Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Partners in Crime
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 38: Ice Ice Baby

Still loving the story, and glad to have my extra blondy Sunshine back.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 36: Nuclear Tramps

Eiw.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 35: Key West

Once in the air Al went to the jet restroom and tore the photo of a dead Justin Taylor into little pieces and sent it down the crapper to be ejected over many miles--thousands of feet down to earth.

LOL.  Um, shit doesn't fly from the sky silly.  Unless some paraschute jumper lost their load.  The holding tank is emptied just like any RV. LOL

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 34: Killer for Hire

Nobody threatens Sunshine!

Even a hired hitman cant pull the trigger he's so cute!  LOL

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 33: The Aftermath

Where do you get these pictures?  Just google them?

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 32: First Kill

Good chapter, especially since the title kinda made me believe the danger to Justin would happen sooner, when he was undercover onthe plane.   Being drawn on in the police offices was unexpected.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 31: Gay Espionage

Its a wonder Brian doesn't have a fit over Justin taking this case.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Wrong Prostitute

Here.  Here is you line, you addict.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 29: Undercover Rookies

God, Randy Harrison is beautiful, isn't he?

At first I was miffed you darkened Justin's hair, but it just makes his perfect skin glow all the more = so you are forgiven. :o)

Oh, and I never did like the idea of him with really long hair.  this pic is purrrrrrfect.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 28: Drunken Cops

Oh lookie, you posted a pic of yourself doing a breathalyzer.  Do you maybe think you and your hamster are co-dependant and enabling each other.  Honestly, do you need help?



Author's Response:

brat

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: Dumb and Dumber

The "dumbest criminals day"  storyies were very funny, and Mr Hamster telling about your personal relationship was pretty good, too.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 26: First Night on the Job

Your hamster snorting lines again?

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 25: I Swear

I cant see either of them liking this pace for long.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 24: I Do

Great Chapter!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good Funny Money

Nice chapter!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 22: Good Bye

Im glad Rex will be ok, too bad most bashing victims dont get such special treatment and top of the line care initially.  They have to wait for their settlements and have the surgery re-done at a cost of millions.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Knee

Oh how I wish it were true!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 20: Rex Denny

How horrible to lose the ability to professionally dance.  Millions of dollars is not enough to compensate for the years and years of expensive time consuming life gobbling saccrificing practice this poor boy did.  Its like Justin not being able to draw in canon.  Taking away his most intimate form of communication.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 19: The Chief

Ewwww.  Nasty pic of a twisted leg!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 18:Dirty Cops

Boy, in this story Brian goes pale a lot and even peed his pants!  LOL.  Gale Harold better not hear about this, he'll kick your ass after he worked so hard making Brian a loveable badass.  LOL.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 17:Boy Killer

Hello Mr Hamster!  My kid got two gerbles last week.  Stella and Naru.  They say HI!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 16:Round Two

Very HOT!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 15: Power Changes

That's a gorgeous pic of pittsburg!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: Terrorists

Id so like to have a president as a friend....really dont care which country....

"Fuck! This is one bottle of shampoo that we should not have thrown in the dryer.

I have never heard this expression before!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Investigations

Things are getting tense!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 12: Chris Hobbs

What does that mean?  EEK.  Is Chris Hobbs investigating them or is he being investigated?   Ohhhh.  gotta keep reading!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 11: Love

 Like two opposing poles of two magnets they clung together with a force of nature so right for them.

Great line!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: Demonstration

Wow.  I hope Brian doesn't get jealous, or feel he isnt the Alpha male in the relationship - him being Alpha is what makes him HOT!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer

Man, Justin is so going to blow his cover.  There are bad guys in the police force too, and being on active duty in his home town isnt going to help.  I wonder what you will write next?

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 8: Federal Trouble

LOL.  The Prez now!  This is a really fun giddy ride!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 7: Changes

The next day Justin solved 18 cases using his gift.

The following day Justin solved 24 more cases all cold case files.

OMG.  The DA's office would shit at that much work coming into the court systems so quickly.  The mayor would have a heart attack!  Whole city budgets are blown with less, lol.

I like shows like Ghost Whisperer and Medium so the psychic thing is really cool.  Im liking the story lots!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 6: Gus

I do rather like a butch Justin!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch

cool.



