Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2023 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 61
I just discovered this great story. I really liked. I'm glad I read it. Thank you very much.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2020 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 61
not bad
Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2019 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 44
So....Drew just drops in occasionally???
Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2019 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 42
Ok did you lose your mind...Taylor with blue eyes and BLOND har......or just your memory??? She had arboun hair for the first 3 years of her life!!!
Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2019 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 37
Kindergarten and 2nd grade...? Gus was almost 5 when Tsylor was born...according to earlier chapters.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2019 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 61
Loved it
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2016 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 61
Just read this in it's entirety. Nice fic and really enjoyed it. I'm not completely sold on Mpregs, but the odd one I do enjoy. this is one of them. Not a lot of angst, Their pregnancy's especially Brian's were great.
Thansk for this. I had no idea it even exissted. It has made me go through adn check out the stories by author....alphabetically.
thansk for posting.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response: Thanks. I have actually done the same, reading alphabetically through the authors. Glad you liked the story. I prefer merges that have at least some realism in them. Enjoy your reading adventure.
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2016 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 61
Lovely story of love, family and commitment. Just your everyday loving couple living day by day, year by year, in a loving relationship:-)
Reviewer: Nickknack (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2015 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 49
Wow I cannot believe someone could write such a nasty review. It defies logic to read a story which from it's very summary clearly indicates the storyline it will portray. Whilst it takes a bit of getting used to the boys acting slightly out of character from what we usually expect, I have found this a very entertaining story and admit to having laughed out loud at times and find myself smiling a lot. Very good read so far :-)
Author's Response: Some people don't pay attention to the tags. It's a shame they were not smart enough to do so or brave enough to own their behavior but truly it is all good. I was over it as soon as I replied and shared. Glad you like the story.
Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2015 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 61
I loved it!
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2015 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 6
I just found this story and am loving it so far. Everyone's reactions are just priceless!! :D
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2015 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 61
That was an entertaining story.
Thank you for persevering and completing it, there are too many abandoned WIP that look like they would be great if finished.
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2014 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm still halfway there. I'm enjoying it a lot.
It also gave me courage to finish my own mpreg and maybe post soon. It's funny how I called the baby Peanut too. hehehe It's an adorbale name for an unborn.
Happy New Year! :)
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2014 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Already loving this. Mpreg Brian is the best. Hehe
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! My goal was 100,000 word, still not happy with the ending. Enjoy, leave feedback..thanks again. Happy NewvYear
!
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2014 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Somebody had to be 300 Congrats :)
(Well, it was 300.....)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2014 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 61
How wonderful. Nine pds? That's sounds pretty big to me. There has got to be a better way. I would like to hear how Tay takes seeing her baby brother for the first time and how the rest of the family reacts to the final event.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2014 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 61
So happy to see that you finished this. I just found it this year, and realized it was not finished just before the site collapsed, so I was real happy to see it finished now.
Your mpreg facts were great, showing how an anal conception and birth can be done without contamination. I think if you wanted to correct anything, I am pretty sure you meant to say the uterus was above the bladder and 'Below'. The diaphragm. Since that would put it in the abdomen, and not the chest.
I liked the characters, well done.
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2013 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 60
I keep checking for new chapters, I hope you'll finish this story. I've been reading "Prego Stud" by Tagsit another malepreg. and saw many reviews from you and "predc2" you both were very gracious in your reviews, I thought it was wonderful so many authors were reviewing, but your story was excellent and I long for you to complete it.You three authors I always check on, and I go back and re-read your previous stories. There are a number of authors that write stories that are not done very well, and I seldom even try to check out their new stories. The only story I will not read by any author is a Major Death by Brian or Justin. I just don't want to go there.
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2013 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 59
I found myself reading this story again for maybe the tenth time I love it and I know when life is less chaotic you'll introduce us to Dylan. I always seek out this story when I'm looking thru the stories I see the beautiful banner and the baby's big blue eyes always staring out at me, she's(?) just truly beautiful.
