Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2012 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 7
Nice Kip angle and Bottom Brian.
Author's Response: Thanks for checking this fic out!
Reviewer: Hannah (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 8
great writing! looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Hannah! I have a few WIPs I'm working on, but I hope to post more regularly in the future.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 6
I stood there for a moment, swaying back and forth, and I wondered when Deb’s lawn had gotten so uneven.
Very humorous! Loved the shower scene.
Author's Response: Drunk Brian seemed to be a fun guy, and they definitely enjoyed showering in canon-lol! Thanks for letting me know what parts you enjoyed!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 5
Now it appears that Dawson’s Daddy has decided I am the fucking anti-Christ and has made it his life’s goal to eradicate my evil ass off the face of the Earth.
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks again!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 4
"You knew he was bad news from the start, and you still gave him a chance.”
Brian should have followed his own advice, LOL.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 3
Jesus, when I was seventeen there was never any hesitation when the opportunity to fuck came up. What was wrong with these kids today?
Very enterrtaining!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 2
...I was in no mood for any bullshit answer from a trick who had obviously stayed for dinner…and now assumed my ass was the dessert on the menu for tonight. “
LMAO! Nice job on the depiction of that first night.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
...truth be told they were all seeking that fucking Holy Grail known as True Love.
I had never looked at it that way. It seemed that Brian was bored with his way of life, not just that night, and the despiction of the rest of the gang could very well hold true. I also loved Brian's interaction with his parents.
Very insightful and interesting first chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, Brian was not feeling very challenged in his life when we first meet him, but he sure ends up getting some excitement pretty quick. Glad you liked this.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 8
simply beautiful, i love every chapter. all seamed so real xoxxxxox
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed this so far.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 4
great start to the story- glad it isn't a death fic- don't read those- love the Brian voice- can't wait for the next update
Reviewer: cynical21 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
Love your insight into Brian's character and the positive/negative aspects of his feelings for Justin. This is exactly how I see him too.
Can't wait for more.
CYN
Reviewer: busysol (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love your take on the characters- especially Brian- and their situations. I also love that you keep 'em coming! I'm a very fast reader, so I appreciate excellent authors that keep supplied- thanks!
Reviewer: cynical21 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
A very nice exploration of the thoughts behind the canon actions. Definitely looking forward to more, and loving your insight into what makes Brian run.
CYN
Author's Response: Thank Cyn, I hope you continue to read and enjoy!!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 2
Thanks for the quick update.... This fic is amazing... it's close to canon...but..slightly improved..... I always wondered what Brian was thinking their "First" time together....
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting. I hope you continue to enjoy it!!
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start....... It's nice seeing things from Brian's POV.... cause most of the times you never know what he is really thinking about Anything.... update soon ... I would love to know how things turn out....
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hi,
I too just wanted to say hello.
So far, I like what I read. You talk about this being a long fic.
Ok! I will be here whenever you publish another chapter.
You have a nice way of writing, it flows nicely
There is no rush, let the story unfold. I did enjoy reliving some
of the QAF story. Justin appearing out of the mist is how it all
starts. At least that is how I see it. I always thought that in the
Museum of Radio and TV is where that lamppost should reside.
Thanks for this new story. I am looking forward to see just how
you include your own creativity and “take” on what happens. It
should be fun.
DavidR
Author's Response: Hi David,
Thank you for the welcome. I am presently working on Chapter 6 and will hopefully be able to keep to a fairly regular posting schedule. I'm glad you like the flow of the story so far. I find certain parts are easier to get a handle on than others, so some chapters may combine several episodes to cover a complete arc and other episodes may be covered by multiple chapters. I'm in no rush and I hope you continue to read and enjoy it!!
I like the idea of the lamppost in a place of honor somewhere...I know I'd go visit it!!
Fran
Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just wanted to drop a line to say welcome & that I quite enjoyed your insight into Brian's mind.
Please keep on posting.
Author's Response: Thank you. I have several chapters completed and will post them as I get used to the format here.
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