Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For BROKEN ANGEL
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2020 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 4

Brian truly is looking after Justin so we'll and he is in love with him his actions speak so loudly. How can his so called friends do that to him. I hope he lets them know how that made him feel. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2019 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 4

those fuckers, hope they get theit due, mainely Michael and Deb and Mel

Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2019 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wtf????? If I have such friends I won't need any enemies. This is too much. I hope Justin don't find out. 

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2015 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

They went too far. Seriously. No one deserves such "friends" :( I'm disappointed. They ruined his life...and he was so happy with Justin.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2013 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

OMG! With friends like that.....

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 4

sons of bitches.   i knew it was coming but damn.   i just hope the tell off is around the corner.  you're an awesome writer.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 4

I love Cynthia.

Everyone else?  Not even a little bit.

How horribly cruel of them to not even ask a question or two, if they were really actually concerned for Justin, before trying to destroy their "friend".

Reviewer: Jasmine (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 4

I just love this story!!! I hate Ted who is nothing more than a jealous ugly piece of crap who was always envious of Brian, can we have him die of an od...Michael the spoiled rotten mama's boy still attatched to loudmouth Debbie's tit....Melanie, the ungrateful bitch who doesn't mine taking Brian's money, and also the world's worst lawyer...LIndsey, who needs to have a backbone but goes along with whatever Mel  says because she is nothing more than a robot...and Debbie, the wig-wearing, loud-mouth, crass, turd! Okay, I can't help it, I hate the gang and I'm hoping that Brian & Justin will get their revenge on them and Ryder...It's funny that all the gang couldn't find the time to go see Justin when he was in the hospital, but now have the never to want to protect him....I've never been so angry after reading a story as I was when I read this latest chapter....your writing is so good that I had to keep reminding myself to calm down! Can't wait for the update!!



Author's Response:

Jasmine, you make me giggle - I'll see what i can do to make the gang disappear.

Reviewer: Irishlass76 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ok here's what Brian needs to do. He needs to  sue that paper for slander, then sue Ryder for wrongful termination. Then he needs to tell all his so called friends to go fuck themselves and never talk to them again. Then he and Justin can live happily ever after. I loved when they finally signed the papers. Because of course we all know that it really is for real, and just for the insurance. How could they even think Brian would do something like that. He should also sue for custody of Gus, so he's not around those hateful people anymore.  I want to kill Mikey and his so called friends.



Author's Response:

Brian will have his revenge - you can be sure of that.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

Geez, if these are Brian's friends, then he doesn't need enemies.  No one could forgive them for destroying Justin and his lives.  I hopes he gets even and then loses their names and numbers forever.  If any "friends" of mine did this to me...well...you get the drift.

 

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh no! Brian has been so good to Justin! I can't believe that he's been fired!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow...that was unexpected. I officially hate all of "the gang". But where was Vic during all of this? I love the story and look forward to whatever it is you have planned. :)

Reviewer: Cheryl (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 4

What a wonderful story.  I finally finished reading all four chapters.  I can't wait for Brian's wrath to catch up with everyone, well except for Emmett and Lindsay.  Write more, like yesterday!

Cheryl

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 4

You have me steaming at Mel now. Ryder has no just cause to fire Brian. Justin can easily defend him and put this down. The gang needs to be rewarded for their meddling and all. Very interesting turn of events you wrote. Poor Justin if he sees this on the news before Brian can tell him in person.

Ted should be crucified for his actions. Give Michael some attention and he'll tell Brian all he needs to know; Debbie would tell Justin given the chance. I'm very much looking forward to where this goes next. Six months pay and 1.5M is a nice nest egg for a new advertising agency to be born. That doesn't count the wrongful termination suit award Brian has coming to him in time.

However you take this I really hope the gang gets it broken off in them deeply with excessive force :)



Author's Response:

goodness Bob - I'll see what I can do.

