Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Jasmine (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 46: Prizefighter

 I'm so sorry to hear about your RL medical issues and I hope that you get better!! I've missed this story but you came back with a vegenance....I just love Brian in control asking the questions that needed to be asked regarding getting guardianship of Kai.... I hope that he gives Paul a raise! I love that ending.....he left Justin in a bad/good way! LOL!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jasmine! My medical issues haven't changed much unfortunately, but it's okay, I'm dealing :) I'm so glad you are enjoying this story! Feedback keeps me going!! LOL

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 47: TGI....F!

Great chapter, looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 47: TGI....F!

Things seem to be moving along well for everyone...  Brian had his last treatment... and Kai is sitting still and letting Justin read to him... if only "Daddy Dearest" Craig will do the right thing and give temporary guardianship to Justin..without a big fight... things will be wonderful... I can't wait to see how it all turns out.... Thanks...  



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I just added the next installement. Hope you like it :)

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 47: TGI....F!

Fantastic!! Still adoring this fic!! So very good! Loved Justin's reactions to each milestone Kai can get to! Also sooo glad that Brian is finding out all the legal implications for Justin and Kai! It wouldn't surprise me at all if Craig tried to stick Justin with the cost as well as everything else! Thanks for the update hope your medical issues are improving!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad that you're liking this story. I'm trying to touch on all areas :) Thanks again and thanks for your well wishes on my own issues LOL

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 47: TGI....F!

TGIF is a wonderful feeling especially so if it ends such a horrid week. Kai is lucky to have Justin on his side because Craig certainly isn't



Author's Response:

THANKS!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 47: TGI....F!

everything is going good. not too good i hope.



Author's Response:

well, with sun, sometimes there are clouds...

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

That was a lovely antidote to the previous toxicity of Craig's input! Loved that way Justin manipulated him!! Loved the support Brian gave and is giving!! :) Off to gllefully read more! YAY! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you thank you!!! So glad you liked!!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 44: Monday's intake

Just had one of my students - after much pushing from parents and me - diagnosed with asbergers! He will finally get some help but yes the wheels turn very slowly and it is incredibly frustrating for family and others! Why doesn't Craig just give custody to Justin? He makes it perfectly clear he doesn't want either of them. I have one consolation when he dies a lonely old man he will really regret it!!



Author's Response:

That's wonderful for your student! great news :) :) :)

Craig just likes being difficult and wants to know how things will benefit him, and him alone. I'm sure Justin and Brian will be able to convince him ;)

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 46: Prizefighter

I am glad to see an update of this story. Great chapter, looking forward for more. :)

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Lynn! I'm glad to be back online :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 46: Prizefighter

Fantastic .... Brian is getting all the facts about temporary guardianship for Kai... so Justin has all the information he needs when dealing with.. "Daddy Dearest"..... Thanks for the update... I hope you are doing well...



Author's Response:

Thanks, BluvsJ :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 46: Prizefighter

I've missed this story so much. Hope RL is getting beter.

* big hug *



Author's Response:

Thank you, Marny! I just posted another chapter: it's short, but I felt I owed something to my readers for not giving up on this story!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 46: Prizefighter

Me thinks Brian is planning a coup on Craig one day



Author's Response:

He's always ready!

Reviewer: Sissi Parker (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Fresh air

OMG. Thats so sweet. And at the same time so in character for Brian. I love the story and where this is going. All in time, not to rushed.

I can´t wait for the next chapter. But I also hope that you are better now.

All the best Sissi (Greetings from Germany)



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much. I really appreciate your comments and feedback. I'm trying to hard to keep them in character because sometimes I know I would rather they take a different response LOL

I am feeling better, thank you :) Now I just have to keep my computer from driving me crazy...lol

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 46: Prizefighter

missed your updates. great update :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thank you, Rose! I missed writing them!!! ;)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 46: Prizefighter

yay brian. i'm glad he care so much. temporary custody shouldn't be a problem but with craig you never know.

glad this is back. sorry things aren't going well for you, but i hope you're doing better. update whenever you can.



Author's Response:

Craig is difficult for the sake of being difficult!! Thank you for commenting and for not giving up on the fic while I was on 'hiatus' LOL I added a short update a few minutes ago because I felt I owed a little something more to my readers. I'm hoping to update a lot more before my doctor visits start up again in a few weeks.

