Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Timeless
Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2011 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 51

Hi,

As  you've probably gathered by now, this is my favorite story and you are one of my favorite authors, both for your style and creativity.  Have to say I was disappointed with this read as I agree that you did not really take us as far as I would have liked, especially since you always give us nice long chapters!  You wrote that you are almost done with this and I am looking forward to a nice, juicy finale but hope you'll continue to write.

Judi



Author's Response:

Sorry to have wrapped it up too quickly.  Sometimes, real life just won't yield to the desires of the spirit.  My medical condition IS getting better, but I still have to pace myself.  Hope to be able to devote many hours to it next week, and make progress toward the end.

CYN

Reviewer: Terri (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 51

Yay! Another fab chapter! I read the latest, then go back and start again. The story holds me enthralled and I look forward to seeing the various strands start to weave together. You're a great writer and I'm waiting for what comes next..... but not too quickly, I'm rather enjoying the suspence and the next reveal!



Author's Response:

Thank you Terri.  I hope you continue to enjoy.  We're getting there, but not just yet.

CYN

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 51

He ate; he dozen periodically  wtf, better get yourself a beta



Author's Response:

Ummmmm - you first????  :-)

CYN

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 51

okay I'm a little lost here.  My understanding is they are taking the Club down and I expect that Ted is going to get his comupance.  My question is....what are they going to tell Justin!  Your next chapter hopefully will have all the ending neatly wrapped in Red Ribbon or not.  Whichever way you end up there will be plenty to have enjoyed this Timeless Tale.  Bravo!!!



Author's Response:

Not quite red-ribbon wrap-up time yet, but we're getting there.  As you might imagine, it is a hell of a job trying to tie up all the loose ends and address everything along the way.  But I'm giving it my best shot and hoping for resolution within the next three or four chapters.

Thanks for your enthusiasm and your support.

CYN

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 51

Great chapter and wonderful story.  As I had mentioned in


earlier feedback, I knew something was up with Jackson as


you mentioned him several times in ‘odd’ ways.


 


Nice parallel between Redding’s relationship and Brian and


Justin. Redding did what he thought was the right thing, and his


love died anyway – without him.  Let Brian think that over and


over and over. 


 


What was that about Ted.  Why are they looking into his


employment files.  Are they just building a case against The


Club, or is Ted in more trouble?


 


Flagg?  Geez, what a mess!  Let’s just leave it at that.  I do feel


sorry for him.  Maybe as suggest, he could find a way to help


others – like Brian, as he is doing.  Maybe that will help. Is he


too old to work for the FBI?


 


Yes, there are still many answers to many questions.  How is


Brian’s  eyes?  Etc…etc…etc.  Whatever – future chapters will let


us all know.  Thre is no rush, I will be here for the next chapter


and how many more chapters there are.


 


Again, thanks for this terrific story.


 


DavidR



Author's Response:

And I also love the un-pithy type.  Lovely to get in-depth commentary.  Thanks so much, David.  You always strike straight to the heart and bring up wonderful points.  I hope you continue to be interested and pleased.

CYN

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 51

You are definitely the best!



Author's Response:

I do adore a pith review.  Thanks so much for your generosity.

CYN

Reviewer: vikki (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Cyn, Love your writing. You captivate me with the vivid landscape of your imaginatin.  Please continue..as quickly as possible!!!!

Reviewer: honeybear (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 51

no no no you cannot possibly be heading in that direction.  Brian's life will be just as empty as Reddings is

 

"And she still died, and I was still alone. If I hadn't done 'the right thing', things might have worked out differently. We might have managed to build a life together. But that didn't happen, and now . . . now I'll never know what might have been."

 

After everything this couple has been through they deserve at least some sort of peace in their lives, and I don't see separation as peace for either of them



Author's Response:

I never promise anything, but I try to remain ever unpredictable, and I hope you'll be OK with where we're going.  And I should point out that I have mentioned, once or twice, that this might be only the first part of a series.  So don't give up on them, OK?

CYN

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 51

That's the truth.  Brian had better not think he's going to protect Justin by leaving in secret.  Justin will find him wherever he is.  At least I hope.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your interest, and this bears repeating:  NEVER, NEVER underestimate Justin.  The simple fact that there are other aspects of Brian's life does not, in any way, mean that Justin is not the primary mover and shaker.

 

CYN

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 51

Ok so we have some answers but I still have to know what is gonna happen with the Club and what about Brian and his eye sight and... oh gawd there are so many questions unanswered still...it's frustrating and amazing at the same time.

Cant wait for the update Cyn

Marla



Author's Response:

More answers coming as soon as I can.  A couple of really nasty kidney stones decided to pop in and mess up my life, for the moment, but I'll get to it as quick as I can.

CYN

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 51

Wow, thank you!!! it's great, hope you update more soon, really good! I love Chris!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I kind of like him too.  I've never quite understood why loving Justin (which I do whole heartedly) has to automatically equate to hating anyone else that might be a good part of Brian's life.  Thanks for your lovely comment.

CYN

Reviewer: Kemma (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 51

Thanks for another intense chapter!  I look forward to the conclusion of this story, simply so I can go back and reread from start to finish. There's so much to digest, I'm starting to get a bit confused!  Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

OK - doing my best to offer some kind of responses to your lovely comments.  I never have much time, and this week has been a real killer as I spent the first half in ICU and the last half confined to my bed by a stubborn doctor.  But it's getting better, and your support and interest certainly help.  More as soon as I can.

