Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Smolder
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2019 05:22 PM · On: Amelioration

Love it, to bad you wont add more

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2017 02:43 PM · On: Amelioration

I must admit I do not understand the ending of this story.  It was like it ended in the middle of a sentence.  I reallly liked the story but wish there was more of it .

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2016 05:17 AM · On: Amelioration

I enjoyed this story and was really getting into it. Would love it if you returned to add more - at least enough so that Mikey gets his comeuppance:-)

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2012 01:55 AM · On: Amelioration

I definitely dont see this as an ending. Open ended or otherwise. I had high hopes for this story so please make a sequel. Thanks :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2012 02:17 AM · On: Decompose

Hey there - I'm still haunted by this story of yours, even though you've ended it.  I sent you an email with an idea I've had.  I want to borrow your story.  Please let me know what you think.  TAG

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2012 07:18 PM · On: Amelioration

I'm glad that you provided some sort of closure for this story. It had been one of my favorites.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2012 09:16 PM · On: Decompose

I've made the mistake of reading the reviews before the story and some of them have put me off reading it.If people find that it is a story needing closure then I will not read it.I am loathe to read something that will leave me wondering what happens.Especially if you are not updating.Sorry.

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2012 07:37 PM · On: Decompose

thanks for sharing

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2012 05:55 AM · On: Amelioration

This is complete?  Since you marked it complete I read it but how can that be finished? 



Author's Response:

I'm no longer writting this fic, but it had been sitting unfinished for nearly two years so I wrote what I hoped would be an open ending. So that if one day I ever feel I should go back I can add on to it. I'm sorry that you don't feel it is finished and honestly its because it isnt, but this leg of it is somplete.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2012 03:17 AM · On: Amelioration

Loving this sweet little story. I adore how kind and caring Brian is. Also interested to find out what really happened to Justin. Can't wait for the next Chapter. TAG

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2012 01:01 AM · On: Amelioration

Love this story. Will he ever talk? More soon????:)

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2012 07:45 PM · On: Amelioration

Great chapter. Looking forward to what happens next with Brian and Justin. 

Reviewer: Brenchu (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 05:49 AM · On: Decompose

I wish this story was finished. It's wonderful.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Freeze

I AM LOVING THIS STORY WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE

Reviewer: Maddiecat (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 01:40 AM · On: Freeze

Please please please please tell me you are planning to update soon! it is killing me that you would leave such a good story! so update soon and make a lot of people happy!

Maddie

Reviewer: hum4et (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2011 05:15 AM · On: Freeze

This is a great story and well-written.  Really wish you would consider fininshing it.  It has been toooo long since it was updated.



Author's Response:

Sorry about the wait. I do plan on finishing this story, I've been trying to get it together for a while now. I just do not seem to be able to put another chapter together at the moment, only able to write bits and pieces. I'm crossing my fingers and hoping I'll be able to get a new chapter up over my spring break next week. Sorry bout the wait.

Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2011 04:40 PM · On: Decompose

HELLO . PLEASE COME AND CUNTINU THIS AMAZING STORY

Reviewer: Maddiecat (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Freeze

this story is so incredible! please update soon, the suspense is killing me!



Author's Response:

Soory about the long wait on the update, I hadn't realized it was the last week of school and finals already...I hope to have the next two chapters up by the end of the week. Thank yous for reviewing ^^

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Freeze

Loving this Brian.  Not so sure about Deb, scaring poor Sunshine!  I'd like to think she had good intentions, but I wish she understood Brian better.  Good thing Brian's not leaving Justin alone in the loft, who knows who would show up next.  Opps, you would! <vbg>



Author's Response:

Your review at the end made me giggle. Thanxs ^^

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Freeze

Brian got the perfect gift to cheer Justin up.

BTW, Debbie is a bitch!

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Freeze

I give this a 4 condom very nice to see a caring brian for a change. Debbie and

Michael are f...nuts can't stand them sometime but love em.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Freeze

another great chapter.  So loving this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much ^^

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Freeze

oh it is very amazing oh in your story brian is very nice countinu please



Author's Response:

I should have part 2 up soon ^^

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Freeze

Hi! I love this story.

I am glad to see Brian helping Justin.

I am glad you are not a Michael fan nor am I really a Debie fan because she always blame Brian for something her son did.

Please keep the story going!

You are truly a gifted writer.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Debbie has been written very well in some fics I have read, but overall I don't think I am a fan of hers.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Refuge (Part 2)

very sweet chapter.

yay for brian laying down the law to michael, and for em joining in, but brian forgot to get his key back. time to change the locks i guess.