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
looking forward to the update.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 60
I haven’t read this fic word for word as I have just skimmed it and I have every intention of reading it properly as soon as I can find the time. I just wanted to let you know since I have the gist of what is happening that it looks great. Brian pregnant, buying a breast pump, doing the potty dance it looks hilarious. I like it when Brian is the one having the baby but then Justin gets to experience it too. At least it is easier for Brian to relate as I don’t think he would be as understanding if he hadn’t already gone through it. This is the second fic today that I have seen updated that began in 2010 and I’m really glad they haven’t been forgotten as I haven’t had time to go and search out the older fics so this way I don’t have to. I will be waiting for the next instalment so please hurry back.
Cheers
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2012 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 57
I am confused on Taylor's age, maybe I didn't pay attention and lost track on her age. Brian and Justin started to try to have another baby during the trip in Disneyland, when Taylor was 5 years old. And this chapter Justin is 5 months pregnant. They tried to get Justin pregnant for 3 years?
Author's Response: I'll check the math.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2012 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 60
Wow-what a surprise-didn't know when you would update. Get this baby here already. Soon?????
Author's Response: I like to keep you all guessing. Truly my inspiration has been on a long vacation. I don't want t,o update for the sake of updating. Thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2012 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 58- REVISED
I'm so glad you are updating this story.
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2012 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 59
yay! it's a boy, i love reading about Justin's pregnancy. I hope you will continue the story, and even better write a sequel!
Author's Response: Yeah, I figured one of each would be good. I tried to choose names that hadn't been used by other authors. Don't know if I have a sequel in me....think I need to wrap this one up first. But suggestions are always welcome. Plot bunnies help my hamsters turn.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2012 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 59
Nice to see an update. Can't wait for the big day when Jus gets his turn in the maternity ward. TAG
Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2012 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
I am sooooo ready for an update...you're killin me girl!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2012 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 43
Wow! I had no idea Disneyworld was so erotic! I know I'll never look at a pair of mouse ears the same. You're sure getting better at the porny stuff! TAG
Author's Response: Thanks! I think later in the tale I start to decline in the porn quality. Around this time I was feeling very creative. I will attempt to spice it up a bit. ;) thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 57
hi, i m lovin this story and everything bout this chapter was great Lovin Taylor, sounds so grown up!
However, I think there was a snafu with the date. I think it's supoosed to be 2011 not 2012
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll check the dates. Glad you like the last couple of chapters.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 47
Lovin this honeymoon. Checked out the "villa" through your link and listened to that song on yu tube as I was reading it. It really was the perfect song for them esp. in this strange mpreg is normal universe!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 24
OK so no swearing but that was great And so seet how they fall asleep together
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. I tried to keep it humorous but still a little sappy also. I think my humor is kind of similar to how Brian was developed in Canon.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 23
Wanna play cards? LOL Oh that's too cute, I can t wait for the male whining and swearing that is no doubt about to come and let me guess.....36 hrs later.. LOL jk
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 17
OK well just saw your response, so as you like it. It's up to you bt I still ywouldn t mind...the errors are minor and the chapters are short Unlike mine! <Debbie cackle here> And of course I m keeping reading.
Lovin this chapter and Aunt Molly....Point me toward the pool!!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 16
OK this one had me in STITCHES!!! Brian's boobs! LOL And then Gus PoV!!! So cute!! More with Gus POV i hope! (girls, geez!) LOL
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 8
Hey there! Dids you ever get a beta? Because something seems to wrong with the spacing here. If you like, I could try. I also saw a few mechanical mistakes in the last few chapters I've never "beta" ed b4 but I'd love to give it a go and get some experience for my resume. So call this a volunteer effort. If you see my work, i have good grammar and check over my work diligently. Let me know either here, of PM me on fanfic.net same nic and we'll work out how to send stuff.
As to the chapter, liked it a lot was very cute how Brian was being all butch and yet gettibg worked over. Geez doc warm it up next time! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the offer to beta. At over 100,000 words I think it may be too late. ;-). I think some of the problems with spacing may have gotten worked out in later chapters. I was moving from computer to computer with a flash drive and 3 different versions of Windows. Now I'm on an IPad so who knows how it will look. I try to go back and check for most errors. But lately I have just been posting as I write.
