Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2016 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 23: New Beginnings II
I love this story an the prequel. Still, I hope you come back with a sequel!!!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2014 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 23: New Beginnings II
That was beautiful, I hate to see our journey end... Thanks for a wonderful story, full of so much love and passion...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2012 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 23: New Beginnings II
I spent the weekend reading this and the prequel. Loved them! Couldn't stop reading! Thanks for giving my such a fun weekend! TAG
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2012 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 4: Christmas Surprises
Micheal's sudden change of heart is unbelievable. It makes no sense, no matter how you try to explain it away. He was a total jerk, for selfish reasons only. He was obsessed with Brian. Now, he's suddenly nice because he found out Justin is rich...?
You tried too hard to make everyone be 'nice'. It didn't work. You should have left him as a bad guy.
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2011 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 23: New Beginnings II
I finally got to finish this series over the weekend while I was in Pittsfield, MA to see Randy in "Tommy." I really enjoyed this series, but I, too, would love a sequel. I know you have other stories that you're working on, but hopefully you'll take the time and have the inspiration to do a sequel. It just feels unfinished.
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2011 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 23: New Beginnings II
Oh it's not finish. What happened with Craig and Molly and find a new house
and Linda's baby? Please write a sequel soon.
I love this story
Author's Response: I'd like to know the answer to those questions too LOL. But, right now, I don't Know. This story has absorbed me very much, and I have other stores that I want to release. Hope you'll enjoy them. Thank you very much for reading and commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 23: New Beginnings II
I expected to at least breath I love you at the end...but there you have him, Brian Kinney and his insecurities, however it makes me wonder...
It was a great story, and I wouldn't mind to have a sequel in this AU, like when the boys find their own place, and Craig preferably dies *yeah yeah I know* and Molly is in Justin's custody...
Brilliant!
Marla
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it that much. I know that there are still things unresolved, but this story was due to finish in the new year party, from the start. I don't Konw if I'll come back to this story. Now, I have other projects and I hope that you enjoy them too. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: BRIJUSLuvrr (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 23: New Beginnings II
Hey Hun,
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you should do a pre sequal i loce this story :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 22: New beginnings I
I enjoyed this chapter and this AU and I am sad to see it end, but as they say all good things must come to an end, so be it.
I am waiting for your last installment so we can rap this up.
Let me tell you, I am definitely gonna read this story and the prequel again.
Marla
P.S. I hope to see a new story from you soon
Author's Response: Thank you very much. This story has taken me much longer than I intended, but, finally I made it. I hope to post the last part this week or the next one. I also have other stories which I hope you enjoy. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 21: The pieces are fitting into place
Quite a day for everyone, and as Justin points out, especially for Brian:
""Oh, Brian." Justin said between kisses. "The whole day you have been so great; in the clinic, in your office and with Claire. I'm so proud of you.” And he said this with such passion that took Brian’s breath away. But now it was Justin's turn to be surprised when Brian stared at him and put a condom in his hand."
I am so looking forward to finding out what Emmett has planned for the party.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yes it has been a crucial day in Brian and Justin's relationship.
I hope you like the party and everything that will happen in next chapter, because it will be the last one. I almost can't believe how long this story had taken. Most people must giot bored from waiting LOL.Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 20: A glimmer of hope
""I would apreciate if you stop harassing my boyfriend.” Brian said more seriously than he intended. Cynthia was really having fun. Not every day she could find the weak point of his boss."
LOL Intense chapter. Im giggly for Cynthia, flirting with Justin just to get a rise out of Brian...and Brian acknowledging Justin's status in his life!
I love how Brian is conquiring his instincts regarding his sister just to see Justin's positive reaction. I do hope they form a great friendship as siblings should have, and is able to help Claire sort out John and Peter and their problems.
I LOVE that Brian acknowledges Justin's hand in the campaign, even offers him a job! But I am also glad Justin chooses to focus on school and his art. Maybe he will freelance for Brian as a part time job. :o)
And Daph! And Nicholas! So much going on. Great update!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Your comments are always great.
Cynthia is teasing Brian because she is her friend and in her heart is happy to see how much Brian is changing because of Justin.
Brian would never take credit for someone else's work. He's not that kind of person like you can see in the actual show. And Justin really apreciates Brian's gesture, but he has his priorities clear now.
Brian has a great opportunity of building a new and healthier relationship with his sister and Justin is going to help him.
Will Nicholas and Daphne make it? We'll see. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 20: A glimmer of hope
Wow! Brian is actually jealous of Cynthia! Aaaamazing!
This was a beautiful update.
Is Craig gonna die in this story? *please have him perish, I simply cant stand him*
Cant wait for the update.
Marla
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting.
Well, I think that Brian would be jelous of anyone who show interest in Justin. Even if they were only jocking like Cynthia.
I'm not revealing anything about Craig LOL. You must keep on reading. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 19: Getting into action
I loved loved loved the meeting of Daphne and Nicholas!!!! Thank you for making life better for the girl.
As for the story, it goes to places I expected it to go, and I enjoy it very much.
I like the support Brian is giving to Justin and the fact that he has actually identified his feelings toward him, even though he has not openly admitted them, even to himself *he really asked Justin to accept him as his boyfriend, and Justin actually accepted him?*
I would like to see more about the process of these two firming up their bond, through some unavoidable angst.
