Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Cinderfella
Reviewer: victoriannasciment (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2022 06:50 PM · On: Twists

It's ok

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2014 06:07 PM · On: Epilogue

Hi Jon! Congrats on the monthly featured story for this. This is a fic that the most fun of folk should give a go! It's a real treat. :) ~hugs~Mandi



Author's Response:

hugs to you! Thanks for enjoying again and thank YOU for the wonderful banner. It remains one of my favorites.

Reviewer: lori (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2014 07:05 PM · On: Justice and Redemption

I just read the story and loved it.  I hope you will right more of it.

Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2014 12:39 PM · On: Epilogue

That was a great fairytale. Thank you. :)



Author's Response:

Well your very welcome! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 05:33 AM · On: Time Will Tell

At first I thought that maybe Mikey had turned into a werewolf and was all hairy.  Didn't occur to me that he might have contracted FADES, though it should have.  At least they now have a cure.  A really good fairy tale with a perfect ending.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 04:37 AM · On: FADE Out

OMG.  This is such a dramatic chapter.  I didn't know that FADES let you go through walls.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 04:16 AM · On: Hobbies and...Being Temperamental

I'd really like to learn Brian's trick for removing clothes.  Sounds nice.  I'm glad the Mikey realized why things were going wrong and apologized.  Looking to see what the next chapter brings.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 01:21 AM · On: Trouble Settling In

For a moment there I thought the Big Bad Wolf had slipped into this tale.  Mad,mad,Mikey!!!! Bwaa-haaaahaaa.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 12:50 AM · On: Justice and Redemption

I would have thought this was the end, but I see that it is not.  We need to find out if there is a cure for the FADES.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 12:16 AM · On: Found

Awww, in a strange way this is sweet. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 12:04 AM · On: The Search

Gosh, darn.  I don't want to believe that you let the evil ones win.  The angst of it all.  I'm sure that in the end the Prince will win out, but just how is what I'm dying to know.  Debbie needs to show up right away.  And Emmett too.  Now that he's been promoted maybe he can be a bigger help.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2014 06:38 AM · On: The Leather Ball

Well technically Brian didn't do a repeat.  Ash is as different as Starshine as night is to day.  Very well done.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2014 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

I love all your fairy tales and don't know how I missed this.  Love the characterzations.  and who you chose to be the villians of this piece.

 

 

Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2014 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

Fantastic story! I read the entire thing at once! woohoo, I loved it!! What a great idea ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2014 07:37 AM · On: Epilogue

Hey Jon :)

I read this before I joined MW and started leaving reviews.  I must say it was thoroughly enjoyable.  Congratulations on being Featured Story for October.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Awww thank you. I was very surprised, then honored and happy.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2014 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

Excellent choice for the feature story this month! Yay! TAG



Author's Response:

Came onto the site because stupid World of Warcraft update is slowing my comp. to a snail's pace. So I got the shock of my life when I saw this story was the featured story for October!!! OMG! I'm on the home page YOOOHRAAAAYYY!!!! Now THIS is something to blog about!!! And was that blue ribbon always there?? If not, THANX to the admin who made all this happen!!! LLike a big Jersey cow....I'm over moooo--ooon!!!

OK, I feel like I've made that joke before so....oh who cares!!!!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2012 09:42 PM · On: Epilogue

Yay! You cured FADES and we got happily ever after! Great version of Cinderfella/Cinderella. I enjoyed reading. TAG

Author's Response:

Thanks for all your wonderful reviews! Sorry for not answering every single one but at the time of the writing , I didn't know it was good protocol and I didn't want to be unfair to the rest who had no reply in the years past. Plus...well...I'm a lazy lazy man. Anyway, glad you liked everything, did you like the Sunshine Shock wave? Did you like the idea of...The Blue Ball? I sweaar to God, that came to me in a flash, just as I was writing it. Made me laugh so hard!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2012 01:52 PM · On: Justice and Redemption

Okay - Evil stepfather and stepbrother punished. Check. Now on to cure FADES? Off to the next chapter to see. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2012 01:35 PM · On: Found

Yay! Prince Brian & Justin together at last! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2012 04:51 AM · On: The Search

Ack! Another twist - just when Brian finds his prince he gets bashed? Where is Brian's royal retinue? Someone should be there to protect him & Justin? However will they escape the basement? Off to the next chapter to find out! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 10:43 PM · On: The Leather Ball

Nice! Great Leather Ball! Hilarious Ethan spanking scene! He he he! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2012 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

Wonderful premise - FADES & the evil condom factory! Very traditional fairy tale feel too despite the unconventional characters. Love Debbie as the fairy godmother, too! Fab start - I'm off to chapter two! TAG

Reviewer: felonius_monk (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

Oh, I forgot Debbie as the Fairy Godmother--awesome! And the white sheets and flip flips--priceless!

Reviewer: felonius_monk (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

OMG: "FADES". You are a true original. And a Fucking Genius. OMG, the factory that produces defective condoms. Cue cheesy soap opera music: DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUN!!!!