Hope you continue to read, errors and all :-)
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 2
this was all very fascinating! LOL OMG, a womb! High-larious!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. I tried to some how make it feasible in a AU kind of way. Keep reading. My goal was 100,000 words and I'm up tp 103,000+.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2012 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 58- REVISED
I went back to read this chapter after I read about the negative review. I love toppy Justin and bottoming Brian. I don't see a problem. But I also loved this chapter. This seems to be a very engaging story.
Loved your rotund Justin.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2012 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 3
ok - so I am re-reading the whole thing to get back on track I'm old...I forgeet...don't judge - lol) - and I gotta' tell you I am loving it just as much the 2nd time around
so...away I go...
;)
Charle
Author's Response: Thanks. Now that's have the summer off I hope to wrap this one up. I sadly have no post Holy S*** bunnies happening but who knows. Maybe I will do a song fic or something;)
Reviewer: emma (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2012 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 58- REVISED
this sex scene sucks!if justing is why he is toping and why Brian is the bottom?!
Reviewer: tj (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2012 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 58- REVISED
love freddie and queen off to see them next month in london. my obsession adam lambert is fronting the band thre nights there. have tickets to all three concerts. it will be a blast. hope justin has this baby soon. how many more chapters til the bg day? i have been reading this story for like forever. too much time between. i am glad your muse has returned and now we can hopefully end with a flourish soon.
Author's Response: I enjoy Queen as well, not to sure about Adam Lambert but if they like him that's all that matters. As for a time line...I have no clue. It will happen when it happens I guess. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 57
I was so happy to see an update. I just went ahead and re-read the entire story again. I love a pregnant Justin! Can't wait until you update again!
Author's Response: Trying to be more consistent in updating. Glad you like the story! That's a lot of reading! My goal was to write 100,000 words but it looks like I will exceed that soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2012 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 57
Great chapter love the kids growing up and recognising that they have wonderful parents
Author's Response: Thank you! I try to make it seem like they are just a normal (married, gay couple who can bear children) family.
Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 57
Oooooh! I always get such a warm & fuzzy feeling when I see you have updated this story...thankyouthankyouthankyou!!!
Author's Response: :) not much more I can say really. I may be slow at updating but I never give up ;)
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 56
i hope you update this story soon i love it thank you
Author's Response: Thanks, I am working on it. Trying to percolate some new ideas so it doesn't get too stale. But I plan at least one update a month. I know that is so little but I gotta start somewhere.
Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 56
sooo glad to see an update. love that Justin is enjoying torturing brian!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Yeah I like writing Justin with a little naughty in him.
Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 56
What a treat to see another chapter! This is one of my favorite stories. I love your writing style and would like to see more from you...
Author's Response: Thanks. I am going to try to post rapt least once a month. I understand the want for more soon, I am the same way...always checking or updates. So I will try.
Reviewer: damondepp (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 56
I can[t wait to see what happens next. i was so glade see another chapter. Can't wait see what happens next.
Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 56
I was so excited to see an update! I love this story. Great chapter...I'll keep with you til the end! Hope you can update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I was afraid people would get tired of waiting. But I will finish this I hate WIP's.
Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yesssss...You ROCK!!! Bring it on girlfriend. So glad to see you back :)
Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 55
Hi! Me again!!!
Just wanted to tell you I love this & offer you encouragement to PLEASE keep writing this story *whispers* 'quickly'. I'm a very fast reader!!! LOL!
Author's Response: I promise I am trying to finish but I have really lost my muse. Im going to go back and re read some of the chapters and see if that inspires me. It's hard to seek inspiration from other stories because there are not very many Brian mpregs that seem realistic to me. But I really am trying to get back to this. Typo's and all;)
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 3
Aww so cute
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
i so remeber now cause of queen out brian. Great
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well today I start rereading this. I know I read it before. Now I shall write an comment. Lovely start.
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 55
Well there you go with Valentine's Day for the boys, it was lovely. Brian Kinney does do everything he ever claimed he did not do! Quiet the revelation!
