;)

I'm really glad you think it's a good story! It's really encouraging! Thanks a lot for your feedback :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Epilogue

I love this story. Maybe you could write a sequel. Your writing is great.

Author's Response:

Well, I was pondering over a sequel when I posted the epilogue, but I don't think there's anything left to write about. No, I think 'Something Right' is meant to be a short story !

I'm glad you liked this story and that you think my writing is great. It's not always easy to 'think french' and 'write english' if you get what I mean. Thanks God for my betas!! and thanks to you for your feedback, Lorie :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Epilogue

What a wonderful epilogue.  Why does everyone get that Brian's changed except Mikey? 


Author's Response:

Because he's pathetic? ;)

Thank you so much for your feedback all along the story :) It means a lot!

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Epilogue

Fantastic! Loved this from beginning to end. Look forward to more from you. xx

Author's Response:

I'm trying to get back to my other fic and I hope to have it finished in the next months. So hopefully, you won't have to wait too long ;)

Thanks a lot for your feedback :)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Epilogue

loved it and will miss it. i hope you're planning on writing more like this.

put michael right in his place. bravo brian. poor ben.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Epilogue

So romantic.  Darn, I wish it was longer, but it's short, sassy, and satisfying.  Loved this fic.

All the best.

Author's Response:

The description you made of this story - romantic, sassy and sastifying - was exactly what I was trying to create when I started the fic! I'm so glad you liked it :)

And I promise next one will be longer. It's only half written but it's already 3 times longer, lol.

Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: GiggleBean (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 05:32 AM · On: Epilogue

liked the story and nice idea with the newspaper articles

Author's Response:

Thank you! I had a lot of fun with that story, writing it and creating those newspaper artciles :)

Reviewer: arsya (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Part 5

Wow, this is good-in life affirming sort of way- ;)

Keep up your good work.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely comment :)

Reviewer: Ela (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Part 5

Not bad. *in a Kinney sense of the phrase*

Author's Response:

*blushes* Thank you!

Reviewer: talm69 (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Part 5

Your story is awesome!! I am lovin' it. Keep up the great writing, I just love your little cliffhangers at the end of the last two chapters :o)

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm not sure there was a cliffhanger at the end of part 5 but I'm glad you liked it anyway, lol.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Part 5

Haha!   This chapter was everything you hinted at and more.  I'm glad to see Brian deciding to take a chance on Love and Justin's thoughts when Brian asked to see him in the office were so funny.  That Justin was able to work up art for the campaign was  just what I liked.  Brian's first meeting with Justin's mom was hilarious, mainly cause I didn't know that was Brian until the tongue 'n cheek moment and then once Gus walked in I was sure.  There is more...right????  Fantabulous chapter!!!!


Author's Response:

I tried to keep secret the fact that it was Brian Jennifer was talking to as long as possible. I wanted it to come as a surprise for the readers :) That's why this part of the story is not from Brian or Justin's POV but from Jen's POV. And yes, you're only sure when Gus walked in, but there's a few hints before that (the tongue in cheek moment of course, but there's also something else shortly before that, lol).

Yes, there's more! An epilogue ;)

Thanks for your comment :)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2010 05:11 AM · On: Part 5

wonderful update. first meeting for jennifer was so tender and sweet. second meeting, sol typical brian.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your comment :) I'm glad you liked that chapter.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 02:36 AM · On: Part 5

great story i can not wait to read the next chapter of this amazing atory

i hope justin's family likes brian and make a commitment to each other

i enjoy this story very much

Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad you enjoy this story :) What kind of commitment you would like to see? The story is completely written but, hey, you never know ;) Thank you :)

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 02:21 AM · On: Part 5

loooooool!!! Loved it ;) More soon please

Author's Response:

Epilogue will be posted on friday :) Thank your for commenting.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Part 5

great update :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Thank you Rose :)

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Part 5

Yay! It was soooooooo funny the way you made Jen and Brian meet like that! And you almost gave me a heart attack at the beginning with Brian saying all those things, you meanie! But... I loved it anyway. =)

Author's Response:

That scene, between Jen and Brian, was begged for by my beta, Tami. She wanted to see them interact and I couldn't think of something. I write this just to have a good laugh with her, thinking that she was going to ask for more details of New Year's Eve at Brian's loft, but she didn't. And I guess we don't need more. We just have to know that Jen is completely smitten with Brian. Who wouldn't ;)

I promise I'm done being meanie! There's just the epilogue left now :)

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Part 4

"If I had known, I never would have fucked you" Oh my god! How could you end the chapter like that?? Is this means Brian's gonna back off and...? No! That can't possibly be, huh?! Right?! **Read again the chapter** Noooooo... **chuckles** You wouldn't, would you!?