Author's Response:

I know a psychic that has that gift for real and has worked for law enforcement. Thanks very much for your chapter comments; the hamster needs the love :-)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 4: Michael

Little Michael's pic in the last chapter was very disturbing to me, but if your intent was to open our eyes to how young these children are and that this is a true and terrible crime that does occur every day, Im ok with that.

Otherwise, its icky to exploit even a pic of a child, ya know?

Amazing how giggly Michael is after all his ordeals.  I understand you write yur stories at a frentic pace and the plot lines move at light speed, but it cant be overlooked that this child is traumatized.  Im glad you are planning a loving home for him.

Dont mean to be preachy, just Im kinda empathetic to these situations and want them to be depicted as real - - and it can be intense.



Author's Response:

No children are harmed in the writing of this piece of fiction. I promise young Michael will have an amazing future in the story and be very happy. The boy's photo is from Yahoo images and is not an abused child. Just let your imagination run with it and remember this is pure fiction. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. My muse, Mr. Hamster is inspired by your comments.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort

Justin's 5'2????  You know he isn't really short in real life.  He is 5'8".  Brian is 6' 1.5"  And yes I researched it, lol.

Cant find their dick size though.  Although some of those shots of Justin in his grey undies in season one indicated a lovely endowment. :P



Author's Response:

I've met Randy Harrison and yes he's tall. This is sort of AU so anything goes. I have seen a screen shot of Justin's cock from editing film and it's about 6 inches soft and thick so very endowed. I have no idea about Gale. However in fiction they can be any size we want them to them to be and with science...well I'll let you read and find out. :)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe

Size queen much?

LOL.  and love the pleading for reviews. :P



Author's Response:

We gay boys like our men on the large size :-P

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie

Not sure what to think yet.  Im a bit confused wondering how they can talk about being undercover and who's a cop and stuff in a public place in the middle of the area their supposed to work?  And I thought all detectives had to serve in blue for a minimal period of time, though I expect their may be exceptions if they need very young looking undercover cops.

I think I like the premise so far, and you have written another story I just love, so Im gonna trust you on this, lol.



Author's Response:

Some very bright kids right of the police academy go to junior detective status. That is not unusual in big city departments. Yes, they do need young ones espeically in sex crimes, undercover, and narcotics. This story goes on the back burner for a while since I will mostly develop Rings or Vows. It has been pretty popular too. Thanks for reading and commenting; my hamster lives for your comments.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 96: The Family Way

I love it



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you very much!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 96: The Family Way

This is going to be interesting on how this works out.



Author's Response:

Kids having kids; what's the world coming to? I promise a very happy future for all. The question is will it be a boy or girl? Perhaps the Kinney family needs some balance happening. Thank you for commenting very much.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 96: The Family Way

I’m happy that everything went well with the young David and that the kidnappers didn’t ill-treat him. Concerning Craig and Marsha and the unborn child, Brian and Justin make a well-advised proposal. I hope Marsha will adhere without problems (though $ 500,000 can help).

This was an excellent chapter... Bravo to run at the same time these two magnificent stories with such wonderful plots. You & Mr Hamster are so........marvellous

Kisses my Love



Author's Response:

The hamster is tripping me out as we keep kicking out chapter after chapter lately. He had a good long break and was ready to get back to work. Even I'm shaking my head at his latest ideas-pushing the gay envelope once more to new highs. Kisses back and thank you so much for being a reader, fan, translator, and friend.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 95: A Typical Taylor-Kinney Weekend

I love it



Author's Response:

Now that I slept for two days straight I can try to cetch up on comments and write again. Thank you!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 95: A Typical Taylor-Kinney Weekend

It's funny but a typical Taylor-Kinney weekend reminds me of a typical weekend in our house ... :D

A excellent chapter really full of love... but it leaves us in suspense. Justin will still have to use his sublime power to find a kidnapped child. Roll on the next chapter

Love my dear

Intza



Author's Response:

Ha! You got me laughing with this admission of the hanky panky at home. Love you back my lady and thanks for all your comments that mean so much to me and the hamster.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 95: A Typical Taylor-Kinney Weekend