I am guessing you want to finish the story and I suppose once Justin will give birth you will have to sum it up there, otherwise you could go on forever with this AU.
I am in the mood for some angst this period [I suppose Xmas is bringing the pessimist out of me] so a little scare with the pregnancy or the delivery or whatever I suppose will bring the story to a head and leave that candy and roses happy ever after [I really seriously believe I am channeling a 28 year-old Brian somewhere here LOL].
Great story sweetie, cannt wait to see what you have thought about the ending of this story. *hugs* Marla
Reviewer: Taire (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2011 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 53
So glad you updated this story. I wasn't sure about the story in the beginning, but it didn't take long for it to become one of my favorites. I loved how Gus interacts with Taylor. He is such a great big brother.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. Glad you like it. I am going to try to update more often now that the weather has changed. I'm working on a Taylor/Gus convo about the new baby soon.
Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 55
Thanks for another great chapter! I hope that by ending this you are planning another story, otherwise I'll be pretty bummed to see it end.....
Author's Response: I still have no idea when it will end. Just kind of writing when ideas come to me. I should be more consistent now that its winter on Cape Cod and I have no desire to be outside. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Kellydeer (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2011 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
I am sooooo glad you're back! Thank God!!!!!!!!!!!! I was beginning to despair...
Author's Response: Glad to be back. I think my 'mojo' might be returning. Typo's and all I'm sure;)
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 54
Small installment, but oh so funny! Loved it!
But hey we need more of this story so buckle up sweetie.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 54
Don't lose heart on this excellent story. We really want you to end this well. (hint hint :)
Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2011 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 54
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! Thank God you're back!
Author's Response: I posted this jusst for you.....I know it was short. Consider it a teaser.
Reviewer: vlsope2 (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2011 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 53
i'm glad you didn't forget, I love this story it justs keeps getting better when I check recent postings I always run thru trying to find your name first, then go back and start at the top for my favorites...thank you
Reviewer: angelstar2 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 15
WOW this story is so different to me, I'm enjoying it!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you are enjoying it. I set out to do something different from the other Mpregs I've read. I have enjoyed them all but once this story started it just seemed to flow in this direction. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 53
Loved this story. Enjoyed a loving B/J couple and the kids were wonderful to read about. I also enjoyed how Michael and Lindsay were still struggling with their feelings.
I saw you comment about the lousy comment someone left. Just ignore them, honey. This is a story that the reader can lose themselves in - and that's the sign of a good writer.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. I have enjoyed writing this, even when I sometimes lose the inspiration. I don't really care about the hater in terms of what or how I write, it was more like a minor irritation. I plan to keep working on this so keep an eye out for updates.
Thanks again
Deb
Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 53
I just read the whole weekend through your story and like it. Don't let hate-reviews get to you ->you did a great job so far. Especially to begin after the big hurdles like bashing or Ehan. That was already too often rehashed. To let Brian be pregnant is AU, I'll give that, but you made it believable. To let Justin be pregnat, too, however is a bit much of a coincident, if it is so rare. Though why not - its fiction and everything should be allowed, its your story and I can't wait to read more, please.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment and spending the weekend reading my litttle stress reliever. I was more irritated by the hater than discouraged. I agree that the bashing has been rehashed too often and think that neither Justin or Brian were truly mature enough to even think about kids until post series. I was initially not going to have Justin get pregnant but, there overwhelming concensus of the readers wanted to see it happen so I have tried to address their interests. Normally I would just go with what I want to write but I think I can do Justin's pregnancy justice and make it Justin's experience, which I think would be quite different from Brians.
Be on the look out for an update in the next week or two.
Thanks
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 24
Wonderful birthing chapter. Enjoyed the details and loved the tenderness between the boys.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I tried to be detailed but not TOO detailed. I wanted to make it realistic, in an unrealistic world, glad you are liking it. I am trying to update more often.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2011 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 11
Had to take a minute and say how much I'm enjoying the story. I love the warmth and tenderness that B/J showing. Was a little worried that Lindsay or Michael would psycho out, so far so good.