OMG eeewwwww cringe ick: Spideys!!!! But they're helpful spideys!!!! And Justin is so brave that he lets them crawl all over him. *shudder* That takes some big brash blonde-boy balls. Oh, and the spidey's float away like Charlottes's babies in Charlotte's Web.

Reviewer: GiggleBean (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

great re-invention the fades thing was different

you have a good writing style

Reviewer: Upsadaisymaisie (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Epilogue

Just found this story through getithere.com and loved it.  Such a change from the angst and drama I usually read.  Looking forward now to reading the rest of your fiction.



Author's Response:

thank you very much. I was hoping there was some angst in there somewhere...in my own way...Although I understand. Although,I'm a bit surprised. I keep wishing more angst would come out in my stories  as I thought that's what most people on these site want. I'm glad that maybe I'm wrong. (Or at least maybe they want a break)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Trouble Settling In

Another wonderful installment! Michael, so scared walking to the "house!"

LOVE the toilet in the closet under the stairs & the picture on the wall! Brilliant! Would be great if I could use that table cloth right now! :)

Pretty cool with Ben controlling his FADES. Would be awesome if you didn't die from it! Wondering what Justin will have to say about how Michael & Ben acted...... :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Justice and Redemption

YES! We, well I am enjoying the extended version!

Enjoyed Craig and Ethan getting what they deserve and LOVE how every once in a while you narrate to the reader! Sounds like it's going to be interesting to see if the "cure" for FADES will work!

I'm squeezing in one more chapter before bed! :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Found

Amazing! I ALMOST had tears for Michael, I will not admit to it! :) 

I still can't figure out WHY they were putting holes in the condoms. They were separating them out so I did think maybe Craig was targeting gay people but straights use them, as well. Also, I'm still not believing Justin's mom was having an affair. 

Interesting how you describe what it's like hold Ben's hands due to FADES. Wonderful description!

On to the next chapter! :)

 

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2010 02:10 PM · On: The Search

WOW! Did not see THAT coming! Poor Michael, never thought I'd say that at the beginning of the story! Would be great to have Ben go after Craig for what he's now doing to Michael. 

I know I should be upset about them being in the basement but with the tablecloth and the card key, I'm not really worried! :)

Going to squeeze in at least one, if not two more chapters before heading to bed. Good thing I can sleep in tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: Susan, yeah me, AGAIN! (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2010 10:25 AM · On: The Leather Ball

I just noticed I added my previous "add on review" to the wrong chapter! It was supposed to go with my review of your 3rd chapter! I'm confusing myself! I REALLY hope you can follow my craziness!

RECAP: The part about Ben goes with my review of chapter 3! :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2010 10:20 AM · On: The Leather Ball

Oh, for got about Ben! Enjoyed how you brought him into the story and Michael's change. There's so much going on, I want to make a comment every few sentences! :)

 

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2010 04:40 AM · On: The Leather Ball

LOVE this! :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

WOW! Um.... WOW! This is BRILLIANT! Love that Craig isn't Justin's real father, sad about his mom. GREAT "casting" with making Michael & Ethan the stepbrothers! Love the magic of the spiders! Oh, and Debbie; PERFECT! Enjoyed the humor, as well. Very well done! Glad I happened across this today, I've already put you in my favorites! :)



Author's Response:

oh wow, thanks again! this is the most...lengthy...review i ve ever gotten and I love it. I was going to head off to the office to write anyway...(a corner of the coffeehouse LOL) ((the Little Merman won't write itself...unfort.)) but now i am going with a def lift in my spirits. PLs continue to review as yu work through the story as I see that a lot of people read but don't give feedback here. What's up w/that anyway, right?  PS. Flattered i m in yur faves.

J

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

OK, I just finished reading the paragraph explaining what FADES is and I have to say BRILLIANT!!! Couldn't wait until the end to make a comment! Now back to the rest of the chapter! :)



Author's Response:

thank you so much... I just knew I had to put a allegorical disease in there somewhere as AIDS (Fades) was a big...well maybe important is the right word...part of the real show. Please continue to review throughout the story. Cheers AND Jeers are welcome. If I don't know where I suk, I'll neve improve, right?

Thanks again

J

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 03:41 AM · On: Hobbies and...Being Temperamental

I waited for you to finish this story - I'm glad I did - I'm enjoying it more than you can know - it makes me smile and entertains - good writing.

erb



Author's Response:

this is high praise from you..Thank you so much

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

Great re-interpretation of the story,  Craig and Ethan are perfectly cast as the villans and Mikey is as ever dragged along with the crowd. Great job!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Trouble Settling In

I hope there will be a lot more to this story

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Justice and Redemption

Love this story

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Found

I love how sweet Brian is in this story.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 07:47 AM · On: The Search

You need stars. Love the story

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 07:44 AM · On: The Leather Ball

Love it.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 1 The White Party

This is a great story. I love fairy tales used for Brian and Justin stories. It could use more sex, but that is always one of my favorite parts of their stories.

Author's Response:

I quite agree about the sex but some interest was expressed by an elderly neighbor to read it someday so on a subconscious level I wrote it rated PG13. The Tower is sexier as will be some other stories I will come out with. If you have a favorite fairy tale you'd like fractured, let me know ;)

 

You must login (register) to review.