Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For BROKEN ANGEL
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wonderful story and wonderful ending.  Thanks for sharing this little gem!



Author's Response:

You are very welcome

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

I always love your Brian and Justin. :-)  It was so great to stop in this morning and find this story completed, just as you promised.  What a treat.  Others have said it, but I'll say it, too -- It's wonderful to have you writing B/J fic, again.  Thank you, and I'm looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was wonderful Rose.  Never thought of going in that direction but it worked wonderfully.  I loved that Justin stuck up for Brian when his family went against him.



Author's Response:

So Glad you liked it

Reviewer: DEB (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 7

WONDERFUL STORY. I HAVE MISSED YOUR WRITTING. I AM A PET LOVER AND SO ENJOY THAT YOU USUALLY INCLUDE SOME IN YOUR STORIES. I DO HOPE THE MUSES ARE ACTIVE AND I WILL SEE MORE OF YOUR STUFF.  THANKS D.



Author's Response:

Yes I usually have a pet or two - I love them as well

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 7

This was a wonderful story. Thank you for writing it!



Author's Response:

you are welcome

Reviewer: esromjk (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wonderful story, so glad you have written again, it had been a while



Author's Response:

I'm always writing - but not necessarily B/J fic thanks for stopping by

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 7

shame the others couldn't move on with their lives like brian and justin did.

great ending.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Jasmine (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 7

What a beautiful story that ended perfectly! So glad that the 3 stooges Ted (loser banned from gay clubs in the Pitts) Mike (trying to work 2 jobs ) and Debbie (scratching her ugly wig wondering where the extra 100 in tips went) got what they deserved....can't wait to read your next story!



Author's Response:

thanks Jasmine - I'm writing another started today

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow!  You manage to wrap everything up in just one chapter, giving us one hell of an ending.  And everyone lives happily ever after, except for Ted, Michael, and Deb.  Serves them right. hehe. 

Love your stories and am looking forward to the next one.

>



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 7

I very much like this story i can not wait to read the next chapter

great job



Author's Response:

sorry, that's all for this one

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 7

HI ........... BEAUTIFUL .......... PLEASE GIVE US ANOTER STORY ........ HAVE NICE DAY

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

as always, a great and beautiful story of brian and justin!!!!!!!!!!

love it....

thanks



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great story and great ending. Thank you

Mariana



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 7

Thanks Elsa I really enjoyed this fic your writing style is as usual beautifully structured and easy to read. I hope you continue to be inspired by the boys :)Chris



Author's Response:

Thanks Chris, I've started another one 

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow the end was so beautiful. Brian and Jusrin taking care of all this kids and having few of their own was amazing. I am sad to see this story end but it was a fantastic ride!! Thank you sooooo much for sharing with us your great talent.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

Loved reading this story and all your others...I only started reading your stories just over a week ago and I have  been reading them every chance I get.

I hope to see more stories from you soon, I will be looking forward to reading them as the appear.

One of my favourites is Bear Magic, it is so sweetly written.

 

Thank you for sharing your talented writing with us



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

sweet. 

Reviewer: kinneydu (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great story.  Nice feel good finish.  I would like to think that even though the boys didn't keep in touch with the old gang, perhaps they did keep in touch somehow with Emmett. 



Author's Response:

no doubt they do

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 7

When I found a new story from you I have been watching constantly for updates. Delightful story and a perfect ending bringing me joy to read it.



Author's Response:

THANK YOU

Reviewer: vamplair (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 7

Welcome back! Thanks for gracing us with your skills once more. I always love it when the purple gang gets their asses handed  to them on a plate! Hope to have more from you in the future. Happy Halloween!

Ro



Author's Response:

working on another one as we speak

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 7

Thank you for this wonderful story!  Great ending. 



Author's Response:

thank you - it's almost nano month so I'm doing another B/J for that

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 7

i love it



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 7

HOME RUN !!!

Heah if you had only made about 100 chapters you would probably knock me off the most review comments pedestal.

Really Loved the Story. Moonshadow Woman is BACK! YAHOO!!!