Reviewer: SkIE (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 4

This story is amazing. please update soon. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 4

I'm still loving this story.  Great job!  I can't wait for the so-called "family" to get theirs.  I was wondering if Brian could sue for wrongful termination.  I mean they fired him because of an article with no proof of his guilt.  He could use that money to open his own agency....and then proceed to crush Ryder in business.  The best type of revenge.

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

Those so called friends just don't know when to mind their own business do they? I'm hoping that Mels need to get even completely fucks them all, I'm sure Jimmy will have a thing or two up his sleeve! As ever a great chapter x

Reviewer: mea (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 4

i really like your  writing.  i have been reading all your stories.  it has taken me a while and not half way through yet,  i started this one as it is new to see what you were up to in this story.  i just love it.  brian never ceases to amaze me.  the man has many hidden talent.  wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thank  you very much

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 4

i love it



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 4

Hi!

Lindsay and Emmet were the only ones who didn't put shit on Brian. I hope they will help Brian and Justin.

Did Brian already give his right on Gus to Melanie? I don't want that Gus is taking away from them. Justin needs him too.

Brian has the support of Jimmy, Vanessa, Chief, Daphne and doctors that will proves that Brian didn't take advantage of Justin. Justin is now considered an competent adult so he has the right to talk. What are Michael & co have?

I love your story and the new characters. I can't wait the next chapter.

Sorry for my english. A bientôt.



Author's Response:

thanks for stopping by - and your English is great

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 4

Argh, I can't wait to see the egg on everyone's face when the truth finally comes out.  Justin can now speak for himself!!!!  I hope Michael finds out about where they are living and Maisse bites him on the leg and Cat pisses on Melanie.  They've just made a huge mistake bringing this public.

This is your fault - if you didn't write so well, I wouldn't be so angry.

 

PS- I love that Brian uses the word our - that's so cool.

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Author's Response:

I'm glad you caught that

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

Cannot believe that "the gang" did this. I hate them right now!!!!!!! But also I am glad that Justin seems so much better and will be able to protect himself. I am wondering whether Brian will open his own agency right now???  Great work!!



Author's Response:

You never know - he may just do that

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love this story i ccan not wait for the next chapter

poor brian getting fired and poor brian and justin and  the

 rag magazine that brian ans justin friends wrote abou them

both very sad

your doing a wonderfu; job writting this get story



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: amy (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 4

i am loving this fic, the paat chapters have been great esp. justin talking in his own head because he carnt express him self verbally. I loved the last chapter, all i could think of when reading it and the reaction of Brians and Justin suppossed family was assholes.

I carnt wait untill the next chapter, i hope 'the family' gets what coming to them esp, micheal, deb, ted, and Lindsey.

Hope you post again soon.

Please hurry. lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for stopping by

Reviewer: amythesw (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 4

I just found this story and I am loving it!!!!

Can't wait til the next update!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Britin-JantoLover (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 4

Really loving the story and really great part!

Can't wait to see what happens!

thanks

xxx



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

OH MY GOD ........... I REALY WANT KILL MICHEAL AND MELANI AND ALL OF THEM OH DARLING I CAN NOT WAIT UNTIL THEY ARE DISCOVER REALITY ...... I BET MICHEAL FACE IS VERY SEEABLE



Author's Response:

it will be interesting

Reviewer: DAWNA (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

You are simply AWESOME!!!!  I've read many, many of your stories here and they are so wonderful. This one has got to be in my top five! Please update soon!!!! I'm dying here!!  I love to hate the "family" too and could so see something like this happen. They have to be the  nosiest, judgemental and spiteful group of friends ever.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for stopping by

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 4

so glad brian and justin have sam, jimmy who brian better put to work on a slander suit , nessa and daphne because with the others who call themselves his friends aren't worth the paper the story was written on. how dare they!



Author's Response:

Wow - well trust me they will get their just desserts.

Reviewer: Helenann23 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 4

Loved this chapter like all the rest, and I have been waiting since the last chapter.  I love this story. I also want to thank you for updating so qiuckly, and I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

Thanks



Author's Response:

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