Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Decision

Hmm, interesting........ Can't decide if I'm OK with this chapter........ 



Author's Response:

Sorry for my delayed response. I had to wrap this one up so I could begin the new story. Next chapter is the last one. Thank you for all your great chapter comments Susan.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Agenda Begins

I KNEW there was going to be more trouble! A little sad this is almost finished... :(



Author's Response:

My next story is loads better

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 12: Jason

How nice of Justin to find someone for Emmett! Once again, Gus, too cute! :) 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Exchange

Wow, good chapter, a lot happened! Glad everyone is safe again. :)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 10: Latin Complications

Interesting....... didn't see that coming, with Molly! Always keeping us on our toes! :)



Author's Response:

I have to credit Mr. Hamster :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

Like Hobbs being put in his place! Interesting bar for the vampires.  :)



Author's Response:

Blood and sex go good together :P for vampires!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Gang

Enjoyed! :)



Author's Response:

:) Thanks

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

Poor Brian, so private and finding out they now know all of his secrets. Interesting chapter. You always make me feel bad for Craig at some point! :)



Author's Response:

Craig comes around and acts good from now on.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 6: Prince Felipe

:)



Author's Response:

:) back

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 5: Cousin Steven Taylor

You're making me nervous! Really enjoying the story! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! The hamster sends his love.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Game Begins

I'm really liking this story! Nervous about them showing Justin's picture around, wondering if Mikey is going to be the one to give him up!  :)



Author's Response:

Gay vampires mess up.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

Heeeeee! Wasn't expecting that from Emmett! Interesting about Craig.......



Author's Response:

I love Emmett and love to write him.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: I Know

Enjoying! :)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: Rite of Pasage

Standing ovation! :)



Author's Response:

Ahhh....you made the furry one blush again :)

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 15: Epilogue - The Beginning

Oh JT you never cease to amaze me: another triumph.  Now all I need is a story where brian and justin have a black girl sex slave they use to have babies:)



Author's Response:

LOL! What a plot bunny you got there. I hope you try the new story, Radioactive. I promise it won't be sad story. Thanks for commenting love.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 15: Epilogue - The Beginning

This was another wonderful story, JT. Makes me want to read the other vampire one again. Great story.

Author's Response:

You're too kind and I'm not worthy. I'd like to thank the Academy for... oh... wrong speech. Try the new story out too. It only looks sad at the start.

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 15: Epilogue - The Beginning

as usual - it was well worth the wait - excellent as always - thanks for the terrific read.



Author's Response:

Thanks Elsa very much. The hamster wouldn't tell me the next plot uptil I closed this one up.

A chill runs up my spine as I realize the possibly of RADIOACTIVE. Never has a plot idea done this before.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 15: Epilogue - The Beginning

A new beautiful story ends .... (Sigh) ... :)

Even if I did not take the time to comment as I did before I read each chapter with great pleasure

 

Thank you Bob

Thank you Little Hamster



Author's Response:

I'm happy to know you were still with us, and short comment hits are always welcomed. Let me just answer this one and say it's readers like you who make the challenge of creating a story worth all the effort, blood, sweat, and sometimes tears.  Hugs you beautiful man!

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Decision

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

 



Author's Response:

Thanks my friend :)

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Agenda Begins

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

 

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 12: Jason

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

 

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Exchange

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: Latin Complications

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Gang

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 6: Prince Felipe

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 5: Cousin Steven Taylor

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Game Begins

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 2: I Know

Love it, love you

:)

Gex

Reviewer: GiggleBean (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 15: Epilogue - The Beginning

loved the story it was great



Author's Response:

Thank you! for letting me know you were entertained.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 15: Epilogue - The Beginning

I'm honored that you dedicated this chapter to me!  squeel.   Sigh, I do love a happy ending.  The pictures of the castle and grounds were scrumsious.  Am I currect in suspecting another masterpiece from you soon?

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Author's Response:

I have started an online Spanish course and will make it my priority at this time; it's something I have always wanted to do. If the hamster gets a flash bulb creative moment I'm sure we can find time to soon write again. So far we have saved the human race in the Universe, gathered a community of vampires, tackled the Holy Bible and homosexuality after learning about Hollywood, solved impossible crimes with Justin's psychic powers, and now completed a royal vampire dynasty of Taylors to a happy ending. I'm drifting away from crack!fiction writing, and hoping to do something more canon like and within the realm of realistic stories. (me? yeah right!)

(The furry one is whispering into my ear.....)

How about Justin gets his letter invitation to Hogwarts on his 11th birthday and he gets free from his wicked uncle Craig and snooty aunt Jennifer not to metion his spoiled cruel older cousin Molly, and meets Professor Kinney who teaches Defense Against the Dark Arts? On Justin's 16th birthday the good professor shows his most powerful long magical wand to Justin and they bury it with manly pride? :D Can Justin handle a 13 and 1/2 inch hard, very thick Oak like woodie with the a dragon's heart string for the core? That's a lot of wand for a beginner to deal with. Just a thought since you mentioned it.

The hamster just pulled that out of his furry rear end. Maybe we can do better :)

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 15: Epilogue - The Beginning

wonderful ending to this wonderful story.  hope you are better.  you must take care of yourself.  will you be writing more at some time when your health improves?  i guess i've gotten addicted to your stories.  my life is good, happy, have a lover who is good to me, sweet.  take care lol to u.



