Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 24: bridge over troubled water

Hey, I've been away for awhile, so I just got caught up with this one.  I still really like it.  It's evil, but I'm enjoying Brian's struggles alone.  Don't tell the one person you can stand, but tell everyone else, and deal with the annoying hovering.  Ha.  Justin's dealings with Kai deserve his full attention and I'm appreciating how your giving him that.  I don't know if that made sense, and of course I want them back together, but sometimes I like to read Brian suffering the consequences of his own prideful idiocy. 

Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 24: bridge over troubled water

You're great! Be blessed with your loving care toward autists persons and the way you describe Justin and Kai relationships shows it. In my country, autism is not well understood yet and always associated with fate, there should be more informations to fix this.

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 24: bridge over troubled water

i love it

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 23: you may delay, but time will not

great update. can´t wait for more :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thank you, Rose!

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 23: you may delay, but time will not

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! lol, that's just so damn cute! I love the Justin/Kai singing and laughing interactions they have! :) And poor Justin gave into the urge to call Brian, although I think that was good because we all know Brian would never "go after anyone" so he would never make the first move, but if Justin makes the first move then it's alright for Brian to contact Justin in return. Love it! Great update dear (2 for 1) :)

<3 Alyse



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I've been enjoying writing their scenes (Justin and Kai)! I'm glad you were happy with how Justin ended up calling Brian. I kept going back and forth with that decision! LOL

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 23: you may delay, but time will not

I am glad that Kai is getting more and more comfortable with Justin and that the daycare has some structure for the children's daily activities... and that he finally called Brian.. that's a step in the right direction... I realize this story is about Justin and Kai's relationship... but.. I didn't realize that Brian was going to be such a minor character in this fic... 



Author's Response:

Brian will be back in the storyline pretty soon. I just wanted to focus on Justin because he's doing a lot of growing up really fast, and I wanted to showcase that early on. The next chapter will be Brian-focused, and soon I'll have the two of them actually share breathing space LOL Thanks for your patience, BluvsJ!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 23: you may delay, but time will not

Oh my goodness he is starting to try to verbalise and mimic sounds! BRILLIANT! Does Justin realise how huge that is? There were several times when this had me close to tears - when Justin realises Craig wouldn't appreciate the portrait and when you describe the image of Kai sleepin peacefully in the crib! So sweet! Still loving this fic!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! At this point, Justin is just happy that Kai is in his life. He doesn't fully understand autism and the importance of imitation skills... but when he does... lol he'll be so proud :) I'm thrilled that you are enjoying this story as much as I am enjoying writing it. Thank you so much for your kind words and awesome review!!

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 23: you may delay, but time will not

i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 23: you may delay, but time will not

I'm really enjoying this story. I'm so glad Kai finally has someone to look out for him and to help him. Rather than just shoved away in his room. While I love seeing how Justin is making progress and becoming closer with Kai, I wish there was more of Brian and Justin in this story. Maybe you're planning on that soon,and I'm just being impatient. lol

I would love for Brian to see how Justin is with Kai, and how he , himself  would act with Kai.

This is a great story! Can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

It's in the works as I type this response LOL I'm hoping to post out a couple of chapters in the next few days. Brian will be in the next chapter, and in a few more the two will be actually talking face to face :) Thanks for your patience!!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 22: undertones in bloom

he so tortured as to what to do. i feel for the poor guy.



Author's Response:

to love, or not to love... it's hard to walk away no matter how many times a person has been pushed. I was going back and forth about it myself LOL but at the end, I decided Justin needed to make the call :)

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 21: clear as mud

This fic is absolutely amazing! I love what Justin is doing for his brother and I can't wait to see Kai back in the fic! Also, I can't wait to see Brian and Justin talk. Hope you will be able to update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I have it all written out in my head, I just need the time to type it all up LOL thanks so much for your feedback and comments!!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 21: clear as mud

Still loving this strong Justin and his determonation to be strong for both himself and KAI!  More please soon! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I prefer "Strong Justin" too :)

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 21: clear as mud

I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 21: clear as mud

I guess Emmett's plan didn't work.... with Justin being so concerned about Kai... I don't think he will care... even when he does find out about Brian...



Author's Response:

Justin will always care about Brian :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 21: clear as mud

justin has to go for guardianship if he wants kai to have any kind of quality life.

em should leave well enough alone for now.



