Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 21

Glad Lindsay came back, but agrrrr need an update ASAP ... please ... you evil.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi Marny!  Update coming up soon.  Hang in there, honey.  *hugs*

Reviewer: itzy68 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 21

oh my god!! You cant leave it like that! The angst is killing me.



Author's Response:

Sorry, but I'm an angst whore. LOL  I have written the next chapter and it will get posted as soon as my beta looks it over. ;)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 21

Oh thank goodness someone has found him cutting himself although I am sure Justin is going to convince Lindsay it is not what it seems.



Author's Response:

Justin is very clever, so we shall see.  I'm thrilled that you're still reading and taking the time to comment.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 21

I'm glad Lindsay caught him. I hope she tells  Brian. This madness has to stop.  Justin needs help and really only Brian can help him. Justin needs to tell Brian about his guilt over still loving him while Ethan was dying.

So glad to see an update. Love this story



Author's Response:

Hi Gina Marie,  I see you've managed to keep with this drama.  LOL  Justin is really going through hell, but it's a hell of his own making.  You're right, Brian is the only one who can really help him.  Thank you for commenting, hon.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 21

Oh, you are going to have to update soon after this one. That Justin is a sneaky one.



Author's Response:

Justin is a clever devil.  ;)  Next chapter is already written and waiting for my beta to approve it. 

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2011 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 19

justin's guilt isn't because ethan died, it's because he still loved brian. ethan knew that and told justin just as much. until he says it out loud to either to dr. vaughn or to brian he'll never be okay.



Author's Response:

There are several reasons for Justin's guilt.  All will be revealed soon.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2011 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 19

Noooo! You can't stop there!

Justin is definitely not moving away from the depression that drove him to suicide to begin with. Will all of this be too much for Brian to handle?

Awesome update! :)



Author's Response:

Hang on for a bumpy ride!  So glad that you're enjoying the drama.  :)

Reviewer: galesweetie (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2011 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 19

OMG! Poor Justin he's in so much pain.....my heart broke for him.

Hope Brian sees what Justin is doing to himself to numb the unbearable pain he's holding inside.

great update T!

 



Author's Response:

Justin is letting his guilt eat at him.  He's on the road to self-destruct.  More angst ont he way.  Thanks for the review, Frannie!  *smooches*

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 19

Justin is a mess. He needs to confess to Brian, or his shrink.  The guilt he feels is unwarrented.  He couldn't help how he felt, or the accident.

Great update.  Love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you, Gina!  In Justin's mind, he is to blame.  More will be revealed soon about why he feels this way. 

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 18

Love Brian right now, he is classic button pushing,smart ass, Brian~ Poor sad Justin. I hope he gets his head straightened out. But only after some good ole fashion angst, drama and Brian/Justin lovin' ;)



Author's Response:

Don't worry, more angst and drama coming up.  And maybe even some B/J love. ;)  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2011 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 18

So happy to see an update!  Great chapter. I can't wait to see Justin in therapy and hear what comes out.  I have a feeling it's going to be very revealing...

Totally understand about the writers block....going through that myself right now.  arrrgghhhh!  So frustrating.  But you definately got your grove back!



Author's Response:

Hi Gina Marie, I'm hoping that I have my groove back.  So far, so good.  Justin is still in that dark place.  Let's hope Brian can help him.  Thanks for the feedback, hon.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 18

justin's plight is making my heart break. i think brian is handling him well so far but if he keeps pushing for reactions, i don't know if he'll be able to handle justin when he blows.



Author's Response:

You're right.  Justin's keeping some things bottled up inside of him.  Eventually it's gonna come out.  Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2011 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 18

Yes, Justin you DO deserve love ... especially with Brian!

Great update!



Author's Response:

You tell him!  Thanks for reading hon.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 17

I love this story.  Looking forward to the next chapter. WELL DONE!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the positive feedback.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story.  :)

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2011 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 17

long road back from somewhere he doesn't want to leave. pity. think it's going to take a long long time before brian can ever act on those thoughts.