Well, Bob... I'll have to see my reading system. The day before yesterday morning was the picture of Wesley and now this EXCELLENT chapter so hot hot hot... So,  either I get up earlier and I’ve time to read and come back in bed or in the shower or somewhere else in the house, anywhere, well, there where I can put my hand on Tomas before he left... Or, I don’t read anymore before Intza and I wait for her go-ahead ‘cause she knows I can handle your chapter… Either, I wait for the evening, coiled up against my man… Well, again this morning, I’ll have to face my public with a hard-on in my pants for breakfast… After, I wonder why my daddy calls me « sexe sur pattes » (the translation could be « dick on legs»)

Oh, wonderful Bob and the rascal littleMr. Hamster, I love you

Great chapter

Gex



Author's Response:

We move from sex scenes to plot and back in the story. It's a fine line between just writing smut and smut with a plot :)

I slept for days and now I hope to get back into production mode again. Love the comments as they inspire us to kick out this stuff. Thanks Gex.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 95: A Typical Taylor-Kinney Weekend

Sounds like tings are going well for everyone.



Author's Response:

Yes, for now but who knows what the future has in store? The Hamster won't tell me until it's time to type it. Thanks very much for your comment balrogtweety.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

WEll this story is definitely heating up.  Wes is a hottie.



Author's Response:

Wes could eat crackers in my bed anytime but I don't think John will let him go for me to get a chance. I loved his face and hands especially; very elegant looking and beautiful. Thanks bal.

Reviewer: QAF fan (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

This was so hot since Wes is beautiful. John is very lucky to have him. I hope to read more about them.



Author's Response:

They are now the parallel dream team of the story; they parallel Brian and Justin in looks, temper, and futures somewhat. This way we can have more than one roller coaster going at a time :)

Thank you for commenting QAF fan.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

I’m very happy for John. This will make him settle down. He’ll be able to live fully. In addition, he seems happy with Wes, who is a really beauty. Justin and Brian will help them now with their life... It's quite a nice surprise as Craig’s news about Marsha... I love Justin’s reaction but I can’t wait to see Brian’s reaction when he’ll hear Marsha is pregnant...

Beautiful chapter…. Well, "beautiful" is not the right word... Excellent chapter is better

Kisses



Author's Response:

Thank you Ihintza; this was a fun section to write for me. I used some fond memories of mine to make it come to life. As a gay young man in his early twenties I had a relationship with a beautiful girl once so I have an idea what Craig is experiencing now. Only time will tell which side he will end up on in the end. John has not had a happy life but Wes will change that for him.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

Mmmm Wes…Just a second, I wipe the spit at the corner of my mouth :) Yeah, I see better now. But it must not be very easy working with this twink beauty in a team. 

Well, and me now ? Because Tomas, he already left !! Oh, very clever... The picture is for good in my brain…Dive head first in the pool? Considering the drop in temperature last night (outside dude, not in my bed ;) ), the water will surely cold enough... It remains to cross home with the bump in my pants :P. Shit, Bob....

Kisses Dude



Author's Response:

LOL! Happy to get a rise out of you buddy. I thought Wes was hot enough to make a straight man think twice about gay love. He has all the beauty of a delicate girl with boy features. There'll be more about them in the future chapters. Kisses back hot stuff.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

Love the story.
One question though, if Craig is Brian's son and John is Claire's son then wouldn't Craig be John's cousin, not his nephew?
Love and kisses to you and the hamster.

Author's Response:

*smacks his head on the desk for being so dumb*

You are so right and I'm going to go fix this right now. Thanks for pointing it out to me.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

Wow !!!... John ? John is gay ? John is with a boy ? John is in love ? And he loves sex with a boy ? WOOOOOOW .... If I hadn’t already been sitting in front of the computer, I would have fallen on my ass ... Well, it's a fucking hell surprise but finally when he explains the change, we better understand his behavior ... Now see how will react his mother and brother ? 

I quite agree with Justin, if Craig wants his car, it's better to wait to tell Brian the news of his future fatherhood ... He will completely freak out ;) 

I loved this chapter. Bravo JT and bravo Mr. Hamster... A long round of applause for you 



Author's Response:

If you go back to this chapter and see the photo I added of Wesley you might see what's pretty enough to make a straight man switch teams :)

Thanks Gex.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you Rainbow.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For

Charles has a really big heart. Even if he’s the instigator of this change, he doesn’t forget Tim unlike his brother who doesn’t seem concerned by the pain of his ex... Now Tim is with Andy and the boys will be really happy... Well, fortunately Charles isn’t without possibilities because momentarily, he has no one !.... Except a futur nice car ... ;)

I really liked this chapter ...