Author's Response:

soon!! :)

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 21: clear as mud

oooo Justin is soo forceful, lol! love it! and poor Emmett trying to trick Justin and being surprised that he's no longer that naive as to fall for it. anyway, can't wait for the next update dear, this has to be my fave fic right now, and i watch avidly everyday for updates just hoping to catch the next one :)

Great Job, and Happy Writing! <3

-Alyse



Author's Response:

oh you are so sweet! Thank you so much for your kind words and awesome comments! They mean a lot :) I also love a more forceful and strong Justin that won't just roll over. I'm hoping to write more soon! Thanks again!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 20: short and sweet

great update :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thanks, Rose! It was shorter than I would've liked, but I think it needed to be written :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 20: short and sweet

I admire Justin for devoting so much time to Kai.... BUT... Jennifer has a point.... he is totally forgetting someone who needs him as much as his brother..... Brian....  It seems to me as if he no longer even thinks or cares about the man he supposedly "loves"..... that's pretty sad...



Author's Response:

Brian made it clear to him that he wanted a break. Justin isn't going to pine for him. He still loves him, that hasn't changed. But he's not going to track him down either. I'll be sure to add some Brian-thoughts in the next chapter. Thanks for bringing that up!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 20: short and sweet

I'm glad Kai has a brother like Justin, who cares.
Lovely story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Marny! :)

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 20: short and sweet

Great to see this quietly determined Justin! YAY!! Gooo Justin!! Still loving this! :)



Author's Response:

When Justin is determined, nothing stops him! :)

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 20: short and sweet

haha, I wouldn't want to be Craig when Justin starts taking over. lol! great job dear! can't wait for the next update :)

-Alyse



Author's Response:

Thanks! I can't type my thoughts quick enough! LOL

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 20: short and sweet

i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 20: short and sweet

i feel he's taking on more than he can chew, but once the alliance begins to help him, things will go smoother.



Author's Response:

Everything is a process, but Justin will know when it gets to be too much. He's determined to make sure his brother gets the services he needs.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 19: another warm day in the city of cold hearts

Still really enjoying this story.  Wish Brian wasn't such an asshole.  Would really like him to go to Justin, rather than Justin making all the effort, but that's just me...



Author's Response:

Hmmm.. well there is a thought. Let me think about that idea some more....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 19: another warm day in the city of cold hearts

I am glad that Justin is so involved in making sure Kai gets the help he needs... from the daycare center staff ....since it seems as if Craig leaves him there all day... he sure won't be winning any father of the year award.... 



Author's Response:

Craig's an ass ;)

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 19: another warm day in the city of cold hearts

i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 19: another warm day in the city of cold hearts

This is wonderful!! Love it! I have taught many students with autism as well as aspergers syndrome, etc and you depict some of the mannerisms really accurately and with humanity and thought! You show us Kai as a lovely human being to be loved and cared for. (BTW my nephew also has autism and really benefitted from early intervention!) Loving this fic and will look forward to more soon I hope! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind and meaningful words, they mean a lot to me :)

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

Sniff sniff!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

Heartrendingly sweet!

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 19: another warm day in the city of cold hearts

It warms my heart, because of Kai recognizes Justin and it seems he is happy to see his brother.
I so love your story!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: The sum of us

This one brought tears to my eyes! Love the sypathetic way you portray autism!



Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 19: another warm day in the city of cold hearts

Poor Kai, That's a really long day for a child not to get a lot of one-on-one interaction, especially a child that definitely needs it more than most. I hope Justin spends a lot more time with him soon. Lovely chapter, keep up the great writing! :)

-Alyse



Author's Response:

Thanks! I just added a short chapter. I hope to add more again very soon!!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 19: another warm day in the city of cold hearts

you nearyl made me cry. kai´s reaction was emotional for me.... :-)) rose



Author's Response:

I'm sorry I almost made you cry!! I'm pretty attached to Kai too :) Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 19: another warm day in the city of cold hearts

beautiful story, love it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 19: another warm day in the city of cold hearts

i'm glad  they're taking care of him and not ignoring him.

glad ted cares enough to show brian how much.

now if only they would get together.



Author's Response:

soon! soon! Well, not too soon, but soon!

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 19: another warm day in the city of cold hearts

I really like your Justin. What he's doing to help Kai it's just wonderful! I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That means a lot :)

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

Nice update.  Craig is an ass. 



Author's Response:

LOL, yeah, he is an ass. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

Omg! Omg! Omg! Well first of all, Go Justin! for standing up for himself and not backing down against his father. Good for him. Now, Craig on the other hand, I don't have a lot of sympathy for him in the first place, but I do have a slight understanding of his point of view-not wanting another child in the first place is bad enough, but then to find out this child has a serious medical condition that takes a lot of patience and time and understanding to deal with would just be the last straw I suppose.

