Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Partners in Crime
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For

Happy gai boi  :0)

I really like tim an am really glad Andy will be good to him



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed

No condoms!  Well, I hope he can see into her future and be ok with what he sees.  Twat



Author's Response:

I came out before HIV and hate the damn things.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers

Oh my!  What a raunchy little girl and naughty brother.  I hope no one gets hurt because of this.



Author's Response:

Boys will be boys and girls just want to have fun :)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 90: The Trap is Set

I like the emotional turn your story has taken.  Imagining Brian on his motorbike with his friend Dan tooling alongside makes me smile to think how happy and free he must feel.  Craig learning more about his mental capabilities and Charles' fear that  he wont be special in any way.  The heart and lung replacement, Molly's queen out.  A lot is going on and Im enjoying the bit of rest it gives me from everything just happening so fast.



Author's Response:

When it rains it pours :)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author

:o)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family

Im glad to get a chance to see the rest of the Kinney's



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit

I love when Brian teases Justin. :-P



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 86: New Wheels

Pretty new toys.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal

How do you know so much about real estate and rental properties and taxes and hedge funds?  Or is it all made up?



Author's Response:

As a twink I was the lover of a multi-millionaire for 9 years who owned over 800 rental properties in California. If you check my profile here you might see the photo of a boy that caught a millionaire's eye. He taught me real estate investment. Later on I was an RE investor until I retired. And I have a couple of nickels to rub together from my investments, work pension, and money my parents left me. I don't like to work hard now and health keeps me from working again so all I do is stay home and write this crazy stuff. Thanks for all your great comments.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 84: Malo Niños Gang

Oh dear.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 83: New Developments

Ugh.  The second worst thing a parent can hear about their kids.  Number one is they were molested and number two is your kid is a molester.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 82: To Tell the Truth

I love Em and Ted.  Im glad they keep appearing in your story.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 81: Show me the Money

I always told my parents I didnt want an inheritance.  It wouldn't be huge anyway, so they better party it up before I store them in an old folks home.



Author's Response:

:(

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 80: Life for Sale

I love the concept of condemed men and women used as spare parts, lol.  It seems weird, and I'd rather North America not do it, but With the population in Asia and the zero tollerance for drugs and major crime, why the hell not?  Keeping condemed prisoners on death row for twenty years or more seems stupid to me.  This way when a medical match comes up, the inmates number also comes up.  Keeping them alive is punnishing the tax payer.



Author's Response:

It's not legal in China for real but it happens anyway if you have the money to pay for it.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 79: The Wedding

Grr. Just so ya know, I wrote the last 5 reviews, lol.  Didnt even notice I was logged out and showing anonymous.  Duh.

Nice party!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 78: July 4th Morning

I am probably one of the few who never wanted to go to space camp.  I liked outdoor adventure better - climbing, sailing, riding, camping



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 77: Prom Night

Gus is getting a pretty wifey!
Here is personal question for you.  Not that Im complaining or anything (I personally got married about 6 weeks before my 19th b-day and I was not in the family way) but I noticed a lot of your characters are very very young and getting married early in life.  Im guessing you are not that old?  Do you think people should get married early?  I also noticed in your stories your paired up characters rarely get divorced or break up.  I do believe you are a romantic under it all, hmmmm? ;o)

Author's Response:

I"m 56. I was given to a multi-millionaire friend of my family at 16 and was with him for over 9 years. Yes, I'm very much a romantic. Usually the best gay pairings are with a young one given to a man well chosen in the upper levels of our society.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 76: From Russia with Love

Strange to hear Justin talking so casually about and to a hitman.  But I think it is in line with canon.  The show's justin messed with kip to get charges dropped.  I have no doubt he'd go to any level to protect his mom, sister, Brian and Gus.



Author's Response:

He's not beyond using his network to take care of business :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 73: A Special Sunday Together

Can I invest?  I've got about, uh, 4K?  lol.  :o(

Those recipies sound good, I might give one or two a try. :o)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill

Hey, Im up in the middle of the night (several nights for this story) and just commenting whatever comes in my head.  I know it is all fiction, silly.  And, no problem answering with a smiley face - I so totally understand you cant take time to respond to all comments if they are given on each and every chapter, and on multiple stories you have going on at Midnight Whispers. 

