Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Playing with Fire
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 12

love your imagination. great story. fun read.



Author's Response:

thanks i'll update my latest one tommorrow and i'll also be starting a new fic soon

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 11

how are they going to get away now?

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 10

exciting.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 9

really exciting now. can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 8

they should have outed chris and john right then and there. now if they could only turn the tables to make it look like those two did it all would be great.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2010 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 7

thank goodness molly was okay. think they should have just called the police.

who was watching, either chris, ethan, or michael. all had a grudge against justin and michael's grievence was that brian wanted justin and not him.



Author's Response:

i'll be upgrading tomorrow

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 6

yay for brian and justin. now can they get molly away from that lunatic and let him jump by himself? hope so.

brian really should keep their sex life to himself. lol



Author's Response:

well you know what brians like he cant help himself

 i'll probably update tomorrow or the day after so you can see if what happens but dont worry he's going to get a nasty suprise

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

a bit hard to follow who was taking and where brian and justin were.

brian better get in there fast to keep craig from doing anything to jennifer, tucker or justin.

i am enjoying this even if i am the only one reading it.



Author's Response:

thanks

 yeah sorry i do try but my writing is not great i should either be updating tonight or tommorrow

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 4

after the wedding brian will get what he wants because it's what justin wants too.

what insane asylum did craig escape from?



Author's Response:

he is just a homophobic pick who throws his toys out the prame when he doesnt get his way.what do you think of the story so far?i will probably update either tonight or tomorrow chapter 5 will be the wedding thats when the fireworks will start.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 3

craig thinks it's going to be so easy. poor stupid man.



Author's Response:

i know dont worry later on he gets a nasty suprise

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hi, interesting begining, it is obviously an AU if Brian and Justin never met before Jennifer's wedding. But you should pay atention on your grammar punctuation and put more commas, dots, and capital letter in your sentences for easier reading and underdstanding the whole story. Thanks, but keep writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the tip i know my grammar isnt great i will up date soon probably tonight or tomorrow

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 2

I got to read chapter 2

i hope to read more

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

 I read chapter 1 and i says the site is closed so i was not able to read chapter 2 please fix the problem thank you

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 2

is vanguard doing the wedding? i don't understand what brian is doing there, and how he knows jennifer.



Author's Response:

i had a few problems with chapter 2 so i went back to edit but i didnt work so yeah i can understand why your a bit confused and Kinnetik is supposed to be doing the wedding and he knows Jennifer beacause he is planning the wedding

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

brian didn't know justin before the bashing? um.



Author's Response:

no he didnt know before the bashing

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