I hope Justin doesn't just give up, I hope he fights for his brother soon. Also, I can't wait for more Justin/Brian and Justin/Kai interactions. Love both! :)

Great Job dear, ::impatiently awaiting the next updates:: Lol

-Alyse



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story. Justin is really growing up and realizing what it means to 'take charge,' stronger than before.

I'm glad you were able to kind of see Craig's POV. It's sad, but there are parents out there like that. Thanks again for your comments!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

OMG.... Craig is a... Selfish,Heartless, Worthless... S.O.B.... it seems that anyone that doesn't meet his "High" standards including his sons and both wives... get thrown away like garbage !!!!!!   when he is the one that should be thrown in the nearest landfill.... Thank God Justin cares enough about his brother to get him the help he needs....  If he would only get back with Brian.. he could also help with Kai.. I Hope Emmett's "Genius Plan" will work .... lol... 



Author's Response:

LOL Thanks!! Justin hasn't listened to his voicemail yet, but will in an upcoming chapter. I just needed to get the "daycare" scene done. Yeah, Craig is an ass: once an ass, always an ass LOL Thanks again for your feedback!!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

I love this story it is always such a shock for parents when a child has a diagnosis. Unfortunatley I have seen the same reaction as Craig and Susan's



Author's Response:

Same. It's a sad reaction to see, but it does happen. Thankfully, in this story, this child has an older brother who not only accepts him and the diagnosis, but wants to support him, be there for him, and just enjoy him like a brother should.

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

Justin is so cute with Kai, he is a great brother.

I so hope Craig will take Justins advice and goes with Kai to the Alliance.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Meggi! I'm enjoying writing these Justin/Kai scenes!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

great update, love this story so much



Author's Response:

Thanks, Marny! I appreciate your comment :)!

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you!! :)

Reviewer: jay (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

wow i can't believe craig would do that but at the same time i can update soon love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jay! I know what you mean. It seemed believable though, right? That's Craig for you...

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

really great update :-)) rose



Author's Response:

THANKS SO MUCH!

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

criag is not the only ass in this kai mother is just an biger ass to for leaving her kid.....Justin is a good man



Author's Response:

Yep. Yep. And yep. ;) I agree totally.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

what a great chapter. finally justin knows. kai is connecting to him in his own way. craig better follow through.



Author's Response:

thanks! I've been enjoying writing how Justin and Kai are starting to bond. :) Thanks again!

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 18: here comes the sun

 aaah love it keep them comeing....can we put craig in a reeealy bad car crash uuuh the way he treats an talks about kai...let justin get custady of him.



Author's Response:

oh that is so tempting... lol

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 17: how much we should sing this song?

Leave it to Emmett to come up with a plan... I hope Justin goes for the Cd soon and runs into Brian... update soon..



Author's Response:

soon!! :) Thanks for the comments!

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 17: how much we should sing this song?

I love the story, but i need more justen and kia less brian. at least until they get back together or start getting back together.



Author's Response:

LOL, okay, next chapter is Brian-less!! Thanks :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 17: how much we should sing this song?

ok



Author's Response:

just updated :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

Poor Justin he has no idea of the solitary world Kai inhabits. I love how he keeps trying to make a connection. Great story thank you I am really enjoying it thank you Cheers Chris



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words and feedback!

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

Yay! longest looking chapter yet!!! lol.. now try for longer...:) Awesome chapter. Seriously Brian should just get over himself and call Justin already.. :( Love how Kai is beginning to respond to Justin more, and poor Justin, I understand getting frustrated and it was good of him to just remove himself from the situation for a little bit so that everyone could calm down and collect themselves to try again. Loved the train thing. anyway, hope you update again soon! :)

-Alyse



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comments! I'm aiming for longer chapters, so thanks for that feedback too LOL More coming soon :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

am thankful for ted. brian could use him being around.

justin not knowing about kai infuriates me.



Author's Response:

I've always had a soft spot for Ted :) Yeah, Justin is going to find out soon... I just posted the chapter.

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

I love this story can't wait to see where this leads soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That means a lot to me!

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 15: Everybody's looking for something

I wonder what is in Craigs mind because of Kai.

 



Author's Response:

He'll be home soon...

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: Everybody's looking for something

thanks for the lovely update



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the lovely feedback :)

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 14: All's fair

Justin now get a chance to bring a little sunshine in Kai's room and life.



