Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2014 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 2
Please continue this story.
Lori
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2014 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Still would be happy to read more of this.
Lori
Reviewer: Meoley (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2014 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love your story so much It makes me cry :) When is the next chapter ? :D
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2013 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Any chance you will return to work on this?
Lori
Reviewer: blaues_universum (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well, I'm really moved that there are still people reading and waiting for the next chapter.
I've abandoned it for about 2 years because my real life has been busy. I started this fic when I was in grade 10 and I just graduated from highschool. There are still very important exams (in this July) I must pass to get into the university.
So, due to the busy highschool life I've decided that I wouldn't write a new chapter until everything is over because I want to concentrate and give you the best I can do. I attended a highschool that demands very much from its students so the last 2 years made me want to strangle myself.
I'm sorry that I started this fic at a wrong time, hence have made you wait, but I will definitely continue writing it, because I want to and there's still a lot of love for Brian and Justin in my heart.
Perhaps there will be a new chapter in two months. I thank you for your patient. I am really thankful xxx
Reviewer: Christinalin (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 2
That is really awsome! The story and the idea of it is adroable. I really like it and i'm so exciting of the nesxt chapter. Please write a new chapter soon, i cant wait <3.
And i have one question :). Is brians house here in this story the loft or is it a different house?
I hope you can answer me soon :).
Author's Response: I haven't decided yet what is the use of the loft in this fic...But of course I won't leave the infamous loft out of my fanfic! Thanks for reading and reviewing <3
Reviewer: Christinalin (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow! I like it really much :) for you first english story it is more than good! Its almost perfect. Please go on like this and contiune writing soo. I really like your sory ba far and i hope to read more from it soom :).
Reviewer: P.R.N.A (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2011 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great storyline so far... When are you going to continue?
Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2011 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
are u going to cont this story,it looks good,i know its been while.
Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh!! Protective Brian?? My favorite! Yay!! Can't wait to see the development of their *will I dare say the R word?? Yeah, definitely* relationship!!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 2
We have many foreign writers and we certainly understand how hard Engish is as a second language. You are not the first or the last to improve your Engish by writing on MW. Please feel very welcomed and appreciated.
Nice banner however I can't read the lettering in the banner. I would suggest a contrasting color or plain white letters so people can read it. The brown is too close to the tan background; they blend together and get lost.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 2
:)
Reviewer: blaues_universum (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well, thanks everyone for reading and encouraging me. Thank you for the banner, too.
I'm sorry if the chapters are too short .___. Language barrier is a big problem. Because English is a foreign language so I can't write fast (and I still make many mistakes). But don't worry, I will try to improve my English and try to write faster.
Now I have a beta-reader so I hope that I won't leave dumb mistakes that cause your uncomfortableness anymore.
Next chapter will come next week, and it will be definitely longer. Thank you >w<
Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
ooooooh...
can,t wait for the next chapter...
this chapter was so short ... i was sooo Frustrated... =(
Reviewer: Maddiecat (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 2
aww! poor justin! keep going, Brian is so sweet to little Justin!
Reviewer: helenann23 (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2010 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 2
good story keep it going! maybe a little longer chapters.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
ok
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ireally love the start and your way of writing...I hope to read the next chapter soon and see how the story develops...
Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG.. Graet start… i give you my thump up…
I read this chapter and i think you make a good writer
Wish i could be your beta but am not that good,,, and english is not my mothet tounge…
Waiting for the rest of the story…
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
Poor Justin..he had a rough life ... it's strange to picture Brian as a Mafia Boss and a killer... but..it will be interesting to see what happens next... Thanks..
Reviewer: Maddiecat (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
really good! keep going, i cant wait to read more
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