Author's Response:

I'm much better today Brian and decided to complete this story last night. Glad to hear of your new happiness. If you can make it in New York, you can make it anywhere! Thanks for commenting and you have fun my friend. Remember you're young, beautiful, and this is when you should have the time of your life.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 15: Epilogue - The Beginning

A lovely ending to a very nice story. I see you can write a semi-short story afterall. With the time zone in Europe I saw at once when you posted this final chapter and jumped right on it. Thank you JT for another great read and always for finishing your work quickly. I wish more writers could do the same. It is pleasant to read a story and not forget the previous chapters waiting for updates. Some of them take many months to update their stories or try to carry too many works in progress at once and it is very difficult to follow them in progress.

I'm delighted how this vampire tale differs from Embraced in so many ways. At first I feared you might get too political and redundant in vampire activities but instead this was a perfect blend of details, plot, characters, and events moving forward rapidly and holding my interest to a clear complete ending leaving no questions unanswered.

Considering the variety of your work I can't imagine what you'll write next but I'll be looking forward to it as a dedicated fan of your stories. I hope you are well and I will soon see something new from you and Mr. Hamster.

Love from Germany,

Jo Ann



Author's Response:

I can't say for sure when I'll write again, but I know one thing; I couldn't stop writing if my life depended on it. This is too much fun and the readers are so kind.

Usually I try my best not to write and a new story comes to me and it demands I follow the muse and vision until it's done.

The mental wheels are always turning, and I'm always dreaming about what might be fun to write.

Thank you for your comments; they mean a lot to me.

I'm much better; thanks for asking.

JT

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Decision

get better

i look forward to reading more of this amazing story



Author's Response:

I'm better; just weak a lot. More soon. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Decision

Glad you're back. Missed you . Great chapter. Love and kisses to you and the furry one.

Author's Response:

I didn't go far; traveled all over the house :) Mr. Hamster sends his love. Thank you Lorie.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Decision

good chapter justin has balls but i fear trouble down the line.  i knew u were not well.  just call it my good gut feeling.  glad u are better.  my dad had same affliction.  don't drink any dark liquids-- they play havoc with your kidneys.  been to boston on spec decisions. luv life good!!!  lol



Author's Response:

Dr. says to intoxicate myself on cranberry juice.  I've survived worse than this; just feel like crap. Not good when I have to cook Thanksgiving for 8. Getting cold up there yet? love you Brian.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Decision

Sorry to hear about  you're stone.  It's nice to have you back in writing form.   How dare the other vampires not wanting a gay prince!  I wonder what would happen if someone started a little roumor.

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Author's Response: 100th Reviewer! Next chapter is dedicated to you. It almost seems too easy to change things; huh? Time will tell. Vampires and Republicans are the same; they go for blood :D Love you Yum.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Decision

thats sound serious i hope your ok great story so far



Author's Response:

The good news is I will live; the bad news is poorly until it's over. This is one of the curses of middle age. Hope to have a new chapter up soon. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 14: The Decision

That's ok JT, I passed one of those a little smaller when I was 9.  Great update but I don't trust Louis.



Author's Response:

I haven't begun to pass it yet but they do wreck havoc on your digestive system; flu like symptoms, weakness, nausea, etc. More problems than I will bear you with or the details. Suffice to know it is no fun to deal with. If I had known all the problems growing older I might have reconsidered it :)  Considering the alternative perhaps it's not so bad afterall. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: JAnn (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Agenda Begins

Get your computer fixed. I have to find out what happens next. What happened to it anyway?



Author's Response:

I was working on the next chapter and heard my computer start clicking; then I got the blue screen of death and the machine rebooted and asked for a boot disk. The only moving parts in a computer are the fans which are usually quiet and the hard drive which has all your stored main memory. As an old computer technician I knew the hard drive was starting to go out.

I don't have the equipment anymore (or the eyes) to deal with it myself and I have some very critical data and software to save. I drove over 150 miles today roundtrip to the best technician in North Texas to have him make a mirror copy of my old harddrive's data transferred to a brand new one. I didn't trust any local technicians with something this serious. I should get it back next week after he deep dry freezes the sick drive before copying it. That usually keeps an HDD drive going long enough to copy it even if it's on the last leg.

Thank you for asking and thank you for reading Jo Ann.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Agenda Begins

Brian I think is getting tired of the old gang except Emmett.  This meeting is not good in Texas.



Author's Response:

Brian is also concerned about their secrets getting out. My main computer is sick so I can't say when the next chapter is coming. I'm using a Notebook now and can't type on it for s*it. Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 12: Jason

Michael will just not get it.  Jason is a HUNK!  WOW!!! 



Author's Response:

I usually trash Michael in a story; it's so much fun and he's so easy. Jason is very nice indeed.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Agenda Begins

Very happy for Emmett.
Love the Brian and Jusrtin interaction.
Hope they will find out about this problem and take care of it as quickly as the last one.
Love and kisses to you both.

Author's Response:

I love Emmett and he deserves to be loved. The vampire clans problem is not a small one. Love you back. Thank you!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Agenda Begins

WOW...I didn't know that Vampires are involved in politics... it looks as if Emmett has hit the Jackpot with Jason...lol... I have to ask you another question.... what is so special about being 16??.. it seems that most of the "young" vampires ..Justin, Jason, Steven etc.... want to remain that age.... why??? how can anyone take them seriously if they are still teenagers after 100 years???