I just thought I'd let you know how I am taking the story and what thoughts they conjure up, in case you wondered what one devoted BJ worshiper thinks while reading your story.  I mean it as a compliment.  I lay in bed reading when Im also thinking I should be working on a portrait to sell procrastinating.  The fact you complete and write so many stories is amazing.  I admire that greatly.  And love reading |BJ stories with different points of view.

Now, taking that all into consideration, please note that because of your story I posted a picture with my last comment.  Its because of your story I felt the need to explore some of the characters' emotions, and just right now taught myself how to post a pic in the comments so I can express what I was thingking.

I hope you are taking that as a great compliment that I extended myself to use more than two brain cells to figure out these things, LOL.

 



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 70: Road Kill

Your stories are plot driven, and in a hot rod at that, but dont forget the emotional connections...and the 5 stages of grief.  Here is a diagram using money, something you apparently know a lot about, lol:

five stages of depression

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 69: Thank God for NARCAN

Im guessing rape is for a man as it is for a woman.  How horrible.  I know the preventative drugs exist that you describe in the story and Im so glad for it!



Author's Response:

Rape is rape; and I think it can hurt a man more.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job

Wow, Stevie has beautiful eyes.  And teeth.  Dont know whats with teeth, but I like a beautiful smile and long canines, lol.

Oh, and its fine if you have to wait to dedicate a chapter to me on this story.  I'll wait.  LOL  :-P



Author's Response:

Since I'm developing my other story and don't want to get confused with dual-plots it will be a while. Thank you!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 68: First Day on the Job

I haven't even read the chapter yet, I just wanna make sure I get the 1200 review, lol.



Author's Response:

1200th Reviewer !!! The next chapter is dedicated to you M_elle_22. You WIN!

I could not be more grateful for all your chapter hits and comments; however, if I answer them all in detail I won't get any writing done today. So permit me to mostly give :) answers showing I have read them. Thank you so much for all your support and the hamster is blowing you little wet kisses as I type.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 67: Shawn Carpenter

Too skinny, lol.



Author's Response:

Perfect frame for a nice bottom boy

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 64: Hall of Fame

I love when the boys play fight and the banter gets raunchy.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 63: Kitchen Sinkless Meat Loaf

"Can I have a new pony to ride for Christmas? You can get one too."

Eek.  Dont mess with perfection! 

You perv.



Author's Response:

Rich men do this every day.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 62: When More is Better

OMG.  Size Queen!



Author's Response:

:) Don't you know it and in my love life I've had some biggg men (still do:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 61: Keeping Up with the O'Malley's

Snort.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 60: The Good Life

Surreal.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 59: The Offer

Unreal.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 58: Pick on a gay boy you get all the Gay Tribe

Ok, now that is just wrong!  Printed stories of Michael's past I can see.  People are vicious and Im sure someone would have broken the story.  But to print CSI photos of a child sexual abuse victim internationally and claim it was consentual, and he was a whore hustler, is just WRONG.

I like the swift action taken, good story line.



Author's Response:

That is why the paper got busted. They broke a dozen laws. Thank you for liking it.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 57: Scandals

Um, I guess I would have rather Shannon win them over by outstanding capabilities and not fear tactics.  Obama's support would have likely been enough.

I know I know.  Its fiction~  It is fun and amuzing and the pics are hilarious.  Although I must ask, does your bf know about your Shannon fixation?



Author's Response:

He's cool with it; this is all fantasy anyway :)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 55: Cop Killer

Calling in late to work so they can fuck?  Sounds like the Chief of Police needs to be sent to his room to think about what he has done.



Author's Response:

There hours are flexible since they are on call 24/7 and they are salary employees and not on a time clock.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 54: Lovers in Motion

Nope, still cant see these young kids in their jobs.  You are going to have to convince me.

Ps.  Michael Taylor, who owns and lives in Brian Kinney's loft.  Ah, I noticed the play on names you have used but this one makes me think of Mikey every time I read it, lol.  All of this is making it hard to stay in the story.  Im sorry, I just have to say it.....



Author's Response:

Michael is a very common name.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 53: Changing of the Guard

Ok, major changes.  And a massive need to suspend my disbelief just imagining a Cheif of Police under 25.   Ha.  Not even in a hick town would that fly.  It would amaze me to think no senior ranking officer/administrator would sqawk about someone being promoted above them so quickly.



