Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 18
Great ending! :)
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 18
wonderful story i hope you will keep writtng this story or make a new story out of this story a sec part of this story i hope you will
great job writting this story
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 16
I love this story....it's so reminds me of a good soap opera where I eat popcorn and just enjoy the ride....you got me scared though, I mean everything is going so well and the bad guys are locked up, please let our boys be happy!!
Author's Response: dont worry there is a happy ending its nearly finished
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2010 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 16
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 16
This story is terrible! It has to be one of the worst that I've read...
Author's Response: ok everyone is entitled to their own opinion
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 16
great story i can not wait to read the next chapter of this amazing story
i glad they got michael , brandon, and ethan
to bad that brian and justin honeymoon was cut short for the trial
i hope in the next chapter brian and justin and gus are able to go on
the honeymoon i looking forward to reading more of this wonderful story great job writting this story
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 15
wonderful story i can not wait to read more of this amazing story
i am so happy that brian and justin are now married with out any trouble
wonderful writting and amazing story thanks i csn wait to read more soon
Author's Response: well i'm glad someone likes my stories i havent been writing fics for very long
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 15
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 14
I love this story i can not wait to read the next chapter
of this amazing story
i glad they got michael and brandon i hope they get ethan soon
I love that brian and justin named the baby Gus how wonderful
great job writting this story
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 13
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 13
great story
i am glad brian and justin and the baby are ok
i can not wait to read the next chapter of this amazing story
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 13
Humm, I think I missed a chapter or two along the way. All I can think of is you must be posting faster then I can read. <grin> Putting Brandon, Michael, and Ethan together as the bad guys is per inspiration. Since this was mostly dialog it was a tad hard to tell who was talking at some points. I do think Brian and Justin had better get married sooner rather then later. No telling what Michael's got planned. <horror>
Keep it up, I want to know what happens next!!!
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Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 12
I love this story but why does michael brandon and ethan have to mess up
brian and justin wedding i hope no one gets hurt and brian and justin get
married
i can not wait to read the next chapter
great job writting this story
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 12
Love this story. You can't stop here. Please update fast..
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 11
I like this story i can not wait to read the next chapter of this wonderful story I hope michael, brandon and ethan can not find brian and justin and where they are getting married at next week
I hope justin and brian go far away some place safe to get married so that michael, brandon and ethan does not find them
wonderful writtting this amazing story great job
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 10
I can not wait to read the next chapter of this amazing story
I hope brian marries justin
wonderful job
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 8
Uh oh. Brian better be careful. Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 8
great story i can not wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: appricate the comments thanks
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 7
I love this story i can not wait to read the next chapter
wonderful job
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 5
great story i can not wait to read the next chapter of this
wonderful story
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 5
I still can't get over the premise that Michael is suppose to be a model.....I know this is fiction but that's just cracked...in what world would a short, squat, gnome like Michael be a model?
Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 5
Hehe I like it so far ;) Update soon again please
Hugs
Author's Response: thanks i m a big fan of your fics too you have great imagination
Reviewer: theharshcritic (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 5
It's not the worst fan fic I've ever read, but it's not one of the better ones either. Your basic premise is sound, but the execution is poor.
Author's Response: i did ask for honesty so thanks
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 5
OMG. This is so great. Please update fast.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: masterglory (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, good start, i like it!!!!:)
Just...Michael modeling???? For Versace and Armani???? With his body or someone's else? Eheheh;)
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter, looking forward in what happens next. :)
Reviewer: s-r (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
beautiful countine pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
I have to ask you a question.... is it safe for me to read this fic??? because if...Brian and Mikey are "doing it"..... I will lose my lunch... LOL... Thanks..
Author's Response: dont worry its not for long brian and justin get together in the end
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love it. Sounds like it will be a great story
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