Thank you for this delicious read. You covered them all but Emmett however. Perhaps he's too friendly with the bad people. No matter, this ending was unexpected and totally perfect with the success, kids, and revenge.

 



Author's Response:

thanks Bob - I'm actually beginning another B/J story - for November - it's nano wri mo month

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

Just one more thing, I love this chapter but I hope that Ted doesn't get off scott free...he was the idiot who suggested that tabloid rag and with Mel told lies about Brian....I also hate his attitude towards Justin and his cruel remarks, so I know Ted being the loser that he is might be enough revenge, but I want his ugly head on a stick for what he did!!



Author's Response:

hmmmmmm - okaaaaay

Reviewer: To Elsa! (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

I love this story and am glad that Moonshadow woman is back!

I have read your other B/J stories more that 3 times.

You are truly a gifted writer.

Please keep writing.

Have a nice fall!

Debbie



Author's Response:

Thanks Debbie

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 6

great story. I'll check back soon for more.

 

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

i love it

Reviewer: Jasmine (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! An excited round of applauds and I would do a back flip but I injured my knee and can't do any flips...lol! Can't wait for the update and I meant to comment on Chapter 5 and I just wanted to say that when Justin told that wig wearing, gun chewing, crass, hypocritical turd Debbie off (as well as other members of the dysfunctional posse) I was doing the happy dance! Hurry and update...please!!

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 6

I love this story.  Wouldn't it be appropriate if the judge's ruling was that Gus was to have no contact at all with Mel.  Not to mention if this whole situation warranted Mel's loss of her license to practice law.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh Elsa Rose, I love this story.

Can you please elaborate on the  custody agreement? I hope it doesn't say that Gus won't see his father or mother for 6 month strait.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Mariana



Author's Response:

I will do that

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love this story I can not wait to read the next chapter of this

wonderful story 

Justin doing a great job in court

2 courts down 1 to go

I hope brian and justin get Gus

i hope brian justin and Cynthia rename the ad firm

you are doing a wonderful job writting this amazing story

i am looking forward to reading more of this story

 



Author's Response:

thank you 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

This is so good, thanks

* hugs *



Author's Response:

thank You

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 6

Love the way everyone got what they deserved. Amazing work az always!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Kisses

Reviewer: kinneydu (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 6

I am loving this story.  It's nice when Brian is cast as the good guy (which I think he is) and others get their comeuppance. 

Keep up the good work.  Looking forther to more chapters.



Author's Response:

thank you bunches

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 6

Oh I so like this story I am rubbing my hands together with all the come uppence happening.



Author's Response:

it will all work out

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 6

Go Justin.  I like this strong Justin and I love him kicking butt and taking names!  Loving the story!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 6

I just realized that Justin may be the first shark to attack the prey but your reading audience are in a feeding frenzy with the gang's blood fresh in the water.

HAhahahah! LMAO!



Author's Response:

BRAT

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 6

omg how wonderful. justin is taking everyone on. bravo!

Reviewer: esromjk (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 6

Go Justin, Go Justin, Go Justin, Go Justin, Go Justin



Author's Response:

love a strong Justin

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

You have to love an ingenius, determined, blond tiger with the bite of a sea turtle that won't let go, the heart of a hammer head shark, and the love of an angel for his man. The jump in the time line was perfect, and the settlements reasonable under the circumstances. Very believable facts in the plot. Seeing the change of major for Justin considering his mental abilities are right on considering art may or may not be available to him anymore.

Bye bye Mel, and perhaps Lindsay has a second chance but just barely with Justin in charge. Love where this is going and each chapter gets more intense and delicious. Congrads on the home run hit of this story Elsa. You knocked this baby right out of the park and re-sparked MW with your gifted talent once again. You know what I'm saying love. I just hope this isn't a short story since it is so amazingly fantastic the more you build it. Now...where did I put my magic wand???

:D



Author's Response:

Ah Bob - big hugs to you - I've been watching Brian and Justin vids on Utube - true inspiration. I'm not sure how long this will last, but it has been an interesting ride.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

Thanks for updating so soon. I love the new chapter and the story in general. Great work.



