Reviewer: DiddiAskew (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 01:04 PM · On: What The.....
Anipulated?
Sweetheart, this is an interesting story. However, you desperately need a Beta. Hope your recovery is progressing well.
Adrianne (also my middle name. If you call me by my first, then you don't know me)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 22 Note from the Author
Take care of yourself
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2012 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 22 Note from the Author
Good to hear from you! Get well soon! Your health always comes first. Anyway it's good to know that you are planning to finish your stories. Thanks!
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2011 07:09 PM · On: What The.....
Usualy when is so long between updates I read again the end of the chapter before so I can remember were I am. But because the last chapters were deleted I can't do that so I'm lost.
Author's Response: They are no spaces between chapters now. No space and everything is lined up
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2011 12:57 PM · On: What The.....
We've waited almost 5 month for 2 page update and it's not beta'ed
so I don't understand what you want to tell me. Sorry about that
Author's Response: I am totally confused by this comment. What do you mean and damn i thought i got rid of the mistakes
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 08:52 AM · On: What The.....
Are you going to try to fill in the lost chapters? This is a nice quick update. Thanks
Author's Response: Going to put new ones and finally finishing this story
Reviewer: Lanie_725 (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2011 06:39 AM · On: Too Much Time
I'm really enjoying this story. However, the last few chapters are missing from the crash. Can you repost? Please!?!?!?!
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 06:33 PM · On: Too Much Time
Oh, what are Lindsey and Mel up to?
Author's Response: You never can tell with those two.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 09:55 PM · On: Drama Queen
Thanks for the update. Still loving this story. Hihi Brian is a big drama Queen.
* hugs *
Author's Response: that he is but we love him.
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 04:10 AM · On: Illusions and Illness
More please!!! So proud of Justin...someone had to tell off the bitches of Liberty Ave-Mel, Lindsey and in this case Deb because she never seems able to see the good in Brian.
Author's Response: A new chapter is in the works maybe even pop up tonight. You should check out Recovery it's getting a following as well. I love seeing a new comment from you as well as the others you keep me posting.
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 12:14 AM · On: Big Mistakes Huge Suprises
So glad you're back with this story. I really enjoy reading it. Poor Brian can't seem to get a break, I continue to loathe Melanie, great twist having Anita make a "come back" can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 10:44 AM · On: Misunderstandings and Mistakes
Wow, Mel is a totaly, vindictive bitch.
Author's Response: I know right. She'll get hers in the end.
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2011 10:32 AM · On: Misunderstandings and Mistakes
Good to see an actual chapter added. I hope Melanie's statement blow Brian's chances to keep Adrianna. Hopefully the case worker will take into consideration all of the statements from the "family," not to mention an observation of both Brian and Justin with the baby. I hope you continue with another chapter soon. I know it's difficult with RL rearing its ugly head every now and again.
Author's Response: Real life is a pain but I'm back and look for more soon things will get ugly but they will be a family
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Seeking Comfort
I hope the photo is to your liking.
I've been dressing up the website a bit.
bob
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 01:07 AM · On: That's Not Funny
i love it
Author's Response: i'm glad you like i. More to come promise.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:37 PM · On: That's Not Funny
can't wait for everyone to find out. mel will crawl back into the hole she crawled out of. loretta certainly got an earful because of mel's big mouth. og that's going to be so sweet when she's put in her place.
so adrianna can say da for brian. doesn't sound as cute as mama for justin.
Author's Response: yea i thought that was so funny. She'll call her momma for awhile longer. Cause well i think it's adorable and he doesn't.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 08:43 PM · On: That's Not Funny
OK.... Debbie is mad at Brian for not going to Vic's funeral.... Loretta is busy digging up dirt on Brian.... Claire is being paid to help him and watch Adrianna.... Melanie is being her usual Bitchy self..... the only thing that was funny was the baby calling Justin Mama..... at least no one else was killed... yet..... lol.... Thanks...