Author's Response:

They may look young but they still will age and mature mentally and emotionally. Maybe it's a gay vampire thing to stay young looking. And Jason is human but Emmett can freeze his age appearance. Other vampire princes did allow themselves to age but Justin is different in many ways. Thanks for asking and commenting.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Agenda Begins

happy for emmett.  out of all the people in this story emmett is my favorite after b&j. this chapter so good.  read it twice.  guess i'm a sucker for people getting what they want and finally need.  job good==met someone.  WOW!!! MORE LATER IF THINGS WORK OUT. lol



Author's Response:

SWEET!!! Sounds like the Big Apple might be taking a few bites out of you (in a good way). Main computer sick and using a Notebook; can't type. Next chapter may be delayed.

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Agenda Begins

Interesting!!! Another problem for the boys. Cannot wait to see what will happen.

 



Author's Response:

The damn hamster won't tell me about it until I'm ready to type it. Due to sick computer next chapter could be delayed.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Agenda Begins

I downloaded this to WORD to read it at work. Sneaky I know. Conservative vampires? This can't be good. I laughed at Blake with the wondering eye for a big one. Too funny.



Author's Response:

Don't get sacked for fanfiction girl; thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 12: Jason

Great work!! Glad to see that the boys will spent some time with Gus and I am happy for Emmett!!!



Author's Response:

It's good for Gus too. Justin seems perfect with kids. Emmett is a very lucky vampire. Custom lovers aren't cheap. Love you!

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 12: Jason

I can't help but laugh at michael. Emmett scored big time and I do mean big! Thick is ok but that's too long for a woman to enjoy. Must be a gay thing or something. It was nice of them to give the building to Emmett and his new lover. Love the story JT.



Author's Response:

You're not the first girl to tell me that. Depending on the guy big can be nice. There's a saying in the gay world: "If it's more than a mouthful, sit on it." hehehehe Thanks for commenting Terri.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 12: Jason

A nice Melanie - that's a nice change!!!  Michael can't seem to keep his mouth shut can he?  Thank goodness he has Ben to help keep him out of  trouble.  Sometimes I wonder how Ben can stand being with such a whiny snit.  Emmett made out like a bandit this chapter!!!  Good show.

 

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Author's Response:

Please excuse my delay in answering you. I had to catch up on some much needed sleep. Melanie can be nice if it suits her. Michael's a idiot; what more is there to say? Ben, well having HIV does limit your dating pool substainually and Ben has the patience of a Buddist saint. Yes, Emmett did good. More about him and his new mate will be in the story since they are neighbors soon for Brian and Justin at the loft. Thanks so much for your comments.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Exchange

Mr. Hamster seems to have lost weight.  I'm liking the Spanish Prince.  So glad that Molly's back with her family and that Stephen made it through okay too.  Who do you get to be evil next?

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Author's Response:

Mr. Hamster is only skinny in his avatar form. Felipe is a very good man indeed. Couldn't let Molly get hurt and Steven is to deadly to be hurt much either. He may look young and small but he's all dynamite inside. The vampire world has evil and it will soon show itself. Love you much for the reviews.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 12: Jason

It's great that Emmett found someone to love.... he reminds me of a young Hunter with longer hair...



Author's Response:

He's actually a male model and a very cute one at that. Thanks for commenting; sorry for the late answers as I was sleeping.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Exchange

I am glad that Steven came up with a great plan to save Molly.... cute Hamster..... lol...



Author's Response:

Steven is a formidable force indeed. The hamster's my cute muse and alter-ego :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 12: Jason

Great chapter.
Michael will never learn.
I'm glad Emmett finally has someone to love, he is so sweet.
Love and kisses to you and the fluffy one.

Author's Response:

Please excuse the late answer as I was sleeping off two days up. We'll have another Ice Age before Michael grows a brain. Love and kisses back at you.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Exchange

Wonderful chapter. Loved it so much.

Love and kisses to you both.

Author's Response:

The hamster and I are so grateful for your chapter comments. Love you too Lorie.

Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Exchange

the poor kids.hope he doest plan to use them as servants.

 

hope he lets them go



Author's Response:

The Prince of Spain is far too noble for that. The next chapter answers you question. Thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Exchange

wow!!! vampires and the spanish mafia of sorts.  good chapter man.  your mind works so unbelievably devious.  guess that's what makes a good writer.  all good here in ny.  clubs are fantastic--but i'm being safe.  lol



Author's Response:

Love to hear from you Brian you lucky devil. New York is a gay mecca full of beautiful men and boys. I forgot to mention the best chance of catching a bug is at the baths but still you have to protect yourself all ways. Another chapter is up and Emmett gets very lucky with Justin's help. Love you man and thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Exchange

Now this is getting GOOD.  Prince Felipe sure knows what's best.  Glad Molly and Steven are ok.  Great update.



Author's Response:

I'm writing the next chapter this morning since I felt like staying up last night. The roller coaster is well under way :) and the hamster is at the controls. I hope you emptied your pockets before getting on board. Love you for commenting soooo much!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 10: Latin Complications

This is becoming very intriguing.  I'm glad Craig is on Justin's side now.  Hopefully something will be done about Molly.



Author's Response:

Since the next chapter is up you won't have to wait for the answer. The cat will soon be out of the bag about Justin's sexual orientation worldwide. Thanks so much for commenting love.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Exchange

Congratulations on the blue ribbon too.