As for Craig, please someone kill him...
Great story, thank you for posting.
Marla
Author's Response: Well, certainly Daphne deserves to be happy. We'll see what happens with Nicholas and if he could be THE ONE.
Yes, Brian asked Justin to be his boyfriend, even if he didn't plan to do it. But his feelings towaed the blond are getting stronger each moment.
Thanks to you for reading and commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 19: Getting into action
Oh goodness = the last bit is just awesome. LOL. Who hasn't had the misfortune to come across a beautiful man just when you look your worst. Nick seems amazing. I love how Daph is just overcome!
So much is going on in this chapter! Poor Justin so upset, but recovering reasonably well. The giggling girls, and the naughty Cynthia, openly oggling him is so very funny! On the show they focus on Brian's exceptional good looks, but I always found Justin beautiful beyond belief!
My favorite part, though, is how Justin impresses Brian with his made-Up-on-the-spot campaign. Justin's intelligence and artistic skill gets to shine, proving he is more than a pretty face. I always loved stories where they work together...mutually impressed and inspired by the others capabilities.
Excellent chapter. The best so far!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked it that much.
Yes, the scene at the office with the girls and Cynthia was intended to be funny. You know, although Brian is a really beautiful man, I think teenage girls would be more inclined to look at someone much younger like Justin. And he is certeinly beutiful too. In the show, Cynthia and him only interacted a couple of times. But when Brian takes Justin to his new office for the first time in seasson 4, that "Hi Justin" from Cynthia and the smiles that they gave one another, always suggested me this idea. And Cynthia would had made that comment if only to tease Brian. She's a great character.
Daphne deserves to find her man. Don't you think?
And, well, Justin is a genius. Brian himself says it on the show. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: TECH SUPPORT (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 18: A wake up call
This chapter needs to be reposted.
See announcement
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 18: A wake up call
Oh...how sad!
Justin is really going to need Brian now. Brian seems ready to step up to the plate and be the man, partner, Justin needs. I hope. Poor Molly! I wonder if Craig will survive?
Please update soon! I have done a marathon and reread this series from the very beginning over the last two days and dont want to forget anything before you update again. :o)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm overhelmed with your effort and all your wonderful comments. Don't worry, I won't be that long updating again. I've been really busy and had some computer problems. But I think now I'm going to manage my many duties better LOL! I'm glad that you are enjoying this story. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: Some things never change
Oh, Brian. I love you!
Mr Craig Taylor, though I know that those you despise will undoubtedly save your sorry ass, I personally would rather leave you with a "rest in peace" as a farewell forever!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 15: Family warmth
I'm glad Brian is weathering his hurts so well, and taking a stand as far as his parental rights are. I imagine it is very scary for him to rock the boat of so many relationships.
I like that in your story Brian is so protective of Justin. I have to admit that the first time Queer as Folk was on TV I got very irritated with Brian, never standing up against Mikey or anyone who had something to say about Justin. Calling him his BoyToy, Stalker, Trick who Stayed...
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 14: Brothers and sisters II
Brian is really changing and I really really like him. Justin is so good to positively reinforce every step out of character Brian takes.
I like that Claire called Molly and angel. Its amazing how the Taylor children affect everyone around them. :o)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 13: Important changes
Daph is breaking my heart. :o(
Molly is sweet and unaffected by wealth or her father's crappy attitude, so I am enjoying her roll in the story.
I have to admit I dont like that Justin is keeping any secrets from Brian. :o( I dont think that Brian will like not knowing how Justin is feeling about his attack and the return of his panic attacks.
I hope things go well on their "family" day in the park with Gus. :o)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 12. Brothers and sisters I
YAY Mikey! He thought so unselfishly seeing someone being attacked. I almost think that if it wasn't Justin but a complete stranger he still would have helped. It was very brave of him. Sometimes that's all it takes to stop a bully or rapist, someone to just not care and barge in!
Poor Justin. But it seems he is alright. I think Justin will have a harder time calming Brian down than himself.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 11: Looking ahead
Justin was always very aware of the importance of Brian and Mikey's friendship. Although I must say I'm not at all convinced that Mikey is good for Brian. However, no matter how they met, they are brothers and brother's should never have someone come between them. Justin is really Brian's best friend, even if he has to show it by taking a back seat to Mikey sometimes.
I love that Brian misses Justin so much. :O)
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: More reunions
Oh. Shit.
You know, in all this time since the show ended, I have never really considered that Daph may have been in love with Justin.
I dont know why not. He is a great guy, and she an amazing young woman.
I hope they weather this out. I always loved their friendship the best. It certainly seemed the most sincere and healthy.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 9: I've missed you
Aha! All caught up! This is where I was when the chapters stopped coming. :o(
I can't wait to see how Molly's visit goes, how Brian deals with her being in their new relationship, how Justin and Brian manage to keep together...
Thanks for writing and sharing with us agian!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 4: Christmas Surprises
""What the fuck is taking you so long to come out, twat?" Brian said from the doorway."He can’t live without me" Justin whispered, winking at Michael. And turning toward the door, he sing-songed: "I'm coming!""
I just love a confident Justin. He can be just as arrogant as Brian when he feels he is in the right. LOL. And he knows Brian is HIS!
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