Author's Response: no more deaths i promise.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 07:42 PM · On: That's Not Funny
What a wonderful surprise to wake to a new chapter to read with my very strong coffee; you must write in your sleep... I'm so glad he's accepting Justin back into his life and he's help... Thanks for the update and I see you started posting on Queer-As-Fics...
Didn't you email me that you have lots of videos? Where are they posted?
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: oh yea tons of vids they are on youtube. But not as many as my website. www.fandomoverload.com let me know if u visit and what u think
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:43 PM · On: That's Not Funny
Pff why is Brian so stubborn, why doesn't he tell that he has cancer.
Sorry Justin, but it's funny * giggles *
* hugs *
Author's Response: exactly right. funny as ever.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:36 PM · On: He's Everything
“He’s….he’s everything" aaaahhhh.
Wonderful chapter of a wonderful story.
* hugs *
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:11 AM · On: He's Everything
I just want to say that i have been folwing this strory and it's just now that i have had time to comment.
"He's... he's everything."
Great Story!! I am glad that you have taken Anita and put her in the storyline that is Brian and Justin. Oh the B/J storyline... amazing. Why does Brian do this to himself; always pushing Justin away and yet despreastly trying to hang on to him. Oh the layers that are Brian Kinney! Lindsay, on the other hand, I never undestood her. I like how you have protraited her (very similar to OC). She professes to love and have Brian's interest at heart, but her actions at time always spoke volumes. I really am not liking her right now. Dr. Chandlers is turning out to be amazing for both Brian and Justin and hence why I am fond of him. A midst all of this craziness, what a God sent gift to Brian and Justin is Loretta's husband. I like how he is finally puting his foot down. Woohoo!!! Overall, I really am enjoying your story. Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Wow thanks for the wonderful comment. Look for an update later tonight. It's folks like you that keep me going. Thanks in advance.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 12:37 AM · On: He's Everything
i love it
Author's Response: awesome. More to come soon i promise.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 09:45 PM · On: He's Everything
hate mel, joan, and loretta. you can add lindsay to the list too.
dr. chanders is a wise man, and i think justin played it right. brian won't throw him out again, he's going to need him.
Author's Response: Exactly. One of the folks on the hate list will be able to be deleted soon. It's almost time for someone to have a reality check.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 08:35 PM · On: He's Everything
“He’s….he’s everything.” ~ Aw this is so beautiful!!! You're making me cry...
You need to post this story on Vonnie's community; queer_as_fics
I love this story thanks for updating so often...
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: oh wow a QAF community on LJ i'm not familliar with i'll start posting today i suppose.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 08:33 PM · On: He's Everything
It was nice to see such a long chapter.... it cleared up a lot of things.... I still don't understand why Lindsay... keeps letting Melanie get away with saying things about Brian concerning Gus that she knows are not true.... I realize she loves Melanie....BUT... she's Gus' mother and she should be doing what's best for him.... letting him know that his father loves him and wants to be with him..... Thanks...
Author's Response: Keep reading. Melanie is about to change.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 11:42 PM · On: What the...?
can anything else happen? brian has cancer, vic dies and joan goes to the grandparents house to work on a way to get adrianna away from brian. with brian feeling the way he does i guess it won't be a hard battle. poor guy.
Author's Response: i promise the next chapter is lengthy and guess what happy as well.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Seeking Comfort
I see you're giving us a few twists and turns... can't wait for more...
Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: yea but i promise next chapter will be lengthy and guess what it wont be said so look for it soon.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Seeking Comfort
OMG... now poor Vic is dead!!! and Joan and Loretta Fairchild are plotting to take Adrianna away from Brian.... this story is definetly not moving too slow.... the problem is too many things are happening at once... and it's... always.... BAD NEWS.....
Author's Response: i promise that is the last bad thing to happen. I needed Vic to die because of something i wanted to happen. Now it's time for happiness. joan doesn't get what she wants i promise.
Author's Response: i promise that is the last bad thing to happen. I needed Vic to die because of something i wanted to happen. Now it's time for happiness. joan doesn't get what she wants i promise.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 04:35 AM · On: What the...?
Aw so beauriful and so sad... I'm loving this!!!