Author's Response:

Thanks; I was shocked to see it since the story is hardly developed yet but I'm grateful for it none the less. It motivates me to write more for you and try to earn it.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Exchange

It is good to see that end well and Molly is safe. The Spanish prince is an interesting character and will be in the story more me thinks. Silver bullets; who would have thunk it? I thought it was a werewolf thing but horror stories are not my thing. Thanks for the fast updates JT.



Author's Response:

In folklore silver and other things can harm a vampire. My vampires are also human but silver is deadly for them, and regular bullets can hurt them too. If the hamster doesn't go asleep on me the updates will be quick since I'm only writing one story again at a time. At the most I should only be 3 days between chapters unless out of town. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 10: Latin Complications

Great sex with B&J in the beginning. I LOVE our boys making out. The ending was a real shocker. Glad to see you just posted the next chapter so I don't have to wait to see where this goes next. Cliff hangers can be so nervewrecking.



Author's Response:

I'm the same way about cliffies and always try to end them very quickly. love you terri

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 10: Latin Complications

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you Rainbow :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 10: Latin Complications

Loved the first scene in this chapter.
Stomach in knots by the end. Please fix this fast. Love always.

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting Lorie. Working on the next chapter right now.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 10: Latin Complications

WOW... it looks like eventhough they were warned of of the kidnap plot against Justin... they were caught by surprise when they grabbed Molly instead....  I have a question about Justin's age... if he stays 16 forever how will he grow up to be 21...which is how old he needs to be to become the new Prince??? wouldn't it make more sense to wait till he actually becomes 21 before he stops aging... lol...



Author's Response:

Even if Justin stays 16 physically he will still age from his recorded brithdate. A vampire can be thousands of years old and not look a day over 35 for example. Thank you for noticing this, asking and commenting BluvsJ.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 10: Latin Complications

Damn this is getting complicated.  Hopefully Brian will think of a way out of this mess.  I wonder what Emmett is up to. Great Chapter

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Author's Response:

This is a vampire matter and Brian really has nothing to do with it but being with Justin. Next chapter is well underway. Thanks YumYumPM for your comment very much.

Reviewer: adam (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

this story is coming along quite nicely.  nice pictures.  i saw that swedish dish singing somewhere.  don't recall where before you put it up.  cute but a tad too young for me. later



Author's Response:

Thank you Adam. Sean is a singer from Sweden and I used his image since he is so cute and he's too young for me too, but not too young for fanfiction or a vampire boy frozen at 16 too :)

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

told you mr. hobbs would get it.  what an a--hole he is.  as my granny would say he got his cumuppance!!  good chapter lots going on. going to san antone.  not sure when- up in the air. lots going on in this co. am learning a lot tho. lol  p.s. may be going to paris for xmas.  what a hoot!!!



Author's Response:

I hope the French labor strikes and riots are over by then :) If I crossed the pond again in the future it would probably be Sweden since I'm totally queer for blonds with blue eyes and they have plenty to choose from there. I'm sure they have a twink cafe or 2 to my liking <snicker>

Did Hobbs learn his lesson or did it only make him madder? Time will tell.

San Antonio is a great city if you like the real uncut Mexican burritos  :P  Smell the cheese for Me! Actually it's a college town too with lots going on there. Check it out on gay.com

Always love to hear from you Brian. Will sleep tonight and maybe another day before creating the next installement of "Vampires/Humans in Lust/Love".

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

Hope that Hobbs learned his lesson.  love the name of the cafe! It's amazing what an American Express card can buy, lol.  Sean and Steven make a nice couple.



Author's Response:

I didn't want to hurt Hobbs too bad (yet) but he may have wet his pants :) Some American Express cards have no credit or purchase limit on them. The wealthy live in a world we can barely imagine. Sean and Steven or the new power couple in the story and a young mirror of Brian and Justin sort of. Thanks for writing your thoughts very much.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Gang

Ted, Ted when will you ever learn that insulting Brian doesn't make you look good.  I like the bodyguards.  Looks like Justin might need them for school.  How long do you plan to have Michael wise up?  It will be fun to watch all the things that could happen to him if he doesn't.  Maybe you could cook something up for Melanie while you're at it.  Enjoyed this chapter muchly.  Now on to the next.



Author's Response:

It will be interesting to see how the gang unfold; the shit has only begun to hit the fan for them since deep down they don't believe this is permanent yet for the most part except for Debbie. Mel may have a nose problem soon. Michael; 30 going on 15. What can I say? Love you.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

Sean definitely is a cutie.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I thought of the most beautiful Scandinavian boy I know and used him. If you read the reviews I reveal who he really is, a rising young star in Sweden. Thanks for commenting of course you know how much I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Gang

Mikey deserved what happened.  Chris just might get his ass kicked.  Great update.



Author's Response:

Hobbs might get worse; he might get exposed in public and lose face. He won't take that very well I fear. Mike was not going to get that badly hurt until Ben got involved. Love you!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

Hmmm, to have someone know everything about you.  Kinda scary.  I have to believe that Craig means what he says, cause what Louis says.  Wonder if Craigs gonna try for another son anyway.

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Author's Response:

Did Jennifer promise not to take birth control?   Craig gave a blood oath to install Justin as the prince on his 21st birthday under penalty of death. Justin only promised to kill him personally if he was to be a threat in anyway to Brian. Craig is not an issue anymore as you will see later. There are worse villians ahead. Love you dear.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 5: Cousin Steven Taylor

I tried to Google Sean's identity and it was too hard using all the hints I gave you guys so here he is. I'm quite sure this boy's straight but very beautiful anyway.

