Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2014 07:28 PM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

I just had a wild craving for pickles and had to re-read this. Now I have a craving for . . . well, something more than just a pickle! Damn you! TAG

Author's Response:
Bwa haha!!! Thanx for reviewing....again. Sorry about your craving....well, not really... :P

Reviewer: mandagrammy (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2012 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 5

Very interesting, and reminded me a bit of the TV show 'Once Upon a Time' in that your story seems to blend modern sensibilities with ancient fairy tale sensibilities. I confess that my favorite part involved the craving for pickles...a well loved take on a pregnant woman's craving for them and the rather sensual aspect of 'deep throating' one. That tickled my funny bone in a quirky kind of way. Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Grammy

Author's Response:
thx for your comment! I have to say, I LOVE Once Upon A Time (of course) and watch it to absorb the ambience and maybe subliminal ideas or simply add some fanfic elements from that show as well.

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 5

so sweet! ~ Vonnie xoxox

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 4

hahaha this is really good

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 3

Really hot sex!!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 06:05 AM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

Hahaha Im going to love this

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2012 01:26 AM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

P.S. You're not gonna make me sit on the group 'W' bench are you? I mean, I know I'm a bit deviant when it comes to the pickles and all, but . . . TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2012 12:19 AM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

Yay - you've posted a link to The Pickle Song! I knew at your first mention of pickles that you too were a pickle person! Pickles for all! TAG

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2012 12:51 AM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

The Pickle Song by Arlo Guthrie

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g266Uwp6ZnI

Anything else you might listen to after this is your own look out but I also recommend Alice's Restaurant.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 07:58 PM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

I don't want a pickle, I just wanna ride on my motorsickle. And I don't wanna die, I just wanna ride on my motorcy. . . cle.*. TAG

* The Pickle Song, by Arlo Guthrie

Author's Response:
I'm taking it you really liked the pickle idea! LOLOL @ all your reviews! Why oh why did you not start writing till now? You're so funny! Oh, and by the way, you can read Cinderfella by now. I've been keeping up with your version and their about as different as apples and oranges now. And trust me...mine it still good in its own right...but...it's old now...and yours is FAR more entertaining.However if you start and find I'm wrong someway...pls let me know. ;)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 5

How can you have a happy ending without the damn pickles? TAG

P.S. No pickles were actually harmed in the writing of these reviews.

P.P.S. Really fun story! Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

They just left all the pickles? Is Justin going to give up on pickles all together? That's silly. I mean, even if you really, really like bananas, you can still enjoy an occasional pickle. Brian might even need a pickle now and then. Oh well. More pickles for the rest of us, I guess. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Loved your 'M' section. The M must be for mentor right? Justin's so lucky to have such a kind, caring, experienced teacher. So much better than a Pickle! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2012 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 2

Poor Justin with all that hair to wash and braid and coil. I'm exhausted just thinking about it. Maybe I'll go take a pickle break. TAG

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 5

That was fun to read. Very enjoyable!

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 03:39 AM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

This was really great. Loved this version better.

Author's Response:
Thanks. It's the same story, really, just broken into sections to read easier. Been meaning to do this like, forever but never got around to it. Always had a WIP keepin me busy but I had some time between chapters and got this monkey off my back.

Reviewer: GiggleBean (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 02:39 AM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

wow this was a real suprise

great re telling of a classic

Author's Response:
GASP! a review! I just noticed! Thanks and thanks for the compliment Did you read the naughty version? ;)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:04 PM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

Oh my. Much better than the original Rapunzel story, if you ask me.

My favorite part, oddly enough, was:

Brian was careful. Every so often, he'd yell out, "My name's Brian and I love Justin Taylor! What's your name!?"

And Justin would yell back, "My name's Justin and I love Brian Kinney! What's your name!?"

I thought it was just adorable!

Michelle

Author's Response:
hi sorry for the late reply. I was idly looking over everything and saw in my other story that you were going to read this next so checked here too...thanks for your comment. I loved that scene too. I thought it was just a rediculously romantic way to have them keep in touch. Keep readin and writin!

J

Reviewer: justbeyourself (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 09:45 PM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

Sexy & Fun! Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 03:30 AM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

I really like this version of the story.Very well written

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 09:53 PM · On: The Tower Chapter 1

WOW - not just your ordinary fairy tale - well written and most definitly something to be read before bed.

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