Author's Response:

To be honest I hadnt even thought about Mikey's key, but it all works out ^^ I definately agree it is time to change the locks. Emmett <3 

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Refuge (Part 2)

Brian’s lips touched my forehead… Brian’s lips touched my forehead… Brian’s lips touched my forehead… Brian’s lips touched my forehead… Brian’s lips touched my forehead… Brian’s lips touched my forehead… Brian’s lips touched my forehead...

 

I am in love with this fic!!!! More please. :o)

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I love how you repeated that quote. Thats exactly how I felt when I wrote it, I knew it was the final touch that was needed for this chapter ^^

Reviewer: masterglory (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Decompose

Thank you, this is just the kind of story I love!!!!

Plus, very well-written and anti-mikey...I couldn't ask for more;)

*hugs you tight*, Gloria^^

 



Author's Response:

Your very welcome ^^ It means a lot that your enjoying my fic and think it is well written, I havent found a beta yet so I do my best with editing. Grammar really isnt my thing lol

Reviewer: lyn (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Refuge (Part 2)

this story just keeps getting better and better--i just love the way you write.  this is going very well--i hope you know that.  keep the chapters coming.  i look every day for new ones.  my life is happier reading on this site as i am stuck in my bed for a few more months. lol



Author's Response:

I'm so glad your enjoying my fic, it means a lot ^^

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 02:26 AM · On: Refuge (Part 2)

Awwwwwwww!! Protective!Brian is sooooooooo sweet!!!! I loved the chapter and I can't wait to know what will happen in the next ones.



Author's Response:

I'm really begining to enjoy writing Brian this way. I struggled with it a bit at first wanting to keep him more in character, but for my fic thats just not going to happen lol.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Refuge (Part 2)

I really like this story i can not wait to read the next chapter of this wonderful story

i hope brian and justin get together michael needs a new lover so he does

have to mess up brian love life

i look forward to reading more wonderful writting and it's a great story



Author's Response:

Thank you for continuing to read and review ^^

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Refuge (Part 2)

It's so nice to see that Brian is befriending Justin rather than tricking with him, much as he's trying not to.  Love Emmett's reaction to how Micheal treated Justin.  Looks like Micheal never seems to change. Something tells me Brian's gonna get through to Justin and they'll make a great team.

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I was finishing up this chapter when I realised I hadnt yet incorporated tricking into the story. While I dont believe the Brian I have written is one to trick quite as often as compared to the series, it is still a large part of who he is. Atleast for now. Glad you enjoyed. Thank you for reviewing ^^

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Refuge (Part 2)

I like how Justin is starting to trust Brian a little more as time goes by and I like how Brian is so understanding with Justin and defends him.  I loved the last line of Justin's!!! :-)  Great chapter!

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

I couldn't resist adding that tiny bit of Justin's POV at the end. I knew the chapter was done, but I wanted to incorporate Justin somehow to the end. Thanks for reviewing ^^



Author's Response:

I couldn't resist adding that tiny bit of Justin's POV at the end. I knew the chapter was done, but I wanted to incorporate Justin somehow to the end. Thanks for reviewing ^^

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Refuge (Part 2)

Beautiful chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you~

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Decompose

Hi! I just ran across this story and I really like it!  I've only read chap. 1 so far and am about to read chap. 2 and 3 but I wanted to tell you that I love your writing style!  You keep the suspense and the anticipation up while making the reader stay interested and wanting to keep reading.  

I'll admit, I was skeptical to begin reading this story because I usually stay with the authors I'm familiar with and tend to shy away from the younger ones.  Not that your age has anything to do with it really, it's just that younger writers tend to have more spelling and grammar mistakes and don't have as easy of a flow as more experienced writers and it distracts from the story.  I won't even attempt to read a story that has a typo or grammar mistake in the summary; that always a bad sign. :-D   

But, I liked the premise of this story so I thought I'd try it and I was pleasantly surprised.  You are a very good writer and I'm looking forward to the subsequent chapters of "Smolder"; I hope you will write more QAF in the future!

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am really glad you have enjoyed it thus far.

Reviewer: lyn (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Refuge (Part 1)

really feel for jus.  when he gets stronger my hope is he beats the crap out of michael.  never liked him.  i suppose every story has a character you totally dispise.  michael  is mine.  good writing keeps one on their toes.  waiting to see where you take us next. lol



Author's Response:

I don't really like Michael either, but when I actually first thought up and planned this fic I hadnt planned on making Michael the bad guy. Oh well.