Author's Response:

you're welcome

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

Happy, happy, happy dance.  Three strikes and they're out.  Wooohaa!  Tahiti here they come.  Now hurry so we can find out your plans for Cynthia and how Justin handles Mikey and Deb.

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Author's Response:

will do my best

Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 6

Yay!!!  I was so exited to see a new chapter.  Great job as usual.  I love Justin the pitbull.



Author's Response:

thanks Gert

Reviewer: amy (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 6

another great chapter, looking forward to the next with the court case for Gus, also looking forward to deb, ted, and micheal getting what they deserve.

Is vic going to be featured in any of the chapter and what does he think of the family actions.

waiting nicley for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Sorry Vic isn't in this story - I totally forgot about Vic - maybe he'll be in my next story.

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am really enjoying this and hope you will update soon.  It's at such a good part.  I can't wait to read how you tear them all apart, just no Justin and Brian?!

 

Judi



Author's Response:

never Brian and Justin

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

Yay Justin!!! I hope everything turns out okay. Please let us know what happens soon.



Author's Response:

working on it

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 5

Love the chapter!!! So great to see Justin in action!!! Cannot wait to see the revenge!!



Author's Response:

working on it

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 5

This story is very good. I hope you post a new chapter soon. I want to learn how the gang reacts to Justin's information.



Author's Response:

next chapter is coming soon

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great story i can not wait to read the next chapter

poor brian and justin

i hope the gang gets whats coming to them

you tell them justin

this is the best story i hope you update soon 



Author's Response:

next chapter is coming soon

Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 5

awesome.go justin.they are so gonna be sorry.

 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 5

Go get'em Justin! They'll rue the day that they turned on Brian.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 5

Yes, you go Justin.  Kick their ass!  I never was a fan of the family.  I always felt they all were so jealous that they tried to hurt B/J's relationship - except for Emmett and sometimes Ted.  But the rest of them...including Deb...dirt!

I'm really getting into this story, can you tell?  ;)

Well done!  Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

next chapter coming soon

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 5

Powerful, heartbreaking, infuriating.

His only true family turned on him. I know with Jimmy and Sam but most of all Justin they will form a protective circle around Brian. And then when he's safe they will go after all them; one at a time. I will thoroughly enjoy reading every word of that.

Please keep writing this and other stories.  I've missed you

 



Author's Response:

thank you - I'm always writing

Reviewer: Rickeshay (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 5

Excellent as always and i'm looking forward to where it eventually winds up.(g)

 

I've always thought that Season 2 should've dealt with the medical and legal effects of the bashing but as the later seasons showed us Cowlip couldn't have carried it off nearly as well as you are doing in this fic.(vbg)



Author's Response:

You are too kind

Reviewer: Suzyn (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

Absolutely fabulous!!  No one can hold a candle to you and your talent.  I'm sooooo looking forward to the rest of the story!!



Author's Response:

blushing - thank you

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

Justin ! You're the best.

All of them wanted to take what's belong to Brian (money, job, Gus, Justin...). I can't wait when Justin and Brian will knock on the door of Mel and Lindsay's house and take Gus from them. It seems that they can't provide for the child if they're always asking Brian for money. It can be a good reason to give full right to Brian. Especially when Mel will lost her job.

Melanie deserve her career ruined and be blacklist by her peers. Ted has nothing that would be very interesting to take from him. Maybe Emmet's friendship. Debbie has two things in her life : her family and her Diner.

They haven't slowed down to put shit on Brian. Payback is a bitch. Right ? they don't deserve to be spared. I may be seems cold, cruel or even harsh but I can't not feel protective of Brian and Justin.

Brian and Justin forever.

C'est un réel plaisir de lire cette histoire. J'attends la suite avec impatience.

Sorry for my english. A bientôt.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Rie (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 5

I love it and am so looking forward to the court scenes and the "family" except Emmett getting what they deserve.

I also hope that Lindsey gets hers. I hate that fact that she is following Melanie blindly without getting all the facts. I hope he makes them both pay and he gets his rights to Gus back.