Author's Response:

If anyone can help Justin, it's Brian.  But you're right, it will be a slow process.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: itzy68 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 17

Im so glad you updated. I love this story so much and I want to know how it ends. Please update soon :D



Author's Response:

Thanks for still being here, hon.  I've been struggling with my writing lately, but I will finish this...even if it takes a while.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 17

So glad to see a new chapter of this story!  I love it!   My heart aches for Brian and Justin.  Justin is carrying around a lot of guilt.   He needs to talk to Brian about it.

Great update!  And don't worry about the wait between postings.  I totally understand the writers block thing.  got a bit of that going on myself.  :-(

Hope your holidays were fun!



Author's Response:

His guilt is overwhelming right now and putting a freeze on his ability to move on with his life.  Brian will surely do his best to help.

Thank you for understanding about the writer's block.  I've been very stressed lately with real life problems and work and it has affected my writing.  I've been struggling, but I am determined to finish this story.  I haver never left a fic unfinished because I hate when people do that.

My holidays were very nice, thanks.  Hope yours were great too.  Thanks for being a good friend to me Gina Marie.  *hugs*

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 16

Another wonderful chapter I am glad Justin trusts Brian to know what he needs and is receptive to help :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 16

dr, vaughan seems like the perfect one for justin. justin will get through this and so will brian. he is so worthy. and daphne will always be a phone call away if justin needs her.

survivor guilt, similar to what brian went through with the bashing yet no one gave name to it.

i can't imagine anything that justin could have or would have done that brian wouldn't be able to handle. his love for justin will override everything.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh Baby this is so sad... I tried to read this on your journal but I couldn't find chapters 1 and 2? Anyways I'm loving this story, I waited until you had lots of chapters so I could indulge myself...

Now I hope this isn't total angst... I need the love...

Later ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 15

his anger is due to his guilt about his feelings for brian. he's going to have to face it sooner or later.



Author's Response:

Justin has a lot to work out.  Hopefully Brian can help him.  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 14

Thank you for this very important chapter. Jennifer inviting Brian to see


Justin was hope for the future.


 


Then Justin meeting once again Ethan,


paving the way for Justin’s emotional


recovery.  Justin is to live out his destiny,


and we know it is to live out his life with


Brian.  Now Justin has to figure that out and


Brian will have to let Justin know his feelings. 


It won’t be easy, but it is doable. 


 


Again, thanks for the chapter, and yes, things


did lighten up.  There is now hope for the future.


 


DavidR



Author's Response:

Thank you for trusting me, David.  Things can only begin to get better from here.  As you said, Jennifer not blaming Brian and asking him to come with her was huge.  Justin still has a way to go, but hopefully he'll let Brian help hom.   :)

Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 14

WOW!! Great chapter. I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 14

sooo glad Brian was there to save him! They have a long way to go but at least they are together!! Still loving it!! :)



Author's Response:

Brian to the rescue! LOL  They do have quite a bit to work out.  Thanks for your continued support.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 14

i'm glad jennifer didn't blame brian this time and i'm glad ethan turned him away. perfect chapter.



Author's Response:

The fact that Jennifer didn't blame him was important.  But I think Jennifer realizes that Brian really wants to help Justin, otherwise he wouldn't have checked up on him.  :)

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 13

Eeeep! I'm so glad that Daphne called Brian ... I hope Justin will be okay!

Wonderful update! I LOVE this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support.  You made me smile!

Reviewer: itzy68 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 13

Oh my god....please update soon...



Author's Response:

Life has been real busy, but I will put my thinking cap on and try to concentrate.  ;)

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 13

This is bad, really bad.  Nonono, not the story, but that Justin could feel so overwhelmed that he would do what he did.  In many cases, we could possibly chalk it up to a mistake.  But we know for Justin, Tylenol may as well be arsenic.


