Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2019 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

Awww Kai and Justin are all I want <3 And wtf Ethan calling a toddler weird... 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

"What's wrong with him?"

I cringe just reading that. Children are labeled from early on.

"You're a good kid, Kai. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise."

That was the most important thing Justin could have taught Kai.

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

Ugh! I hate Ethan with a passion that can not be surpassed! lol, Justin's right, a pretentious snob with another pretentious snob, both annoying and fake, do make the perfect couple. :P

Kai was just sooooo cute trying to make his big brother smile again. And running straight to Justin when he was scared or bothered by Ethan was great! That was like...I don't know...completely sweet and shows that he is totally becoming in tune with Justin's moods and is very attatched to him and knows he can trust Justin to protect him(which isn't all that hard when Justin probably spent more time with Kai after just finding out about him than Craig has probably his whole life. ugh.)

Another fabulous chapter, although I could of done without Ethan and maybe get some Brian instead ;D lol! Awesome that you might have another chapter tonight! YAY! Happy Writing. :)

<3Alyse



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I love reading your comments and feedback :) I hope you enjoy the next chapter. I know, I know, Ethan makes me shudder too LOL, but Brian is in the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

I so love this story, sitting here with a smile.



Author's Response:

You are so kind :) Thanks!

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

OMG..... Ethan is such a moron... it figures his boyfriend would be a self-centered snob... I am glad that Justin got to finish his project and that Kai seems to be so much happier when their together......



Author's Response:

Yep, Justin is figuring out how to balance school and Kai... and I'm sure seeing Ethan just reinforces his happiness in NOT having a relationship with that jerk.

Thanks so much for your comments!!!! :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

I know Justin wanted to punch Ethan! How rude can one person be! Calling that baby weird! What an asshole.

Loved Kai wanting Justin to smile, that was the sweetest thing and I love that Kai trusts and loves Justin so much.

How cute of Brian to be so excited about finding that chalk in hopes to be able to see Justin to "give it back to him". So transparent! LOL!



Author's Response:

Sadly, a lot of people in the world say things like that all the time... or say something like "do you watch Nanny 911?" or "what's wrong with your kid?" the list goes on and on. It's horrible, and I wanted to show that in this fic, because sadly, there are "Ethans" in the world who speak without thinking. Thankfully however, Justin isn't going to let those comments get to him, and he's not going to let Kai feel mistreated either if he has his way.

The next chapter has Brian meeting Kai. Hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

Kai is so cute wanting his brother to smile. can't wait for Brian to meet him.



Author's Response:

Kai is so used to seeing his brother with a happy face/smile, that it bothered him to see it any differently! He and Justin are creating a deep bond. Brian will meet him in the next chapter :) Hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Jayce (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

well, that's just adorable...baby brother wanted a sunshine smile just like the rest of us...



Author's Response:

:) Kai knows what he likes! :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

that was a great chapter.  kai really needs is attention which he isn't getting from his father but adores it from his brother. i see kai knows the difference between a smile and a frown. he is better than before justin came into his life.

ethan's boyfriend sounds perfect for him.



Author's Response:

LOL Yeah, one slimeball deserves another, right? *smile* Thanks for your comments and feedback! You're right, Kai adores being with his brother, and pays attention to him too!

Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 30: a little ray

Wonderful update. Yeah...Justin is right...Kai is a good Kid and Ethan is history. *ggg*

Craig should have taken a day off for Kai's sake.



Author's Response:

Craig should, if he were an attentive and caring father. Justin is losing his patience(what little he had) with Craig, and there will be some blow ups soon. Thanks for your comments!!

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