Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For BROKEN ANGEL
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 2

WOW ......... BEAUTIFUL I KNOW IT IS VERY BEAUTIFUL ....... I CRAY IT IS SAD BUT ILOVE THIS STORY AND LOVE BETWEEN JUSTIN AND BRIAN



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow beautiful, glad to see Justin making progress.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thanks again for stopping by

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

I was so happy to see a new story from you. I love your brian and everything he does for justin. I hope he gets better soon. I am waiting for your updates :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Hey Rose - I thought it was about time.

Reviewer: plucc@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 2

I am sooo glad to see something new from you.  Looks really good.

Now--about "My Secret Life"...................??



Author's Response:

Next on my list - I'm feeling ispired thanks to seeing Gale in Vancouver

Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 2

i love this story!  It's beautiful.  I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks Gert - working on it.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Chapter 2 I am loving this story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

i like that justin is starting to speak

guud job writting this story



Author's Response:

thanks for stopping by

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love this story.
The part about the pound was beautiful.
Our local pound loves us, we've gotten 1 dog and 5 cats from them. I see a picture or hear a story and we end up with a new pet, at least they know they are loved.
I hope that Justin doesn't have to wait too long before Brian realizes what he needs and makes love to him. If Justin can blink at least they can communicate that way.

Author's Response:

All my animals have been rescued - I think we appreciate each other because of it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 2

Sh!T! Do you have a clue how hard it is to read with tears in your eyes? ;)

You got me Mom. You got me hooked good.



Author's Response:

Bob - you are an old softy - you make me smile. Many cyber hugs.

Reviewer: inkedkelt (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 2

I am loving this story!  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks bunches.

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Glad to see something new from Moonshadow Woman - my favourite writer on Midnight Whispers.  I have all of her stories saved on to disk so that I can come back to them again later. I love the idea of this story and can't wait to see the outcome and whether Justin actually comes fully back to the world eventually. XEileen



Author's Response:

Nice to see you stop by - Justin and Brian will have their ups and downs as usual - but we all know that they are destined to be together

Reviewer: druscilla (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Seeing your new story really brightened my day, Elsa! It's good to have you back writing here, although I am anxious to get your new book as well.  I can't wait for more of this story, so please update soon and often!  It's fabulous so far, but I knew it would be.  Much love.  ~ Bev



Author's Response:

Thanks Bev for stopping by. I hope you enjoy the new book.

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, dear!  I only read finished stories, but I'm so excited to see you back in the QAF game -- this wait will be a long one, indeed!  Wheeeee! . . . Christmas in October!  Welcome back, Elsa! :-)



Author's Response:

I agree with you - I only read finished stories - this one will finish don't worry

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wonderful to see a new story from you. And what a story its novel, heartbreaking and heartwarming all at the same time. I can't wait to see it reveal itself. x



Author's Response:

great to see you stop by - thanks for review

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

I absolutely adored this first chapter! I love that we get to be inside Justin's head; poor little thing. I can't wait till the next chapter!

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

Thanks bunches Cindy

Reviewer: Helenann23 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

MORE, MORE, MORE STORY PLEASE.  I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE, HOPE YOU'LL UPDATE SOON AND OFTEN.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my, what a beautiful, tender story.  Oh please update this, it's just a gem that is on its way to becoming a classic.  Great idea, novel, and very special.  Well done!

Again, please update and don't abandon it.

All the best.



Author's Response:

Thanks bunches - I never post anything unless it can be completed - this one will be - it's writing itself. There will be an update tomorrow.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hurray!!!  A new story from you!  I love your first chapter and am looking forward to the next.  Michael is such a whiner. 

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Author's Response:

Yep he is - whine, whine, whine

Reviewer: Robbie (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love it!  More please.  But I really need Justin to get better.  



Author's Response:

Justin will always get better with Brian in charge.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story. It takes a while to read though because i have to stop when it makes me cry. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

That's me the Schmoop Queen - I just love good old B/J love

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was very sorry to hear about your the loss of your son....and happy to see that you are back writing your amazing fics .... This is such a beautiful and sad story.... it's wonderful to see Brian being so loving and caring towards Justin when he needs him the most.... Thanks...



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review - Bill was my wild child, but filled with compassion for others - Generally he is the one I use when I channel my loving Brian.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

a great start to another wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Amazing first chapter!  So heartbreaking, yet hopeful.  Love the way you portray the family dynamics, and absolutely love Cheif!  Can't wait to see what kind of dog Justin picks out. 



Author's Response:

Justin's dog is inspired by another - down to the name - LOL - it was a 'must be'

Reviewer: carlou (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a touching and beautifully written story,I'm looking forward to the next chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wowww wonderful beginning of a new story. I'm already hooked.

* big hug *

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, I'm so happy to se you back. I know that this year has and probably still is very hard for you. I just hope that the pain is little more bearable. Love the begining of this story, and patiently waiting for next chapter. Big hug to you. Metka



Author's Response:

Thank you - it's been a year that's for sure - but losing myself in the boys is a great healer.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic story Elsa. I have so many feelings for this Justin, and Brian's devotion is just amazing. Will be looking forward to your next installement for this one without a doubt. Two thumbs way up!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Bob

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm very happy to see a new story from your Elsa. Looking forward to reading this soon once my latest chapter to my new story is finished.



Author's Response:

Thanks bunches Bob - your writing inspires me.

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