 


The emotion here run so deep that luckily for me, I never read this fic. at work.  Let’s hope that


Justin recovers.  The question I have is just what does recovery mean?  I know Brian can help him,


but the guilt Justin feels is…… geeez let’s just say so overwhelming.  Hopefully Justin will recover


physically but emotionally? Brian certainly has his work cut out for him.    


 


Thanks for the story.  Maybe things will lighten up a little???  I sure hope so.


DavidR



Author's Response:

Hi David,

So nice to see you again, hon.  Things will eventually lighten up. Please hang in there!  :)

Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 13

hope you let us not wait to long, justin has to get well!!!



Author's Response:

Hi joe!  I'll try to write as quickly as I can.  LOL  Thanks for reading.  :)

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 13

 

Okay... sooo I hould not read this stoy while still at work. Crying my eyes out and it's not pretty.... WHY???!!! Happy ending?? PLEASE SAY YES.... ahhhh!!!! UPDATE ASAP :o)  Hugs.



Author's Response:

If you look at my other stories you will get a hint as to what kind of an ending this story will have.  I will try to update soon.  Thanks for your support!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 13

OMG please don't wait to long with an update.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Gonna lock myself in my room this weekend and write, write, write!  LOL  Thank you for reading, Marny!  *hugs back*

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 13

omg!



Author's Response:

LOL  It ain't over yet!    :)

Reviewer: cattabella (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 12

Wow. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks honey.  I am working on the next chapter now.  I had computer issues so that slowed me down, but hang in there! 

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 12

Giving away personal items is a sure sign that suicide is being contemplated ... I hope Brian realizes this before it's too late!

Great update!



Author's Response:

You're right about Justin giving away his personal belongings.  He is in a bad place right now.  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 12

Brian please go to Justin NOW !!! Justin needs you.

You're a tease to stop writing at this point. I want an update, pritty please.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi Marny!  I didn't mean to stop and make you wait so long, but I had computer issues and now rl issues.  I'll try to write the next chapter asap.  Hang in there!  :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 12

no no no didn't care for the last line at all. brian better swallow whatever it is keeping him from justin and get his ass to the studio.



Author's Response:

Justin really needs Brian, but will he come through?  Thank you for commenting, hon.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 11

oh no, what's he going to do?!

thanks for the update

feroza



Author's Response:

Right now, Justin is capable of anything.  He is in a downward spiral,

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh no Is Justin thinking of suicide!? No no.
Please update ASAP.

 * hugs *



Author's Response:

You might be right!  Thanks for reviewing.  *hugs*

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 11

Stepping out the Darkness:

Oh no bells are ringing loudly here people who give prized possessions away are in a very dark place mentally. Wake up people we have a serious situation here. Biting my fingernails until the next chapter X Chris 



Author's Response:

You said it Chris.  Justin is indeed exhibiting some classic signs here.  Thanks for the review.  Keep 'em comng! :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 11

glad jennifer got in touch with daphne and brought her home for a visit. i get an eerie feeling too. justin giving away his things? things worse than before? is it so bad that he may try an attempt? something has to get to him before that happens.



Author's Response:

Justin is in a very dark place.  Who knows what he may do...

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 11

Ok, this is bad.  Justin isn't contemplating suicide, is he?  That's fucked  Why does he think he played a role in Ethan's death? What am I missing here?  The plane crashed.  Justin survived, Ethan didn't.  I don't understand why Justin feels in any way responsible. I do understand him feeling guilt knowing Ethan died knowing that Justin still loved Brian.  That kind of guilt must be eating at him.

If he is contemplating suicide, then he needs serious help.   This chapter has me nervous!  (and of course I'm loving it!)



Author's Response:

Justin is in a very bad place right now.  Thanks for reviewing, Gina.  I'm sorry that I can't answer your questions right now.  All will be revealed in the coming chapters. 