Author's Response:

"Oh my god! How could you end the chapter like that??" I know!!! I'm evil :( But that was too good to pass :p

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Part 4

The flashback was brilliant. Great Brian and Justin talking and very hot sex scene. You can almost feel Brian's releif at finding someone he wants to see again, then that last sentence just throws cold water over it! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the flashback. I'm always trying to not write flashbacks because sometimes readers get lost in the middle, forgetting what was the point of it, lol. But I realize I can't help myself. Most of the time, it's also the better way to explain why a character reacts this or that way to a person, an event. It's easier to write a scene 'showing' the why, than to have the character verbally explain to someone else why he is like he is. At least, it is for me :)

I'm glad you still like this story and that you're looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for your comment :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Part 4

You know I like this version way better than the filmed version.  Why oh why couldn't you have been one of the writers for the show.  Now about that last line.  So classically Brian.  At least how I remember him.  Now I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out what happens next.  So many possibilities.

Author's Response:

Thank you! But I'm not sure I would have been a good writer. I would probably have messed up with B/J's storyline a lot more :(

Anyway! Yeah, the last line was a killer line, and I hate when writers are doing something like that, lol. that's why I stopped reading WIPs. It was too difficult to wait (sometimes looong months) for the next chapter. But honestly, I love it when everything is not perfect. And it was really too tempting to end the chapter like this ;) I hope you won't be disapointed with the 'possibility' I chose for B/J :)

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Part 4

I spent hours yesterday trying to find this story elswhere so that I could read.  Shoot, didn't find.  So, I'll patiently wait for the next chapter...well, I'll try...

Really enjoy this fic, it's very well written and love the plot.

Author's Response:

Your waiting is over. Part 5 has been poste!

Thank you for loving this story and saying so :)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Part 4

lovely chapter. now all that's left is for brian to decide which he wants more a new intern or a new lover. if he's smart he'll have both.

Author's Response:

Thank you :) The only question you have to ask is "What would Brian do to have Justin in his life?" ;)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Part 4

way to end the chapter. the rest was hot :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Yeah, I know, but I couldn't resist ending the chapter that way ;) Glad, you find it hot! It was very difficult to write.

Thank you for your comment.

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Part 3

It's really good and I need more immediately ;) Hope you'll update soon


Author's Response:

Well, part 4 is posted ;)

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Part 3

I know I've read this before, but once again you have pulled me in with your beautiful writing. Can't wait for the next chapter. Absolutely adore your Brian. xx

Author's Response:


Thank you a lot!!!

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Part 3

i can not wait to read the next chapter of this story

great job writting this story

i can not wait what will happen next with brian and justin

Author's Response:

Part 4 is posted! Thank you for your comment :)

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Part 3

Great story can't wait for the next update, I like the new Brian.

Author's Response:

Thank you a lot! Next update will be on Monday :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Part 3

Arrrgh!  How could the gang be so cruel to keep alluding to Justin as a trick?  I love a Brian looking for LOVE!  I like that in spite of all the misinformation that the gang is informing Justin that he is willing to give Brian a chance.  <giggle> and he still doesn's know that Brian is his boss.  I can see that you're going to be keeping me on the edge of my seat.


Author's Response:

Justin is always willing to give Brian a chance. When he found Justin, Brian has been one very lucky man!

"I can see that you're going to be keeping me on the edge of my seat."

Hum, well, if I were you, then I wouldn't read part 4 until part 5 is posted ;) Just saying...

Thank you for your comment! It's greatly appreciated.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Part 3

this story is coming along nicely--one reviewer said they read it somewhere other than here?  so i guess it's already been written and added to mw? whatever--it's very good.  brian's so called family can be real bitches.  justin will cope-he's got the gonads to prove it. keep on keeping on lol

Author's Response:

Yes, the story is completed and posted on my LJ (and my site). I just never had the chance to post it here.

Yes, they can be bitches, but they will have to see the real Brian eventually ;) Thanks for your comment. It means a lot :)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2010 03:44 AM · On: Part 3

they may be 'family', but they're not friends.