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

Hi honey, missing you here, please post soon or let us know where can we read it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Luisa! I just added a short chapter and will post a longer one soon!

Reviewer: Whovian10 (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

This such a great story and look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank  you! I finally added another chapter and will update again very, very soon! I'm sorry for the delay!

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

  Another great chapter... I just love the devotion and interaction between Justin and Brian....Brian soooo loves Justin, and know just the way to handle him... I wish your story could have been on QAF because I can just imagine the dialogue coming out of the character's mouth. I also have a complaint, I'm trying to diet and you made me crave cake!! lol...Can't wait for the update...



Author's Response:

That is such a wonderful compliment! Thank you so much for your kind words!

and oh, oh no, I'm sorry I made you crave cake!!! LOL

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

Fantastic.... the two of them make a great team!!!! lol.... that S.O.B. Craig won't know what hit him...if he and his lawyer try to  "Fuck Justin Over".....like they did to Jennifer in her divorce settlement....



Author's Response:

Yep, Craig will be dazed and confused if he tries anything like that...

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

As long as Brian and Justin are together, they can get through anything. Great chapter.

 

 



Author's Response:

Absolutely :) Thanks!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

another great update. :-)) rose

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

Gawd! I love this Brian soooo much. =) He knows just what his Sunshine needs to relax and put things in perspective. ;)

Brian and Justin should really talk about just filing for custody and getting Craig to sign over all parental rights and such, because obviously he has no inclination of being involved in getting Kai the help and care he needs anyway. =)

Another fab update dear! I hope we get more soon, I get antsy when I don't see updates for this awesome story, lol! =) Happy Writing!

<3Alyse



Author's Response:

The seed has definitely been planted!

Thank you so much for your comments and feedback: they mean so much!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

Lovely update, thanks

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

i sooo love it



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

i don't know what brian is cooking up, but it's going to be good for kai and justin. can't wait.

did i ever tell you that i look expectantly for this story. i love it so.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. That means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 45: cherry pie

Still loving this.  I really liked the way you sent Justin to Kinnetic for some silence after being so pissed and frustrated in the last chapter.  Good call.  Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kate! And thanks for your subtle spellcheck there with Kinnetic!!! I wrote it with a K at the end, and kept telling myself, is it C or K. C or K??? One of life's mysteries: solved. LOL

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Fresh air

Finally caught up on reading this. I really love this fic. You have come up with a wonderful and imaginative plot and still kept the boys in character. Can't wait for the next update and I can't wait to see how it ends, although I'm certain that when you do finish it I'll be begging for more. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words!

Reviewer: Fiona (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 44: Monday's intake

I really adore this story. I look forward to the next chapter. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Fiona!!!

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2010 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 44: Monday's intake

  Ok, I menat to say to give Justin his jeep the way only Brian can....excuse the sentence structure, I'm loaded up on Nyquil! lol



Author's Response:

LOL Feel better!!

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2010 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 44: Monday's intake

I hope youdon't get tired of me saying this, but another wonderful chapter! I've been out sick with this bad cold  that I'm finally shaking so this chapter came as a relief....I just love that Brian finally said the "p" word....he so loves Justin, and to give Justin in the way only Brian can (sigh)... I just hate Craig, he's such a horrible piece of crap...Everytime you think he can't do something worse, he does. Why doesn't he do the right thing and give Justin  guardianship of Kai and than he can walk into the sunset with his newest bimbo...grrr! I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I can honestly say that I can never get tired of hearing "wonderful chapter" LOL That's what inspires me to continue! LOL I'm so sorry to hear that you're sick. I hope you feel better soon!!!! Thanks so much for your comments, they mean so much!

Reviewer: Louise (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Fresh air

Your story is absolutely amazing.

I love it.

Thank you sooooo much for writing this.



Author's Response:

You are so kind, thank you so much. I truly appreciate your comments :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 44: Monday's intake

OMG... just when I thought I couldn't hate Craig more ...he does something worse..... he couldn't stop working for 2 minutes and answer the woman's question's ????  Kai would be better off being raised by a pack of wolves... at least they would feed and take care of him better than.. "Daddy Dearest".



Author's Response:

Craig certainly won't be winning any Father of the Year awards, that's for sure!!!

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

Love it! Love It! Love It!

Another awesome chapter with Brian&Justin+Kai interactions. I love how Brian is just basically handing over the reigns to Justin because he knows Justin will handle it with alot more patience and understanding of Brian's moods then the rest of the gang has been.