CYN

Reviewer: cynical21 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 50

A big hello to all, preceeding an apology which is probably getting to be an old familiar song by this time.  Nevertheless, it's necessary.  The next chapter is in progress - I promise - but it's not done yet.  Unfortuntely, real life gets to be a drag this time of year, when auditors and government budgetary constraints get into the mix.  In a word, it's been crazy, so I just haven't had the time to spend composing and polishing.

But it is coming along, and I'm hoping it will be ready to post by next week-end. If I weren't so detail-fixed (some might say compulsive) it would be easier, I guess, but I just can't post it until I feel like I've made it the best it can be.  I hope you'll forgive the delay and enjoy the end result.

As always, my gratitude for your interest and your patience.

CYN

Reviewer: Eucebo (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2011 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 50

I've finally caught up with this story, even though it took me a while because there was just soooo much to read before getting to the good parts!! ;P hahaha Just kidding!

Anyway, I'm finally here with the rest of you, so I'm screaming for an update already!! it's been exactly a month since this last chapter was posted so is about time for a new one!

CYN, you can imagine by now what a big pain in the ass I'm going to be, insisting on updates all the time becuase I was used to read some part of this everyday and now... now I'm going to have to wait with the rest of your fans here, mere mortal readers, eager to experience a little bit more of the B&J timeless story....

So please, update already!!! ;D

 

see ya!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2011 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 50

This is just me but I really feel that using God and Jesus Christ name in story like this or any story should be replace with other word's or names.   

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 3

This story is certainly headed to become one of our Best Fanfiction Classics once it is completed.

This is a new honor higher than a blue ribbon featured status and awarded only once to an author. See further details under Categories.

The quality of this huge novel is quite superior and most deserving. You certainly have the right stuff to be a published author with original characters. The fans you have here totally adore you  too and look forward to your updates. We are very grateful you have published here.

Reviewer: Galslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2011 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love your story

xd toppy justin , once ..plss <3<3<3<3

 

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 50

OK I am more than happy for this installment, buuuuut I am not happy that you are giving us another cliffhanger!

Why did they not check Jackson? Why was it Cynthia who figured it out first? How come Redding knew about it? ARRRGGGGG!

I love this story but you are driving me mad with it....

Keep it coming!

Marla

Reviewer: argentine65 (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2011 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 50

My friend: you made us suffer during these two chapters but finally Brian is going to be OK. But I wonder how Cynthia and Chris knew Brian was in danger. And what about Babylon, it is ok?. Thank you so much for sharing. Martha

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 50

OMG this story is so hard at times and I only have to read it you write it!. Thank you for saving Brian but OMG this is so scary the bastards are so determined to kill him. Loved that Brian had to wake from the coma because Justin just would not shut the fuck up lol xoxoxoxox thank you so much Chris

Reviewer: Sean (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2011 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 50

I love this story. Its my first ever Queer as folk story and its amazing :) Im already obsessed!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2011 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 50

You are the best!

Thank you.

about: "...It would only happen again over his dead body, and that was a promise..."

oh my... those words...

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 50

thank you for not leaving us with another cliff-hanger! excellent as ever

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 50

Oh my! Where to begin?  At the beginning!  

Jackson? Jackson was the mole? You could've knocked me over with a feather! I had no idea something was wrong until he went in the kitchen and looked at the item in the tote bag!  At first I thought everything up until then was going to be an attempt to seduce him, then when he looked at the item in the tote bag, I got a bad feeling; I thought maybe he was going to rape him but when he just coldly killed him (he thought) I was absolutely stunned! That was delightful!! (your writing, I mean, not killing Brian! LOL)

And, OMG! How on earth did you make it so exhilarating to read about the race to save Brian's life? I already know it's not a death fic so I knew that ultimately he wouldn't die from what Jackson did; but if you aren't the master at getting a reader's adrenaline pumping, then I don't know who is! 

The alternating Brian's thoughts/Justin's speech parts were sheer and utter brilliance!  I could feel the progression of Brian coming up out of his subconcious mind to the surface.  I LOVED that the first thing he said to Justin was to shut the fuck up!  Classic Brian!  Genius YOU!  I am so glad you let him wake up in this chapter!  I can imagine that it was tempting for you to leave it for next time but you were probably afraid we'd find you and burn your house down! LOL

Also, who can resist protective!Justin!  He was hot when he had the big bad FBI agent in a choke-hold up against the wall!  :-D

All in all, a very satisfying chapter!  I've already decided that when the whole thing is over, I'm going to re-read it from the beginning coz' I know there's probably a ton of litle details I've overlooked.  

Hugs, hugs, hugs!! Cindy

 

 

Reviewer: Joe (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 50

Wonderful chapter with a lot of drama and a lot of excitement.  I really like how you played it out with the set up of Jackson and the way he carried out his plan.  I also loved the mind talking within Brian and how he worked through his coma and came out of it in such a way.  As for missing the missing link in the horrible things that happened well, we all are human and I think it may lead to more informatiion in the end that may help him out.  Joe

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 50

I knew it had to be the PT guy! Because he was a last minute replacement right?  I  so love Emmett and Cynthia. And Justin's in and out of a coma speech..that was great.  

Look forward to the next chapter. I want to know how it ends but I don't want it to end. Sort of like QAF in general (with some modifications of course on the case of the show.).   