Author's Response:

Yes, sadly. Fortunately for Brian, he has Justin :)

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Part 2

Loved this fic, read it awhile ago.  It's aging like fine wine.  Thanks for sharing it again.

Author's Response:

You're very welcome! I like your comparison to fine wine :))

Reviewer: jai (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2010 02:53 AM · On: Part 2

i really enjoy this story. i think it feels natural and the progression is smooth.  i cant wait for thanksgiving dinner and when the meet again at work. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you! Your wish will be granted in a few minutes: Part 3 is about Thanksgiving dinner ;)

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Part 1

Lovely story, keep going.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Part 3 will be up in a few minutes :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Part 2

Yes, yes, yes!!!!  This in fantastic!  Love the newspaper headlines.  I'm really excited to see where this story takes us. 


Author's Response:

I love adding graphics to my stories! Sometimes it's better than a thousand words, lol.

Next chapter will be posted in a moment! Thank you for your comment :)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Part 2

i hope things go smoothly at deb's, knowing how his friends can be.

Author's Response:

Yeah, they can be very "unfriendly" sometimes ;)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Part 2

I love how this story is going. The pictures and 'articles' are adorable.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I had a lot of fun creating them :)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Part 2

First, this story is so well written...second, I'm totally smitten with the tale you are weaving here!  It's very original yet still in cannon. Great job, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Wow, I'm flattered! I'm currently reading your "Before there was you..." universe. I just read the first story years ago and I cannot say how many times you killed me with that one, lol. I'm reading the second one now and it's really addictive :)

Anyway, I'm glad you liked my story. Next chapter will be posted in a few minutes :) Thank you, Gina Marie!

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Part 2

this story is wonderful.  new twists and turns to b/j meeting.  looking forward to more chspters.  keep them coming. tres bon!!!

Author's Response:

I'm a sucker for B/J stories where they meet differently and I think I couldn't write something different than that lol. My other (unfinished for now) story is also like that.

Thank for your comment! New chapter will be posted in a few minutes ;)

Reviewer: Karolin Suleyman (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Part 1

I love the story. I want more and more and more :) 

Author's Response:

As you wish :) Part 3 is up!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Part 2

great update. :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Thank you Rose :)

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 02:21 AM · On: Part 2

Awwwwww! I already love your story... Sweet!Brian always make my heart swells!

Author's Response:

I know! I love sweet!Brian too!!!

Thank you for commenting :)

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Part 1

Loving this, but get a distinct feeling of deja vu, have you posted it elsewhere?

Author's Response:

Indeed. I posted that story a few months ago on my LJ :) I wanted to post it here as well, but never got a chance to do it. And then, yesterday, I suddenly thought that it was Thanksgiving. And since Thanksgiving has a small role in that story, I thought it was a good time to post 'Something Right' here :)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Part 1

great start. more soon please :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Thank you, Rose! Next part will be posted some time tomorrow :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Part 1

PS - love the banner and how the characters sound.  They're purrr-fect


Author's Response:

Even if they're not canon since my Brian is, lets say, 'ready for love', I try to stay as close to canon as possible.

I'm glad you like the banner :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Part 1

Oh! Oh! Oh!  This is soooo good and I'm definately looking forward to future chapters.

Author's Response:

Well, don't miss next chapter tomorrow then ;)

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Part 1

i love it

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: nathalie R (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2010 06:03 AM · On: Part 1

j'ai adorer cette histoire.
j'attends avec beaucoup t'interet la suite
a tres bientot

Author's Response:

La suite sera postée demain :) Merci pour ce commentaire! A bientôt!

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2010 05:05 AM · On: Part 1

what is it with michael, is he never satisfied with brian's life?

shame brian didn't ask his name so he would know what to look for when he goes through the applications and would find justin's.

Author's Response:

Well, you know Brian... He never asks for names, lol. Thank you for your comment :)

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Part 1

great story i can not wait to read the next chapter

i hope justin gets a job where brian works

your a great writter  i look forward to reading more of this amazing story

Author's Response:

Justin's next job won't be without complications ;) Next part part tomorrow! Thanks for your comment :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Part 1

Great. Wonderful. Hot. Please write fast.

Author's Response:

Thank you! The fic is completed. Next part will be posted tomorrow :)

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