I just love how sweet Brian is being to Justin and letting him acclimate to the idea and letting him become involved finally. And how he's so patient with Kai and didn't get mad when Kai wouldn't give up his phone or anything, Beautiful.

I hope the snow didn't hit you too bad this last week! we had alot of snow but no power outages. I hope we get another update again soon(maybe today?) Great job! =)

Happy Writing,

<3Alyse



Author's Response:

Hi! I am so happy that you're still enjoying this story!! And yes, that is totally what Brian is doing and I'm glad that you were able to see that in the chapter.

The snow hit us pretty bad...I think after both back-to-back blizzards, my city had a total of 45 inches... I had tried taking the trash out and fell in the snow... it went right up to my ribcage! Brrr... really cold, especially since I hadn't put on any socks.... LOL  But no more power outagages: hooray!

I'm going to try to add an update tonight, possibly two. Thanks so much for your kind words and comments!!!

 

Hugs,

Snow

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

Brian and Justin are too cute. :)

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm hoping to post the next chapter soon!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

ohhhh... I loved it. but how did when confirm that kai has autism?? did I miss something?? :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Chapter 18. Craig tells Justin that Kai was diagnosed with autism. Sorry you missed that one!! But I'm glad you liked this chapter!

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

call me crazy but I really love when there are kids around brian and justin it just so nice



Author's Response:

hehehe, me too. :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

I just love this fic it is moving along nicely I see some angst ahead though as Justin deals with dropkick Craig



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

I know I already said this, but I have to say it again!  Thank you thank you thank you for making Brian come to Justin!  This is fantastic, I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

You're welcome and thank you for all your kind words and feedback! They mean a lot :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

I love this story so much, thanks



Author's Response:

I'm really glad! Thank you :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

Kai loves Brian already! I couldn't help smiling myself when Kai smiled at him! So sweet! The three of them are going to be very good for each other. I'm glad Brian is letting Justin help him.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comments! I'm so happy that you're enjoying this fic :)

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

Love it :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

yay!! Brian's not being closed off anymore. I hope Brian and Justin decide to take over Kai's care full time.



Author's Response:

:) Thanks for your comments and feedback! Neither Justin nor Brian will let Kai slip through the cracks.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

IT WOULD BE NEAT IF YOU HAVE GUS AND KAI MEET.



Author's Response:

Soon!!!

Reviewer: b/jfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

Touching, engrossing, well-written story; really enjoying it! So happy to see Brian back in the picture with Justin and Kai.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to write your comments :) I'm glad that you're enjoying this!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

I love that everything is out in the open.... and that Brian accepted Justin help without putting up a fight.... I know Brian will be a great help with Kai....now neither one has to deal with doing things on their own.... 



Author's Response:

Thanks! You're right, they have each other now :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

i love how brian is doing with kai - maybe because they both have difficulty communitcating? keep up the good work. can't wait for the next bit.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 33: Everything is better with Sunshine

things look good for them, i hope it all works out. maybe while at the hospital someone will talk to justin about kai. that would help alot.



Author's Response:

hmmm... maybe....

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

Glad Brian was honest with Justin. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Lynn! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

I want Justin and Brian to raise Kai!! They are both so good with him. Thank goodness Brian finally admitted everything to Justin. Now they can move forward together!



Author's Response:

It's great that neither one of them feel like they have to go at it alone anymore. Thanks for your comments, Kat!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

This makes my heart so happy!!! Love Brian's first meeting with Kai. He just accepted him as he was, no questions asked. Also LOVE that Brian and Justin are in the same room again and talking!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

I love this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

I'm so happy Justin finally knows the truth. And Brian knows about Kai.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

Perhaps not the most dramatic way for Justin to find out, and most authors would have chosen to go the angsty way, but I appreciate this.  It is the best thing that could have happened, it makes me respect Brian at least a little, and the story can move on.  Nicely done!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kate! I areally appreciate your comments. I had purposely kept the angst out of this scene to keep the flow going, and I think it worked out; and I'm glad it made you respect Brian a bit more because of it. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

I'm so glad, Brian finally told Justin the truth about his cancer. Now I can't wait for their reunion.

It is cute how Brian acts with Kai, so patient and soooo nice. *sigh*

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Meggi!!!

