Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Timeless
Reviewer: fay (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 4

I like your writing very much, so beautiful and sad.

Please continue update.

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

Okay - I love your writing style, but your storyline - aaahhh!  How on earth are you going to get B/J together given the plot so far.  I am assuming you are planning to have them meet - I could be wrong.

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

Nice scene.  I could see it playing out just like that.

I do enjoy reading your writing.

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 2

I like the realizations slowly hitting folks.

Once again, beautifully written.  I like the writing style of everyone except Brian's thoughts while staying focussed on him.

 

 

Reviewer: black sheep (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 4

wow. i cant get over how exquistely written this is. i mean you really have something amazing going on here! so excited to see where this goes. please write more!!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

I have to do my chapters line by line. I write in Roman Times font at 11 pt. size and post an entire chapter at once by copy and paste. Then I go back and remove the extra space between paragraphs the webiste causes. It takes a couple of minutes but it is by far easier than say Live Journal is for posting your work. I only post on this site and the readers are very nice (mostly!). I wish you success with your stories.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start....  I hope Brian comes to his senses...before it's too late.... I can't wait to read more about Brian's "Inner Sanctum".. update soon... 

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

You have a very nice, lyrical style of writing.  I am looking forward to continuing to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for both your comment and your encouragement.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Welcome to MW. If I may suggest you go and edit your chapter and remove the added spaces the website causes. It makes for a better read.



Author's Response:

Thanks for both the welcome and the tip.  As a novice here, the manner of posting is strange to me.  Is there a way of eliminating the extra spacing without doing so line by line?

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