Author's Response:

I read online about a small town with a 22 year old chief of police. The job is adminstrative so he has the education to qualify for it. And this is fiction :)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 52: The Problem with Money

Molly is very naughty, but Sean would be hard to resist!



Author's Response:

Girls just want to have fun :P

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 51: Welcome to the Family

"When can Carol retire?"

"One year from now and she promises she's taking it then too."

"You sure this is what you what Sunshine?"

This is a very confusing line of questioning.  I take it you mean Justin will retiere in one year and Carol will take over?



Author's Response:

It was meant to be cryptic; it foresees major changes coming in the leadership at the station.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 50: Shannon

3 pics of Shannon?  I do believe you have a crush!  LOL.



Author's Response:

He is a very hot popular model in New York. A very beautiful man indeed who makes huge money for modeling mostly seen in Europe.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 49: Two Years Later

Armani leather biker jackets for three year olds?  LOL only Brian would spend that much money on something they will grow out of in ten weeks!



Author's Response:

Who doesn't spoit their kid? :)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 48: My Kingdom for ...

A pretzel!?

Little dude, I have been lying down line after line of comments ror you to snort up like cocaine.  Your master has seriously ripped you off!



Author's Response:

He's off the hard stuff and doing great; he loves all your lines but I'm wiped out having been up two days straight writing and must sleep before answering all your precious review comments.

Thank you so very very very much M_elle_22.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 47: As Time goes On

Unless she was my best friend since grade four, I wouldn't ever think of having a surrogate who didnt already have at least two kids already.  A lower middle class stay at home mom in her late thirties with a supportive husband and three other kids would be my ideal.  And I would use anonymous donor eggs just to make sure she doesnt try to take the kid after its born.

But that's just me.



Author's Response:

Surrogate contracts are ironclad; a married woman is usually not allowed to be a surrogate for legal reasons because two parents conflict with the terms of contract. And this is fiction!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 46: Name Value

Oh how I wish I had a rich relative who wanted to leave me money.



Author's Response:

It's very nice when it happens.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 45: Life Plans

 he went from the Paraná of the station to become the belle of the ball overnight

Paraná is one of the states of Brazil or the names of rivers in various countries.

I think you meant pariah which can be any person or animal that is generally despised or avoided

:o)



Author's Response:

Thanks; fixing that now.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 44: Connections

Ooooh,  I wanta Dan.  Mmmmmmmmmm

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 43: The Truth

who will jump his ass like a chicken on a June bug

lol never heard this expression before your story either.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 42: Rescue

I love scenes of family times.  All the action is great, but a moment with the family is like a bit of a rest.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 41: Kidnapped

Nice pic.  I didn't know Emo's came in blonde.  lol

And I am not a brat, Im just concerned.  <3 <3 <3

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 40: Horny Cop

I love your freakin hamster, so cute.



Author's Response:

He is a little ham too. I have been up two days writing the other story so I must get some sleep but I promise to answer all your wonderful comments once I've been well rested.

You might want to go see what's happening in Rings or Vows. I think it may been some of my best work to date since my gay soul was the writer.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 39: Todd Sanders

Esoteric: understood by or meant for only the select few who have special knowledge or interest

I think you mean erotically.

While "yin" would be dark, passive, downward, cold, contracting, and weak, "yang" would be bright, active, upward, hot, expanding, and strong.

Not really sure who would be the yin or yang, but I think you have it right.

Zen Ben and the Littlest Hustler are lovers?????!!!!!!!?????

And I thought I'd just overlook the Brian/Mikey thing cause Mikey is dead, but really???   Mwaaaaa  ick ick ick, lol lol lol

 

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 38: Ice Ice Baby

Still loving the story, and glad to have my extra blondy Sunshine back.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 36: Nuclear Tramps

Eiw.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 35: Key West

Once in the air Al went to the jet restroom and tore the photo of a dead Justin Taylor into little pieces and sent it down the crapper to be ejected over many miles--thousands of feet down to earth.

LOL.  Um, shit doesn't fly from the sky silly.  Unless some paraschute jumper lost their load.  The holding tank is emptied just like any RV. LOL

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 34: Killer for Hire

Nobody threatens Sunshine!

Even a hired hitman cant pull the trigger he's so cute!  LOL

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 33: The Aftermath

Where do you get these pictures?  Just google them?

