Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For BROKEN ANGEL
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2020 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Brian is absolutely marvelous in this, doing the right. Such beautiful and sensitive writing. Thank you x

Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2019 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh no :( Everyone ditched Justin. I'm so sad. What is wrong with them? How can they forget Sunshine like that? I'm so pissed.

At least Brian and Daphne care :((((

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2016 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is going to be a beautiful story. Brian has really taken charge and is providing everything to help Justin recover. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2015 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh goodness, I love how protective Brian is of Justin <3

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2015 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm loving this so much! It's so moving and angsty and just want I needed to read. :)

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like it.  Justin thinking, "Brian soooooo loves me."  So Justin-y.

- Jackie

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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Some stories like a recipe are better the second time.

 

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

this is breaking my heart to read but i have to finish because well i want to know what the others will think we comes out eventhough i know they are probably going to be a lot of Brian bashing but i can sit through that to see the looks on their faces.  Your stories amaze me.

Reviewer: masterglory (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2013 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is one of my favs of all times, I guess I've read it sooo many times that I've lost the count, eheheh;)

But....is there something new that I miss? I mean this story was finished three years ago, so to find an update these days made me hope for another chapter, sigh.

Anyway love you, Gloria♥

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2013 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Comfort food for the soul of a fanfic reader!  Always great to re-read this one -- nice to see it featured.

 

Always the best, Elsa Rose!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2013 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just finished reading this for the 3rd time, It's one of my favorites. Great story, great writing!!

Brava!

 

Carol

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2013 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm sitting at home relaxing and reading this wonderful story for the millionth time . This ha to be one of the best written stories and so hopelessly romantic! 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2013 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Really liked this story, sad, cute and an absolute treat to read.

Reviewer: CarolK1943 (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2012 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just re-read this story. It's just as good on the third read as it was on the first. Maybe this time I'll be able to get this comment to post. :::



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

I understand Brian's protectiveness, and disgust with Justin's "family" and "friends", but keeping them out of the loop also means even should they want to visit, Justin is all alone thinking they don't love him at all any more.  :(

I think Emmett and even Vic could be trusted to keep the secret... and I honestly don't think Jennifer would ever abandon her son.

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2011 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved the whole concept of this story! Brian friends did not know Justin long before the bashing. Maybe some of them would have forgotten him after he was no longer part of their circle.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2011 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, that was a fucking fantastic fic. You just made my day (c: Thank you so very much.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

I so love this story :)

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

I always love your Brian and Justin. :-)  It was so great to stop in this morning and find this story completed, just as you promised.  What a treat.  Others have said it, but I'll say it, too -- It's wonderful to have you writing B/J fic, again.  Thank you, and I'm looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was wonderful Rose.  Never thought of going in that direction but it worked wonderfully.  I loved that Justin stuck up for Brian when his family went against him.



Author's Response:

So Glad you liked it

Reviewer: masterglory (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have to say that usually I don't read wip...I'm always afraid that the author will leave the story incomplete:(, so usually I read only finished story.

But, this is a story from one of my fav authors on the earth, and I KNOW you're not the type to leave it unfinished, so....this is an amazing wonderful story, AND I LOVE IT, BRAVA, BRAVISSIMA!!!!!!!:):):):)

 

Love-ya, Gloria^____^

 

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, well, well, the true colours of the gang in pointing out. They are really some piece of work. I just hope that in the future chapters they will pay the priece for their stupidity and selfishness. Good job.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review

Reviewer: ducana (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love the story.  It is so sad to see Justin like this, and what it does to Brian made me want to cry.  But it is so like Brian to move heaven and earth to do something  for those he loves.  can't wait to read more  thank you for this story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story so far i like that justin is starting to speak keep up the

 great job i can not wait for the nest chapter

your doing a wonderful job on this store



Author's Response:

Thanks for stopping by again. I'm enjoying writing this story.

Reviewer: Bev (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was so sad to hear about your son. I cannot even imagine it. What a beautiful story you have written. I can't wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you Bev - I lose myself in my writing.