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2010 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

really sweet chapter. love how brian interacts with kai and how  honest  he was. that justin hadn't freaked out it a good thing, but once brian is gone and kai is asleep i'm sure it will happen.



Author's Response:

oh yeah, Justin has a lot on his plate now and he's going to feel it head-on soon.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

I am thrilled that Brian was able to tell Justin in such a calm and rational manner about having cancer... now they can deal with it together .... that really sucks about losing power in the storm... we didn't get much the last time...but... we are due to be slammed tomorrow.... Just think spring is just around the corner.... lol... 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah, we had 30 inches the first go around (and lost power) and then the second one gave us 15 more. But thankfully we didn't lose power!! Yes... I can't wait for spring... LOL

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

love this chapter. this is a great story, one of your best. can't wait for the next update (hope you've got power!)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am so happy you liked it! And hooray, we didn't lose power!

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 32: inquiring minds want to know

::SQUEE!!:: Lol! Omg! That was awesome! Brian FINALLY told his Justin about the damn cancer! YAY!!!! :) And they didn't fight, it was just calm and to the point! Loved it!

I absolutely adore how sweet Brian is to Kai(and Justin). He's being so patient and just going with the flow about having a new(and more high maintanence) person in Justin's life that he has to share Justin with(although he obviously doesn't mind =D). I'm so proud of Brian for finally coming clean about the cancer and even somewhat about his feelings for Justin.

Another great chapter done! Hope there is another update(or two, or three) soon! :) Great job dear!

Happy Writing,

<3Alyse



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words and comments! I'm really glad you liked the scene. I wanted to keep with the calm flow, but I wasn't sure how the readers would accept it. I'm glad you liked it!  Thank you again. I just added another chapter and hope to add more very soon!

best wishes,

snow

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

Oh my God I so love Brian, I just hope  he can tell Justin about him an let him be whit him again.I knew Brian would be very good whit Kai.Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I just added another chpater. I hope you like it!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2010 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

It seems that Justin and Brian are slowly reuniting. :) Looking forward for more. 

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Lynn! It's slow but steady :) and Brian will tell him in the next chapter!

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

More? *makes the sign*



Author's Response:

LOL! Ask and ye shall receive LOL

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

I am sooo impressed with Kai's progress - for him to take notice of a facial expression if huge!! Love that Brian is so obviously accepting and non-judgemental with Kai too a complete contrast to Ethan! Adored the was you said "People trying to fit a star in a square"! perfectly put! Glad I am all caught up but now I want more again, soon please! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I love your comments :) I just added another chapter!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

I just love this story I get so annoyed the chapters are small but at least they are regular lol



Author's Response:

Sorry for the short chapters. I don't have Word, so I have to type it on my email server and then cut and paste it onto this site, so maybe that, along with my short attention span (LOL) equals short chapters. But I will try to make longer ones, I promise!!!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

finally they meet. loved this chapter. I hope there will be more brian and justin and kai in the next chapters :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Rose! I just added more Brian and Justin :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

Wonderful chapter, sitting here with an even bigger smile than two days ago.
So sweet the interaction Brian with Kai.  
But please Brian tell Justin.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I am so glad you're liking this! I'm loving writing it too!! Brian is going to tell Justin in the next chapter. Hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Sami (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

I've been waiting and waiting for Brian's first interaction with Kai. It was cuter and sweeter than I could've imagined. Good Job!

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Oh I am so happy that you thought so!! Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

I've been waiting for this chapter... I love how Brian is so natural with Kai. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!! :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

This is great... Brian already gets along with Kai.... I hope he says something to Justin... or maybe Justin will mention something to Emmett about how tired and thin Brian looks....and Emmett will say something.... Please let someone say something to somebody!!!!!!!  this fic is driving me nuts..... lol....



Author's Response:

LOL I'm sorry it's driving you nuts!! Everything will be out in the open soon in time, it really will! I appreciate your patience LOL Justin isn't one to keep his thoughts to himself, so he is going to start asking questions!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

brian has to tell him.

how sweet to interact with kai to get him what he wants.



Author's Response:

Brian will... he just doesn't know how and is afraid to "ruin" the moment. But Justin is stronger than anyone thinks, and he's not going to back down until he gets some answers.

I'm glad you liked the interaction between Brian and Kai. I gave that scene a lot of thought!

