Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

"Brian frowns, feeling like he's in the middle of an afterschool special."

LOL!!! Ted wasn't much help.

"Ooo Ooo."

Brings back memories. I remember when my child cried because he wanted his stuffed rabbit. At the time, only my mother could understand him. I understand Justin's frustration and his elation over discovering just what Kai wanted.

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

Heartrendingly sweet!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

Poor Justin he has no idea of the solitary world Kai inhabits. I love how he keeps trying to make a connection. Great story thank you I am really enjoying it thank you Cheers Chris



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words and feedback!

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

Yay! longest looking chapter yet!!! lol.. now try for longer...:) Awesome chapter. Seriously Brian should just get over himself and call Justin already.. :( Love how Kai is beginning to respond to Justin more, and poor Justin, I understand getting frustrated and it was good of him to just remove himself from the situation for a little bit so that everyone could calm down and collect themselves to try again. Loved the train thing. anyway, hope you update again soon! :)

-Alyse



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your comments! I'm aiming for longer chapters, so thanks for that feedback too LOL More coming soon :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

am thankful for ted. brian could use him being around.

justin not knowing about kai infuriates me.



Author's Response:

I've always had a soft spot for Ted :) Yeah, Justin is going to find out soon... I just posted the chapter.

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 16: Baby Blues

I love this story can't wait to see where this leads soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That means a lot to me!

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