Later Baby ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: glad u like it. Update soon.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Out in the Open
This is what I need right now too!
Later ~ Darling Kathleen
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 09:42 PM · On: What the...?
OMG.... poor Brian he can't catch a break.... between Anita's death, raising an infant, problems with Gardner... and now to top it all off ..finding out he has something seriously wrong during sex with Justin!!!!! how much more can he possibly take????... If that was me I would get a room at Bellevue... or jump in front of the nearest bus.... lol...
Author's Response: lol oh yes the drama. Justin will see him through though. And he is going to become closer to a surprising member of there family. You just have to keep reading to find out who.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 08:53 PM · On: The New Member of the Family
OK, I'm really liking this story, it looks like fun...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: yay i'm glad u are. i update everyday sometimes twice so i hope you stick around.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 08:20 PM · On: What the...?
lindsay should feel bad about what mel did to brian. it was never fair.
i don't really mind the blood discovery, but you should have made it a hand job.
Author's Response: yea maybe but i wanted shock value and it wasn't enough to have noticed through a hand job it's not like it was a gusher.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Oh Shit
still love this story, thanks
* hugs *
Author's Response: awesome big update approaching
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Oh Shit
OK..... I will give it another try....BUT... one of them better get a safe or a house dropped on them...because they are bugging the hell out of me... LOL... Thanks...
Author's Response: they're going to get better in the next chapter. Posted later today decided to make it a little longer.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Oh Shit
You picked the perfect title for this chapter !!!!! I always hated Mikey and now Melanie and Lindsay are on the same list..... I could never understand how they could keep Gus from Brian and still ask him for money whenever they needed something... I will wait till this is complete to finish reading because they are starting to annoy me .... lol.. Thanks...
Author's Response: OH COME ON. don't stop now. I"m going to be updating daily. One of them is actually going to get a lot better and another worst.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Oh Shit
the one thing i don't understand is 1) why joan showed up. and 2) if melanie is gus' parent why isn't she making sure she's earning enough so that they don't have to ask brian for money? if he isn't his parent why do they make him pay? 3) how the hell does ben put up with mikey?
i sure hope erica won't hold brian's attitude against him. she was late and he had a right to be pissed.
Author's Response: Joan came cause she actually liked Anita that will be explained in the next chapter. About ur second question that was something i always wondered on the show cause Brian gave money on the show it was sort of mentioned at times. He did it just because. And well because Ben loves mikey even if he's well you know him
She won't hold it against him glad u guys are still liking it more soon.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Oh Shit
i love it
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:28 AM · On: Prove Myself
WOW....Lindsay has some pair of BALLS.... she made Brian sign away his rights to Gus and now she wanted to ask him to be the "Donor" again for the second child so the kids would be related!!!!... and that S.O.B. Gardner wants Brian to prove himself again.... between the both of them I am surprised Brian doesn't have a nervous breakdown..... I can't wait to see how this turns out... Thanks...
Author's Response: look for the next installment soon maybe even 2.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Prove Myself
brian's either going to get the account or going to start kinneik. adrianna will help get the baby account and justin will be adrianna's other father.
gardner better change his day care policy if he knows what's good for him.
Author's Response: oh man wasn't even thinking about kinnetik. hmm stay tuned next chapter later.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Am I Ready?
It was okay, but it jump all over the places.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Am I Ready?
OMG... on top of everything else.... Cancer..... I realized why I always hated Mikey.... he is supposed to be Brian's "Best" friend and yet he doesn't know a fucking thing about him...and Lindsay is just as bad..... I can't wait to see what happen's next.....
Author's Response: you are giving me the courage to post another chapter today. The story's can come a lot quicker now since i'm doing the beta myself. yay me being able to write correctly. okay okay off to read your last comment and then work on the next chapter.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Out in the Open
I was right about Anita!!!! .. it's Amazing that Jack Kinney was able to love anyone..... too bad he didn't have any left over for Brian....
Author's Response: yup he was a bastard. But apparently he loved someone.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Am I Ready?
i don't think justin would really mind being a father. he's so good at it.
michael. i don't know what ben sees in him.
adrianna's future is secure, which is good.