I so love this story and look forward to reading more.

 

Rie

 



Author's Response:

New chapter is coming soon

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW, I haven't see this coming. I can't wait what have you prepared for the gang, but I think that they will pay dearly. I just hope that Brian and Justin will be strong enough with the help of their real friend to go through with everything. I can't wait for the next chapter. Love the story, Metka



Author's Response:

thanks = it will all work out

Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow!!  Go Justin!  I love it!  Great job as usual.  I can't wait to see what Jimmy has planned.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 5

i sure hope that jimmy is as much a pitbull in court that justin was in the diner and on the phone with lindsay.

brian thinks he lost everything, doesn't realize he has it all in the form of a blond spitfire.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 5

Amazing chapter. I love the strength Justin showed in sticking up for Brian. The love between them is so strong and they always have each other's backs. This is a beautiful story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, Oh, Oh!  No more Broken Angel, but a spitfire instead.  I'm so glad to see Justin confront the Liberty Diner crew and I just know you have more to say on that.  Looking forward to seeing how Jimmy handles the lawsuits and  all the rest of it.  Right now it looks like it's Justin's turn to take care of Brian.

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Reviewer: Jencancer5 (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 5

Whew!  Awesome!  You tell them Justin!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow just wowww  ... big bow for Justin.
Please I need more, love this so much.

* hugs *

Reviewer: amy (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

another great chapter, im enjoying the fallout and looking forward to more in the next chapters, and their reactions to being sued. this is great work.

looking forward to the next chapters

Reviewer: masterglory (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have to say that usually I don't read wip...I'm always afraid that the author will leave the story incomplete:(, so usually I read only finished story.

But, this is a story from one of my fav authors on the earth, and I KNOW you're not the type to leave it unfinished, so....this is an amazing wonderful story, AND I LOVE IT, BRAVA, BRAVISSIMA!!!!!!!:):):):)

 

Love-ya, Gloria^____^

 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow go Justin how dare Debbie act like a avenging angel and completely denigrate  Brian's reputation. Mel you expect it from but Lindsay and Michael wtf, I hope Justin and Jimmy annihilate the gang.

Looking forward to the next chapter xChris

 

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW WOW JUSTIN I LOVE JUSTIN VERY VERY MUCH WOW MY GOD THIS STORY IS VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL ........... PLEAS COUNTINU VERY SOON

Reviewer: esromjk (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 5

I don't review very much, but that was soooo great. I love fics where Justin goes off at the family & tells them what he is really thinking about the way they treat Brian.

 

Can't wait for the lawyers to rip into Melanie & Ted & the boys get custody of Gus

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 5

Way to go Justin. I love it.

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

I cannot wait.  need more more more... lol sooooo mmmm goood.



Author's Response:

working on it

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 5

*Jumping up and down and pissing in my pants with joy as Justin rips them a totally new asshole. That was only the first salvo from a blond twink with fire in his eyes.

Time to change my shorts now.

Oh happy days!!!!! :D



Author's Response:

Brat - yes it's the first.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 4

I just love this story!!! I hate Ted who is nothing more than a jealous ugly piece of crap who was always envious of Brian, can we have him die of an od...Michael the spoiled rotten mama's boy still attatched to loudmouth Debbie's tit....Melanie, the ungrateful bitch who doesn't mine taking Brian's money, and also the world's worst lawyer...LIndsey, who needs to have a backbone but goes along with whatever Mel  says because she is nothing more than a robot...and Debbie, the wig-wearing, loud-mouth, crass, turd! Okay, I can't help it, I hate the gang and I'm hoping that Brian & Justin will get their revenge on them and Ryder...It's funny that all the gang couldn't find the time to go see Justin when he was in the hospital, but now have the never to want to protect him....I've never been so angry after reading a story as I was when I read this latest chapter....your writing is so good that I had to keep reminding myself to calm down! Can't wait for the update!!



Author's Response:

Jasmine, you make me giggle - I'll see what i can do to make the gang disappear.