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 9

Fantastic! So happy to catch up with this fic! Haven't got much time to read at the moment! Still love it!! Especially how Justin and Brian are reacting to each other! More please soon! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks hon.  Sorry it's taken me so long to write another chapter  rl and Gale got in the way. LOL  Next chapter is ready to be posted.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 9

Enjoying this.  It looks ready to move into the hurt/comfort b/j part of the story soon.  Looking forward to it!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you are still around and enjoying my work.  Thank you for reading and commenting. 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 9

is it any wonder that he falls into a depression? ethan dies unexpectedly even if justin wasn't as happy as he should be. and now he feels there's nothing left for him with brian. if only he knew the truth.



Author's Response:

Precisely!  Justin is too caught up in his own misery to think about anything else. 

Reviewer: itzy68 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 8

Oh..I really like this story and I hope you will keep on updating. I so want to know how this will turn out.

//Itzy



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for commenting on my story, Itzy.  The next chapter will be posted soon.  I'm only about half-way done with it, so there's lots more angst to come!

Reviewer: kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 8

I'm really enjoying this.  It'll be interesting to see what cracks Brian's facade and prompts him to help.



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you're still enjoying the story.  Things are going to get darker.  Brian will be his usual asshole self at first.  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 8

i knew he'd blame himself and live with the guilt. even if he were to get together with someone else, unless their love is great, ethan will always be between justin and whomever. be he old or new 

 



Author's Response:

You're right, the guilt will always be with him, and he is falling into a depression.  Next chaoter will be posted soon.  Thank you for the review, hon!

Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 8

glad to see a new chapter online, i like it a lot and can't wait for brian and justin to finally talk to each other. hope you update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for commenting joe!  It's always nice to hear from a new reader.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story.  :)

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 7

Sniff . . . . sniff  . . . . sniff! so sad!!!!! You hooked me right in tooo as I wasn't expecting it! So now Brian just better get his arse over there as Justin needs him! He has to forget about himself and think of Justin!!! I think I'm still in shock! So happy to catch up to this brilliant fic! :)



Author's Response:

Yep, I tried to go for the "shock value" with Ethan dying.  His death will deeply affect Justin.  Thank you for commenting hon.

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 5

Beautiful and soooo sad! :(

Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wow! Great Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much dz! )

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 7

Is it bad that I'm glad Ethan is dead?  I know there's a long road for Brian to travel to get Justin away from his guilty feelings, but at least there's not a tangible roadblock like Ethan's recovery in the way.  Maybe Brian will deal with his guilt about the bashing while helping Justin deal with his survivor's guilt?  Huh?  I think it might be bad that I'm glad Ethan's dead...  Oh well, I'm already over it.  Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Yes poor Ethan is dead and you aren't the only reader who is a little happy abput it.  LOL  The boys will have a long road ahead of them.  Thank you for the great feedback!

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 7

Holy smokes! Ethan's dead and Justin will never recover from the guilt. Brian go to France!

Great update, Wildsweet! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Anno!  Ethan's death will profoundly affect Justin.  Lots more angst ahead.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 7

Hope you had a great vacation! (though I 'm jealous as hell!  lol)   Sad chapter. Poor Ethan, I really feel bad for him.   Dying knowing the man he loved, never really loved him back.  That sucks.  Did I mention I DON'T like Justin in this story? lol but loving the story!   Great update.



Author's Response:

Vacation was terrific, thanksd.  Ethan died knowing that Justin was still in love with Brian.  Very sad indeed.  I didn't like Justin at times in the show either.  Thanks for the review and your constant support, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 7

tragic chapter on all fronts.



Author's Response:

I know that you are very upset by Ethan's death.  *wink*  Now we are getting to the meat of the story.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 6

Stepping out of the Darkness: Great chapter oh Brian I feel we have a lot of angst for Brian and Justin yet :)Chris



Author's Response:

You're right, Chris,  Lots more angst to come!  Thank you for the positive review.  :)

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 6

Stupid Brian.  Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Did you expect something different from Mr, Kinney??  Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

Ooh yes Brian is on his way to france!?

