Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2020 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
So proud of Justin standing with Brian and supporting him the way he is. Mel is horrible and hot what she deserves as did Lindsey. Gus is better with his dad. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2019 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 6
yeahhhhhhhhhh Justin good for you and Brian
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2013 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 6
I like a tough Justin.
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2013 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh my - if the show had used this for the storyline.....
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 6
Melanie turning on Gus is just... gross. Turning on Lindsay? Well, she isn't much more than a paper doll, is she? Melanie just posed her, told her what to do, and her family taught her how to be haughty and snooty. Lindsay doesn't have any character, or really any personality other than smarmy or manipulative. (Really, CowLip sucked at writing female characters - except for Jennifer, but in this story, alas...)
Reviewer: nosleeo (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2011 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 6
This was one of my favorite chapters. I loved the part about Lindsay being manipulative with Gus.
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
Just one more thing, I love this chapter but I hope that Ted doesn't get off scott free...he was the idiot who suggested that tabloid rag and with Mel told lies about Brian....I also hate his attitude towards Justin and his cruel remarks, so I know Ted being the loser that he is might be enough revenge, but I want his ugly head on a stick for what he did!!
Author's Response: hmmmmmm - okaaaaay
Reviewer: To Elsa! (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story and am glad that Moonshadow woman is back!
I have read your other B/J stories more that 3 times.
You are truly a gifted writer.
Please keep writing.
Have a nice fall!
Debbie
Author's Response: Thanks Debbie
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 6
great story. I'll check back soon for more.
Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
i love it
Reviewer: Jasmine (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 6
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! An excited round of applauds and I would do a back flip but I injured my knee and can't do any flips...lol! Can't wait for the update and I meant to comment on Chapter 5 and I just wanted to say that when Justin told that wig wearing, gun chewing, crass, hypocritical turd Debbie off (as well as other members of the dysfunctional posse) I was doing the happy dance! Hurry and update...please!!
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story. Wouldn't it be appropriate if the judge's ruling was that Gus was to have no contact at all with Mel. Not to mention if this whole situation warranted Mel's loss of her license to practice law. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh Elsa Rose, I love this story.
Can you please elaborate on the custody agreement? I hope it doesn't say that Gus won't see his father or mother for 6 month strait.
Looking forward to the next chapter
Mariana
Author's Response: I will do that
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story I can not wait to read the next chapter of this
wonderful story
Justin doing a great job in court
2 courts down 1 to go
I hope brian and justin get Gus
i hope brian justin and Cynthia rename the ad firm
you are doing a wonderful job writting this amazing story
i am looking forward to reading more of this story
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is so good, thanks
* hugs *
Author's Response: thank You
Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 6
Love the way everyone got what they deserved. Amazing work az always!!!!
Author's Response: Kisses
Reviewer: kinneydu (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
I am loving this story. It's nice when Brian is cast as the good guy (which I think he is) and others get their comeuppance.
Keep up the good work. Looking forther to more chapters.
Author's Response: thank you bunches
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh I so like this story I am rubbing my hands together with all the come uppence happening.
Author's Response: it will all work out
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 6
Go Justin. I like this strong Justin and I love him kicking butt and taking names! Loving the story!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 6
I just realized that Justin may be the first shark to attack the prey but your reading audience are in a feeding frenzy with the gang's blood fresh in the water.
HAhahahah! LMAO!
Author's Response: BRAT
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 6
omg how wonderful. justin is taking everyone on. bravo!
Reviewer: esromjk (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 6
Go Justin, Go Justin, Go Justin, Go Justin, Go Justin
Author's Response: love a strong Justin
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 6
You have to love an ingenius, determined, blond tiger with the bite of a sea turtle that won't let go, the heart of a hammer head shark, and the love of an angel for his man. The jump in the time line was perfect, and the settlements reasonable under the circumstances. Very believable facts in the plot. Seeing the change of major for Justin considering his mental abilities are right on considering art may or may not be available to him anymore.
Bye bye Mel, and perhaps Lindsay has a second chance but just barely with Justin in charge. Love where this is going and each chapter gets more intense and delicious. Congrads on the home run hit of this story Elsa. You knocked this baby right out of the park and re-sparked MW with your gifted talent once again. You know what I'm saying love. I just hope this isn't a short story since it is so amazingly fantastic the more you build it. Now...where did I put my magic wand???
:D
Author's Response: Ah Bob - big hugs to you - I've been watching Brian and Justin vids on Utube - true inspiration. I'm not sure how long this will last, but it has been an interesting ride.
Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 6
Thanks for updating so soon. I love the new chapter and the story in general. Great work.
Author's Response: you're welcome
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
Happy, happy, happy dance. Three strikes and they're out. Wooohaa! Tahiti here they come. Now hurry so we can find out your plans for Cynthia and how Justin handles Mikey and Deb.
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Author's Response:
will do my best
Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 6
Yay!!! I was so exited to see a new chapter. Great job as usual. I love Justin the pitbull.
Author's Response: thanks Gert
Reviewer: amy (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 6
another great chapter, looking forward to the next with the court case for Gus, also looking forward to deb, ted, and micheal getting what they deserve.
Is vic going to be featured in any of the chapter and what does he think of the family actions.
waiting nicley for the next chapter
Author's Response: Sorry Vic isn't in this story - I totally forgot about Vic - maybe he'll be in my next story.
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