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 32: First Kill

Good chapter, especially since the title kinda made me believe the danger to Justin would happen sooner, when he was undercover onthe plane.   Being drawn on in the police offices was unexpected.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 31: Gay Espionage

Its a wonder Brian doesn't have a fit over Justin taking this case.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Wrong Prostitute

Here.  Here is you line, you addict.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 29: Undercover Rookies

God, Randy Harrison is beautiful, isn't he?

At first I was miffed you darkened Justin's hair, but it just makes his perfect skin glow all the more = so you are forgiven. :o)

Oh, and I never did like the idea of him with really long hair.  this pic is purrrrrrfect.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 28: Drunken Cops

Oh lookie, you posted a pic of yourself doing a breathalyzer.  Do you maybe think you and your hamster are co-dependant and enabling each other.  Honestly, do you need help?



Author's Response:

brat

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: Dumb and Dumber

The "dumbest criminals day"  storyies were very funny, and Mr Hamster telling about your personal relationship was pretty good, too.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 26: First Night on the Job

Your hamster snorting lines again?

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 25: I Swear

I cant see either of them liking this pace for long.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 24: I Do

Great Chapter!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good Funny Money

Nice chapter!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 22: Good Bye

Im glad Rex will be ok, too bad most bashing victims dont get such special treatment and top of the line care initially.  They have to wait for their settlements and have the surgery re-done at a cost of millions.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Knee

Oh how I wish it were true!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 20: Rex Denny

How horrible to lose the ability to professionally dance.  Millions of dollars is not enough to compensate for the years and years of expensive time consuming life gobbling saccrificing practice this poor boy did.  Its like Justin not being able to draw in canon.  Taking away his most intimate form of communication.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 19: The Chief

Ewwww.  Nasty pic of a twisted leg!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 18:Dirty Cops

Boy, in this story Brian goes pale a lot and even peed his pants!  LOL.  Gale Harold better not hear about this, he'll kick your ass after he worked so hard making Brian a loveable badass.  LOL.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 17:Boy Killer

Hello Mr Hamster!  My kid got two gerbles last week.  Stella and Naru.  They say HI!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 16:Round Two

Very HOT!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 15: Power Changes

That's a gorgeous pic of pittsburg!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: Terrorists

Id so like to have a president as a friend....really dont care which country....

"Fuck! This is one bottle of shampoo that we should not have thrown in the dryer.

I have never heard this expression before!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: The Investigations

Things are getting tense!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 12: Chris Hobbs

What does that mean?  EEK.  Is Chris Hobbs investigating them or is he being investigated?   Ohhhh.  gotta keep reading!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 11: Love

 Like two opposing poles of two magnets they clung together with a force of nature so right for them.

Great line!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: Demonstration

Wow.  I hope Brian doesn't get jealous, or feel he isnt the Alpha male in the relationship - him being Alpha is what makes him HOT!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 9: The Offer

Man, Justin is so going to blow his cover.  There are bad guys in the police force too, and being on active duty in his home town isnt going to help.  I wonder what you will write next?

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 8: Federal Trouble

LOL.  The Prez now!  This is a really fun giddy ride!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 7: Changes

The next day Justin solved 18 cases using his gift.

The following day Justin solved 24 more cases all cold case files.

OMG.  The DA's office would shit at that much work coming into the court systems so quickly.  The mayor would have a heart attack!  Whole city budgets are blown with less, lol.

I like shows like Ghost Whisperer and Medium so the psychic thing is really cool.  Im liking the story lots!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 6: Gus

I do rather like a butch Justin!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 5: The Touch

cool.



Author's Response:

I know a psychic that has that gift for real and has worked for law enforcement. Thanks very much for your chapter comments; the hamster needs the love :-)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 4: Michael

Little Michael's pic in the last chapter was very disturbing to me, but if your intent was to open our eyes to how young these children are and that this is a true and terrible crime that does occur every day, Im ok with that.

Otherwise, its icky to exploit even a pic of a child, ya know?

Amazing how giggly Michael is after all his ordeals.  I understand you write yur stories at a frentic pace and the plot lines move at light speed, but it cant be overlooked that this child is traumatized.  Im glad you are planning a loving home for him.

Dont mean to be preachy, just Im kinda empathetic to these situations and want them to be depicted as real - - and it can be intense.