You have some great ideas ... It’s a pleasure

Hugs, Bob



Author's Response:

Craig was never going steady with Tim; so it's not like he dumped him for real and he was so taken by Marsha's charms he forgot his friend during the mean time. Charles is a player and will get all the puddy he wants He's so much like the old Brian that way. Thanks Gex.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed

Yeah well apparently everyone is very happy in the love house.... But, not use a condom is not very serious... I know if I had forgot the condom, even once, believe me, the whole family would have given me a lecture coupled with a hell of bawling out... Anyway, I love more and more Charles. He’s great this kid... He knows what he does with just a hint of slyness. And he’s a great pleasure seeker too... I love him as I already said a86;

Wonderful

Kisses Love



Author's Response:

I may get flamed for this but in reality straight kids rarely use a condom; it's more important for the gay kids to be careful. I know it's wrong but the kids who are new to sex think they are clean enough not to worry about it yet. The difference without a condom makes them take the chance. It may be wrong but kids in the USA hate condoms. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers

Ah, To have friends at home, great memories J. The more intimidating for them was mostly in the morning at breakfast with the whole family and all the questions... It was a little destabilizing, especially when you're not used to have some free talks as we have at home... Well, I find Charles has interesting ideas in mind... It looks to me he’s a little fox, I love him...

Super chapter but otherwise would have been very surprising ...



Author's Response:

Charles is a sly one indeed. He knows how hot Marsha is in bed and wants his brother to see the other side of it. Probably no one understands Craig as good as Charles does since they grew up together practically like twins so close in age. Thanks for all the comments Gex.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 90: The Trap is Set

I’m babysitting today so I can catch my comment on this story too :D… I strongly hope that John will jump at the great opportunity offered by Brian and Justin. It’s a chance for him and he can count himself lucky that his uncle had this gesture to him after what he did younger... But as Justin says, it was a error of his youth... In any case, at the police station, the rat trap worked...It was a real con game…

Awesome chapter, as always ...

Big Love

 

 



Author's Response:

We see more about John in the latest chapter just posted before I started to answer review comments. I always try to get out a new chapter before answering reviews depending if Mr. Hamster is up for it. So is the uncle on baby duty today? How sweet.

Also regarding John; the ones who scream faggot the loudest usually end up with a dick in his mouth or more. "Today's trade; tomorrow's competition" we say in the USA. Big love back to you Gex.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For

And now our little Craig is totally in love with Marsha and the feeling is mutual. But, I'm a little sad for Tim. Craig should have prepared him for his choice, if not before trumpeting the news, at least after... but not like this, at breakfast. Take him apart and explain his choice. Fortunately, Charles felt Tim’s pain. I love his gesture for the boy. I also love the reaction of Justin and Brian with their children.

What beautiful chapters ! I can’t wait to see what happens next in this beautiful story

Kisses my dear



Author's Response:

Had not Tim been in love with Craig it would not have been so painful. Craig didn't mean for him to find out that way; it just happened with Justin insisting he tell Brian his new status with Marsha after reading his thoughts. Tim won't suffer and will soon be very happy with a new boy of his dreams. Thanks for all the wonderful comments Ihintza.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed

Oh what memories ! It’s a game I played a lot. Here it’s called "Forfeit or Truth", if you don’t want to tell the truth, you get a forfeit. And usually your friends, who know you well, choose one very embarrassing, one who makes you blush with shame. Would you be surprised if I told you that Gex is excellent at this game and especially to find the worst forfeits ?.... Well, an excellent chapter here. Charles is a little devil but I like him. He has some ideas, really. Craig’s brain is a mess now. But do not use a condom, it’s not good at all. Craig, Craig.... Tssss

Excellent chapter, my love



Author's Response:

I know it's wrong but kids who first start to have sex together rarely use a condom believing they are safe and clean. Having been a gay man who walked on the wild side and tested straight sex I very well know how a hot girl can mess up a gay boy's head  :)  Thanks girl for commenting.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers

What a fun chapter ! The boys will receive their friends at home... Brian and Justin are really excellent parents, kindly and full of affection. They look a bit like mine. Here too, they would rather know us at home than « God knows where with God knows who » (I quote my daddy) !... At least they could keep an eye on what could happen ... I love this chapter



Author's Response:

More and more parents would rather they be at home than in public and in danger. I've seen strict parents refuse their kids the right to have a date at home and it ends very badly with what the kids end up doing on their own. Thanks for commenting and I'm happy you like the story.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For

I'm glad Gus did that for Tim.  Now Tim is in love with Andy.  Lovely chapter.