Just read between the lines of his amazing song.

"I will die...someday...let's hope it's not to ..... Day/Dave" :) That's pretty straight talking there!

(If you didn't know it "Dave" is a polite slang word for gay)

 

He's Ulrik Munther of Sweden, and he really is 16 years old but small for his age.

This is a link of him singing, in excellent English,  his original song "LIFE" on TV.

Go HERE to to see his amazing voice, soul and heart.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

Sean looks like Kirsten Dunst.
XXXOOO

Author's Response:

Maybe but not her kid at all. Think 16 y/o Scandinavian star, actor or singer, straight, very well loved in his country.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

First of all it was super to see Chris Hobbs get the shit kicked out of him mentally at least and embaressed (sp) to no end in front of his friends. That was so much fun to read.

Then the vampire cafe was both seductive, erotic, naughty, and alluring in concept. You always paint these wild settings.

Now let me comment on young Sean. Scandinavian boys are just adorable. I've seen that boy somewhere but I can't place him. I think he's a singer or an actor. I'm racking my brain trying to remember where I saw him but he made an impression on me. Thinking of him with Steven was hot young wild sex, and the fact he was saved from his servatude in that cafe was so romantic as well. Once again you had me near tears of joy and hopping in my seat for the characters.

I would love to see more of that pairing again. Love and kisses JT and hug the rodent for me :-)



Author's Response:

Hehehe....the cafe is a bit out there but what can I say? I sometimes write pretty queer things. <snicker>  You are so close to winning the little contest to identify Sean. I am not saying yet who he is but you are soooo HOT! as the kid game goes to figuring him out. I have the best source (never revealed) of photos of beautiful boys and men (not porn) on the Web. Most of them are gay too and gladly share their photos for our enjoyment. Gay boys are such Web attention hounds :P  I'm sure we will see more hot love with Steven/Sean, my S/s pairing :P--- HA!

"How sweet it is!"

 

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 5: Cousin Steven Taylor

Did I mention how hot Steven looks as a vampire boy? That photo is just like a boy being a boy and the expression on his face is darling. If I was younger.....

I had to go back and check him again after reading Chapter 9 and seeing his new lover there, Sean. What a Brian/Justin like pairing but much younger looking. Great theme JT.



Author's Response:

My best response is to repost Steven's and Sean's photos here. Steven is a little muscle bound doll no doubt about it.

For the record I know both these boys are 16 years old in real life. One is an average kid, and the other a rising star in his country.

stories/316/images/Steven.jpgstories/316/images/Sean.jpg

They do make a very cute couple.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Rite of Pasage

BTW. Love the name of the cafe. XXOO

Author's Response:

Thank you. I thought it would appeal to vampires who are hungry for feed. HA!

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

Excellent chapter! I am happy that Setven found someone.



Author's Response:

Yes, they should be a fun couple in the inner circle now. Thanks love for stopping by.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

Forgot to mention something. Better sex scenes are much appreciated. XXOO

Author's Response:

I'll try to remember that in future chapters :P

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

Forgot to mention something. Better sex scenes are much appreciated. XXOO

Author's Response:

Love those double clicks :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

Loved the way they took care of Hobbs and his friends.
I'm glad Steven found someone to love, Sean sounds adorable and very sweet.
Hugs, love and kisses to you and the fluffy one.

Author's Response:

I added Sean's photo to the chapter. I wonder who will realize who he really is first. I give a hint in the chapter. Thanks girlfriend!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Gang

I hope Craig keeps his word, it would be nice for Justin to have a good family.
Wonder if Michael will learn from this or if he will need additional lessons.
Loving this story although NC-18 is more fun to read then PG-13.
Love and kisses.

Author's Response:

Craig is mean but not stupid. They have bigger fish to fry later. Michael is always a late bloomer were brains are concerned and bashing him is too delicious to stop. Sex on the way :P

Love and kisses back at you.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Le Cafe Rouge Chaud

WOW....  I am sooo glad that Steven and Marcus took care of that S.O.B. Hobbs... it's about time someone taught him some manners... Le Cafe Rouge Chaud..reminds me of the Vampire Bar in True Blood....



Author's Response:

I have never seen True Blood. This was all my imagination for what might be fun for vampires in Pittsburgh; men and women, gay or striaght. Love you for chirping in hon.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Gang

I am glad that Craig is starting to act like a decent "Father-in-Law"... but.. I hope Brian and Justin don't let down their guard too much... and I really love Cousin Stevie...too bad he didn't go for Mikey's throat....lol... off to read the next chapter....  



Author's Response:

He won't be wacking off for a few weeks :P  The guards never let down their guard for our lovers safety. We will have bigger problems than Craig soon. That was a local acting company rehersal. Love you dear.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Gang

each succeeding chapter better than the last.  loved this one mr. hobbs is going to get his--worse than michael i fear.  you are amazing!!  love love this story.  work going good may have to go to texas soon to check out building areas.  see adam has joined the jt train.  nice guy. new roommate.  yes he's gay!!! lol  we'll see!!!



Author's Response:

Where in Texas Brian? I'm near Dallas. It might be fun to meet up for a lunch or something if you don't mind being seen with an older gay man in public :) I'm harmless except once a month :P Send me a private email from my profile page linked by my author name in the story panel if interested and/or coming to Big D.