Author's Response:

No children are harmed in the writing of this piece of fiction. I promise young Michael will have an amazing future in the story and be very happy. The boy's photo is from Yahoo images and is not an abused child. Just let your imagination run with it and remember this is pure fiction. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. My muse, Mr. Hamster is inspired by your comments.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 3: Operation Escort

Justin's 5'2????  You know he isn't really short in real life.  He is 5'8".  Brian is 6' 1.5"  And yes I researched it, lol.

Cant find their dick size though.  Although some of those shots of Justin in his grey undies in season one indicated a lovely endowment. :P



Author's Response:

I've met Randy Harrison and yes he's tall. This is sort of AU so anything goes. I have seen a screen shot of Justin's cock from editing film and it's about 6 inches soft and thick so very endowed. I have no idea about Gale. However in fiction they can be any size we want them to them to be and with science...well I'll let you read and find out. :)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 2: Breaking in the Newbe

Size queen much?

LOL.  and love the pleading for reviews. :P



Author's Response:

We gay boys like our men on the large size :-P

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie

Not sure what to think yet.  Im a bit confused wondering how they can talk about being undercover and who's a cop and stuff in a public place in the middle of the area their supposed to work?  And I thought all detectives had to serve in blue for a minimal period of time, though I expect their may be exceptions if they need very young looking undercover cops.

I think I like the premise so far, and you have written another story I just love, so Im gonna trust you on this, lol.



Author's Response:

Some very bright kids right of the police academy go to junior detective status. That is not unusual in big city departments. Yes, they do need young ones espeically in sex crimes, undercover, and narcotics. This story goes on the back burner for a while since I will mostly develop Rings or Vows. It has been pretty popular too. Thanks for reading and commenting; my hamster lives for your comments.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 96: The Family Way

I love it



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you very much!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 96: The Family Way

This is going to be interesting on how this works out.



Author's Response:

Kids having kids; what's the world coming to? I promise a very happy future for all. The question is will it be a boy or girl? Perhaps the Kinney family needs some balance happening. Thank you for commenting very much.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 96: The Family Way

I’m happy that everything went well with the young David and that the kidnappers didn’t ill-treat him. Concerning Craig and Marsha and the unborn child, Brian and Justin make a well-advised proposal. I hope Marsha will adhere without problems (though $ 500,000 can help).

This was an excellent chapter... Bravo to run at the same time these two magnificent stories with such wonderful plots. You & Mr Hamster are so........marvellous

Kisses my Love



Author's Response:

The hamster is tripping me out as we keep kicking out chapter after chapter lately. He had a good long break and was ready to get back to work. Even I'm shaking my head at his latest ideas-pushing the gay envelope once more to new highs. Kisses back and thank you so much for being a reader, fan, translator, and friend.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 95: A Typical Taylor-Kinney Weekend

I love it



Author's Response:

Now that I slept for two days straight I can try to cetch up on comments and write again. Thank you!

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 95: A Typical Taylor-Kinney Weekend

It's funny but a typical Taylor-Kinney weekend reminds me of a typical weekend in our house ... :D

A excellent chapter really full of love... but it leaves us in suspense. Justin will still have to use his sublime power to find a kidnapped child. Roll on the next chapter

Love my dear

Intza



Author's Response:

Ha! You got me laughing with this admission of the hanky panky at home. Love you back my lady and thanks for all your comments that mean so much to me and the hamster.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 95: A Typical Taylor-Kinney Weekend

Well, Bob... I'll have to see my reading system. The day before yesterday morning was the picture of Wesley and now this EXCELLENT chapter so hot hot hot... So,  either I get up earlier and I’ve time to read and come back in bed or in the shower or somewhere else in the house, anywhere, well, there where I can put my hand on Tomas before he left... Or, I don’t read anymore before Intza and I wait for her go-ahead ‘cause she knows I can handle your chapter… Either, I wait for the evening, coiled up against my man… Well, again this morning, I’ll have to face my public with a hard-on in my pants for breakfast… After, I wonder why my daddy calls me « sexe sur pattes » (the translation could be « dick on legs»)

Oh, wonderful Bob and the rascal littleMr. Hamster, I love you

Great chapter

Gex



Author's Response:

We move from sex scenes to plot and back in the story. It's a fine line between just writing smut and smut with a plot :)

I slept for days and now I hope to get back into production mode again. Love the comments as they inspire us to kick out this stuff. Thanks Gex.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 95: A Typical Taylor-Kinney Weekend

Sounds like tings are going well for everyone.