Author's Response:

It was Brian's son, Charles who fixed up Tim but I know what you meant. My hamster was grinning when he told me this plot. He's very fond of young love. Thanks again for commenting.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed

Now this was a surprise.  Criag going from gay to straight.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Craig is so beautiful he can have it all. I guess Marsha is so good in bed a gay boy would love it too. Thanks for commenting balrogtwety; I love to see your comments.

Reviewer: CJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal

what happened to michael's and shannon's kid???.......did not hear about him after his birth (a long time ago)....^_^



Author's Response:

Robert was mentioned eariler when Michael helped him with a video game. He's about 7 now in the latest chapter. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For

i love it



Author's Response:

I can count on you girls to love the lovein. Thanks!

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie

Hey doll it's been a while.  I love how you always make me have to change my panties after reading your stuff.  There's nothing better than a big ... Love it love it love it.



Author's Response:

I wonder how the next chapter works for you. Thanks for commenting and I was more than happy to get some chapters out again. I feel like the old me is back.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed

This chapter is so hot I was moving around in my chair. Thank you for writing it and I hope to see more soon. How will this affect Craig now? You come up with the crazyest plot twists I have ever seen.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. We will have to see later how much this might change Craig for real or if it changes him at all. Exploring one's sexuality is common for teenagers to do.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie

I am missing more of this story.  When will you have time to update?  I also like that you are having your stories translated into French ...great idea.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting. I have a chapter started and will finish it soon. At least one story is being done is French so far. Someone else may do Forever Yours.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers

I've missed this story!  Great update!  Love the family and the interactions between Daddy B and Daddy J.  Charles is a sneaky devil, not sure his plan is going to work after that little hot interlude Craig and Tim just had.  (Tim is the bottom I gather?)  Loved this chapter!



Author's Response:

I have been neck deep in learning new software to improve MW. I did decide not to stop writing and hope to update better in the near future. I love this story and don't want to end it. I have a shocking change brewing in my hamster's brain as we speak :)

I forgot to say Tim will bottom, and Craig will not!

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you Rainbow. I love how I can count on you for a chapter review hit.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 90: The Trap is Set

Nice to see John get a second chance with Brian and Justin.  Looks like the evidence case is wrapping up.  Great story.



Author's Response:

I was having a hard day with car trouble on a 2008 for crying out loud; then I got all these fantastic review comments from you. That was followed with some good luck personally :P  You brought up my spirits and gave me luck today! I have to decide how to continue this story or close it soon.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author

You get well, Bob.  Stories can wait your health can't.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

That was a couple of weeks ago; I'm all better now. Heah! You're my 1,100 reviewer which means the next chapter is dedicated to you balrogtweety.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family

Seems like Brian's family is reaching out for help.  Hope things go well.



Author's Response:

I prefer to make happy endings with a few bumps in the road on the way.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit

Molly sure needs to grow up.  She will learn one day.



Author's Response:

I hear being with child can be very emotional. Let's hope that's all it is.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 86: New Wheels

Nice wheels.  Love the color.  Hope Craig can find the boy.



Author's Response:

Craig is just like his father; have no fear.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal

I like how you put this into this story.  Feels like I'm reading 'Forever Yours'.



Author's Response:

You read that epic tale? I hope I don't repeat myself too much, but I love for the boys to have money.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 45: Life Plans

GREAT chapter!

Sad about Linds' dad. Excited about the two new babies!

What a way to end it! I'll have to wait to read the next installment. :(

Have a good wk!



Author's Response:

Thanks Susan for commenting. I've been down with the flu but I'll be back soon.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 44: Connections

Good chapter! Things moved extremely fast! :)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2010 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 43: The Truth

Grrr, hate having to register to leave a review, understand why though.

OK, funny & sort of sad..... another great chapter!

Hope you're enjoying your wkend! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for joining. It helps our publishing website to have more members. Now it's easy to leave comments. Love you girl!

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author

I hope you get well soon and i hope that it´s going to work for you to upload new chapters i will be wating patiently for them so take your time.

