Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

omg this gave me legit goose bumps.

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2012 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love how Justin saw an apparition of Brian's beautiful face  visualize before him and how he said Brian's name before passing out (Am I strange? lol) ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

OMG, I'll only say this once.  I promise.  MORE PLEASE!



Author's Response:

More angst on the way.  You know what they say.  Be careful what you wish for.  LOL

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 3

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKK!!! What!!!! CRASHED!!??? Poor Justin! Poor Brian! Brian to the rescue?? (She aks desperately!) Sorry about the shriek but you caught me by surprise!! More please soon! (Taps foot impatiently!) Now would be good, earlier even better!! Pleass, please, please update soon! :)



Author's Response:

I love to put a little (well, actually a lot) of angst in my stories.  Love the shrieking.   Carry on! ;)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

OMG no!!

You must update NOW !! please



Author's Response:

I have an excuse.  I've been sick.   It's been freezing in NY.  Hope you enjoy the next chapter though.  It's waiting for your review!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 3

First, I LOVED the first half of this chapter. Love the banter between brian and ted. loved the zinger brian gave ted about him falling for all his friends. lol hysterical!

Second...holy shit!  So I gather Ethan dies.  Well figures.  That's the only way Justin would leave him and go running back to Brian. Oh wait, he doesn't do that right away, does he?  First he has to get all depressed and only Brian can pull him from him. Maybe fuck the depression out of him.  Justin has always been very manipulative when it comes to Brian,,,ok, rant over.  I'm sorry, I don't know where you are taking this story, but I've disliked Justin in this one from the first chapter.   I don't know if that was your intentin, but that's how I read it.   Please don't take this as a critisim!  I LOVE your writing, the fact that I despise Justin is testiment to your good writing. Good writing is suppose to evoke strong feelings, and boy do I have them!  lo

Love Brian in this.  Ambivilant about Ethan, and despise Justin....



Author's Response:

I love the Brian-Ted relationship.  Glad I could do justice to their bantering.  I'm pleased that the story is evoking strong feelings in you.  You're right, I don't want everyone to love Justin.  He walked out on Brian after all!  LOL

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL  Glad you're getting into the story.  :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

omg!

so things weren't that good between ethan and justin as everyone thought they were. um. brian still cares and now his bad day just got worse.



Author's Response:

Of course Brian still cares.  Did you ever doubt that? LOL  Things are looking bleak right now.  Keep reading! :)

Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 3

you just can't let us hanging there! PLEASE update ASAP!!!



Author's Response:

I was sick this week, but wrote the next chapter in one day.  Hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Hamsterfan (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 3

I guess that Ethan will die in the air crash. And Brian has to console a mourning Justin. I hope that he will not feel like second choice because Justin only turns to him when Ethan isn't there anymore.

Or maybe I'm completely wrong, lol. However, I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Things will get complicated.  ;)

Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

FUCK No way you have to write another chapter tonight or i'm going to die....
That's a major cliffhanger

awesome chapter btw
Jill <<33



Author's Response:

Okay, I did my best.  The new chapter is up.  Enjoy!  :)

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