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

OMG!!!!!! YAY!!!! BRIAN&JUSTIN INTERACTION + KAI!!!! GO YOU! YOU ROCK!

Lmao! Loved it, Loved it, Loved it! :D

Awesome, there's not much more I can say about this chapter. Fabulous is another good word to use though :D :D :D haha!

Another great update :) Thx as always for such prompt updates (even if they are still too short :( lol!) Can't wait for the next one, hopefully with lotsa Brian&Justin + Kai interactions and Brian&Justin working out their problems and also focusing on getting Kai away from Craig would be great! :)

Happy Writing

<3Alyse



Author's Response:

LOL omg you are so sweet, thank you! I'm thrilled you're enjoying this story and I will continue to type updates frequently! I know, I know, my chapters are still short, it's a flaw of mine that I am really, really, really working on. Trust me though, they've been even shorter (just look at the first few chapters of Protege Moi!) I think the "Send me an angel" series had good size chapters. I guess it just depends on my brain on a given day LOL!!!

Next chapter will be a continuation of this one, so there will be lots of Brian, Justin and Kai! Thanks again for your comments and feedback!

Hugs,

Snow

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 31: there was a time when...

I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks, Rainbow!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Fresh air

Yesterday I read all 30 chapters. I'm really enjoying the story...thanks a lot for all the quick updates and the great storyline.

Feroza



Author's Response:

I am so thrilled that you are enjoying this! Wow, 30 chapters in one sitting? That in itself is a wonderful compliment, thank you so much!! I hope to update again very, very soon!

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

Ugh! I hate Ethan with a passion that can not be surpassed! lol, Justin's right, a pretentious snob with another pretentious snob, both annoying and fake, do make the perfect couple. :P

Kai was just sooooo cute trying to make his big brother smile again. And running straight to Justin when he was scared or bothered by Ethan was great! That was like...I don't know...completely sweet and shows that he is totally becoming in tune with Justin's moods and is very attatched to him and knows he can trust Justin to protect him(which isn't all that hard when Justin probably spent more time with Kai after just finding out about him than Craig has probably his whole life. ugh.)

Another fabulous chapter, although I could of done without Ethan and maybe get some Brian instead ;D lol! Awesome that you might have another chapter tonight! YAY! Happy Writing. :)

<3Alyse



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I love reading your comments and feedback :) I hope you enjoy the next chapter. I know, I know, Ethan makes me shudder too LOL, but Brian is in the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

I so love this story, sitting here with a smile.



Author's Response:

You are so kind :) Thanks!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

OMG..... Ethan is such a moron... it figures his boyfriend would be a self-centered snob... I am glad that Justin got to finish his project and that Kai seems to be so much happier when their together......



Author's Response:

Yep, Justin is figuring out how to balance school and Kai... and I'm sure seeing Ethan just reinforces his happiness in NOT having a relationship with that jerk.

Thanks so much for your comments!!!! :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

I know Justin wanted to punch Ethan! How rude can one person be! Calling that baby weird! What an asshole.

Loved Kai wanting Justin to smile, that was the sweetest thing and I love that Kai trusts and loves Justin so much.

How cute of Brian to be so excited about finding that chalk in hopes to be able to see Justin to "give it back to him". So transparent! LOL!



Author's Response:

Sadly, a lot of people in the world say things like that all the time... or say something like "do you watch Nanny 911?" or "what's wrong with your kid?" the list goes on and on. It's horrible, and I wanted to show that in this fic, because sadly, there are "Ethans" in the world who speak without thinking. Thankfully however, Justin isn't going to let those comments get to him, and he's not going to let Kai feel mistreated either if he has his way.

The next chapter has Brian meeting Kai. Hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

Kai is so cute wanting his brother to smile. can't wait for Brian to meet him.



Author's Response:

Kai is so used to seeing his brother with a happy face/smile, that it bothered him to see it any differently! He and Justin are creating a deep bond. Brian will meet him in the next chapter :) Hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Jayce (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

well, that's just adorable...baby brother wanted a sunshine smile just like the rest of us...



Author's Response:

:) Kai knows what he likes! :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

that was a great chapter.  kai really needs is attention which he isn't getting from his father but adores it from his brother. i see kai knows the difference between a smile and a frown. he is better than before justin came into his life.

ethan's boyfriend sounds perfect for him.