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

This story is some of your best work.  Really well done!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Irishlass76 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ok here's what Brian needs to do. He needs to  sue that paper for slander, then sue Ryder for wrongful termination. Then he needs to tell all his so called friends to go fuck themselves and never talk to them again. Then he and Justin can live happily ever after. I loved when they finally signed the papers. Because of course we all know that it really is for real, and just for the insurance. How could they even think Brian would do something like that. He should also sue for custody of Gus, so he's not around those hateful people anymore.  I want to kill Mikey and his so called friends.



Author's Response:

Brian will have his revenge - you can be sure of that.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

Geez, if these are Brian's friends, then he doesn't need enemies.  No one could forgive them for destroying Justin and his lives.  I hopes he gets even and then loses their names and numbers forever.  If any "friends" of mine did this to me...well...you get the drift.

 

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh no! Brian has been so good to Justin! I can't believe that he's been fired!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow...that was unexpected. I officially hate all of "the gang". But where was Vic during all of this? I love the story and look forward to whatever it is you have planned. :)

Reviewer: Cheryl (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 4

What a wonderful story.  I finally finished reading all four chapters.  I can't wait for Brian's wrath to catch up with everyone, well except for Emmett and Lindsay.  Write more, like yesterday!

Cheryl

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 4

You have me steaming at Mel now. Ryder has no just cause to fire Brian. Justin can easily defend him and put this down. The gang needs to be rewarded for their meddling and all. Very interesting turn of events you wrote. Poor Justin if he sees this on the news before Brian can tell him in person.

Ted should be crucified for his actions. Give Michael some attention and he'll tell Brian all he needs to know; Debbie would tell Justin given the chance. I'm very much looking forward to where this goes next. Six months pay and 1.5M is a nice nest egg for a new advertising agency to be born. That doesn't count the wrongful termination suit award Brian has coming to him in time.

However you take this I really hope the gang gets it broken off in them deeply with excessive force :)



Author's Response:

goodness Bob - I'll see what I can do.

Reviewer: SkIE (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 4

This story is amazing. please update soon. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 4

I'm still loving this story.  Great job!  I can't wait for the so-called "family" to get theirs.  I was wondering if Brian could sue for wrongful termination.  I mean they fired him because of an article with no proof of his guilt.  He could use that money to open his own agency....and then proceed to crush Ryder in business.  The best type of revenge.

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

Those so called friends just don't know when to mind their own business do they? I'm hoping that Mels need to get even completely fucks them all, I'm sure Jimmy will have a thing or two up his sleeve! As ever a great chapter x

Reviewer: mea (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 4

i really like your  writing.  i have been reading all your stories.  it has taken me a while and not half way through yet,  i started this one as it is new to see what you were up to in this story.  i just love it.  brian never ceases to amaze me.  the man has many hidden talent.  wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thank  you very much

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 4

i love it



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 4

Hi!

Lindsay and Emmet were the only ones who didn't put shit on Brian. I hope they will help Brian and Justin.

Did Brian already give his right on Gus to Melanie? I don't want that Gus is taking away from them. Justin needs him too.

Brian has the support of Jimmy, Vanessa, Chief, Daphne and doctors that will proves that Brian didn't take advantage of Justin. Justin is now considered an competent adult so he has the right to talk. What are Michael & co have?

I love your story and the new characters. I can't wait the next chapter.

Sorry for my english. A bientôt.



Author's Response:

thanks for stopping by - and your English is great

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 4

Argh, I can't wait to see the egg on everyone's face when the truth finally comes out.  Justin can now speak for himself!!!!  I hope Michael finds out about where they are living and Maisse bites him on the leg and Cat pisses on Melanie.  They've just made a huge mistake bringing this public.

This is your fault - if you didn't write so well, I wouldn't be so angry.

 

PS- I love that Brian uses the word our - that's so cool.

