Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2020 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
read it again, love it
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2020 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
read it again, love it
Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2019 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
This is a great story. I really liked. Glad I read it. Thanks so much.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2017 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
Very good, liked it a lot
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2016 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 part 1
Great Story!!! Can't wait to read the next part. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
I loved this story, it was great... Now I'm off to read the next part ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2012 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
OMG! I just read that you wrote a squel. Sorry about the earlier comments. :)
I'm going to read now.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2012 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
I loved this story but I thought there was going to be more to Ben and Michael's situation. And what about Brian opening up more?
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
A happy Justin is so hard to resist. :o)
On to read the next part!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 18: part 17
Why oh why is this so hot?
"...Brian opened his eyes. The kid was incredible...kneeling at the foot of the bed, Justin looked at him with his best sunshine smile, completely naked except for a pair of fluffy white feather wings...His eyes went straight to the impressive boy’s erection which he, stroked absently. Brian heard the almost animal growl that emerged from his own throat, followed by the giggles of Justin..."My little naughty angel""
YUM
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
"Michael opened his mouth. But he was unable to say anything. Brian's eyes chilled him. His friend had never looked at him that way. He left the loft as fast as he could. He couldn’t believe it, the fucking blond kid had beaten him once more."
Ha! Michael you idiot! Your screwed up thoughts almost convinced Brian to shut down again, but Justin is too hard to resist.
That "fucking blond kid" will alway beat you!
Thank goodness Brian came to his senses in time.
Reviewer: Lady Luciole (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2011 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
Amazing and incredible work and storyline !! I am so happy that the sequel is already written : the suspence is killing me!
It's quite a Michel bashing : I hope he will wake up soon for the sake of the familly!
I can't wait to read more about this plot !! Soon..
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 4 part 3 II
Ooops, just realized I didn't sign in for my last comment.
I love Justin. Especially in season one, Justin seemed both vulnerable (coming out and enduring his father's rejection) but also amazingly strong for such a young man (he came out proud, and wanted to help the others who didn't have his strength to survive their coming out).
I think fanfic has created the image of Justin the 'just and true', much more than the show ever showed. His loyalty to the man he sees in Brian, despite any pain he suffered at Brian's misconceptions and personal beliefs, is nothing less than beautiful.
Justin the naughty angel is very hard to resist!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2011 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 1 part 1
You have been posting on the sequel to this story again, so I want to remember everything that happened before by rereading this story.
One chapter in and now I remember why I loved this story so much:
"His mother had always told him he would go to hell for being queer and yet, an angel had come to seek him and that angel was much more beautiful than any that he had ever seen in the paintings or statues in churches."
I love how Brian simply adores Justin at first sight!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
What a place to end!
At least I know you have written a sequal, or I might not have forgiven you for ending on such a cliffhanger!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: part 17
Naughty, but nice!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: part 16
Poor little rich Sunshine!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
Yay Brian. He hesitated and paused to listen to Michael, but in the end he did the right thing - sent Mikey away and pleaded for Justin to stay.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 part 14
I like your Lindsay. She is happy for her friend Brian, happy when she sees the contentment Justin brings him.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 14 part 13
Justin has such a soft heart. I think that is part of the reason Brian cant resist him. Brian feels emotions are the most vulnerable part of you, and Justin always leads with his feelings. Brian respects that and regrets when his ususal ways hurt Justin. He wants to protect Justin, from himself, but more intensly, from the rest of the world of fag haters and anything else that can cause Justin pain.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 13 part 12
I like your Hunter. He seems sad but is more concerned with getting inbetween Ben and Michael. He loves Ben enough to not put him in a position of choosing between him and his husband.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 12 part 11
Ted is a very good friend, and probably sees Brian the clearest after Justin.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 11part 10
Oh poor poor Sunshine!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 10 part9
Too emotional, wrapped in each others arms, too deep in their own thoughts to have sex?!? My my Mr Kinney. What Justin does to you!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 9 part 8
Gotta love Em and how accepting he is of Justin right of the bat - and how the two immediately pic up on Brian's jealously and start playing on it.
Stupid Mikey. A person can be suspicios and hateful without scaring innocent children.
Humm, what secrets does Justin share with Hunter?
Justin and Gus drawing together is sweet, and Brian speculating on what it would be like if they were a family is just the most amazing thing.
Justin breaking down and asking if Debbie would be his mother, too, was just too much. Mikey better wear a helmet from now on, because his mother wont stand for his spiteful ways around Justin. She will be swatting some sense into his head constantly, lol.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 part 7
I think I read your story once before a while ago. I can remember Justin's secret. I cant wait to find out!