I like MPreg but so many of the stories just have too much angst with the subject matter. So glad to read something that is realistic with some waves breaking but not wearing on the nerves.
Well done.
Reviewer: babble_on (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2011 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 53
This is just so good! The wit. I really wish you would write more.....
Author's Response: Thanks. I am trying to get back into writing again. For awhile my inspiration was MIA. But it seems to be making a comeback.
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2011 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 53
Nice save there LOL!!!! Well a happy Christmas update, though I have to admot reading about Christmas in early fall is kind of strange....
Cant wait for the update to get a move on in the story.
Marla
Author's Response: I was trying to get us caught up to the present, but I seem to be failing miserably :) I'll try to update soon.
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2011 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 53
nice chapter. even mel and brian are getting along. doesn't anyone else know justin's pregnant? did something just happen to him? please, no. not justin or the baby.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. No Justin is fine, they just want to wait a little before telling the family. Justin is tired alot because he is pregnant-I based this on my sister in law who was totally exhausted during the last part of the first trimester. I don't know if its common or not but she could fall asleep at the drop of a hat.
Going to move ahead in the timeline a bit in the next chapter.
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2011 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 52
i missed this chapter but enjoyed it alot. brian is so cute sometimes.
Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2011 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 53
awww, Christmas cuteness! Love this story
Reviewer: KIM (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2011 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 52
It will be wonderfull to read more of this story ..please continues to write. I hope these reviews are enough inspiration. I'll love to read more about the pregnancy how jus deals with it...how cute the 3rd child will be? Again, great support here ...
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 52
Such a ... homey feeling I am getting from this update. I like this Brian and I love the kids to pieces...
Cant wait for the update.
Marla
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2011 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 51
This update was sooooooo sweeeeettt!
Do you foresee angst in the near future for the boys? Is the pregnancy going to go as it should be? [I don't do begging but you know just checking!}
Cant wait for the update
Marla
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I don't know what is coming up next...this is sort of my therapy, when I am depressed or having a crappy week I just sort of start writing whatever comes to me...hence the occassional typo or missing adverb or article. I will file angst away in my mind and try to come up with something.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2011 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 51
This was very sweet - I love the tender moments between these two (in between the hot sex, too, of course - LOL!). And I also like a protective and nurturing Brian.:) Just got back from seeing the real thing (Randy in "Tommy") so I can finally catch up on both writing my stories and reading others such as this one.:) Thanks for writing - I'll be looking forward to the next installment.
Reviewer: kellydeer (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2011 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Just wanted to comment on what Eva (anonymous) had to say...WTF???
You are an awesome writer and I think lots of people out there love seeing Justin take a dominant role. I mean...let's face it - he was pretty damn dominant on the show. Just because he was the primary bottom did not make him submissive by a long shot. In fact...I think it's safe to say that he pretty much lead Brian into the 'Land of Relationships' and 'Mature behavior' even though he was 12 years younger.
You just keep writing, girlfriend & all of us with the sense God gave a billy-goat will keep on reading!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the support. I was really more irritated than discouraged. I am starting a new chapter so I should be posting something soon.
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 50
I love your story, and I am excited that you continue your venture in this amazing AU. When I started reading your story I never expected both Brian and Justin to get pregnant (what a treat!)
I cant wait for the changes and mood swings that Justin is gonna have during the pregnancy and the reactions of Taylor and Gus and the rest of them lot.
I also like it that Vic is actually still alive and kicking, thank you for keeping him alive.
Cant wait for an update.
Marla
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I had read another story in which both Justin and Brian were pregnant (at the same time) and thought it was great so it influenced me when I was thinking about continuing this story. I loved Vic and always thought he should have been there for Brian when he was sick (as more than a ghost). I'll do my best to continue the feel of the story. It may take alittle longer than usual, I have a harder time getting Justin's voice down in words-Brian is more similar to my humor and personality so he sounds an awful lot like me.... with he snark at least
Reviewer: lili (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2011 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 50
good job please countinu
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2011 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 50
alittle over the top as far as the pregnancy test go but it was just so cute.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I thought it might we nice to have Justin be alittle over the top in this one, I have noticed in other AU's that he is "bouncy" I also think that he had to be so grown up in the series that its nice for him to be excessive sometimes ;) I can't guarantee this will be the last time he is over the top but I do plan on reeling him alittle. Thanks for the feed back it is always apprciated.