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Is Brian on his way to France?  Sorry, but you'll have to read the next chapter to find out! LOL  Thank you for commenting.  *hugs*

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 6

brian better be on the way to the airport.

as for justin, even with ethan knowing that he still loves brian and brian's was the name he called before crashing. if ethan doesn't die, he'll never let justin go.



Author's Response:

Ethan's fate is still uncertain.  Brian and Justin are both realizing the power of their love.  

BTW, are you deleting your LJ journal?  I hope you're not.

Reviewer: jcgv (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 6

aww poor brian... haha not an ethan fan obviously. can't wait for the next installment. this is really good.



Author's Response:

Gee, thanks.   I'm pleased that this story has sparked your interest.  :)

Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great update. Thanks so much for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading.  I appreciate the feedback!

Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2010 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 6

All I have to say is Brian better be on his to that hospital in France! :)



Author's Response:

Guess youll have to wait for the next chapter to see if there is a reunion in the near future.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love this story. I was so tickled to see an update. It was fabulous.



Author's Response:

Wow, I'm so happy that you're enjoying it.  Thank you for the lovely words of praise.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh, this is good!  I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Gee, thanks Kate.  That made me smile!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

so glad they were found. now on to the hospital. poor justinif ethan doesn't make it he'll feel guilty. if ethan does make he'll feel guilty. if ethan becomes paralyzed then he won't leave him and will feel guiltier. it's a no win situation as far as i can see.



Author's Response:

You're right!  It's absolutely a no win situation,  Thank you for the review hon.  :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

this needs to be updated soon, real soon.

so intense.



Author's Response:

The accident was horrific, but Justin is alive.  :)  You  may have to wait a little longer for the next chapter though.  This is a busy week for me. 

Reviewer: monie91 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 4

this story is really good. i hope you continue it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  It may take me a while, but I always finish my stories.  Hope you will continue to enjoy this one!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

Thanks, plesase I need more.

Hope you're feeling better. * hugs *



Author's Response:

Thanks hon.  The respiratory infection put me out of commission for a while, but I'm back.  ;)

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 4

Sniff sniff! So very sad! But so glad Justin is alive - just get him away from that wreck before it blows up, aviation fluid is highly flammable!!! This is brilliant and just makes me hungry for more! So more soon please! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks sweetie.  I'm trying to write as fast as I can, but I've had a lot of stuff going on in rl.  Don't worry, I'll make sure I push Justin out of harm's way. ;)

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

OMG, I'll only say this once.  I promise.  MORE PLEASE!



Author's Response:

More angst on the way.  You know what they say.  Be careful what you wish for.  LOL

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 3

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKK!!! What!!!! CRASHED!!??? Poor Justin! Poor Brian! Brian to the rescue?? (She aks desperately!) Sorry about the shriek but you caught me by surprise!! More please soon! (Taps foot impatiently!) Now would be good, earlier even better!! Pleass, please, please update soon! :)



Author's Response:

I love to put a little (well, actually a lot) of angst in my stories.  Love the shrieking.   Carry on! ;)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

OMG no!!

You must update NOW !! please



Author's Response:

I have an excuse.  I've been sick.   It's been freezing in NY.  Hope you enjoy the next chapter though.  It's waiting for your review!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 3

First, I LOVED the first half of this chapter. Love the banter between brian and ted. loved the zinger brian gave ted about him falling for all his friends. lol hysterical!

Second...holy shit!  So I gather Ethan dies.  Well figures.  That's the only way Justin would leave him and go running back to Brian. Oh wait, he doesn't do that right away, does he?  First he has to get all depressed and only Brian can pull him from him. Maybe fuck the depression out of him.  Justin has always been very manipulative when it comes to Brian,,,ok, rant over.  I'm sorry, I don't know where you are taking this story, but I've disliked Justin in this one from the first chapter.   I don't know if that was your intentin, but that's how I read it.   Please don't take this as a critisim!  I LOVE your writing, the fact that I despise Justin is testiment to your good writing. Good writing is suppose to evoke strong feelings, and boy do I have them!  lo

Love Brian in this.  Ambivilant about Ethan, and despise Justin....