Author's Response:

Yes, for now but who knows what the future has in store? The Hamster won't tell me until it's time to type it. Thanks very much for your comment balrogtweety.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

WEll this story is definitely heating up.  Wes is a hottie.



Author's Response:

Wes could eat crackers in my bed anytime but I don't think John will let him go for me to get a chance. I loved his face and hands especially; very elegant looking and beautiful. Thanks bal.

Reviewer: QAF fan (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

This was so hot since Wes is beautiful. John is very lucky to have him. I hope to read more about them.



Author's Response:

They are now the parallel dream team of the story; they parallel Brian and Justin in looks, temper, and futures somewhat. This way we can have more than one roller coaster going at a time :)

Thank you for commenting QAF fan.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

I’m very happy for John. This will make him settle down. He’ll be able to live fully. In addition, he seems happy with Wes, who is a really beauty. Justin and Brian will help them now with their life... It's quite a nice surprise as Craig’s news about Marsha... I love Justin’s reaction but I can’t wait to see Brian’s reaction when he’ll hear Marsha is pregnant...

Beautiful chapter…. Well, "beautiful" is not the right word... Excellent chapter is better

Kisses



Author's Response:

Thank you Ihintza; this was a fun section to write for me. I used some fond memories of mine to make it come to life. As a gay young man in his early twenties I had a relationship with a beautiful girl once so I have an idea what Craig is experiencing now. Only time will tell which side he will end up on in the end. John has not had a happy life but Wes will change that for him.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

Mmmm Wes…Just a second, I wipe the spit at the corner of my mouth :) Yeah, I see better now. But it must not be very easy working with this twink beauty in a team. 

Well, and me now ? Because Tomas, he already left !! Oh, very clever... The picture is for good in my brain…Dive head first in the pool? Considering the drop in temperature last night (outside dude, not in my bed ;) ), the water will surely cold enough... It remains to cross home with the bump in my pants :P. Shit, Bob....

Kisses Dude



Author's Response:

LOL! Happy to get a rise out of you buddy. I thought Wes was hot enough to make a straight man think twice about gay love. He has all the beauty of a delicate girl with boy features. There'll be more about them in the future chapters. Kisses back hot stuff.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

Love the story.
One question though, if Craig is Brian's son and John is Claire's son then wouldn't Craig be John's cousin, not his nephew?
Love and kisses to you and the hamster.

Author's Response:

*smacks his head on the desk for being so dumb*

You are so right and I'm going to go fix this right now. Thanks for pointing it out to me.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

Wow !!!... John ? John is gay ? John is with a boy ? John is in love ? And he loves sex with a boy ? WOOOOOOW .... If I hadn’t already been sitting in front of the computer, I would have fallen on my ass ... Well, it's a fucking hell surprise but finally when he explains the change, we better understand his behavior ... Now see how will react his mother and brother ? 

I quite agree with Justin, if Craig wants his car, it's better to wait to tell Brian the news of his future fatherhood ... He will completely freak out ;) 

I loved this chapter. Bravo JT and bravo Mr. Hamster... A long round of applause for you 



Author's Response:

If you go back to this chapter and see the photo I added of Wesley you might see what's pretty enough to make a straight man switch teams :)

Thanks Gex.

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 94: Wes

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you Rainbow.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For

Charles has a really big heart. Even if he’s the instigator of this change, he doesn’t forget Tim unlike his brother who doesn’t seem concerned by the pain of his ex... Now Tim is with Andy and the boys will be really happy... Well, fortunately Charles isn’t without possibilities because momentarily, he has no one !.... Except a futur nice car ... ;)

I really liked this chapter ...