Author's Response:

LOL Yeah, one slimeball deserves another, right? *smile* Thanks for your comments and feedback! You're right, Kai adores being with his brother, and pays attention to him too!

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

Wonderful update. Yeah...Justin is right...Kai is a good Kid and Ethan is history. *ggg*

Craig should have taken a day off for Kai's sake.



Author's Response:

Craig should, if he were an attentive and caring father. Justin is losing his patience(what little he had) with Craig, and there will be some blow ups soon. Thanks for your comments!!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 29: tapping shoes

I love you story :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thank you, Rose! :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 29: tapping shoes

That S.O.B. Craig is taking advantage of Justin's good nature...he can't interrupt his meetings to pick up Kai...but...he expects Justin to rearrange his classes to take care of his brother....Craig has to start taking more reponsibility for his child...or else let Children's Services investigate him.... BTW... I looked up charcoal sticks to see what they are.... I had thought it was something used to start a barbecue....lol... 



Author's Response:

LOL too funny. Maybe I should have just said "a pastel" or something? LOL

Yeah, Craig is happy to have Justin to use. And of course Justin is never going to say "no" when it comes to his brother. I just added another chapter: hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 29: tapping shoes

Oh poor Kai! And poor Justin - he really should not have to shoulder that responsibility and try to complete uni too! I hope Brian does not get too discouraged f Justin isn't there and I also hope that Daph gets to tell brian a thing or two about Justin's life now! Still loving this fic! More please soon! :)



Author's Response:

soon soon soon!!! thanks for your comments and feedback!! more coming soon!

Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 29: tapping shoes

I love your stories, especially this one. More, please? Thanks.



Author's Response:

that is so nice of you to say, thank you so much! I'm really enjoying writing this one a lot and just added another chapter. Hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 29: tapping shoes

I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 29: tapping shoes

OMG....that's it, it's done, Craig will soon be history, yea? Wow...that last part of the chapter just...irritated me...although I am always irritated when Craig is mentioned not doing something for his son..I'm glad Justin will be there for his brother, and although it's going to be a little difficult juggling school and Kai at the same time, and later Brian and maybe work...I know he can do it, cuz he's strong enough to pull it off.

I lmao'd when I was reading the Brian thing...his thoughts are hilarious when he tries to make himself sound not needy for Justin in his own head, that's just too funny...I can't wait to see his reaction to Kai, I hope he goes to talk to Justin anyway and doesn't just fly off the handle and go into one of his moods like he usually does....we'll see I suppose...

:) Another awesome chapter dear! Keep it up, It's been really good and I just know it'll be getting even better soon(especially when we start getting more Brian&Justin interactions and Brian/Justin&Kai interactions too)! :D Happy Writing!

<3Alyse



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! Yes, soon Craig will be written off... not soon enough, but soon LOL Justin will have a lot to shoulder, but you're right, he can and will do it. He's never been one to back down!

LOL, I'm glad you liked how I wrote Brian's thoughts... I tried to keep it canon! He'll meet Kai soon... very soon :)

I just added another chapter and will try to add another tonight!

THANKS AGAIN!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 29: tapping shoes

kai's smart enough to want his brother, not his father.

of brian is going to be sitting across the street, he'll either see justin leave and folllow him to the daycare, or see justin come home with kai.

would love to know what he'll think then.



Author's Response:

LOL Brian will have some things to process, that's for sure! Thanks for your comments!! :)

Reviewer: melissa (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Fresh air

more! i need more! lol

its great how your writing kei i went to highschool with alot of teens who have different types of autism and its nice to see that your not shying away from how they react to different situations

 

this is like the best story ive read in a long time i hope theres lots more to come our way

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're liking how this is being written. I've been working with children recently diagnosed with autism for many years now, and from experience, I can say that there truly is a spectrum of children, their symptoms, traits and responses to their environment.

That's wonderful that your HS gave teens an opportunity to mainstream into a typical school setting and classes. I wish more counties followed the inclusion focus.

 

Again, thank you so much for your kind words and support!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 28: a taste of distate in a state of grace

OK.... whatever the hell a charcoal stick is... it belongs to Justin..so now he has a reason to see him... the next time Melanie comes over... Brian should find something much heavier than a pillow to throw at her.... lol...