Reviewer: Helenann23 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 50

I LOVE THIS STORY.....I WAIT ON PINS AND NEEDLES TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

I HAVEN'T REVEWED FOR AWHILE BUT I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW I HAVE NEVER LOSS INTEREST IN THE STORY AND AM ALREADY DREADING THE ENDING.     I    LOVE   THIS     STORY!!!!!!

HELENANN23

Reviewer: Jessie (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 50

I've followed this story from the beginning and I'm a fan of it and this makes it even harder to write...I know that I might have an attention span of a gnat, but I just can't follow this story any longer...I was excited about it at first, it seem so fresh and new ,but now it seems so neverending....I keep wishing you finally end it and don't mean to be harsh, but it just seems like too much is happening and maybe, I just like my stories simple but you seem to be in love with your own writing...I guess what I'm trying to say though you're a good writer and you deserved that blue ribbon, I've just lost my interest in this story.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 50

you really should just kill him off. make it better and easier for all concerned.

Reviewer: Eucebo (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2011 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 32

YAY!!!!!!!!!!! JUSTIN'S GOING TO SEE BRIAN!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! OMG!! OMG!! FINALLY!!! YESSSSSS!!! JUSTIN'S GONNA FIND BRIAN!! JUSTIN'S GONNA FIND BRIAN!! JUSTIN'S GONNA FIND BRIAN!! WWWWWWIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!! I'M SOOOO HAPPY!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Reviewer: Eucebo (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2011 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 31

Ok, ok, I'm halfway through this chapter and now I've found my answer about the time line thing. According to the description of Agent Corey's activities, between the lunch at kinnetik (that was the same day that Justin found out about the secret room) and the day she gets to the beach house (that's the day when Brian's recuperation is mentioned and also when his relationship with McClaren takes a turn), Agent Corey had to spend a few days (maybe a little over a week?) in Washington, therefore it means that Brian has been at the beach house for at least 2 weeks, maybe a few days more, giving me a time line where is safe to assume that up until now it's been about a month since the night of the attack, the night of Justin Art Show.

So, I’m satisfied with that :D

So, no questions to answer - not right now, anyway. I'm sure I'll have more later on but, like this story just prove to me, all the answers will come, sooner or later :P. I guess I got confused because the story developed further on in one chapter and the explanation for the time line came in the next, but hey... I'm just anal like that, haha.

I just wanted to share my thoughts here... although, I can't imagine why would anybody care, hahahaha.

 

See ya!!

Reviewer: Eucebo (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2011 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 30

Hey CYN!!! I just saw your answers!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I know you don't really have time to answer everyone so I TRULLY appreciate that you took the time for me. And also.... now I feel a bit bad about my latest comment, hehe :S. I sincerely hope you don't take badly the things I've said. I understand perfectly what you meant about it being your story and so you write the characters the way you saw them. In fact, I think you have a point in the things you've mention about Ted and Melanie in the show, therefore I completely see why you decided to present them this way... I guess I just wasn't prepared for such a big demonstration of hatred coming from Melanie in such a delicate moment like the one Brian was going trough. And Ted... well, I guess I did saw him a little bit more like you do, but I wanted to believe he had change :S

Now, about what I just said in my last comment about Brian... let's agree to the fact the everyone has different perceptions of the same characters, and I respect yours completely, since most of what I've read here is exactly like the Brian Kinney I fell in love with. Therefore, if you want to explain something about your perception of him and why you think is totally like him to build that room, than I promise I'm completely open to hear it all and to respect it. But if you don't want (or don’t have time to invest in such stupid questions, hahaha) I also completely understand and respect your decisions, because, like you said, it is your story and I'm ENJOYING IT WITH ALL MY HEART! ok?? :D I swear, sometimes I don't realize what I say and how I say it until it’s too late and someone else might miss interpret it. Meaning, I love your story just as it is and all my comments are done without ill intentions, just for the fun of discussing something that I love and learn other people’s views on the matter. You know how is like when you go to the movies with a friend and then you grab a coffee and discuss your opinions about it? Well, this is the same for me, I need to discuss it, how I’ve felt about it and maybe even let the other person change my mind about something that happen, because their view may make more sense to me that what I understood in the first place… Is just part of the fun of it, that all :P

 

See you soon!!!

And keep up the good work!

Eu

Reviewer: Eucebo (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2011 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 30

oooooohhhhhhhhhh mmmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyy Goooooooooooooooooodddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M FALLING IN LOVE WITH McClaren!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why did you had to make him so.... FUCKING PERFECT!!! I'm beggining to doubt if I want Justin back with Brian now!!! fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck!! I mean, I do want Justin, but I want McClaren too!!!!