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 7 part 6
Awww. Justin is hot and sexy and very loving. Brian is yummy and has no idea that he already lost his heart, lol.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 6 part 5
Oh Mikey. Such terrible jealousy.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 5 part 4
Gus is darling!
Do you have a beta? A bit of formatting and grammar corrections is all your story needs.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 4 part 3 II
Very nice story.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 3 part 3
And soon arrives the angel, called Sunshine.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 2 part 2
Poor Brian! Getting hit by a car now, too. :o(
Your story has been edited and a number of sentences are fragmented and confusing.
For example:
It didn`t , definitely bother him too much to again announce The Birth of Baby Jesus to a small group of astonished shepherds. After all, it's not as if he had a better place to be.
Also, a number of words have been misued:
We have explored him to verify
* should be examined
Finally, the use of quotes instead of dashes would make the voices of your characters more immediate and real.
I like your story, so I just wanted to mention a few things to make sure it is fully understood. I hope you are not offended. :o)
Michelle
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 part 1
This is the inner Kinney laid bare! This is the hurting and sad part of him that makes us love him, forgive him and want to give him a second, even third, chance.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
enjoyed reading this story. like the hunter and justin backround. How quickly brian came around back to justin, rather than doing the club thing more
Reviewer: masterglory (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 part 1
Great story, brava!!! I adore the way you portraited them, especially Justin, so strong, human and sweet. And Mikey...is an ass, nothing new Lol!!!
I can't wait for a sequel, for a lot of reasons, Molly, Brian's past and...am I to cruel hoping for some real kick in mikey's ass?;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm working on the sequel and hope it doesn't disappoint you.
Yoli
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 part 1
despite the fact that English is not your first language - you have written a great story that kept me reading right through to the end - Keep writing -
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Yoli
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
Thanks for the story. It was fun reading it. Yes – there are still many
issues that need to be resolved. But for now – this will do just fine.
I just have to add that each time I think of Brian calling a naked Justin:
with wings:
"My little naughty angel"
I just chuckle. That was a great line.
Thanks again, and I do look forward to more. I would love to see Molly and Justin have a brother sister relationship, though I am sure Craig will try to screw things up. Now that I think of it, with Michael being a creep, and Craig on the loose, the next part can be full of ….. I don’t know, just let’s say, things are never easy with Brian and Justin.
DavidR
Author's Response: You're right; things are never easy with Brian and Justin. But that just make their love story all the more interesting to tell. I'm preparing the next story in this series and you will definetly see Molly there. But, I'm afraid, also Michael and Craig. Thanks for your comments. Love.
Yoli
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
I loved this story. I am hoping there will be a Part 2 being you cannot end it with Justin getting a letter from Molly. Please write the next series.
I feel if a person a great storyteller. They should continue to tell the story.
I love reading Brian and Justin's stories even though the series have been off the TV for a few years now.
I am hoping you keep up writing if not a continuation of this story but a new one.
Have a nice spring!
Debbie
Author's Response: Thank you Debbie. There is going to be a sequel. I hope you'll like it too.Happy spring to you too.Love
Yoli
Reviewer: gert (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 1 part 1
I really enjoyed this! Thank you. I am looking forward to the next part in the series.
Author's Response: You're welcome. I'm glad you like it.
Yoli
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 19: Epilogue
Congratulations on finishing your first QAF story! I enjoyed it greatly!
I hope you will be inspired to write again - and soon :D
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Yoli
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 part 1
Hello,
I don't understand why you stop writing and put the word END
It's not finished. You left too many loose ends. Like the family find out all about Justin. Especially Michael. Justin meeting Molly etc.....
I love this story very much but I'm very sad that you ended it just like that.
Mariana
Author's Response: Hello Mariana. Thank you very much for your comment. Don't worry, this story was just the beginning of a series. There is going to be a sequel soon and I hope that you like it too.
Yoli
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 18: part 17
i sure hope that that's all justin has to tell him. is there nothing he hasn't tried to get over his guilt? thank goodness for sister rose.
brian found his angel in justin's bed. sweet.
Author's Response: Yes. Justin sure has been thrugh a lot. But you must think that he is really young and he was alone. Besides, he's an artist and of course has an artist temperament so, he goes from heaven to hell in an instant, Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yoli
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 18: part 17
I love this story. I think you are truly a gifted writer. The story fit with Justin and Sister Rose. How Hunter got to know Justin and the rest of the family. I am truly looking forward to more chapters on what happens now.
I would love to see the family visit the mansion. I can just hear what Debbie would say.
Gus would love the house too!