You have some great ideas ... It’s a pleasure

Hugs, Bob



Author's Response:

Craig was never going steady with Tim; so it's not like he dumped him for real and he was so taken by Marsha's charms he forgot his friend during the mean time. Charles is a player and will get all the puddy he wants He's so much like the old Brian that way. Thanks Gex.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed

Yeah well apparently everyone is very happy in the love house.... But, not use a condom is not very serious... I know if I had forgot the condom, even once, believe me, the whole family would have given me a lecture coupled with a hell of bawling out... Anyway, I love more and more Charles. He’s great this kid... He knows what he does with just a hint of slyness. And he’s a great pleasure seeker too... I love him as I already said a86;

Wonderful

Kisses Love



Author's Response:

I may get flamed for this but in reality straight kids rarely use a condom; it's more important for the gay kids to be careful. I know it's wrong but the kids who are new to sex think they are clean enough not to worry about it yet. The difference without a condom makes them take the chance. It may be wrong but kids in the USA hate condoms. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers

Ah, To have friends at home, great memories J. The more intimidating for them was mostly in the morning at breakfast with the whole family and all the questions... It was a little destabilizing, especially when you're not used to have some free talks as we have at home... Well, I find Charles has interesting ideas in mind... It looks to me he’s a little fox, I love him...

Super chapter but otherwise would have been very surprising ...



Author's Response:

Charles is a sly one indeed. He knows how hot Marsha is in bed and wants his brother to see the other side of it. Probably no one understands Craig as good as Charles does since they grew up together practically like twins so close in age. Thanks for all the comments Gex.

Reviewer: Gex (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 90: The Trap is Set

I’m babysitting today so I can catch my comment on this story too :D… I strongly hope that John will jump at the great opportunity offered by Brian and Justin. It’s a chance for him and he can count himself lucky that his uncle had this gesture to him after what he did younger... But as Justin says, it was a error of his youth... In any case, at the police station, the rat trap worked...It was a real con game…

Awesome chapter, as always ...

Big Love

 

 



Author's Response:

We see more about John in the latest chapter just posted before I started to answer review comments. I always try to get out a new chapter before answering reviews depending if Mr. Hamster is up for it. So is the uncle on baby duty today? How sweet.

Also regarding John; the ones who scream faggot the loudest usually end up with a dick in his mouth or more. "Today's trade; tomorrow's competition" we say in the USA. Big love back to you Gex.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For

And now our little Craig is totally in love with Marsha and the feeling is mutual. But, I'm a little sad for Tim. Craig should have prepared him for his choice, if not before trumpeting the news, at least after... but not like this, at breakfast. Take him apart and explain his choice. Fortunately, Charles felt Tim’s pain. I love his gesture for the boy. I also love the reaction of Justin and Brian with their children.

What beautiful chapters ! I can’t wait to see what happens next in this beautiful story

Kisses my dear



Author's Response:

Had not Tim been in love with Craig it would not have been so painful. Craig didn't mean for him to find out that way; it just happened with Justin insisting he tell Brian his new status with Marsha after reading his thoughts. Tim won't suffer and will soon be very happy with a new boy of his dreams. Thanks for all the wonderful comments Ihintza.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed

Oh what memories ! It’s a game I played a lot. Here it’s called "Forfeit or Truth", if you don’t want to tell the truth, you get a forfeit. And usually your friends, who know you well, choose one very embarrassing, one who makes you blush with shame. Would you be surprised if I told you that Gex is excellent at this game and especially to find the worst forfeits ?.... Well, an excellent chapter here. Charles is a little devil but I like him. He has some ideas, really. Craig’s brain is a mess now. But do not use a condom, it’s not good at all. Craig, Craig.... Tssss

Excellent chapter, my love



Author's Response:

I know it's wrong but kids who first start to have sex together rarely use a condom believing they are safe and clean. Having been a gay man who walked on the wild side and tested straight sex I very well know how a hot girl can mess up a gay boy's head  :)  Thanks girl for commenting.

Reviewer: Ihintza (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers

What a fun chapter ! The boys will receive their friends at home... Brian and Justin are really excellent parents, kindly and full of affection. They look a bit like mine. Here too, they would rather know us at home than « God knows where with God knows who » (I quote my daddy) !... At least they could keep an eye on what could happen ... I love this chapter



Author's Response:

More and more parents would rather they be at home than in public and in danger. I've seen strict parents refuse their kids the right to have a date at home and it ends very badly with what the kids end up doing on their own. Thanks for commenting and I'm happy you like the story.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For

I'm glad Gus did that for Tim.  Now Tim is in love with Andy.  Lovely chapter.