And, anyway, 2 questions: first, how does the time line go here? I mean, if Brian already had a couple of procedures, then he has to have been in the South for at least a month! because is imposible to operate so quickly so many times on the same person. And also, if his fractures are healing and, considering that he was in the hospital for about 2 weeks, well... I speak from experience here, bones that break take between 4 and 6 weeks to heal, so....... I'm just asking about this because if Justin talked to Cynthia a couple of days after Brian left the hospital and now Brian is so much better (not to mention the developments in his relationship with McClaren, I mean... that can't happen over night!), then WHY THE HELL JUSTIN ISN'T THERE WITH HIM YET?!?!?!  I might have miss read the part of the story where time passes, but I just can't remember because all those things about Ted... well, I don't really give a shit anymore, I just want to see what happens to Brian and Justin, heheheh :P

And second -this is more of an observation than a question-, I felt a bit weird about the whole secret room for the paintins in Brian's loft. I mean, I know that he loves Justin, but that's sooo not like the Brian from the Show! I've had other moments in this story, so far, that I wasn't quite convinced that the Brian I was seeing was the same Brian I knew, but I let them pass because, well, its been a year since Justin left, then the attack happen and he almost died, so of course Brian wont be exactly the same and he has a right to be a little emotional, but... the Room? that he made HIMSELF??.... that happened previous to all this and, to me, it happen to the Brian that I last saw on the show, so is kinda out of character in my opinion... Nevertheless, I know I'm still 20 chapters behind, so is not like CYN can change any of this now -and not that she should change aaaaanything at all just because of my opinion! nonono- I guess I'm saying this just to vent my thoughts, hahaha.

Btw, CYN, I'm a Book Editor in my country, so I'm inclined to look for every single detail, so don't take it personal, ok? I mean, you've said you don't use a beta, so is logical for it to be some discrepancies in the story, right? And besides, I haven't even point out the little things like the name of the news person that meets up with Monty a few chapters back, and that you named in 3 different ways (Finch, Fincho, Pincho hahahahaha). I'm sorry, I sweare is nothing personal!!! :D

 

Loveeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!

Eu

PS: and sorry for all the spelling errors that I'm sure I have, like I said before I'm from Argentina, my first language is Spanish and right now I'm too wired up to even re-read what I've post in here, hehe. See ya!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 49

This is a wonderful story and you are a wonderful writer but these questions unanswered and cliffhangers are just killing me.  I really hope to see an update soon because I just can not seem to get enough.

Reviewer: Eucebo (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2011 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

(Sorry about all the spelling and grammar errors, like I said, my first language is Spanish and sometimes I forget to check with a dictionary before I post my comments :P)



Author's Response:

Hey - me again.  Just to clarify, it occurred to me (but only AFTER I'd hit the post button, of course) that it might have sounded a bit harsh to remind you that it's MY story.  That wasn't meant to come off as a way to blow-off what you said.  All it meant was that this is the way I see them, in order to write this particular story.  It's certainly up to you whether or not you agree, and you are certainly not required to do so by any means.

So that's just me saying, "Sorry.  Didn't mean to come off as a complete jerk."

CYN

Reviewer: Eucebo (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2011 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hello Everyone!!

I have a couple of questions that, if not the author, I hope someone here can answer them for me (without giving spoilers because I'm just in chapter 20!).

First of all, I will like to know what PDQ means, since I've seen it a couple of times and maybe is something obvious to people with English as a first language, but mine is Spanish, so I do miss some stuff no matter how well I speak and understand your English.

Second, this is more for the author, but if anyone else can tell me is ok: I saw that Ted and Melanie are not written as the biggest fans of Brian, but since I just saw the hole series (and I still re-watch it from time to time) I manage to believe that they aren't like that in the show. I mean, Melanie will always be a little jealous of Brian and maybe she'll never actually like him like the rest of the gang, but she didn't hate him as much as I see she does here. In fact, her whole attitude about what happened to him seems really off to me... She's not that much of a bitch in the show.

And Ted, well I thought he had formed a really tight bond with Brian ever since he went to work for him at Kinnetik, so I don't understand where all that hostility about the way Brian runs his busyness come from.

Can anybody tell me (without spoilers of this story) if there attitudes have a different foundation that I might not have picked up? or maybe they'll realize later on that there feeling were product of something else, like fear, or something? I mean, I just can't see them like such petty jealous people like they're painted here, that's all.

For now that's all I have to ask, I know I'm forgetting something, but I can't realize what right now.Thank you very much to anyone that might respond, even if you can't answer the Mel and Ted questions.

See ya!



Author's Response:

I hardly ever respond to comments - which makes me both a terrible, horrible thoughtless person - and so damned busy trying to get through real life that I just don't have the time.  Which doesn't excuse it, but might just explain it.  However, I just wanted to take a moment to respond to your questions.

First, PDQ is the abbreviation for Pretty, Damned Quick.  Self-explanatory, I think.

Second - and much harder to explain - are my feelings about Melanie and Ted.  As for Melanie, though she had her moments, I never did really warm up to her.  It always bothered me tremendously that she could always blame Brian for everything, do her best to interfere with his life and his relationship with Justin, and never give credit for the incredibly generous things he did for her, Lindsey, and Gus.  But even more than that, I despised her act as the Wounded Party in the whole Sam story arc, when she did exactly the same thing early in the series with another woman.  AS far as I'm concerned, married or not, man or woman, there was no difference.  It was just her chance to do her version of a queen out and insist that the world take her side.

As for Ted, he was not really a bad person throughout the series, but he did a few things that I found really hard to forgive - especially in his treatment of Emmett when he threw him out of his life.  The things he said to him were almost unforgiveable, and I don't much like people that brutalize Emmett.  Plus, there were the times when he was so eager to condemn Brian and gloat over any hurt he might endure.  Maybe he made up for it in time, but even in the end, when Justin moved in with Micheal and Ben, he was still taking just a little too much enjoyment out of watching Brian hurt.  And - AHEM - I don't forgive people who get off on watching Brian hurt.

You, of course, are free to disagree.  But this is how I see it, and it's my story, isn't it?  Although there is some possibility that, in the end, one of the two might just manage to claim redemption.  Still making up my mind about that.