Author's Response: yea but you know what happens. Just when things look good you get knocked down. Brian is about to get knocked down twice.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Who Was Anita Exactly?
I think I figured it out.... but... please don't get bored with this before you finish this... Thanks...
Author's Response: i'm trying not to get bored. i'm not really. but i got a promotion at work and now i'm in charge. i might disappear. That's why i'm trying to get as much done as possible.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Flashbacks 2
WOW..... Brian's not her husband..but.. he's family??? I thought Claire was his only sister.... this keeps getting better and better.... off to read the next chapter......
Author's Response: yea family. it was time they be someone that Brian could lean on. Well not now cause she dead. i also wanted to add some COLOR to the cast besides Daphne.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Flashbacks 1
OMG.... poor Anita that S.O.B. Officer sent her on a suicide mission.... and when did she and Brian get married??? off to read the next chapter...
Author's Response: lol i love when the person starts from the beginning and i love that you read this without reading the reviews. i can't wait to see how u react chapter to chapter. it was a great surprise seeing all the fresh new comments this morning.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:37 PM · On: The New Member of the Family
OK.... I was going to wait for this to be complete to read...but... curiosity got the better of me..... I just hope this fic actually get's finished...LOL...off to read the next chapter...
Author's Response: it is i've been adding a chapter a day or maybe i'll start doing 2
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Out in the Open
Beautiful.
Yes, I already thought that Anita would be Brians sister * grinns *
Author's Response: yea of course but i guess u guessing a long time right. More drama to come. Ne chapter soon.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Out in the Open
i love vit
Author's Response: Glad you love it. More today.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Out in the Open
WOW!!! what a chapter,I really hope to read more soon please.
Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: more today i promise.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Out in the Open
2 great chapters.
Author's Response: thanks more today.
Reviewer: Carlina1983 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Who Was Anita Exactly?
I hope u don't quit this story, because it's becoming boring to u. I really hope u continue, I would love to see the whole outcome of this story. I can't wait until the next chapter and to finally fing out who Anita really was to Brian. Keep up the great work.
Hugs, :)
Carlina
Author's Response: awe i don't think i'm going to quit. look for the next chapter in the upcoming hours. the muse is back.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Who Was Anita Exactly?
I love it
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Who Was Anita Exactly?
Pff no I don't hate you, but you are a tease !!
Author's Response: lol today i promise. time to make it all about BJ don't u think
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Flashbacks 2
Grrr you can't stop writing, update ASAP * hides behind desk * ... please. Love this very much.
Poor Brian (and Adrianna), I'm glad he has Justin.
* hugs *
Author's Response: i'm glad ur enjoying this story more soon promise.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Flashbacks 2
of course lindsay is upset that brian had another child with another woman and then turns around and claims her as his wife. she wants that postition for herself.
i can see this happening while justin was seeing ethan. makes perfect sense.
and now justin and brian have to raise adrianna.
Author's Response: i'm so glad that you are liking it. you're little comments are keeping me going. Look for another little something a little later.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Flashbacks 1
OMG please update soon
* hugs *
Author's Response: It will be updated later today with a longer update.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Flashbacks 1
poor anita. poor adrianna. poor brian.
were they married? really? more please.
Author's Response: you'll have to wait for the next chapter with the other flashbacks but i promise nothing is at it seems.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 09:28 PM · On: This Could Be Tricky
good chapter.
Author's Response: thanks glad u liked it.
Reviewer: Buffytess (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 03:50 PM · On: This Could Be Tricky
LOVE this story and i want to read more soon please.
Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: more soon promise.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 12:17 AM · On: The New Member of the Family
anita's in the service? where did she go? her and brian had an affair and adrianna was the result just to keep anita from going somewhere? i hope i got that all right. does something happen to her that brian is left raising the baby himself until he gets back with justin?
i like this, but i just want to make sure i'm following it right.
Author's Response: yea
This is how the story is supposed to be seen. It's how it's suppose to seem so ya for now you are correct. More soon expect an update today.
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