Thanks for the reviews on each chapter and a new chapter is going up right now!

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Gang

I'm actually not a big vamp-fan but I like this story and I#ll be waiting for more ;) Hugs



Author's Response:

Congrads! You're my 50th review on this story! The next chapter is dedicated to you Sling.

I'm starting a new tradition to dedicate a chapter to each 50th reviewer. My way of saying thank you to the wonderful people who take the time to leave comments for me. This will be a cool vampire story mostly with a twist on how vampires are since in my story they are also part human too. Next chapter is almost ready.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Gang

With work and school I have been only a lurker lately but I have to say this story has me hooked. I'm a sucker for vampires and anything centered on a strong Justin makes me get all moist. Love it JT.



Author's Response:

I missed you but I know how RL can be at times. Lurkers are always welcome! Thank you for telling me you're reading this.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Gang

Very fun light hearted chapter following the intense one before it. Michael bashing is like sex and I can't get enough of it. Looking forward to see what happens after school too.



Author's Response:

Every story I wrote I give it to Michael one way or another. So you know what camp I'm in :)

Next chapter right around the corner. Thanks Terri.

Reviewer: adam (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

i am really into vampires.  wrote an essay on them in college.  the added sex makes this story very readable.  i am new to this web site.  was introduced to your writing by my new roommate brian.  he says you are the bomb.  so far i agree.  just finished embraced.  wow what a story mfg!!!.  looking forward to where this one goes.  your imagination is staggering. later.



Author's Response:

Hello Adam and welcome aboard the MW Express! Take care of my man Brian for me. He's a loyal fan and fun person to know from his comments to me. Thank you for this review and compliments. Some of my stories are a bit out there but that's to entertain you. I'd love to hear from you again ( and again, and again, until you get it right :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

Sorry.... I wouldn't want you to spoil the plot.... it's just a bad habit I picked up from reading the last page of a mystery novel first...( I actually do)... I guess I will have to wait and find out like everyone else..... lol.....  I am enjoying this fic.... Thanks.....  



Author's Response:

There is enough trouble without Craig in the picture, trust me on that. Next chapter will soon be posted as I'm writing it right now. Thanks for commenting love.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

OK...  Craig went through with the blood oath... so that mean's if he tries to to hurt Brian...that Justin will kill Craig himself... correct ??...but... is there some kind of loophole where he can hire someone else to do it....because I can't see Craig giving up that easily.... Thanks 



Author's Response:

We have to see how it turns out. Craig is bound by his oath to support Justin and Brian's relationship. If he does try to hurt Brian, Justin has sworn to kill his own father for it. If there's a loophole I'd spoil the plot telling it to you now wouldn't I? hehehehe Thanks BluvsJ for your comments very much.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 6: Prince Felipe

OMG... the Butler did it... lol.... it's nice to see Craig knocked down a peg and losing 3 Billion dollars in the process... one thing I have to say is that it looks like this fic will have a cast of thousands... I just hope I will be able to keep up with all the character's.... off to read next chapter..... 



Author's Response:

There will be a small number of new people and the occassional villiam from time to time. You should have no problem staying up on the cast numbers. I really hope this tale entertains you and thanks so much for your reviews.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

This is becoming a very intriguing story.  Love the vampire fic you did before.  Now another one: YEAH!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it dear. Embraced was fun to write and I was itching to do another vampire tale more mainstream and not a crackfic this time. Thanks so much for commenting.

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

Great! Thank you for the quick updates. This story is my new addiction.



Author's Response:

Thanks jizabel. Check out Moonshadow Woman's new story "Broken Angel" just started. She's a wonderful published writer and good friend.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

best chapter yet.  justin showed some balls-now he has to stick to his determination. money to burn in this story.  love the mention of cartels he he he!!!  moved in i don't know about living with all these people.  guess i'm a spoiled gay boy.  get some rest-come back strong.  don't make yourself ill man we need you writing.  guess it's become my drug. lol



Author's Response:

Justin needs his nerve for what is in store for him and he's off to a great start. They may have wealth but it won't dominate their lives since the money is vampire kingdom money. Are your rommates gay? Living with others can be fun if the place is big enough and someone knows how  to cook good. I've heard of NY roommates hot bunking it; are one leaves a bed and another roommate jumps in to sleep when the bed was still warm. Since rents are so high in the city the idea of so many in one apartment is more common than you may know yet. Unless you clear about 6K+ a month you may want to live cheaper this way. I slept and started the next chapter already. This will be the only story I work on until completed. Thanks for commenting very much!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

i love it



Author's Response:

:) Thank you Rainbow

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

OMG!!! Wow! I have read every story you wrote Bob and this is the most powerful, heartfelt chapter of your work to date. I'm so proud of Justin for standing up to his father and the love he shows for Brian was spellbindingly real. *tears*

Justin has so much heart; a true Braveheart for vampires. I predict this one will be another masterpiece novel for you if not you best story yet.

As a mother I see you writing too fast again. Get some sleep young man. Don't make yourself sick. We can wait for you.



Author's Response:

Thank you Terri very much for your kind words. The center theme of this novel is will Justin have the heart to be the Prince? I'd say he's off to a very good start but this was only his first trial under fire and he was surrounded by family to protect him as a new vampire. He did show backbone, and wisdom for someone so young. His love for Brian is without question; Brian may take more time to admit his love for Justin however, but that has more to do with his personal demons than Justin himself.