Anyway, thanks for commenting, and I hope you continue to enjoy the ride.

CYN

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 49

Great chapter.

Tjere were those 2 references to Jakcson in the prior chapter that seems unususl.  Maybe?  Maybe not!

Stange that Chris would leave Brian alone when he is under mild edation.   That seemed to me a mistake as Brian is kind of defenseless.  Then again, maybe not.  We will see.

This is just one terrific story.

Thanks,

DavidR

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 49

Oh my God, you're killing me!!!!!! Update soon, please!!!!

Reviewer: Eucebo (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2011 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 49

You are going to kill me!!! I'm new here and I'm reading your story, and so far (I'm just in chapter 14!!)  is the best I've read! granted, of course, that like you say, you're obsessed with details and sometimes they get a little... too much for me, but still... I love it! poor Brian!!!!!! and I see that I still have so much to go before I get to this chapter, so I'm doing my best not to read anything, but I had to comment on this. I hope you're wraping this story soon only because I want to make sure I will go back to sleep (everynight I stay hours reading, I can put it down!).

So, thank you for using your time to write this and posting it for all of us fans - I'm actually a new fan too, I found out about QAF only recently and I watch it all in less than 2 months! And even though I'm a 28 years old straight Argentinian woman, I fell completely in love with Brian Kinney and Justin Taylor and their love story. So I'm really, really, really hoping (even though I know you've said you don't do "sweet, frothy, happyly-ever-after") that you make a good ending for them. Because, otherwise, with everything you've put brian trough, I'm afraid he might just end up actually killing himself or something... and for bad endings, we already had the actuall end of the series, don't you think?? 

 

Thank you again for all your effort! and I'll see you here on the next chapter, hopefully by then I'll have catch up with the rest ;D

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2011 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 49

amazing.  wow what an ending. can't wait for the next chapter. thanks DEB

Reviewer: noooooooooo! (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2011 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 49

cliff hanger indeed! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease say it wil all be ok!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 49

ARRRRRRGGGGGG!!!!!!

This is soooooooo unfuckingbelievable! What did I miss?

Please please please don't keep us waiting for too long for the next installment, I cannot afford to go back and read the entire story at this time, simply not enough time.

Despite all, I love it!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 49

I know you warned me but dear God WHAT  WHAT IS HAPPENING! Another heartstopping chapter I have no idea who or what has happened but all through the chapter the sense of forboding was so tangiable. Thanks so much for this gripping story

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2011 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 49

Oh!  You mean, mean person, you!  How can you leave us all on edge like that?  Except of course, that you are brilliant.  I love your stories.  I love the tension.  But I think the thing I love most is the love all the characters have for Brian.  They seem to know how important he is to all of them.  However, they don't fawn, if anything they express their gratitude for his place in thier loves with as many depreciation as appreciation.  It makes it more like life, because we all have the person we need and we need to argue with.

Another thing, I want more Emmett!  Please?  I miss him.  He is so strong and sure even when he is trembling.  And you write him so well.  So more Emmett!  Better yet, more Emmett and Brian!  You make them clash so companionably. 

And lastly, do what you need to do.  I'll reread while I wait.  :) 

Reviewer: Joe (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2011 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 49

Very good chapter so much going on and the tension build up and the fear of what may happen.  The therapist is in the mood to be bad and to hurt Brian but I think I think just maybe he may be in for a surprise.  I also fear that something else is going to happen to the peterson's and the club.  So much and you are so good.  The only typo I saw was Tax for Taxi when Justin was talking about New York.  I also loved how the connections between everyone has strengthened and grown in this chapter you amaze me.  Joe

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 49

Oh my God! Who is it?  I'm wracking my brain! Tall, dirty blond hair, shirt with a logo, trucker style hat, Cynthia should have recognized him before, Chris knows him ... UGH!  This is driving me crazy!!  

The image of Brian with blown pupils and the thought of him losing his sight is breaking my heart!  Especially after the description of what beauty means to him and how devastating it would be to never see Justin's face again!  

I'm liking this weird sort of kinship between Chris and Justin; I have mixed feelings about it, but that's a good thing in a fic, I think!  :-)

I hope the next chapter is in the works because I don't know how much longer I can hold out not knowing who this person is that Chris and Cynthia are afraid of! 

Huge hugs!!  Cindy

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 49

well, I'm glad that you are acknowledging how evil you are - leaving us like this!

This story was the first I read here on MW, and it's still going strong, leaving me on the edge of my seat (it's not nice to leave a fluffy old grandmother on the edge of her seat for this long - lol - not nice at all)

there is still so much to tell in this story - and I just love every minute of it

of course - being ridiculously romantic as I am - the best part will be when our boys are reunited - and the danger has passed - but I sure am enjoying the trip to get there

please update soon!

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2011 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 48

Hi,


 


Thanks for another terrific.


 


Sometimes you throw a line or two out there they just seem a little


weird.  Being the terrific writer you are, I bet they have a special


meaning that we will soon find out.


 


Describing the therapist, what does this have to do with anything?


              “Cynthia noticed that he looked very different today.”


You go on to describe his mode of dress.  Ooooh! This does seem kind


of strange.


 


In that last paragraph we read,


       “……with Jackson moving toward the deck,


         pushing a gurney carrying a plastic carry-all, and she felt


         a faint flicker of memory stir in her mind. But it was only


         a flicker,…..”