Author's Response:

I love the Brian-Ted relationship.  Glad I could do justice to their bantering.  I'm pleased that the story is evoking strong feelings in you.  You're right, I don't want everyone to love Justin.  He walked out on Brian after all!  LOL

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL  Glad you're getting into the story.  :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

omg!

so things weren't that good between ethan and justin as everyone thought they were. um. brian still cares and now his bad day just got worse.



Author's Response:

Of course Brian still cares.  Did you ever doubt that? LOL  Things are looking bleak right now.  Keep reading! :)

Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 3

you just can't let us hanging there! PLEASE update ASAP!!!



Author's Response:

I was sick this week, but wrote the next chapter in one day.  Hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Hamsterfan (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 3

I guess that Ethan will die in the air crash. And Brian has to console a mourning Justin. I hope that he will not feel like second choice because Justin only turns to him when Ethan isn't there anymore.

Or maybe I'm completely wrong, lol. However, I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Things will get complicated.  ;)

Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

FUCK No way you have to write another chapter tonight or i'm going to die....
That's a major cliffhanger

awesome chapter btw
Jill <<33



Author's Response:

Okay, I did my best.  The new chapter is up.  Enjoy!  :)

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh that last sentence just kills! Talk about tug the heart strings - makes me want to hug him better!! (or maybe lock him in a cellar with Justin!) Another fabulous ep! More please soon! :)



Author's Response:

Yep, poor Brian. His family really did a number on him.  Thanks for reviewing hon.  :)

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 2

I can't wait for Justin to go back home... no matter what, I can't see him with Ethan.



Author's Response:

Ethan and Justin shared similar goals, only they went about it differently.  But they are both in the same place.  Brian and Justin do not have the right timing yet.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 2

what are his latest woes? coming home to a solo showing of his art or facing brian? as happy as he seems he really isn't is he?

brian is going to keep the distance i think. seeing him with his boyfriend would definitely hurt too much.



Author's Response:

You will find out in future chapters all about Ethan and Justin.  ;)

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

So sad.  Brian still mourns Justin leaving him while Justin pretty much has moved on with his life. Barely thinking of Brian. I know from your summary that something bad happens to Justin and Brian is asked to help him.  Well forgive me, but I hope he doesn't.  Justin seems to always need Brian when he's in trouble, yet in good times he finds all sorts of faults with Brian and leaves him.  I know I'm being cruel, but I'm not particularly liking Justin right now. Of course you know I LOVE all your stories! I was so glad to see an update to this one.  I'm anxious to see where you take it.



Author's Response:

All will not go exactly as you might think.  I agree that Justin was the one to leave and is having an easier time with his life.   However, stay tuned for upcoming drama.   The road he is on is not an easy one.  Thanks for the wonderful words of praise Gina Marie.  I am a fan of your writing too, although I rarely comment.  *lowers head in shame*

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awww that was sad but i am glad Justin is doing well, even if not romantically! So how are you going to bring them together? Hmmmm . . . goes off to ponder the situation and eagerly await the next ep! More please soon! :)



Author's Response:

Yep, be prepared for a lot of angst.  Justin is coping better with the break up than Brian is.  In the near future their paths will cross.  That's all I'm gonna say.   Thank you for the encouraging words.  ;)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

what's it going to take to bring them together again?



Author's Response:

That is a good questions and one that I'm not going to answer. LOL   Keep on reading and you'll discover how their paths will cross again.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Prologue

Wow! That was really powerful and reminded me strongly of the ep that happened in! Are you going to continue this. Loved the POV angle and the 'voices' sounded just right! Loved the way you had Justin trying to emulate Brian in his 'heartless' shit attitude! More please soon! :)



Author's Response:

Hi hon.  Yes, there will be more.  Things go AU from here.  Thanks for the review.

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