Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For BROKEN ANGEL
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2020 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 5

Poor Brian he did not deserve to be treated like that. I do hope he gets custody of his son and the company. I want to hug him so badly 😢

Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2019 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 5

Justin kicking some asses :D

HA! 

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2015 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

You tell them, Sunshine! So proud of him.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2013 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 5

Go Justin!

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 5

well said justin i love when deb gets handed her shit.   love love love.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 5

I understand Justin's anger, but is it wise to reveal his hand before going to court?

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am really enjoying this and hope you will update soon.  It's at such a good part.  I can't wait to read how you tear them all apart, just no Justin and Brian?!

 

Judi



Author's Response:

never Brian and Justin

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

Yay Justin!!! I hope everything turns out okay. Please let us know what happens soon.



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working on it

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 5

Love the chapter!!! So great to see Justin in action!!! Cannot wait to see the revenge!!



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working on it

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 5

This story is very good. I hope you post a new chapter soon. I want to learn how the gang reacts to Justin's information.



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next chapter is coming soon

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great story i can not wait to read the next chapter

poor brian and justin

i hope the gang gets whats coming to them

you tell them justin

this is the best story i hope you update soon 



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next chapter is coming soon

Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 5

awesome.go justin.they are so gonna be sorry.

 



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thank you

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 5

Go get'em Justin! They'll rue the day that they turned on Brian.



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thank you

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 5

Yes, you go Justin.  Kick their ass!  I never was a fan of the family.  I always felt they all were so jealous that they tried to hurt B/J's relationship - except for Emmett and sometimes Ted.  But the rest of them...including Deb...dirt!

I'm really getting into this story, can you tell?  ;)

Well done!  Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

next chapter coming soon

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 5

Powerful, heartbreaking, infuriating.

His only true family turned on him. I know with Jimmy and Sam but most of all Justin they will form a protective circle around Brian. And then when he's safe they will go after all them; one at a time. I will thoroughly enjoy reading every word of that.

Please keep writing this and other stories.  I've missed you

 



Author's Response:

thank you - I'm always writing

Reviewer: Rickeshay (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 5

Excellent as always and i'm looking forward to where it eventually winds up.(g)

 

I've always thought that Season 2 should've dealt with the medical and legal effects of the bashing but as the later seasons showed us Cowlip couldn't have carried it off nearly as well as you are doing in this fic.(vbg)



Author's Response:

You are too kind

Reviewer: Suzyn (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

Absolutely fabulous!!  No one can hold a candle to you and your talent.  I'm sooooo looking forward to the rest of the story!!



Author's Response:

blushing - thank you

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

Justin ! You're the best.

All of them wanted to take what's belong to Brian (money, job, Gus, Justin...). I can't wait when Justin and Brian will knock on the door of Mel and Lindsay's house and take Gus from them. It seems that they can't provide for the child if they're always asking Brian for money. It can be a good reason to give full right to Brian. Especially when Mel will lost her job.

Melanie deserve her career ruined and be blacklist by her peers. Ted has nothing that would be very interesting to take from him. Maybe Emmet's friendship. Debbie has two things in her life : her family and her Diner.

They haven't slowed down to put shit on Brian. Payback is a bitch. Right ? they don't deserve to be spared. I may be seems cold, cruel or even harsh but I can't not feel protective of Brian and Justin.

Brian and Justin forever.

C'est un réel plaisir de lire cette histoire. J'attends la suite avec impatience.

Sorry for my english. A bientôt.



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thank you

Reviewer: Rie (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 5

I love it and am so looking forward to the court scenes and the "family" except Emmett getting what they deserve.

I also hope that Lindsey gets hers. I hate that fact that she is following Melanie blindly without getting all the facts. I hope he makes them both pay and he gets his rights to Gus back.

I so love this story and look forward to reading more.

 

Rie

 



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New chapter is coming soon

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW, I haven't see this coming. I can't wait what have you prepared for the gang, but I think that they will pay dearly. I just hope that Brian and Justin will be strong enough with the help of their real friend to go through with everything. I can't wait for the next chapter. Love the story, Metka



Author's Response:

thanks = it will all work out

Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow!!  Go Justin!  I love it!  Great job as usual.  I can't wait to see what Jimmy has planned.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 5

i sure hope that jimmy is as much a pitbull in court that justin was in the diner and on the phone with lindsay.

brian thinks he lost everything, doesn't realize he has it all in the form of a blond spitfire.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 5

Amazing chapter. I love the strength Justin showed in sticking up for Brian. The love between them is so strong and they always have each other's backs. This is a beautiful story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, Oh, Oh!  No more Broken Angel, but a spitfire instead.  I'm so glad to see Justin confront the Liberty Diner crew and I just know you have more to say on that.  Looking forward to seeing how Jimmy handles the lawsuits and  all the rest of it.  Right now it looks like it's Justin's turn to take care of Brian.

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Reviewer: Jencancer5 (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 5

Whew!  Awesome!  You tell them Justin!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow just wowww  ... big bow for Justin.
Please I need more, love this so much.

* hugs *

Reviewer: amy (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

another great chapter, im enjoying the fallout and looking forward to more in the next chapters, and their reactions to being sued. this is great work.

looking forward to the next chapters

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow go Justin how dare Debbie act like a avenging angel and completely denigrate  Brian's reputation. Mel you expect it from but Lindsay and Michael wtf, I hope Justin and Jimmy annihilate the gang.

Looking forward to the next chapter xChris

 

Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW WOW JUSTIN I LOVE JUSTIN VERY VERY MUCH WOW MY GOD THIS STORY IS VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL ........... PLEAS COUNTINU VERY SOON

Reviewer: esromjk (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 5

I don't review very much, but that was soooo great. I love fics where Justin goes off at the family & tells them what he is really thinking about the way they treat Brian.

 

Can't wait for the lawyers to rip into Melanie & Ted & the boys get custody of Gus

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 5

Way to go Justin. I love it.

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

I cannot wait.  need more more more... lol sooooo mmmm goood.



Author's Response:

working on it

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 5

*Jumping up and down and pissing in my pants with joy as Justin rips them a totally new asshole. That was only the first salvo from a blond twink with fire in his eyes.

Time to change my shorts now.

Oh happy days!!!!! :D



Author's Response:

Brat - yes it's the first.

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