A masterpiece novel? That depends Terri. If the readers respond by reviews for each chapter, the hamster will perform. If not, the hamster will falter and loss his edge. I can only beg so much for even a :) or a "loved it" comment to keep my Muse alive. Reviews are the wind in his sails.

You're right and I have been up over two days for this set of chapters. I want to produce while the iron's hot even if some readers skip chapter comments to the latest one to comment hurting the chapter counts. I'm going to bed soon so this is the last chapter for a while. Thank you for your support.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

OMG!!! Wow! I have read every story you wrote Bob and this is the most powerful, heartfelt chapter of your work to date. I'm so proud of Justin for standing up to his father and the love he shows for Brian was spellbindingly real. *tears*

Justin has so much heart; a true Braveheart for vampires. I predict this one will be another masterpiece novel for you if not you best story yet.

As a mother I see you writing too fast again. Get some sleep young man. Don't make yourself sick. We can wait for you.



Author's Response:

Love those double clicks! :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 7: No other Blood for Me

Beautifully written chapter.
Love and kisses.

Author's Response:

Thank you! <passing out now>

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 6: Prince Felipe

Loved this chapter. That was a great way to fuck Craig over.

Author's Response:

It's' not over yet; Craig has so much more to learn. Love you Lorie very very very much; thank you!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 5: Cousin Steven Taylor

Are all the sex scenes going to be so short ? You had mentioned that this story was not just about the sex, but some would be really good.
Also wondering if they will be at least mostly monogamous in this story.
Love to you and the fuzzy one.

Author's Response:

Sex scenes will vary. I don't want to depend too much on raw smut to carry the novel forward. Been there, done that. I hope to make it much more romantic. Brian and Justin will be very monogamous with the one exception of Steven, their personal bodyguard from here forward. You will learn he needs it to preform his duties well. Mr. Hamster says "Squeek!" :P Thank you so much for chapter comments Lorie.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Game Begins

Great chapter. Love how strong Jennifer is in the story. Kisses for the hamster

Author's Response:

She's a lion were her children are concerned. Kisses back! Thanks!

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 6: Prince Felipe

Great story!! I like the world and the characters that you have created!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Please comment again as you're reading. Mr. Hamster needs your love.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 6: Prince Felipe

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you! We missed your comments sweetheart and glad to hear from you.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 6: Prince Felipe

ROTFLMAO! A fitting punishment for Craig, and a whopper chunk of change for Justin's trust fund from his own father's account. Talk about killing four birds with one stone! Mr Hamster, I tip my hat to you. Brilliant! I can't wait to see what you cook up next if this is just the first salvo. I would not want Justin's grandfathers angry at me at all!

By the way, all those new jobs for Spain was a very nice touch. I get the feeling world politics might work something like this in reality.



Author's Response:

He he, the hamster was laughing as he dictated this chapter to me and could barely get out the details. Maybe Craig learned his lesson. NOT! Thank you very much for chapter comments that totally rock and make us work hard for you guys.  It's always a mystery how 300+ people can read a chapter and maybe two or three clap for the performance. If they were writers they would understand how it feels not to hear from the audience.

Once upon a tiime I was going for a Political Science degree. Those classes will help me make this story interesting.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 5: Cousin Steven Taylor

Craig's spies worked fast. Scary shit. Charles and Louis are adorable grandfathers and very wise. Steven's a doll; I would squeeze him until he couldn't stand it. Then you end with the contract on Brian. OMG!!! What a cliff hanger but I don't have to wait to see what's next.



Author's Response:

I would imagine if you live for hundreds and thousands of years you might learn a trick or two. Enjoy the end of the cliffie.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 6: Prince Felipe

I'm sure it was no hardship for Brian to follow Justin's instructions.  Brain will make a very good adviser, his reputation as being an ass hole will really be a big help.  I'm worried that Craigs spies will find out that Emmett is helping Justin.  Or try something against Brian's family and friends since killing Brian is no longer an option.  Hmmm, that would be one way of deleting Jack and Joan Kinney!  I've seen the way your devious mind works, this is going to have more plot twists and turns isn't it?  Tell the hampster to keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

This is AU so Brian may not be such an asshole but still he must relate to canon in general. Frankly Emmett, and the Kinney's are very small fish in the pond. Hardly worth Craig's attention. More than one reader calls my stories a roller coaster on Meth with no respect for gravity. Nowhere does it say in the writing manual we must only have one ride going at a time :)  Thank you very much for being a chapter supporter Yum.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 5: Cousin Steven Taylor

WOW... it looks like Craig has spy's everywhere.... I hope Stevie is as good a bodyguard as he thinks he is....lol...



Author's Response:

Time will tell and he was the bodyguard for the oldest most important Taylor vampire alive. That's good for something. Thanks again for commenting/clapping for the chapter.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 4: The Game Begins

What a creepy Bastard Craig is.... his own father has no problem choosing Justin over him....I hope Jennifer doesn't drink whatever that psycho gives her...off to read next chapter....