 

Hugs Buffytess



Author's Response:

For now I'm just able to answer comments. I'm still recovering from the B.K. Flu (butt kicking flu). Hugs Back!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author

Hello my beloved author
I knew too that something was wrong ... Above all take good care of yourself, you are the most important ... We wait as long as necessary until you come back at us in full health.
Lots of big kisses from France
Love you
Ask Mr Hamster prepare you a lot of chicken soup ... I'm sure he must do his best to take care of you



Author's Response:

I'm answering one more then I have to go lie down again. I finally went to the doctor and got meds for this monster flu I'm having. I can tell I'm getting better very slowly. Thank you for being patient with me during this time. Love you Inintza and big kisses back.

Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author

i had a feeling you were ill as no writing from you in a while.  hope you are getting well and have your postings upgraded.  take care of yourself as we all have missed your wonderful stories. lol



Author's Response:

Feeling much better today so I'll try to catch up on comments. I have the worse luck with flus and colds. Still have my computer problem posting new chapters. Will work on that soon. Thanks brian for your kind comments.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family

great story by the way :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thank you rose.   : )

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family

Another week of holidays with my children... I’m currently enjoying a relaxed time on the terrace to update my comments. The last week, we were in Spain where we spent a wonderful moment at my grandparents home in Valencia. The big landing, everyone was there, my grandparents love when we are all around them even though my grandfather are still a little uncomfortable with persons of the same sex together (he loves us, he’s just embarassed to see gay kissing) On the way home, my older brother, Gex and their lovers have made a detour trough Madrid to enjoy the gay nights (apparently a comment on your new story made Gex want to go there and as they know the place, they put it on their program ;)). They’ll be back today…

Excellent chapter. I’m sorry for John. I just hope he accepts the help of his uncle, that Brian and Justin will be able to stop this vicious cycle and the boy will be able to get over it quite well. In any case, once again, the Kinney family can’t do without Brian...

I tested the recipe sandwiches last Sunday on the road. Only my parents and we had cars so we were responsible for supplies. The others went on bikes. At noon, the family meets in Zaragoza for the meal and everyone found these sandwiches delicious...

I read your reply to the brother’s comment. You are right. Tomas would do anything to his boy. We love Tomas here. For me, it's like my brother. Children, we were always together, my older brother, him and me... Inseparable ... As said my dad, Tomas was already the third son of the family while Gex was not even a spermatoazoid...

A pleasure to read your story,

Love



Author's Response:

Please forgive my late answer. Finally I'm feeling more like myself again. I'd love to see Spain. Glad the sandwiches were popular. That really is my mother's recipe for us 4 boys growing up. Going to bed now and hopefully I'll repair my computer problem tomorrow stopping me from posting any new chapters. Love you Ihintza.

Reviewer: skywriter (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family

???



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: complicated (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family

hellooooooooooo....

I am glad that Brian able to put all the past behind him.

A mother is still a mother even though she unable to love like mother should.

Love your idea for this chapter.

Love. Love. Kiss. Kiss.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Complicated! Forgive my delay answering as I'v been out of town. Kisses back!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 42: Rescue

Glad the boy was found, what a sicko.

Good ending!

Seems like this is it for tonight, too tired to continue. Planning on getting a couple more installments in tomorrow! :)

Not sure where in the world you are but sleep well whenever it's time for you to go to sleep! 



Author's Response:

Sorry to be late answering you; I've been out of town visiting family. Thanks for commenting Susan.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 41: Kidnapped

Glad the cop is going to get what he deserve.

From one sicko to another. YIKES!

Excited I'm going to be able to read some more! :)



Author's Response:

You're catching up with the story! Hugs!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 40: Horny Cop

Wow! Surprises as usual.

Glad the cop is going to get what he deserves.

Also glad everything is working out for Todd!

Oh, and Mr. Hamster, too cute! :)

Have a wonderful wk!



Author's Response:

Thank you Susan. Love to read your comments. You're gaining on me!  Hugs!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 39: Todd Sanders

A little strange thinking of Ben & Hunter as a couple! Great idea having them take Todd in!

SO glad I have your stories to read! :)

 



Author's Response:

Awww! You're making the hamster blush again!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 38: Ice Ice Baby

Of course, another good one! :)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 37: Playing Hooky

Really nice "day in the life of" installment!