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Brian is so great, doing all these things for Justin. And pooor Justin I really hope that will get better soon.



Author's Response:

He will

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love this story.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Chapter 2 I am loving this story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

i like that justin is starting to speak

guud job writting this story



Author's Response:

thanks for stopping by

Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Glad to see something new from Moonshadow Woman - my favourite writer on Midnight Whispers.  I have all of her stories saved on to disk so that I can come back to them again later. I love the idea of this story and can't wait to see the outcome and whether Justin actually comes fully back to the world eventually. XEileen



Author's Response:

Nice to see you stop by - Justin and Brian will have their ups and downs as usual - but we all know that they are destined to be together

Reviewer: druscilla (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Seeing your new story really brightened my day, Elsa! It's good to have you back writing here, although I am anxious to get your new book as well.  I can't wait for more of this story, so please update soon and often!  It's fabulous so far, but I knew it would be.  Much love.  ~ Bev



Author's Response:

Thanks Bev for stopping by. I hope you enjoy the new book.

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, dear!  I only read finished stories, but I'm so excited to see you back in the QAF game -- this wait will be a long one, indeed!  Wheeeee! . . . Christmas in October!  Welcome back, Elsa! :-)



Author's Response:

I agree with you - I only read finished stories - this one will finish don't worry

Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wonderful to see a new story from you. And what a story its novel, heartbreaking and heartwarming all at the same time. I can't wait to see it reveal itself. x



Author's Response:

great to see you stop by - thanks for review

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

I absolutely adored this first chapter! I love that we get to be inside Justin's head; poor little thing. I can't wait till the next chapter!

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

Thanks bunches Cindy

Reviewer: Helenann23 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

MORE, MORE, MORE STORY PLEASE.  I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE, HOPE YOU'LL UPDATE SOON AND OFTEN.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my, what a beautiful, tender story.  Oh please update this, it's just a gem that is on its way to becoming a classic.  Great idea, novel, and very special.  Well done!

Again, please update and don't abandon it.

All the best.



Author's Response:

Thanks bunches - I never post anything unless it can be completed - this one will be - it's writing itself. There will be an update tomorrow.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hurray!!!  A new story from you!  I love your first chapter and am looking forward to the next.  Michael is such a whiner. 

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Author's Response:

Yep he is - whine, whine, whine

Reviewer: Robbie (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love it!  More please.  But I really need Justin to get better.  



Author's Response:

Justin will always get better with Brian in charge.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story. It takes a while to read though because i have to stop when it makes me cry. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

That's me the Schmoop Queen - I just love good old B/J love

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was very sorry to hear about your the loss of your son....and happy to see that you are back writing your amazing fics .... This is such a beautiful and sad story.... it's wonderful to see Brian being so loving and caring towards Justin when he needs him the most.... Thanks...



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review - Bill was my wild child, but filled with compassion for others - Generally he is the one I use when I channel my loving Brian.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

a great start to another wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Amazing first chapter!  So heartbreaking, yet hopeful.  Love the way you portray the family dynamics, and absolutely love Cheif!  Can't wait to see what kind of dog Justin picks out. 



Author's Response:

Justin's dog is inspired by another - down to the name - LOL - it was a 'must be'

Reviewer: carlou (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a touching and beautifully written story,I'm looking forward to the next chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wowww wonderful beginning of a new story. I'm already hooked.

* big hug *

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, I'm so happy to se you back. I know that this year has and probably still is very hard for you. I just hope that the pain is little more bearable. Love the begining of this story, and patiently waiting for next chapter. Big hug to you. Metka



Author's Response:

Thank you - it's been a year that's for sure - but losing myself in the boys is a great healer.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic story Elsa. I have so many feelings for this Justin, and Brian's devotion is just amazing. Will be looking forward to your next installement for this one without a doubt. Two thumbs way up!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Bob

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm very happy to see a new story from your Elsa. Looking forward to reading this soon once my latest chapter to my new story is finished.



Author's Response:

Thanks bunches Bob - your writing inspires me.

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