Author's Response:

He's going to do his best!!

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 13: Hilt

I love Ted, he acts like a real friend to Brian!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Meggi. I always liked Ted too!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 14: All's fair

i don't know what to say.



Author's Response:

um... not sure what to say either then LOL, um, did you like it? LOL I wanted to show Justin's view of Craig, the show never really hit their relationship as well as they could have IMO, so I wanted to throw that in there because Justin needs to have something to compare with.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 13: Hilt

bitches all of them. no means no. brian needs justin not them. so glad tell warned him.



Author's Response:

ROFLOL you're too funny!! LOL

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 12: The sum of us

i just can't believe that justin has no clue and craig didn't even leave anything for him to find out about kai. it hurts to think that justin is thinking he's making some headway with kai when he really isn't. someone or something has to let him know.



Author's Response:

Justin is starting to figure out that there is something more going on... it's just going to take time. Don't worry though, he'll confront Craig his with thoughts soon. Thanks for the feedback!!!

Reviewer: A. (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Fresh air

I like the premise, and that you're taking your own experiences with children with autism. It's also satisfying that the updates are so frequent, but I think you're sacrificing quality for speed. You've got some great ideas and grasp on the characters (I'm so sick of authors who don't understand their characters!), but you might want to look in to some basic writing technique, such as describing settings and painting a real pictures instead of just using dialogue. Using some creativity instead of just stating "That Afternoon" would really draw the reader in. I know I'd enjoy the story a lot more if it were written like a book rather than just your train of thought.

-A



Author's Response:

wow, thank you so much for your constructive feedback. I really appreciate that a lot and will do that with the remaining chapters. Thanks again! -Snow

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 12: The sum of us

great update :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thanks, Rose!

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 12: The sum of us

Justin is very patient with his little brother and gives his best. The finger painting went very well, Kai seems to love it, me too.

I love the family meeting thing, I so hope it goes well.

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Meggi! I'm hoping to update again soon!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 12: The sum of us

Amazing ..... Justin seems to be a natural at knowing what to do with Kai.... I feel sorry for Debbie... she's a strong woman ... but... after losing Vic and now Brian...  I can only imagine why she called the whole gang together... update soon... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 11: Bygones

Great chapter.... The scene works just as well with Mikey and Debbie...  I  just wish someone would tell Justin .. I realize he's busy with Kai ..but.. it seems everyone knows except him...

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 12: The sum of us

aaaw kai and justin more  justin and kai plaese...

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 12: The sum of us

I'm so hooked, love this story

* hugs *

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 12: The sum of us

Oh geez, Deb's called a family meeting! Well so much for Brian suffering in peace.

Already falling in love with Justin and Kai's relationship!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 11: Bygones

Does Brian really think he can get rid of Ma that easy...better just eat the soup.

Well, it looks like Justin is making some progress with Kai, probably more effort than Craig has ever put into time with his kid.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 11: Bygones

seems both have made a breakthrough.



Author's Response:

:) Slowly but surely. I just posted another chapter. hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 11: Bygones

I love it so far, I can't wait for the next update. I hope you start making longer chapters though. :) And I love that Justin is trying to be a good brother for Kai, and trying to get through to him. Wonderful! Happy Writing! :)

-Alyse



Author's Response:

LOL I'm certainly trying to make the chapters longer...I really am! LOL I'm happy that you're liking the story :) I'm starting the next chapter now and hope to post it soon!

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 10: Butterflies and Hurricanes

I'm very impressed! Amazing story! I love it already! And I love Jennfer for her advice for Justin.

Can't wait for more! Thank's for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Meggie! I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 17, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 10: Butterflies and Hurricanes

While reading this it brought tears to my eyes. I have a 3yr old mid-function autistic son and I know first hand the frustration that comes with dealing with him. But I also know the joy when he is the one to come to me for a hug. What wonderful writing! Can't wait to see how this all ties together with Brian showing up once Justin and Kai get settled.

Author's Response:

Your comments mean more than you know. I love the wonderful families I've had the pleasure to work with and their fantastic children. I hope to write more soon.

Thanks again! Hugs, Snow

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: Butterflies and Hurricanes

i feel so bad for both kai and justin. when is he going to learn about the autism? brian will have to deal with justin when the time comes, that's all there is to that.