Author's Response:

It was Brian's son, Charles who fixed up Tim but I know what you meant. My hamster was grinning when he told me this plot. He's very fond of young love. Thanks again for commenting.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed

Now this was a surprise.  Criag going from gay to straight.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Craig is so beautiful he can have it all. I guess Marsha is so good in bed a gay boy would love it too. Thanks for commenting balrogtwety; I love to see your comments.

Reviewer: CJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal

what happened to michael's and shannon's kid???.......did not hear about him after his birth (a long time ago)....^_^



Author's Response:

Robert was mentioned eariler when Michael helped him with a video game. He's about 7 now in the latest chapter. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 93: What Friends are For

i love it



Author's Response:

I can count on you girls to love the lovein. Thanks!

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie

Hey doll it's been a while.  I love how you always make me have to change my panties after reading your stuff.  There's nothing better than a big ... Love it love it love it.



Author's Response:

I wonder how the next chapter works for you. Thanks for commenting and I was more than happy to get some chapters out again. I feel like the old me is back.

Reviewer: justinsgirl (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 92: Partners in Bed

This chapter is so hot I was moving around in my chair. Thank you for writing it and I hope to see more soon. How will this affect Craig now? You come up with the crazyest plot twists I have ever seen.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. We will have to see later how much this might change Craig for real or if it changes him at all. Exploring one's sexuality is common for teenagers to do.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Rookie

I am missing more of this story.  When will you have time to update?  I also like that you are having your stories translated into French ...great idea.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting. I have a chapter started and will finish it soon. At least one story is being done is French so far. Someone else may do Forever Yours.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers

I've missed this story!  Great update!  Love the family and the interactions between Daddy B and Daddy J.  Charles is a sneaky devil, not sure his plan is going to work after that little hot interlude Craig and Tim just had.  (Tim is the bottom I gather?)  Loved this chapter!



Author's Response:

I have been neck deep in learning new software to improve MW. I did decide not to stop writing and hope to update better in the near future. I love this story and don't want to end it. I have a shocking change brewing in my hamster's brain as we speak :)

I forgot to say Tim will bottom, and Craig will not!

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 91: Sleepovers

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you Rainbow. I love how I can count on you for a chapter review hit.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 90: The Trap is Set

Nice to see John get a second chance with Brian and Justin.  Looks like the evidence case is wrapping up.  Great story.



Author's Response:

I was having a hard day with car trouble on a 2008 for crying out loud; then I got all these fantastic review comments from you. That was followed with some good luck personally :P  You brought up my spirits and gave me luck today! I have to decide how to continue this story or close it soon.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author

You get well, Bob.  Stories can wait your health can't.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

That was a couple of weeks ago; I'm all better now. Heah! You're my 1,100 reviewer which means the next chapter is dedicated to you balrogtweety.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 88: The Other Side of the Family

Seems like Brian's family is reaching out for help.  Hope things go well.



Author's Response:

I prefer to make happy endings with a few bumps in the road on the way.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 87: The Taylor Spirit

Molly sure needs to grow up.  She will learn one day.



Author's Response:

I hear being with child can be very emotional. Let's hope that's all it is.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 86: New Wheels

Nice wheels.  Love the color.  Hope Craig can find the boy.



Author's Response:

Craig is just like his father; have no fear.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 85: The Art of the Deal

I like how you put this into this story.  Feels like I'm reading 'Forever Yours'.



Author's Response:

You read that epic tale? I hope I don't repeat myself too much, but I love for the boys to have money.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 45: Life Plans

GREAT chapter!

Sad about Linds' dad. Excited about the two new babies!

What a way to end it! I'll have to wait to read the next installment. :(

Have a good wk!



Author's Response:

Thanks Susan for commenting. I've been down with the flu but I'll be back soon.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 44: Connections

Good chapter! Things moved extremely fast! :)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2010 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 43: The Truth

Grrr, hate having to register to leave a review, understand why though.

OK, funny & sort of sad..... another great chapter!

Hope you're enjoying your wkend! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for joining. It helps our publishing website to have more members. Now it's easy to leave comments. Love you girl!

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 89: Message from the Author

I hope you get well soon and i hope that it´s going to work for you to upload new chapters i will be wating patiently for them so take your time.

 

Hugs Buffytess



Author's Response:

For now I'm just able to answer comments. I'm still recovering from the B.K. Flu (butt kicking flu). Hugs Back!

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