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2011 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 49
sweet chapter all around.
of course jr would be bossy ans whiny, look who her parents are.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 50
Great chapter. Pregnant Justin will be adorable.
Reviewer: Babble_on (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2011 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 50
I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this story!
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2011 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 49
This story is so much fun. No one but Justin will ever make Brian so willing to allow himself to be loved, and to openly love in return. Brian is never quite as adorable as when he is vulnerable to his one true love. This story has so much more potential. Of course, I can't wait for Justin to get pregnant. And then, to see their love deepen even more as they share not only the 9 months, but also the feelings that they experience having another child, and watching Taylor grow up. Looking forward to what comes next.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you see potential in this. It was orignially meant to be about 30 chapters but just seems to keep growing. I tend to update more often as summer begins because I am a teacher so I have summer to myself, but I am trying to kick my muse's ass and get more written soon. I have not decided how Justin is going to "handle" pregnancy yet so that is my first hurdle. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2011 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 49
Please keep going I love this story and I can't wait for Justin to become pregnant ... I hope you continue to write through his pregnancy too.
Truthfully I really don't want this story to end.... I love mpreg lol
Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 49
I am very happy you decided to update this beautifull story. I am excited about the prospect of new baby!! I vote for a boy.
Reviewer: mydogjewel (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2011 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 49
I'm really enjoying your story - I like mpreg fics! Could Justin maybe get pregnant with twins? One of each would be cute. Plus he could queen out about his weight gain, until he finds out there's 2 babies in there! Anyway, I've enjoyed reading what you have, so far. Hope your muse let's you update soon.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 18
Aww he waddles. I remember waddling
Author's Response: Glad I got that part right. I had to base it on my friends experiences. I am sadly childless unless the cat counts ;) Glad you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm so glad that you came back. I love this story.
I love the 'sniffing' thing, it is so cute.
As for the review from 'shouldn't read a story they know they will hate' Being a loving person does not make a man a pussy, it makes him a real man. This story is great, please continue writing.
Author's Response: I will, I was annoyed by the comments than the actual "worst story ever.." BS. I do wonder if "eva" has written anything herself though...
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 14
Sll loving it. I love that Brian calls the baby peanut. It just seems like the perfect name. I just see him calling the baby that. Perfect name I thin that is what he would call his daughter. Love it on to the next.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 13
lol Elizabeth Taylor I got it time I read it.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 12
I fell asleep reading. You do that on the kindle. Oh poor Brian scared about the baby. I so love this story.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 12
I fell asleep reading. You do that on the kindle. Oh poor Brian scared about the baby. I so love this story.
Reviewer: LILI (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2011 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 49
OH HI .......... THIS STORY IS REALY NICE .........
I LIKE THIS AIDEA OF APERGNANT BRIAN I THINK IS VERY HOT
I LIKE BRIAN GIVE CONTOROL TO JUSTIN
ILIKE JUSTIN SUCH A DOM
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 11
love
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 10
Still loving the story. I should be ashamed of myself but i need more drama. this pregnancy is going to smoothly. Its a male pregnancy wheres the ER visit to bring everyone together. Lindz crazy but love it.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 10
Still loving the story. I should be ashamed of myself but i need more drama. this pregnancy is going to smoothly. Its a male pregnancy wheres the ER visit to bring everyone together. Lindz crazy but love it.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh mikey came around. So no Ben he needs ben. ok on to the next. Great writing its three am but im not lonely i am reading your great story. thats a song reference i am sure u got it.
Author's Response: I can't seem to wrap my mind around Ben's "voice" I liked him as a character but when I write him it never seems right so I don't. I wouldn't want to do the character a disservice. I will try to get him there somehow. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh god who will be at the diner. Brian seemed kind of sad. He needs his friends at least one of them.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ha! I knew Ted would be curious. Lindz needs to come around Brian needs her.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 6
OK first off where was Ted. i needed his snarkiness and Ben I needed Zen Ben. Okay got alttle syrupy with brian and justin but i forgive you. Lindz oh uea classic lindz. I hate how she wanted her cake and dick too. on to the next.