Author's Response:

LOL too funny! BTW, charcoal sticks:  http://images.michaels.com/online/images/product/large/fa0366.jpg  

I used to use them all the time :)

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 28: a taste of distate in a state of grace

I hope they finaly see each other ahgain.Justin will find something is no ok whit Brian.Can't wait for that to happen



Author's Response:

very, very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 28: a taste of distate in a state of grace

I hope they meet and justin seen how brian looks like shit :-)) rose



Author's Response:

soon!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 28: a taste of distate in a state of grace

LOL! So he found something for an excuse to see Justin again! Yippeee! Your description of Brian jus makes me want to hug him better! More please soon! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, dphysh! Yeah, sometimes Brian needs a hug, and Justin will be ready to give him lots of them...eventually. LOL

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 28: a taste of distate in a state of grace

Lmao! Like I said before, Brian is such a shit...but now he's got "something" to make him look less needy...although really...a charcoal stick is just basically grasping at whatever straws he finds so he can talk to Justin without looking (too) weak..lol!

Lovely update as always. Hopefully another one soon. RL permitting and hoping the snow melts.. :D

<3Alyse



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! Yeah, Brian was grasping for straws and found himself a stick ;) Again, thanks so much for your comments and feedback!

Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 28: a taste of distate in a state of grace

Now, Brian has a paddle :)



Author's Response:

LOL about time he caught a break, right? *smile*

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 28: a taste of distate in a state of grace

i hate him like this but i hate melanie more.

yay for the charcoal stick.



Author's Response:

Melanie has always been a bitch, I'm not changing that LOL

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 27: soar

Love it , thanks   * big hug *



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Marny!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 27: soar

Fantastic! Kai will have help! I love the way you describe Justin's attitude to his learning. It is great to see enthusiasm lauded rather than ridiculed. I am just redicavering my love for my job after a really hard year last year so I completely identified! More please soon! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Justin always seemed ambitious, and wanted to capture that in this story. I'm glad to hear you're having a good time in your job! That's always so important, isn't it?! I'll add more later :)

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 27: soar

Seriously...Craig just....there are no words. lol!

And Brian is being such a shit, just frickin call your Justin and tell him you want him to come home, don't think about it, just do it! gah! :D

Anyway, another fabulous chapter my dear! Awesome :) and Yay for updates on the weekend! Have fun and Happy writing! :)

<3Alyse



Author's Response:

LOL thanks! I had meant to write over the weekend, but RL and lots of snow made it difficult LOL I just added a short update and hope to add more soon!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 27: soar

brian should just suck it up and go to justin.

what is craig cooking up? maybe he won't return at all. that would benefit them both.



Author's Response:

I agree, Brian needs to just suck it up and call his Sunshine quick!! :)

Craig is always looking out for himself and no one else... he won't be winning any Father of the Year awards..

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 27: soar

Brian should just go the art store... buy a brush stick it in some paint... and tell Justin he left it.. instead of making himself and Ted miserable.... at least Craig called someone about Kai...which is a step in the right direction...



Author's Response:

I thought about that! LOL (the art store idea) LOL But thankfully, Ted doesn't take anything Brian says too personally, which is always a good thing!

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2010 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 27: soar

I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 26: peach in the orchard

Grrrrr I so want to strangle Craig - I know it wouldn't solve anything but it would make me feel better! AUGH!! As to my guesses - I love trying to predict how fics will go - but if you don't want me to I won't as I really don't mean to 'spoil' anything. I do love speculating though and love fics that make me want to speculate - like this fantastic one!! More please soon! :)



Author's Response:

I love hearing your predictions! Don't ever stop voicing them :) If anything, they can probably help give me an idea if I get stuck on something LOL
Thanks for your comments and feedback: I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 26: peach in the orchard

For the love of Kai. OMG unbelievable Craig wants to abstain from being a parent again. Thank goodness Kai has Justin watching over him.



Author's Response:

Lucky for him is right. There are so many children in Kai's shoes right now in the RW, but I wouldn't do that to Kai in this story :)

Thanks for your comments!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 26: peach in the orchard

Go Justin!!! Craig better call the county about his baby! What the hell is wrong with him!



Author's Response:

Craig is an ass. LOL Thanks, Kat!

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2010 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 26: peach in the orchard

i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 26: peach in the orchard

call child services justin call now and get custady of kia



Author's Response:

I'm so constantly tempted to go that route...

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 26: peach in the orchard

Wow.... that Craig is such a S.O.B...... I am surprised he bothered to give Justin an umbrella and $20 for babysitting.... he should get Child Services involved soon...       