Please keep writing.
Your fan,
Debbie
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm really happy having a fan; like Justin would say Yeehah! However, I'm afraid you will have to wait for the story to continue. This was the last full lenght chapter; I'm only posting a short epilogue after this. But don't worry; this was the first story of a series and you will see the whole family reactions. I promise. Love.
Yoli
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 17: part 16
Sometime brain can act like a two faced bastrad jerk.....why in all B/J story justin had to be nice when michael act like an /is a jackass to him. Justin still should be carefull with brain untill brain can prove himself to be a true friend/lover.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 17: part 16
what a background. glad brian sat long enough to hear it all.
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 17: part 16
Hi,
Terrific story. This last chapter ended just when it should. Yep it was time for lunch. So much information and so much sadness and hurt, a break was well timed.
Brian to accept Justin as he is. He said he would now he has to do it. True it will take just a little getting used too. Well maybe a little more than a little.
One of the first things I would like Brian to do is to help Justin contact Molly. With Brian and a brotherly relationship with Molly and Brian’s extended family, Justin could have the life he so wants and deserves.
Michael? I guess even if I begged you wouldn’t be able to write him out of this story. Ok, ok, just kidding. He certainly is a jerk. I do think that Justin’s and Brian’s description of his behavior is far too kind.
Craig? You can bury him with Michael.
Thanks for the story. I have been following it from the beginning and finally had an opportunity to stop and say hi, and to again thank you.
DavidR
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for your kind words. Brian and Justin will help each other to end their londliness. And, we'll see what happens with Michael, Craig and olly.
Yoli
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
Oh! That was close! Mikey almost ruined everything... but Brian is finally coming around and Justin is too stubborn to let Mikey win!
Great Chapter - I'm excited to learn what mystery Justin has been hiding! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment. Mikey wanted to separate Brian and Justin, because he knows that Justin is not like every other guy for Brian. But the blond is strong and stabborn and he really loves Brian.
Yoli
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
Brian will alway belive other bofore he belive justin it's like he can't think for himself it's sad
Author's Response: Yes. It's really sad. But that's what happen when a person suffers from child abuse as did Brian. It usually destroys one's self esteam. Thank you for your comment.
Yoli
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
yes i think it's time for brian to know all about justin.
i can't believe that brian almost let him walk away again. all because of michael's jealousy. good thing he found his wallet or again he would have lost.
good chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, Brian's insecurities could have cost him Justin. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yoli
Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 16: part 15
I love this story. So, please keep are writing.
I too am in suspense about Justin's past. It is a great mystery. I am glad that Brian is sticking up for Justin. Also, I am not truly a favorite of Michael during the show and even in all the stories I have read at this website.
I have loved the couple of Justin and Brian.
So, please keep the story coming. You are truly a great and wonderful writer.
Happy Spring!
Debbie
PS. I would rate this over a 10!
Author's Response: Oh. Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm really glad that you are ejoing my story that much. All the mysteries about Justin's past will be revealed in the next chapter. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 15 part 14
Yea! Brian & Justin reunited ... let's hope Mikey doesn't ruin everything. Maybe Santa's Christmas gift to Brioan & Justin can be to make Mikey disappear? LOL :D
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: You're welcome.
Yoli
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 15 part 14
with brian being himself, justin got to see the real him. that's all justin ever wanted. spending the day with gus was just a bonus.
michael's such an idiot. he wound up all alone and doesn't even know it. if ben is smart he'll stay away.
Author's Response: Yes. All Justin wants is for Brian to be honest with him, because he already loves the real Brian. Michael is really clueless. Thank you for commenting.
Yoli
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 part 1
I don't blame him! Brian was a complete ass... he certainly has a lot of making up to do before Justin can feel secure and trust him again.
Author's Response: You're right. He has hurt Justin very much. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yoli
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 14 part 13
thank goodness for father ralph. at least they'll get the time to talk.
ben and hunter need to learn to rely on each other since michael is out of the picture.
Author's Response: Yes, they will talk. We'll see if Brian is really willing to change and if Justin can trust him again.
Yoli
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2010 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 14 part 13
Yep, I agree too. Brian is a top Ad. man. He would know how to sell something, especially himself. Bringing Gus along to see Justin was the perfect prop. Very clever writing. How could Justin resist two Kinneys’. Impossible!
Things have gotten so much better. In the prior chapter everyone was miserable. Everything now looking up, except for Michael and who cares?
Thanks for the story, I am enjoying .