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Author's Response:

I'm glad you caught that

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, well, well, the true colours of the gang in pointing out. They are really some piece of work. I just hope that in the future chapters they will pay the priece for their stupidity and selfishness. Good job.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

Cannot believe that "the gang" did this. I hate them right now!!!!!!! But also I am glad that Justin seems so much better and will be able to protect himself. I am wondering whether Brian will open his own agency right now???  Great work!!



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You never know - he may just do that

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love this story i ccan not wait for the next chapter

poor brian getting fired and poor brian and justin and  the

 rag magazine that brian ans justin friends wrote abou them

both very sad

your doing a wonderfu; job writting this get story



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thank you

Reviewer: amy (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 4

i am loving this fic, the paat chapters have been great esp. justin talking in his own head because he carnt express him self verbally. I loved the last chapter, all i could think of when reading it and the reaction of Brians and Justin suppossed family was assholes.

I carnt wait untill the next chapter, i hope 'the family' gets what coming to them esp, micheal, deb, ted, and Lindsey.

Hope you post again soon.

Please hurry. lol



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Thanks for stopping by

Reviewer: amythesw (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 4

I just found this story and I am loving it!!!!

Can't wait til the next update!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 4

Really loving the story and really great part!

Can't wait to see what happens!

thanks

xxx



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

OH MY GOD ........... I REALY WANT KILL MICHEAL AND MELANI AND ALL OF THEM OH DARLING I CAN NOT WAIT UNTIL THEY ARE DISCOVER REALITY ...... I BET MICHEAL FACE IS VERY SEEABLE



Author's Response:

it will be interesting

Reviewer: DAWNA (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

You are simply AWESOME!!!!  I've read many, many of your stories here and they are so wonderful. This one has got to be in my top five! Please update soon!!!! I'm dying here!!  I love to hate the "family" too and could so see something like this happen. They have to be the  nosiest, judgemental and spiteful group of friends ever.

 



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Thank you for stopping by

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 4

so glad brian and justin have sam, jimmy who brian better put to work on a slander suit , nessa and daphne because with the others who call themselves his friends aren't worth the paper the story was written on. how dare they!



Author's Response:

Wow - well trust me they will get their just desserts.

Reviewer: Helenann23 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 4

Loved this chapter like all the rest, and I have been waiting since the last chapter.  I love this story. I also want to thank you for updating so qiuckly, and I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

Thanks



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thank YOU for stopping by

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

wow!! You're back with a new story and it's better than ever!! I just love this story and I know this sounds greedy..... but I want more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Jasmine - I'm working on it.

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

I am absolutely loving this story, Moonshadow!



Author's Response:

thanks bunches

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

great update. you made me cry and smile. more please :-)) rose



Author's Response:

thank you.

Reviewer: Ruth (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wonderful chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 3

Really enjoying this fic so far, its really nice to see something a little different!

cant wait for more

Thanks xxx



Author's Response:

glad to be of service

Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

WOW............. THIS PART WAS GREAT ....... I CAN NOT WAIT FOR ANOTHER PART ........ I AM HOPE BRIAN DOSE NOT BROCK JUSTIN HEART



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thank you

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

daphne was a wonderful break for them. glad brian has jimmy and nessa because he does need to talk about everything with someone.

i do think justin is ready for more. how much he can handle will be up to him.

getting out will be good too. just not going to the diner which i don't think brian would do.



Author's Response:

No I can't picture Brian going to the diner.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 3

I got to read two chapters in two days - fabulous.  Brian's heachaches...oh no!  Love how this is developing.



Author's Response:

it's always something with those two - love sure isn't easy

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 2

baby steps. giant baby steps. i like that he's keeping the gang away for now, but i think he slipped when he told michael that he didn't need debbie to run interference between justin and jennifer. of course michael didn't pick up on it but if emmett heard then maybe he did.

very happy that he's getting his speech back. and daphne will be wonderful for him.

on to next chapter.

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love the story.  It is so sad to see Justin like this, and what it does to Brian made me want to cry.  But it is so like Brian to move heaven and earth to do something  for those he loves.  can't wait to read more  thank you for this story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Helenann23 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love this story. I have enjoyed each chapter so much.  I am so happy when I find a new chapter so please keep writting and I'll keep reading.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and stopping by to let me know

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

Thanks for the quick update. I still love the story and you seem to be good at cliffhangers.