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 5
lol i can so see Em fainting. I bet he plans one hell of a baby shower. O h yes now the others I get the feeling will have slightly different reactions. On to the next.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 39
I am glad that Emmett was the first one to realize about the rings.... loved the costumes you picked out for everyone...especially the Professor and Mikey as Marianne.... lol.... I can't believe this fic is almost finished....but..hopefully there will be a sequel at some point... Thanks...
Author's Response: Yes nI think there will be a sequl. The costumes came to me as I was writing, just like everything else!.
Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 31
Wonderful another update. God Lindsey really needs to get over herself. Liked the little bit of fire from Brian and the way it is just ignored by Justin, felt just like home!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah sometimes Brian just needs to thunder and be done withit.
Reviewer: sjmpets (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 31
i think they're handling it all really well. lindsay is just going to have to get over brian and her being a family.
Author's Response: She is always going to be alittle off when it comes to b/j being a family. Old dreams die hard.
Reviewer: Heather (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 30
I love this I look forward to ever update. Honest I would love to see them have to deal with a newborn and Justin being pregnant. Shoot me I love Mpreg.
Author's Response: Heather
Thanks for the comment. I agree it would be great for them to deal with a toddler and a pregnant Justin. The old Brian might have been considerate and concerned but the post-baby Brian I think he is going to be a little less compassionate-(been there done that kinda thing). Have to see where my inspiration takes me. right now it is to the a/c.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 30
I loved it..... it was such a great idea to throw Brian a birthday party..especially the slide show....but...one question how did Brian age from 30 to 34 in a month???? lol....
Author's Response: OMG!!!!! You're right I need to fix that. Thanks
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 29
They'll both be smiling big sunshine smiles by dawn!!!
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 29
WOW..... I am glad your muse only took a small trip.... it looks like things are getting back to normal for the guys.... Brian better be careful ...he may love to bottom.... but.... he may also end up with a houseful of kids... lol...
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 28
I love this new and improved Brian, and how open he can show his love for Justin, Taylor and all the rest of the family...
And I'm so glad Michael and Lindsay seem to be handling the new Brian so well...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 28
I love how Brian has become so open with Justin... and that he can share his thoughts and feelings more freely.... having Taylor have made them even more closer.... if that's possible...lol... It's sweet that they are settling into a daily routine as a family.... Thanks...
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 3
superb - I can't stop reading it - I love reading stories about Brian and Justin being parents. They rock...all their love, kindness, joy, drinking, sex. finest clothes, all the best things to bring up a child with
"I thought you had lost the power of speech, thus causing the world to stop spinning" Great sentence - so many great sentence's. I'm readiing so fast that I know I'm going to go back and read it slower.
Jane
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Thank you for your response - I'm on board and loving every chapter. More to come. Jane
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
You may have addressed this already but I need to know you have every intention of completing this story. I don't care if it's in a year (in fact, I just read the first chapter and loved it)
I never read stories unless they have been completed. I get so involved in the story and then get left hanging that I just wait until they have been completed. And many never are...
But I got hooked on yours and I want to read every word now but pls are you going to continue with it until it's completed?
Admin: Although this is a new author on MW, this lady has posted very often since mid June. That's a very good sign. ~JTSecrets
Author's Response: Jane
Thanks for your interest. I intend to continue to work on this story. I have the entire summer off, I'm a teacher, so there is a good chance that I will add a chapter every evening or every other evening. I promise you that if you start reading I will not simly abandon the story. I hate to start things that are left hanging.
As the story has not real structure laid out per se it is hard to tell you when I will finish it.
I hope you decide to start reading.
Deb
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 27
Beautiful.... I absolutely love the way Brian and Emmett interact with each other.... they are completely opposite in personality and fashion sense...lol.. yet they understand and accept each other more than "Best" friend Mikey ever will.... it's adorable the way Gus is with his "wittle sisa".... and Lindsay giving Brian pregnancy tips was too funny.... Great Chapter.... Thanks...