DavidR.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comment. Yes, things are getting better, but Brian and Justin's relationship has never been easy and this story isn' finished yet.;)
Yoli
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 14 part 13
I loved the way you had Brian bring Gus knowing that Justin loves children to help ease the difficulty they are having after Brian kicked out Justin on Monday night.
I really think you are a gifted writer. I am looking forward to finding out more about Justin's past. Plus, their relationship together.
I have not been a fan of Michael's. I like Ben and Hunter and sort of feel sorry about them having to deal with a whiny Michael.
Again, please keep the story.
Debbie
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. You know Brian is a talented adman and he knows which buttons to play in order to sell a product. This time, himself.. And don't woorry I'm going to complete the story
Yoli
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 14 part 13
I'm glad Justin agreed to go with Brian & Gus ... it's not much, but it's a start! :)
Author's Response: Well. He's very hurt and doesn' trust Brian completely jet.
Yoli
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 13 part 12
Why oh why did I start reading this story...it's sooo good! Please let Brian fin his sunshine and let Michael be found in a dumpster with all the other garbage...as you can tell I hate whiney, stupid, jerk face Michael...(lol)...Please update soon...like today!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking my story so much. Don't worry, Brian will find Justin as soon as he decide to move his proud ass, hehe.. I won't reveal Michael destiny je.
Yoli
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 13 part 12
The plot thickens!
Another great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad that you like it.
Yoli
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 13 part 12
now that was one fantastic chapter. i like the friendship between hunter and justin and the end of the friendship with michael.
the nightmare scared brian, how will he find justin?
Author's Response: We only have to see if Michael get it. Don't worry, Brian will find Justin. He only needs to decide to do it.
Yoli
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 12 part 11
brian is how old, he not fuck up... he's really crazy...he dosen't know how to talk to people
Author's Response: He really needs to grw up.
Yoli
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 12 part 11
I have always felt the Mikey was a whiney bastard and this just proves it!
Oh, Brian- get it together and find your boy!! :(
Author's Response: "Oh, Brian- get it together and find your boy!"
He will. Thank you.
Yoli
Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 12 part 11
Please, please put up the next chapter soon. I'm dying to know about Justin
Author's Response: I'll post it as soon as i can. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yoli
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 12 part 11
i don't know how brian is going to find him. if he would have stayed he could of asked sister rose where justin lived.
michael is in his own delusional world. he lost hunter and ben and pretty he'll lose brian. then what?
Author's Response: Oh. Don't worry. Brian will find Justin. He's a very resourcful man. Michael could difinitly have lose everybody, but he only can blame himself.
Yoli
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 11part 10
things are closing in on brian so he takes it out on justin. michael is an ass butting into things that don't concern him. so what else is new.
justin and hunter hiding out in justin's home. i don't know if that's a good thing or not. when will brian and the gang find out all about him?
Author's Response: Justin is shocked and hurt by Brian's behaviour, but we all know how strong and stabborn he is.
Yoli
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 10 part9
justin is so wise and seems older than he is. michael is still an idiot for trying to get between brian and justin. and mel is still a bitch where brian is concerned.
brian needs to find out all of justin's back story. i hope he does it soon.
Author's Response: Well, like in the show, in my story, Justin had to grow up more quickly than other kids because of his special circunstaces. Also, in muy story, you'll find out soon yht he had been throught a lot in his sort life. Mel, like everybody else in the gang, only sees themask and doesn't make the effort to look farder. And, Michael...Well, I can't reveal what will happend, but you'll learn soo what's his plan.
Yoli
Reviewer: RC (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 9 part 8
I have been following your story and love it very much. I hope you keep up the good work and update soon.
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 8 part 7
I'm sorry I missed this story before this chapter! I'm very interested to find out what Justin's story is here :)
Thanks for updating & I hope you'll post again soon :)
Reviewer: rowolfluv (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 8 part 7
Hello! I'm really liking your story. The only thing that is wrong is that Brian is being way too easy on Michael. His behavior is deplorable! Brian should have kicked him out of his home instead of treating him with kid gloves. Michael would not have treated him as well and neither would have Ben had he said the things he said and acted at Michael acted.
Can't wait to read more!
Ro
Reviewer: blklizard (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 7 part 6
I just read all the chapters you have posted and I think this is a cute story. I'm curious to find out why Justin seems to be alone without a family. It is cute that Brian thought he was an angel at the accident scene.
I hope you continue the story and post the next chapter soon. There are a few spelling errors here and there but overall a sweet and interesting story idea. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Thak you for reading and commenting. I'ill try to fix the spelling errors. Thanks.
Yoli
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 7 part 6
love it a new twist to the story of the boys. more please soon!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Yoli
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