Oooops, is there are message in that line?  What does that mean? 


 


Of course I do not expect or even want a reply.  Let the story answer


my suspicions.


 


I hope you take this as a compliment to your writing how deeply I read


this wonderful story.


 


Thanks again,


DavidR


 


 

Reviewer: sxynbtful (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 48

Let me say I check everyday for updates.  I have read this story over and over again and when I get to the end and realize it is not done I wish I never did.  This needs to be a movie. It is the best one on this webstie and I have read alot. It really stays true to the characters fromt he show where some stories does not.  You keep them just the way they are and that is good.  I wish you can give us 3 chapters at a time instead of those 1 chapter teasers.  Maybe you sdo rough drafts and someone types it.  IDK. YOU SHOULD REALLY TRY SHOPPING THIS INTO A BOOK OR MOVIE.  I THINK IT IS REALLY THAT GOOD. PLOT AND STORY LINE IS GREAT.

P.S. almost cried in this chapter. kind of reminded me of the last episode of the series

 

Reviewer: ycorgigirl (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2011 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 48

While I have to admit that I don't like to wait so long for a new chapter, they are always worth the wait.  While not a lot actually happened in this chapter is has set up a number of things for upcoming chapters very well.  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: fantastic (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2011 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 48

wow, that final scene with Brian and McFed is a killer.... is he really REALLY going to go blind?!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 48

Well if that wasn't a cliffhanger, I don't know what is!!!!

It is always good to follow up on Timeless, and so if you need your time with the story, I for one have absolutely no problem waiting for the new update.

Now on the story, what is gonna happen to Brian? I need to know by the next update *pretty please* don't keep us waiting.

As for the story with Mel and the hearing, I would also love to see it resolved in one update, as there more important features to your story to explore, such as Ted and The Club thing and of course the return of the mighty Kinney in the Pitts.

Now that I think about this, I can see of the top of my head a confrontation of The Club with Ron Peterson as he reveals secrets of the Club to the police and maybe have Lindsey and Gus be kidnapped and held until Brian can make a hasty return to Pittsburg to resolve the situation and solve his case... *I am watching too much TV LOL*

I'll be waiting for the next update.

Marla

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2011 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 48

Fantastic!  I had tears in my eyes at the end of this latest installment.

Reviewer: susie (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2011 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story...thanks for the update.  I check all the time.  Please don't let Brian lose his site. I hate to say it but I want a happy ending.  I want Mel and Ted and the all the other rotten people to get what they deserve.  I would hate it if something bad were to happen to Brian after all of this. So again thanks for the great chapter and I await the next one.

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2011 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 48

I check almost daily to see when the next chapter will show up. Don't want to miss it. I usually print it up and sit back and read with enjoyment until the end. I never want the chapters to end, and then half the time I feel anxious because I don't like those "distant shadow was forming on the horizon far out to sea, the first harbinger of a rising storm." endings. Our boys have been through so much I don't want to think of them having to endure more pain. LOL I am always looking for that fairy tale ending.

Reviewer: Terri, Sydney, Australia (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 48

I always do a snoopy dance and read the new chapter immediately - I'm not into delayed gratification, though every one of your chapters is worth waiting for.  Keep going, don't stop!  I really can't imagine how difficult it must be to keep track of such an intricate and complex plot - I have to keep going back and re-reading previous chapters, which in no way detracts from the enjoyment of the story.  And you really don't need a beta, you're doing great!!!! Awaiting the next installment with bated breath ................

Terri

PS is installment one "l" or two?

ps2 I really liked Ted in the show - is there no way he can redeem himself?

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 48

I guess I will wait any length of time for an update if they continue to be as good as this one.

I loved the stuff with Mel but then I love anything that makes her look bad.

I hope Brian is wrong and the storm coming is not as bad as he is sure it will be. I need a happy ending and not just for Brian and Justin but for Brian and Gus as well.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 48

Another brilliant chapter I loved the pain shown by everyone at the thought of being apart. I will be so sad when this ends thank you so much for such a wonderful fic we are so privliaged to be able to read it. thanks Chris

Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 48

Just wonderful, I loved the way Gus and Brian discussed things and well  Mr. Peterson is learning and growing himself even though hard to accept I think he is making progress.  I do feel for Michael, Ben and Debbie they are so scared of losing JR and well I think Iam is a talented man it may be a hard battle.   Although I also think they have a chance especially if Lindsay takes the stand for them.   As for Brian and the therapist I fear something terrible is going to happen even more so than the prospect of his vision being gone.  I fear that someone will make an attempt on his life again and come closer this time.   If he does lose his vision I think he will still have an eye for beauty that is something that comes from within anyhow.  Thank you for continuing to write and I look forward to more.  Joe

Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 48

Beautiful chapter!!  This is easily my favorite story.  I am in no hurry for this story to end.  Sorry for not commenting on the last few chapters...real life got in the way.  I get so excited when I see an update.  Thank you for this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 48

As always a wonderfully written, nice long chapter.  It's like seeing a picture and eperiencing their emotions just reading this.  Okay, here's to hopes that Melanie gets her comeupance.  That we learn what Emmett is up to.  I wonder if JR misses Gus and will she miss her mama once it's all said in done.  And how Brian's developing loss of sight, I'm just guessing here, developes. Great, great, great chapter and looking forward to more when ever you post it.

Reviewer: kris (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 48

this story needs to be wrapped up.  i have been reading it forever once in a whilke.  i've about given up.  so finish it already.