Author's Response:

Craig finds it much easier to pay for services than actually act like a parent. Giving money or an umbrella is so much easier than having a human to human conversation... especially for S.O.Bs... lol

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 26: peach in the orchard

i can't get over how uncaring craig is as far as kai goes. i'm with justin, call child services on his ass. he deserves it.



Author's Response:

Craig was an ass, and will always be an ass. That's just who he is. Thankfully, Kai has a loving brother :)

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 26: peach in the orchard

Wow, Craig is just....ugh

I hope Justin contacts Child Welfare anyway. He needs to get custody of Kai soon.

Anyway, I had just finished reviewing for chp.25 and asking for another update when low and behold what do I find back on recent updates? another chapter lol! awesome. Great job again! Happy Writing :D

<3 Alyse



Author's Response:

LOL I aim to please LOL I'm hoping to post more over the weekend. I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story. I love writing it!

 

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 25: inscribe the undescribe

:grins: Brian is slowly coming around, he'll give into the urge to have Justin's presence soon :P can't wait!

Yay, another happy Kai/Justin interaction. Kai is definitely learning and does seem happier around Justin then when they first met :)

Great update! Hope there is another one(or two or three) soon :D

Happy Writing!

<3Alyse



Author's Response:

I just added a short chapter, and will try to add another one later tonight. I'm so happy that you're enjoying this fic!! Thanks so much for your comments!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2010 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 25: inscribe the undescribe

great update :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thanks, Rose!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2010 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 25: inscribe the undescribe

I am glad that Kai is getting better at trying to communicate with Justin.... I just wish that Brian will find something... anything of Justin's so he could bring it back.....  



Author's Response:

when he least expects it... as life often happens that way lol

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 25: inscribe the undescribe

This brings tears to my eyes! The absolute patience and love that is already there! beautiful! So what is Brian going to take to Justin? Surely he must have left a pencil down the back of the couch, (or Brian could 'borrow' one ffrom Cynthia!) I was just thinking - maybe one dysfunction (Craig) at a time might be all Justin could handle at the moment! More please soon! :)



Author's Response:

lol omg how did you know the direction I was going... lol

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 25: inscribe the undescribe

In his own way, you can tell Kai adores Justin. Probably the most attention he's gotten from anyone, including his father.

I hope Brian calls Justin, he misses and needs him so much. Augh, so stubborn!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kat! I'm so glad I've been able to convey that. A lot of people assume that those with autism can't form healthy relationships, that's a myth I really want to bring out in this story. Kai loves Justin :)

Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 25: inscribe the undescribe

Just thought that I should let you know that I love this fic and I am always looking forward to your new chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Shelly!

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 25: inscribe the undescribe

I love it



Author's Response:

THANKS!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 25: inscribe the undescribe

such a difficult time for them both.

how brian misses him.



Author's Response:

absolutely.

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 24: bridge over troubled water

Brian is an idiot! That's what he is! AN IDIOT! lol. okay, I know I should be sympathetic to his plight since he's going through radiation treatments and such, but it's his own fault that his lover isn't with him and helping him and keeping the "circus" at bay. lol.


I hope they have an actual conversation soon and the Justin gets custody of Kai soon and Brian and Justin and Kai become a family soon...lol, jk, I love how you've made the story as realistic as possible in how things go and the general timeline of how things can really happen and such.


Anyway, I hope you update again soon dear! still loving this story :D Happy Writing!


<3 Alyse

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 24: bridge over troubled water

OMG..... I hope Debbie runs to call Justin as soon as she gets home..... I know Lindsay won't say anything about it.... Thanks for remembering that Brian is "still" part of the story... lol...

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 24: bridge over troubled water

WOW!! That was quite an admission from Brian - pity he needed to be half asleep and sick from radiation to get there! Will Linds tell Justin? Poor stubborn, stupid Brian!! Still adore this!! :)

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 24: bridge over troubled water

*sigh*

Glad Lindz and Debbie are there for Brian but I so hope Brian let Justin help him and feel he is not alone...to hold him in his arms and never let go.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 24: bridge over troubled water

Debbie please tell Justin. Wonderful story, thanks

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 24: bridge over troubled water

justin has to find out. brian needs him too.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 23: you may delay, but time will not

a breakthrough? justin is going to wind up doing it all on his own.

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