Reviewer: Helenann23 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Refuge (Part 1)

Still loving the story and this chapter was great! I'll be waiting for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Next chapter should be hear soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Refuge (Part 1)

I really like this story. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Part 2 should be on its way sooner than I thought. All of the encouraging reviews I have recieved have inspired me to really start working on it.

Reviewer: barby (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Refuge (Part 1)

wow. This story is amazing. I love it. Cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

I think more will be on its way very very soon. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 03:36 AM · On: Refuge (Part 1)

great story i can not wait to read the next chapter

i glad brian is helping justin

i hope brian and justin get together

 and let michael find he's own man and leave brian alone imho

great job writting this story and this is a wonderful story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much your review means a lot.

Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Refuge (Part 1)

OH OH OH MY GOD YOU ARE EXACTLY A WRITER YOUR STORY IS JUST AMAZING ........... AH MY HEART IS BROK FOR JUSTIN BEACUSE HE IS HELPLEES OH MY GOD I CRY ALOT I WANT TO KILL MIKY . PLEASE COUNTINU



Author's Response:

I'm glad the fic invokes such emotion in a reader. Thank your for taking your time and reviewing.

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Refuge (Part 1)

I fucking hate Michael! Sorry for the swear word... I soooooo want to punch him right now! I can't wait for the meeting Brian/Michael after that... =D



Author's Response:

Don't worry about it, I know how you feel. Thank you for reviewing ^^

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2010 01:24 AM · On: Refuge (Part 1)

interesting chapter. what is michael so afraid of that he couldn't wait around until brian was finished with justin.?



Author's Response:

Hold on to that thought ^^. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Helenann23 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Decompose

I love this story already. Keep it going and I can't wait for the next chapter. I wand continues giving insight into the people it's about and their lives. I hate when a good story just comes to an end with warning or the suddenly the story justs hurries along cramming alot into a little space. This has started out so great and I feel the emotion of the story, your words make me want more.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Waste

Awwwwwwwwwwww! Poor Justin, you made me cry you meanie!! Seriously, loved the chapter and how you perfectly placed the unmistakable "I want to go with him"... Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I'm not sure how I feel about you crying for Justin. I must be doing something right lol. Thank you so much for taking your time and reviewing it really means a lot to me and motivates me to write more ^^.

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Decompose

And you sure as hell have me wrapped around yours... This story really intrigue me and I already like it very much!

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Waste

i like it.



Author's Response:

Thanxs for coming back and reading the second chapter and reviewing ^^.

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Waste

This story is really great so far. I really like your writing style :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. Your review means a lot.

Reviewer: lyn (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Waste

don't worry at all about this chapter.  it is flawlessly written.  you are the bomb.  this story is one of the best i have read at mw in a long long time.  your style of writing leaves me in awe.  you rock  more chapters soon please.  i can only rate this 10-but it is at the very least a 20.



Author's Response:

This review made me want to get up and dance. I was so happy. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my story.

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Decompose

This is a great start and I can't wait for more!  You have a great way of descriptive writing.  If you have to write on paper and then type it up, so be it.  Many authors have written this way for centuries.  Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Actually lol, I think I write better when typing, but as much as I'd like I can't have my laptop with me 24/7. Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: mana (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Decompose

HI ....Countinu very soooonnnnnnnnnn



Author's Response:

Enjoy the new chap ^^.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Decompose

okay.



Author's Response:

Thanxs for reading.

Reviewer: Bev (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Decompose

This story is wonderful. Thanks for sharing and I can't wait for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Enjoy the next chap ^^.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Decompose

I like this story i look forward to reading the next chapter of this

wonderful story



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy chapter 2 as well.

Reviewer: lyn (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Decompose

omg this is going to be wonderful.  hone your typing skills and bless us with more chapters very quickly.  love your writing style so descriptive.  it's the way i write also,  you really get the feel of things with good description.  please post more chapters soon.  this b/j story is going to be amazing.  so glad emmett is in the fore-front.  really like him=a caring individual.



Author's Response:

Im working on the typing thing. It's a very slow process lol. I'm glad you liked the chapter and Emmett is a favorite character of mine, just hoping I can capture him just right in this story.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Decompose

Please, by all means, post away, sweetie.  :-)



Author's Response:

I hope to post fairly regulary since the story has been so welcomed. Thank you for the review.

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