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 48

Another beautiful chapter, Cyn. I really like the way you are protraying all of these characters. They are all so well rounded and have so much depth. The dramatic irony here is killing me, though! :)

Reviewer: mayday (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2011 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 40

♥♥♥ This story has been amazing and I just started readind it two days ago but I wanted to tell you that your style, plot and characterization is above and beyon anything else I've read in this fandom.♥♥♥

Reviewer: evelyne corbin (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

i am very sorry that i write a  comment so late i mean i have read some chapters of your story before ...but may be i had no courage or ,,,i am not sure what ...to leave a comment... or not...i was busy with my work these weeks and i had no time for visiting this site... i want to say that i read your story very, very slowly because the chapters are long , the style is heavy....not that i do not like it!! no!!!! i mean that such a style of writing i have not read before!! it is so serious and real!!! your story as a plot and way of writing is a real MASTERPIECE!! your work deserves to be printed as a book!!!!! yes, this story is not" easily digestible"!!! If you can , after finishing this story , save it on your comp forever or write it down on a pieces of paper for the next generation!! please, do not remove it from this site as some authors did with their works!!! "heavy in my arms'- this is a video about brian and justin on youtube and i am feeling in the same way reading these chapters...... best regards: evelyne

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2011 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 47

Hi,


 


Another wonderful chapter in a wonderful story.  There is so much to


comment on, but I will keep this short.


 


You know what I don’t like?  I don’t like Ted.  I like Emmett’s


description that he is simply resentful.  Resentful people are not


likeable often do or say the wrong thing.  That is Ted.


 


Great story, thanks for writing it.


 


DavidR

Reviewer: cynical21 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 47

Good morning, All, and happy week-end.  I haven't done this in a while, and I probably drive the PTB batshit when I do it, but this is my only practical way to reach out to the lovely readers who comment here.  I wish I could answer every single comment personally and individually, but if I did, I wouldn't get much writing done, and would probably get fired from the job that puts food on my table.  I already tend to push my luck sometimes, when plot bunnies interfere with the daily grind and I can't get my thoughts on track.

Anyway, a quick note to reiterate my thanks to you all, and to assure you of a couple of things.  First off, I promise that I WILL finish this story.  It's become like a living presence in my life, and leaving it unfinished would feel like murdering a child.  As for how long it will run, I foresee another five or six chapters - possibly stretching to seven or eight.  Now, as for HOW it will end, I am seeing lots of comments wishing for 'happily-ever-after', and I do understand that.  I also want our lovely young men to find joy and peace and fulfillment together.  However, if I end it there - what else is there to say?  I mean, do I want to write story after story about new ways for them to fuck each other, or have make-up sex, or take their love to the streets of Venice or Paris or Shanghai or . . . well, you get the idea.  Sweet, yes, and fun, yes - but ultimately boring.  Let's face it, no matter how perfect the body or deep the love, sooner or later, finding new ways to relate the same story gets old.

On the other hand, if we end it with a bit of ambiguity, with a little mystery lurking - maybe there's more of the story to tell.  Maybe 'thereby hangs a tale'.  Now if I promised you a particular ending, I'd be lying through my teeth because - AHEM! I haven't written it yet, because I don't plan it all out in advance.  I write it as it comes to me, and although I do have a vision of the last scene playing out in the back of my mind, the circumstances around it are still a little fuzzy.  Although I do know who will prove to be the ultimate villain and how justice will be served, other issues are less clear-cut, and will take a bit of time to resolve.

I do hope you will all continue readying and sharing your thoughts with me.  It is so encouraging to any writer to be so honored, and I appreciate every single word.  But now - it's the morning after, and Brian and Justin await, so back to the drawing board.

Deepest, deepest, truly deepest thanks to you all.

CYN

Reviewer: Joe (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2011 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 47

Oh this was wonderful and I loved the whole chapter.  I feel bad for Chris and his love but his loss but to have it once will have to do.  For Justin and Brian and their love making well they needed this and will have to hold onto it for a time and that is all good.  As far as Mel and Ted what can I say.  Mel is running from one person to the next trying to find someone on her side and it is not working anywhere she tries and the scene she made at Lindsay's is no way to win her back and get her love.  Then to approach Em like this was totally futile.  I just hope that they learn their lessons but I fear they will not.  Joe

Reviewer: Ana (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2011 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 47

Great to see the update, really like this fic.  Although I can partly understand why Brian would turn to McLaren when he was on his own, don't really like the way Mclaren tries to sort of undermine Justin and questions his intentions.  Was a bit worried that Brian and Mclarn's 'moment' was going to turn into something more, especially now that Justin and Brian are back on track.  Very glad it didn't and that Brian and Justin were together as they should be

Reviewer: lois (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 47

this is a wonderfull story and i really hope that you plan to finish this and when you do please let me know at my e-mail if you can do that i will very happy.My e-mail is ......loismaster@yahoo.com

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2011 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 47

wow.... superb. I must admit that I'm really nervous about the possibly blindness, which would rob Brian of both his independence and his livlihood. Be kind!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 47

Well this was a nice update, though I have to tell you I really cant wait for the next chapters where you are going to pick up the pace and give us some action!

Hope all is well in your life this time.Take care!

Marla

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 47

OMG Brian please do not send Justin and Gus away again. Brian's determination to protect at all costs the ones he loves even if that means he dies or drags the evilness onto himself.