Author's Response:

he'll learn soon.. a few more chapters. :) thnx!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Butterflies and Hurricanes

Poor Justin and he thought Brian was impossible! I'm glad Jennifer called and gave Justin such great advice.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kat!!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 9: The smallprint

love this fic, thanks for writing



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm really enjoying writing it :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 9: The smallprint

I also work with special needs children who have autism... and you are absolutely correct... no two children are exactly the same..... some are like Kai.... some are non-verbal and some are extremely violent ... You have listed 3 very good sites... this fic is very interesting as well as being informative....Thanks... I am thrilled that Debbie finally asked Brian if Justin knew about his cancer.....it's about time someone thought of his feelings.... 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your feedback and commetns! I really appreciate them :)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 9: The smallprint

please update really really soon :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Just added another chapter!

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 9: The smallprint

ok this is starting to be one of my qaf fanfic must read, i love the justin parts, i hope creag goes away and justin starts getting along and gets custady of his brother..

i need more chapters  pleeease. keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much! :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 9: The smallprint

Justin is in for quite the challenge with Kai! Not surprised to see Deb darken Brian's doorway. I hope he'll talk with her.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Deb's far from over with her surrogate son... more words to come :)

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 9: The smallprint

i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 9: The smallprint

How will Justin figure out his brother is autistic?  I am looking forward to the eventuality when Brian meets Kai and how he interacts with him...



Author's Response:

Time will tell! Thanks for your comments!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 9: The smallprint

that is so wrong that craig just threw kai at justin without telling him anything.

debbie, not of her business if justin knows or not. why can't everyone just leave them alone. if brian wants to tell him himself, fine. if not butt out.



Author's Response:

LOL so true!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 8: time will tell

i love your story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 8: time will tell

Wow... Craig  is such a BASTARD... he runs out of the house without even saying goodbye to the baby first... doesn't give Justin any instructions about Kai's daily routine... or what to expect when Justin meets his brother for the first time......and how could Mikey run to Debbie about Brian's cancer..and not even think to talk to Justin about it first ???  I can't wait to see what happens next.... update soon....... 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Craig feels no connection to Kai and, sadly, has withdrawn himself. This unfortunately happens a lot when a parent's ideals about their child takes a different turn of events. Most parents end up going through the whole mourning process and accepting their child for who he/she is, and then becoming an amazing advocate for them. Others, unfortunately, can't see past the "death" of their dream child, and end up leaving.

Mikey,,, sigh... is Mikey, what can I say? LOL

Thanks for your feedback and comments!!

Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 5: clock it in (episode 408)

I am really enjoying this story so far. But it says that there are 8 chapters, but I;m only getting 5. I don,t know if its just my computer or what. I thought I,d let you know in case there was a problem.

 



Author's Response:

I'm not sure why there is a huge space after chapter 5... I've tried everything I could think of to make it go away, but it just won't!! Chapters 6, 7 and 8 are here... you just have to scroll down on the chapter list. I'll keep trying to fix it!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 8: time will tell

I hope you are writing the next chapters already :-))) I am really hooked :-)) rose



Author's Response:

You are so sweet, thank you!!! I just added another chapter. I had originally planned to write a chapter every night or second night.... but life has been a bit crazy. I'm hoping to update twice a week :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: time will tell

You're killing me here!! I want to see Justin finally meet Kai!! Craig is a jerk for leaving without saying goodbye to his kid. But he's always been a jerk. Nice longer chapter this time. Mikey is indeed in freak out mode. I'm glad Brian at least told Ted, although the first person he should have told was Justin.



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks for yoru comments! Yeah, Craig is a jerk, but I'm going to try to make his asshole behavior slightly more understandable this time around.

Yeah, Brian SHOULD have told Justin... but I liked how in the show he told Ted, so I wanted to keep that scene in there. Justin will find out eventually...

 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 7: TGIF

How cute is Justin, so anxious to meet his little brother!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hope you like the next chapter :)

Reviewer: kwil (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 8: time will tell

Looove this story !!! :D :D

Finally the big moment i'm waiting for. Hope next chapters are coming reaaal soon. Waiting waiting waiting.....



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chapter has just been posted, sorry for the delay.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 8: time will tell

 "If that’s what he wants, then that’s exactly what we’re gonna do." yeah sure.

is craig going off to die or something? he's just leaving like that? omg what a bastard.



Author's Response:

LOL I was tempted to kill him off, I really was! LOL But in the end I decided to show another side of him. Hugs, Snow

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 6: intermission

more please :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Just updated! Thx :)

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 6: intermission

I really like this story. I hope Brian and Justin get back together soon.