Reviewer: vicky soper (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 26: Here comes the family!!!!
I love your story and I love the name of the baby, each chapter just gets better and better thank you
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the comment. Even though the counter says people are reading its nice to get comments. More to come soon I hope. RL needs some attention today.
Reviewer: cherub68 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 26: Here comes the family!!!!
I just love the boys in this fic. Brian as usual going ll out to be the best he can be, it is so endearing.
Author's Response: thanks. I appreciate the comment. I know the counter says people are reading but its nice to get feedback. :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 26: Here comes the family!!!!
I am glad everyone was well-behaved at the hospital...and that Cynthia showed up to give them a hand going home... once they are home Brian will have to deal with all the day to day things he missed out on when Gus was born... then he will realize just what a great Dada he really is.... Thanks...
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 25
lol.... there has never been a pregnant man before.... so whatever you decide is correct..... I just noticed that the number of people reading this... is catching up to the number of words written!!!! that's amazing....
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 25
OMG.... Brian is breast feeding..... lol..... I think it 's adorable that they are bonding as a family.... Taylor sounds like a real beauty.... I am glad that the gang listened to Emmett and didn't all "attack" the hospital....
Author's Response: Yeah I figured if he was going to do the whole baby, child birth route he might as well go all the way and breast feed. Having never done any of the things described in this I hope I am getting it right :)
Reviewer: Dawna (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2010 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 24
I lovvvvveeeeee this story!!! I hope Miss Taylor has Brian's hair color and Justin's eyes. I can picture her tall like her daddy B and artistic like her daddy J and off the charts brainy since both dad's are particularly einsteins! LOL. If this really happened in QAF world Mikey and Lindz would be pea green with jealousy over Justin's place in Brian's life. Keep if coming luv!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I think she will be tall and lithe like Brian but beautiful like Justin. Gale is gorgeous but as a woman not so much :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 24
Beautifil..... Poor Brian had to go through 14 hrs. of labor for his precious "Peanut".... if she looks like either of her dads.... she will be one gorgeous baby....I loved it when he told Justin he was having the next one!!!!...lol.... I appreciate you mentioning me.... I can't say enough about this fic...... Thanks......
Author's Response: Thanks, yeah I figured it wouldn't be fair to have Brian have a quick labor and delivery but then again evil to have him labor for a whole day. My sister-in-law went to 27 hours before they decided to do a c-section, so I figured 14 hours was fair.
I appreciate your comments.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 24
that was so beautiful. really am glad they waited until after taylor was born before they called the family.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 24
“Yeah Sunshine you're having the next kid…." Well who would have ever thought that Brian Kinney would be considering a next kid... I'm so proud of Brian finally growing up...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 24
nice chapter!!!!!!!!!!
more and thanks for the update..........
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 23
Beautiful... I think it's a fantastic idea that Justin is also keeping a journal...this is an very important event in both of their lives.... besides which whenever Brian gets in one of his "insecure" moods as to how Justin feels about him...all he has to do is read the journal and see how much Justin really loves and respects him...... my only Complaint.... is that the fic will have to end... because I really enjoy reading it... LOL... Thanks
Author's Response: Yes it will end, altough since I write without a plan who knows how long it will go on. You'll have to tell me when it gets to rambling. :-}
thanks for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 23
justin has always been his strength. let see how well he does with brian's labor. hope he doesn't faint.
Author's Response: I think Justin will be fine, but I won't know until I write it-it's organic I don't really have a plan I just sit down and write. I am not a very disciplined writer and would more than likely have trouble writing a full novel or anything.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 22
You gotta love Debbie.... she had it rough..a single mom at 17... she also took care of and loved Brian when he needed it most... I think that her HEART is even Bigger than her MOUTH....lol.... I absolutely love that fact that when it was time to go to the hospital... calm, cool and collected Justin was the one to panic..and Brian was the one that drove there..... I can't wait to see what ...Taylor Elisabeth Kinney looks like... Thanks..
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