Author's Response:

hmmmmm, I will do my best to continue to update quickly. Thank you

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 3

Wonderful to see a new chapter so fast. Daphne was a good influence for Justin. Brian needs to work out of his funk and get back in the love game hopefully. Glad to see Justin speaking so he can chew Brian a new one when he needs it. Excellent plot development.



Author's Response:

Hey Bob - I'm like you, once I start I have to continue - the story drives me forward

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love Maise and Cat.  They are so good for Justin.  It was so nice that Daphne came to visit and to see that Justin has made such great strides.  I just wish that I didn't have to wait for the next chapter to find out more.

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Author's Response:

You won't have to wait long - I'm attempting a chapter a day - I do like to write longish chapters though

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story so far i like that justin is starting to speak keep up the

 great job i can not wait for the nest chapter

your doing a wonderful job on this store



Author's Response:

Thanks for stopping by again. I'm enjoying writing this story.

Reviewer: Bev (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was so sad to hear about your son. I cannot even imagine it. What a beautiful story you have written. I can't wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you Bev - I lose myself in my writing.

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 2

I love the story so far. It is definitely interesting and a plot I have never seen before. Good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Ruth (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love this story! Looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: char (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

so glad you are posting a new story. have missed them.  have read your previous stories more than once.  love your writing style.  makes me cry every time.  really gets to me especially this one.  i work with people in this situation so my empathy level is very high. hugs for this new one.



Author's Response:

Thank you - this Justin is based on someone I knew -

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow I really want Justing to get better sooon ....It is so sad to read his thoughts but to know that he cannot express them. Amazing work!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Brian is so great, doing all these things for Justin. And pooor Justin I really hope that will get better soon.



Author's Response:

He will

Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow! Love this story. Justin's POV is amazing and Brian seems to be who I always thought he was on the show but didn't always get to see. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you bunches for the kind words.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 2

So loving this story.  Nice to see Justin progressing.  I'm concerned for Brian though, he really is working too hard. 



Author's Response:

Thank you Gina Marie

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 2

PS - Congradulations on the Blue Ribbon!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is soooo good.  I'm glad the lawyer was able to make Hobbs pay and pay a lot.  It's not surprising that the Lawyer and his family love Justin.  Who doesn't.  I like that Brian cares enough to do all this for Justin and doesn't want to use the settlement money.  Can't get over that they go to get a dog and wind up with a pregnant dog plus a cat. Nor how well the animals get along with Justin and Gus.  It was great that they get to keep Gus for a weekend, hope they get to do that more.  Things are really improving, what with Justin able to say a few words and such words, oh my!  Can't wait to read how Dapne's visit goes.  Michael and Lyndsey are so not in the loop.  Serves them right.

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Author's Response:

thanks for the review - it's appreciated

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love this story.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 2

Congrats on your blue ribbon.... you may not answer...but... there are two things I have to ask you.... why is Brian wearing himself out working 24/7  when they received a million and a half dollar settlement???  and even if he doesn't want the "Gang" to know where Justin is...why would he not at least let them know he was alive??? 



Author's Response:

Brian is working so hard to pay all expenses on his own. He wants the settlement money for Justin's future. In case something happens to Brian - 1.5 million isn't as much as one might think divided over a lifetime if caregivers are to be paid. He wants to keep Justin's condition private. He knows Justin would hate being stared at and pitied. The gang slowly finds out that Justin is alive. They don't find out where he lives - at least not for now.

Reviewer: TECH SUPPORT (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

Featured Blue Ribbon story by me - Michael Sparks: Administrator/Tech Support for MW

Banner by JTSecrets

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 2

WOW ......... BEAUTIFUL I KNOW IT IS VERY BEAUTIFUL ....... I CRAY IT IS SAD BUT ILOVE THIS STORY AND LOVE BETWEEN JUSTIN AND BRIAN



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow beautiful, glad to see Justin making progress.

* hugs *



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