I'm enjoying being able to actually read several chapters back to back! :)

Hope you're enjoying your weekend as well!

 



Author's Response:

Susan you made my day with all your wonderful comments. I'm beta-repairing Embraced right now; it had so many typos I was ashamed of it. I wrote it so fast. I'd be feeling down without your comments today. Words fail me expressing how much I live to hear from the readers. Thank you!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 36: Nuclear Tramps

Pretty harsh, thank you for the warning. Really sad that these situations actually exist.

A really good, interesting installment. 

 

 



Author's Response:

As sad as that part is; it has a happy ending.   :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 35: Key West

Wonderful, love how everything turned out!

Wish I was on one of the boats in the pic! :)



Author's Response:

Key West is a magical gay fairyland!  For real girlfriend.   :P

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 34: Killer for Hire

LOVED it! :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 33: The Aftermath

Another good one!

A little sad but really good.

 



Author's Response:

Such is this JTSecrets' rollercoaster! Things will go up again, and down, and up, and down; kind of like Brian on Justin.  :)

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family

Just wake up after a very short night and a very very long shower... : D I'm waiting for Tomas, who is getting dressed, to take breakfast (if I stay in the bedroom, Tomas won’t  be able to slip into his moto clothes and / or me, to keep mine ! He’s too sexy in leather pants). So, I use this break to upload my comment on this chapter. Currently, we are still on campus because yesterday I had no train to go back home (strike) and, with the closure of the Paris airports due to the cloud of ashes from the Iceland’s volcanic eruption, it’s the chaos in other airports. So, Tomas came pick me up. He left work at around 08: 00 pm and he arrived in the night (2 hours drive, 133 miles, Is it not love that???). We’ll go back after the breakfast, with the GoldWing. Like Daniel and Brian, a bike riding and,  in addition, there is really nice weather, it'll be a great moment.

Super chapter, as always .... Brian is really a good son. Despite all the meanness on the part of his family, he responds present to help his mother and, in passing, see what he can do for his nephew. But he is right, if John is not ready to get out through his addiction, it’s his problem. Ultimately, Brian can at least keep an eye on him until things fell into place... I'm longing to know John's decision.....

Big love,

Excellent week-end




Author's Response:

Shit boy! If you were my puppy I'd drive across Europe in a snow storm to get you back in my bed. No volcano, no terriorists, nothing would stop me either. I totally understand Tomas's devotion to you and yours to him. You guys were totally made for each other. I'm doing beta-repair on Embraced this weekend and then I'll get back to this story soon. Big love back you beautiful young man you.  :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 32: First Kill

Good, good!

Surprised at the end, wasn't expecting anything like that!

This past wk was one of the longest ones ever & I'm looking forward to just setting back & doing pretty much nothing except read your wonderful story!

Hope you enjoy your wkend! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you love! Enjoy and I look forward to your comments. You make my day with your kind words.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you Rainbow12004. This means a lot to me.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 31: Gay Espionage

Enjoyed! :)

Seems like the next installment will be interesting.

I finally finished my taxes, yea! so I'm going to sneak another chapter in before heading off to bed! 

Have a wonderful week! :)



Author's Response:

Gosh, I'd be flat without your comments right now Susan. Glad the  story makes you entertained. Thanks for the good wishes.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Wrong Prostitute

Great chapter! 

Still amazes me how you just keep adding layers into a story & it's also just another day in the life of!

I'll be back later this evening to read more! :)



Author's Response:

Many years ago when I was a junior paramedic; I dated a detective in Vice. I learned they have the most interesting lives with the cases they deal with each day. They work hard and they party hard when they have time off (which is rare). That and others times in my life help me to create the plot for this story to be real for the readers. Thanks so much for your chapter comments that mean the world to me and the hamster.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2010 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 29: Undercover Rookies

Oooh, good chapter! 

I like the undercover w/ the new characters.

Glad Gus is OK, never can be too careful.

 



Author's Response:

Cops will assign new rookies to investigate other cops. Otherwise they know who already is a policeman on the force. Gus will be fine; just a baby cold or something. Thanks Susan.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 28: Drunken Cops

Good installment!

Like how you effortlessly include serious matters and handle the outcomes so well. Wonderful talent!