Author's Response:

Louis knows how his son Craig is and how innocent Justin and Brian are.  The man should be wise enough to deal with Craig without having to end his own son however. Love you. Jennifer doesn't have to fear the drink but she may not stop her little pink pills anytime soon :) Craig can just die trying to make a baby :P

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Game Begins

this is shaping up very well.  these vampire covens sound sort of like cartels around the world only they are into blood not drugs.  will be interesting if jennifer can concieve.  if not then here we go again.  you have so many twists and turns.  can't seem to second guess this story yet.  good writing man.  found a place to live with 3 other people 2 guys 1 girl.  should be interesting.  will do til something else comes along. lol



Author's Response:

I think it's wise to first have roommates until your salary goes up later, and you get to know the city really well. There is usually a hidden economy for the regulars and a much higher price for the newbies to pay. By having roommates first you get to network and learn who's who so you can later find an affordable place to live. Does that make sense? As to the story we have only begun to stir the pot. Thanks so much for reading and commenting Brian.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Game Begins

My, my.  I was beginning to wonder if Jennifer was more closely related to Louis XIX, until you put in the part about him chosing Justin over his son, Craig.  Loved that part.  So having a male lover isn't against Vampire tradition after all.  I can't help but feel sorry for Ben, he is too nice for Michael.   Of course that's just my opinion.  Love to see how you take this storyline.

 

PS- I don't trust Craig at all.



Author's Response:

I did mention in chapter one that Louis changed his name to Taylor and a father carries the family name. Glad you didn't get lost honey! Actually you found a mistake in my writing. Jennifer did say her family would help but it was Craig's family that came for him. I'll repair that right now. Let's say both sides of the family are on Justin's side. That was my thinking as it happened.

Trusting Craig may be like eating glass. Nothing good can come out of it. Thanks so much for your comments. They're my reward for writing and it keeps the hamster from biting me.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 4: The Game Begins

I love how you update so quick. It seems global vampire politics will play a role in the coming events. Is Craig seriously safe now or was he only trying to appease his wife for the time being? I don't trust him one bit. Michael is being a snot but what's new? Give the hamster a kiss from me for a job well done.



Author's Response:

Local, regional, national, and international politics will some be part of this twisted tale of love, and power. Kiss delivered and he blows one back at you. Thanks so much for your chapter comments.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2010 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you Rainbow :)

Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

loving the story



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

I just realized something..... did Vampire rules change??? because if not... how could both Emmett and Justin be out walking around in the daytime and eating brunch.... please explain this to me... Thanks..



Author's Response:

In my story vampires are humans who eat blood, live forever at an age of their choice, and in general are just like humans with a few exceptions. So yes I've changed the rules so to speak for this story. In the first chapter with that French history lesson this was detailed. Thank you for noticing and commenting.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

OMG... I love it...... Emmett is a "dirt poor lowly Vampire from Mississippi"... lol... after Brian and Justin Emmett was always my favorite... he is a true friend.... if Mikey keeps acting like a pain in the ass... maybe Justin can turn him into a toad or something..... I can't wait to see what happen's next... Thanks...



Author's Response:

What is not to love about Emmett? I too find his character wonderful and he's a major player in this tale. Thanks for commenting very much.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 2: I Know

WOW... Jennifer is an amazing woman and they are very lucky to have her on their side.... Craig is still the same cruel and heartless Son of a Bitch...no matter what century he is from.... off to read the next chapter.... 



Author's Response:

As one reviewer noticed we know the characters so I'm going right into the first conflict set up with growing details on the way. Somehow I sense Craig won't be the only villian too. Love you!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

Love this story so far, thanks.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thank You! I hope to make this one a great read for you. Hugs back!

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Rite of Pasage

Wow I am so excited to see e new story from you!! I have never read a B/J vampire stories but I will definitely follow this one! You've got me hooked from the first chapter and I am big fan of the vampires' books and movies.



Author's Response:

I too am a huge vampire fan and see homoerotica in the male vampire theme everywhere so it blends well with a B/J storyline. I also wrote Embraced, another vampire tale that was a crack!fice and got pretty strange at parts. This one will be truly mainstream and not cracky. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: October 17, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

this story is getting amazing!!!  you are writing and posting very quickly.  such fun to read.  still apt. hunting. lol



Author's Response:

If I don't post I'm probably sleeping, cooking, or shopping at the moment for the house. Otherwise I'm having no writer's block for this tale and should move quickly if I'm awake. I must say the days of me staying awake 2-3 days straight writing are over but I can still produce at a slower pace than before. The thought of paying thousands for an apartment makes me sick to my stomach. NY is so damn expensive. Good luck and thank you for commenting Brian.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

Loved this chapter.
Emmett is my favorite character after Brian and Justin.
Hugs and kisses to my favorite fuzzy one.

Author's Response:

Emmett is such a colorful character one would be nuts not to have him in the story. This also adds the prince and pauper theme somewhat if you noticed. I hope to see a lot of Emmett as the novel progresses. Love you Lorie and thank you.

Reviewer: Terri (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

Some how I think Emmett and Justin will be very good friends in the future. He is so loyal in canon and in your stories generally. Thanks JT for the fast updates. Give Mr. Hamster a cookie for a job well done.



Author's Response:

You're right about Emmett and Justin. If I write something in a story there is usually a reason for it later. Cookie delivered.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 3: Emmett

Emmett a vampire????  Squeeeee!!!!  This gets better and better

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Author's Response:

Since vampires are among humans daily they can hide very easily and reveal their existance as they see fit. I'm glad you're enjoying my work and thank you for all your comments.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 2: I Know

That's so funny...Craig wanting to kill the girl.   I wonder what will happen when he finds out that Justin's lover is a guy?  This is going to be another nice long story, right?

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Author's Response:

I haven't wrote one yet under 180,000+ words so you're probably right. The average book is only 80,000 words for comparision.

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