Author's Response:

it'll take a few more chapters, but I promise a happy ending :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 6: intermission

OMG.... I can't believe Michael had the nerve to sneak into the loft and listen to Brian's messages.... I  hope Brian comes home and sees him...  Justin seems to be very interested in trying to help help Kai with his speech problem... obviously more than that S.O.B  Craig.... 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comments :) Craig is in denial to the point of not even wanting to do anything with his son.... thankfully, Justin is ready to take on the mission of advocating for his brother

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 6: intermission

Looking forward to Justin finally meeting his brother!! And now Michael is armed with a great deal of information. He's really going to freak out now.



Author's Response:

Thanks for t he feedback! Justin is going to realize that this babysitting gig is more than he bargained for! And Michael is officially freaking out now LOL

Reviewer: dawn (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 6: intermission

Please tell me now if this is going to be a Brian/Micheal fic so I can STOP reading now.



Author's Response:

This is definitely NOT a Brian/Michael story (shudder). No, Michael is going to be in a few chapters here and there, but he isn't the focus. I'm tweaking the storyline a bit so that it's Michael who finds out about the cancer first and not Justin... and Michael confides in someone (not Justin) and gets backstabbed.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 6: intermission

why doesn't justin talk to craig and let him tell him that he's autistic. and as much as i don't care for michael and i think listening to brian's messages is so wrong, thank goodness he did this time.



Author's Response:

Neither Justin or Craig know that Kai has autism right now. Craig is in denial about it, so to him, it's just a speech-issue.

I agree, Michael listening to Brian's message was wrong... but it's Mikey. He doesn't knock when he walks in a room, he invites himself over all the time...he knows it's wrong, but can't help himself.

Thanks for the feedback. I hope to add more soon!

Reviewer: Steph (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: clock it in (episode 408)

Hi

Just wanted to say I really like this story so far!  Can't wait for more (maybe you could make chapters a little longer or more frequent), sorry just really enjoying it. Waiting for the next chapter!

Thanks

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! I have such a short attention span that it shows up in my stories (i.e. short chapters) LOL!! Sorry, I will definitely try to make them longer.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 5: clock it in (episode 408)

excellant chapter. hopefully vic will smack brian around some and make he see how wrong he was abt justin.

love mikie letting izba slip, justin after he thinks about he might figure it out?

sounds like mikie isn't such the justin hater here, finally

can't wait for more, love the storyline. can't wait to meet justin's little brother, wonder if craig will give him any warning about the autism or just let justin deal? glad justin and daphne are talking and preparing for lil bro, what little they know about him

 



Author's Response:

i'm so glad you're enjoying this story! I'm planning to keep Vic around for awhile... he's a good influence on Brian! LOLThanks again for all your comments and feedback. I hope to update again soon! Justin will be meeting Kai soon... chapter 7 probably. Hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 5: clock it in (episode 408)

i for onw am glad justin isn't going to hollywood.



Author's Response:

LOL me too!!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: clock it in (episode 408)

I love it



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 4: Settling in

Great Fic.... but... How does Craig have the BALLS.. to not tell Justin  he has a brother for 2 years!!!!!!  and then call up to ask him to babysit.... I can't believe Justin didn't hang up on him... I hope Brian finally lets Justin know he has cancer..... update soon...



Author's Response:

Craig just assumed that Jennifer or Molly would have told him. I know, he doesn't have much balls, never really did though, did he? lol I'll try to update again soon.. thanks for your comments :)

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 4: Settling in

I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 4: Settling in

What a way for Justin to find out he has another sibling...being asked to babysit!



Author's Response:

lol, i know, that was kind of off the wall...

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 4: Settling in

love it, please more



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 4: Settling in

let's see how he handels this.



Author's Response:

I plan to update every night :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 3: Sometimes it's not enough to know

that doesn't sound like our jennifer. she's more compassionate than that, no matter what.



Author's Response:

Jennifer still feels betrayed by Craig, so there is a lot of hurt in her. She'll come around :)

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 3: Sometimes it's not enough to know

i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 2: The phone call

i lov eit



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! More coming soon

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Fresh air

good start.



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Fresh air

Excellent start, I'm intrigued. Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I just added another chapter :)

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Fresh air

Post more soon the plot sounds really great!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Fresh air

that was definitely much too short, my dear.  ;-)

I love the start of this already.  please keep going, and often! *snerk*



Author's Response:

lol sorry for the shortness, It's my attention span, I'm sure lol

but i'm glad you like it thusfar!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Fresh air

I love it. I can't wait untill the chapter to see where this story goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope to post again very soon!

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