Hope you've had a good week & are enjoying the weekend. :)

 



Author's Response:

I have prior knowledge how IA deals with cops that have a drinking problem. One might think it shouldn't matter if the cop had a family or not; but in reality it does affect how they deal with him. A man with a family has more reasons to stay sober and make it past IA probation. I had a great weekend; thank you for mentioning it.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 27: Dumb and Dumber

Funny! Thanks for that!

Then came the hamster, TOO much! :)



Author's Response:

We had fun with this chapter very much. Thank you for reading and commenting Susan. It warms our heart to see your postings.   :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 26: First Night on the Job

Loving you, loving you, little hamster!

Yet another GREAT one! This is just what I'm needing! I just wish I had more time to enjoy it but it helps to know I am able to escape when I have the time!

Thanks for sharing & make sure you're taking care of yourself! :)



Author's Response:

Heah you're still reading; that's all that's important, and you comment too. It means so much to me and the furry one. I have been taking better care of myself and sleeping more; instead of staying up days writing. That wasn't healthy for me at all. I had a great Easter and ate a ton of food with many leftovers to deal with as well. Love you!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 25: I Swear

Oh my, all hick broke out!

Love the Mayor not really having a choice!

:)



Author's Response:

Sort of a Baptism by Fire with problems on the first night. The hamster was spinning away making this chapter happen.

:)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 24: I Do

LOVE!

I miss San Francisco! Wish I could afford to live there!

Enjoyed this installment, even w/ Craig's heart, it was great & he'll be fine.

Thanks for writing these wonderful stories, it helps me escape from RL! :)



Author's Response:

The last time I was in SF was in 1975 visiting a sailor boyfriend of mine stationed there. It was a magical place back then. It was the first time I held a boy's hand in public walking down the street. Sometimes I get so into my writing the stories become my RL and the real world becomes my fiction. Am I making any sense?     :)

Reviewer: Ptitprof (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit

Can't wait to read the end !! When are you planning to update it (comments says it's still un finished...)



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting Ptitprof. I've developed a new story, and plan now to write the next chapter in this one very soon.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good Funny Money

Nice quick chapter.

:)



Author's Response:

So good to hear from you again Susan.    :)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 22: Good Bye

Great chapter!

Enjoying how it's moving along!

 



Author's Response:

I hoped  to keep the pace moving forward quickly so it doesn't get stale. Thanks for commenting very much!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit

I miss seeing pictures of the fluffy one. :( (still love you both)

Author's Response:

I'll try to find more pictures of the furry one. Thank you so much for the comment hits on this story. As you know they are very important to us and motivate us to write for you. The readers have been so good to me writing in. Love you girl friend!  :)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 86: New Wheels

Something that costs that much money should have doors and seatbelts. Love you both.

Author's Response:

I agree! We love you too.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal

:)

Author's Response:

:)  back!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 84: Malo Niños Gang

Kisses and hugs.

Author's Response:

Kisses and hugs back!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 83: New Developments

The recipe looks delicious. Love the story.

Author's Response:

It's simple and easy but tastes very good. Love you too.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 82: To Tell the Truth

:)

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 81: Show me the Money

Hugs and kisses.

Author's Response:

Loads of love right back at you!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 80: Life for Sale

:)

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 79: The Wedding

Love to you and the fluffball.

Author's Response:

Ahhh!  Thank you !

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 78: July 4th Morning

Brian and Justin are great parents.

Author's Response:

I agree; to me they have the quality for it.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 77: Prom Night

Cute couple. Great story

Author's Response:

I looked long and hard for a young man that matches Brian's facial features and this boy is so hot! I love his eyes.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 76: From Russia with Love

:)

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 75: Return the Favor

Most people have a good side.

Author's Response:

Yes, the key word being 'most'.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 74: What the?

:)

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together

More recipies. Love it.

Author's Response:

I've used every recipe I post in a story and know it's good.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 72: Killer Boytoy

Another pretty boy. X&O

Author's Response:

Pretty deadly too!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 71: Robert E. O'Malley

Love and kisses to my fluffy baby.

Author's Response:

He loves you back!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill

Great recipies in this story. You can make mashed potatoes with fat free cream cheese and no milk. Try it they are delicious.

Author's Response:

Sounds delicious; I'll have to try it.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN

love the story.

Author's Response:

Thank You!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job

Where do you find all the pretty boys? Love to the fluffy one.

Author's Response:

Google Images mostly; love back!

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