Go Emmett you rock I hope Brian hears about the strength and loyality Emmett has displayed. I still love this fic so much XO Chris

Reviewer: carpekl (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 47

so frickin' good. to say i am obsessed with this story would be an understatement. seeing a new chapter posted made my week. thank you, thank you, thank you.

Reviewer: Terri, Sydney, Australia (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2011 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 47

Yay Em!!!!! Comeupances are a bitch!

I'm following your story slavishly, awaiting each episode impatiently......

What a tale, what a great writer you are, Cyn.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 47

Were to start on how really, really good this chapter is!!!  From the beginning to the, oh my, how nasty can Ted and Melanie get, ending.  Emmetts response was high up on the charts...and left me wanting more, more, more.  Whenever you have the time, it is alway well worth it.

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 47

Thanks for the latest chapter.  I've been looking for a new one for a few days now and POOF, there it was.  And what a chapter!  I loved the ending where Emmett grows a giant pair.  Taking on Mel and Ted was great.  I look forward to another chapter soon.

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2011 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 47

Another great update, cyn! I'm almost afraid to see what is to come, though.

Reviewer: annette (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2011 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 46

hi cynical....

over the last couple of weeks i have been reading the story and i have to say i love it.... but there is just  one big problem... you have about two or three days left until i need a new chapter....

sooo pleeeaase......  please before i become one of those refresh junkies.... :-) post the next chapter.... :-)

love

annette

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2011 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 36

Amazing chapter, thank you.

I love Cynthia, I love Chris and I love, love, love BRIAN!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 33

oh God, i think i love you: Oscar Wilde, Robert Johnson, JOHNNY DEPP and BRIAN KINNEY!!!! am i dead and i'm in heaven????

Excellent chapter!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 32

"Actually, I'm painting."

"My walls don't need a fresh coat." LOL XD XD XD



 "Funny. I thought you had to be in New York to do that."

Justin's smile went wistful. "Yeah. How stupid is that, huh?" yeahh!!!

 

And oh, God, how a I hate Melanie, bitch...

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2011 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 23

this is damn good. very well written. congrats

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2011 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 46

fabulous, as always.  not blind too, poor brian.  looking forward to the next chapter.  thanks DEB

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 46

Wow! I was thinking it was cancer again, this is great...I mean its awful but a great twist. Who was the psycho on the other end of the line? Once again Justin is left hanging....bad Brian. He comes from a good place but in the end he is hurting the people he loves and needs.  Its about time Mel see that Lindsey isn't going to just sit and mourn over the loss of Melanie. Go Sharon.  Can't wait for the next chapter. This is so good I don't think I could actually be bored by it!!!!

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2011 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 46

As always, your update was such a whirlwind of carefully crafted story lines. I love it!

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 46

Another amazing chapter! So glad to find out that Katie is okay. Hopefully Lindsay will throw Mel out once and for all. AND... I sure hope Justin kicks Brian's ass before he is forced to leave with Gus! ;) Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 46

As always this chapter was well worth the wait and has left us wanting more.  What's to become of Lynsey and Melanie?  Will Gus be safe? How could what happened have happened? Will we learn more about Ted and Emmett in future chapters?  How will this story end?  The possibilities are endless!!!  I am soooo looking forward to future chapters.

>

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 46

This story could never be boring or predictable.  It is outstanding.  I just wish Brian could catch a break!  I don't want him to go blind.  And I want he and Justin to stay together!  I hope those idiots that brutally attacked Brian are caught and fast!

Reviewer: brodanman (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 46

Oh, my Jesus!  Give these lads a break!  Just a bit of one!  A tiny little break!

Ok, done ranting now.  Beautiful writing, as ever.  And I am waiting (albiet, not patiently) for the next installment of this heartbreaking tale.  One that will end happily. (Yes?  Please?  Pretty please?  With sprinkles and gummy bears?)

And now finished with the begging.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 46

thanks for updating this story,it really is amazing.

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 46

As others have stated, nothing boring or predictable about this tale.  I would also state that you're the queen of the cliff hangers.   AND Melanie needs to go or buy a clue.

Awaiting the next chapter - I'm a greedy reader!

Reviewer: valell50 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 46

Boring? Predictable? No No No No!  No blindness Please?!?  How much more can these two strong men suffer?   Wow!  You are one powerful writer and I hope you keep this story going!!

Val 

Reviewer: Jen (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 46

As always, this story never fails to disappoint. Nice long chapters to settle down with for the evening. I could NEVER get bored with this story - you have such a great story line that you could keep going for a long while yet, and we will all keep reading and looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 46

He could go blind!!! OMG Cyn can you possibly give Brian a break lol.

I am again worried with Brian's secrecy about things and his determination to send Justin away. He is just not being fair to Justin I know he thinks Justin and Gus will be safe but how does that work if they are not surrounded by guards. I also would think that if Brian is losing his sight he would want them close so he can see them as much as possible.

Interesting little move going on with Lindsay and Sharon

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 46

its always so exciting to find an up-date!!!! Don't let Brian go blind,please. He so deserves a happy ending.

Reviewer: Joe (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 46

Thank you for the update.  You don't know how much I look forward to your writing.  I love all of your stories and well, I really do check daily for updates and pray for more more more.  I think the Lindsay situation is a sticky whicket and I like this little bit of drama going on and Sharon Briggs would be a great companion for her.  Melanie needs to go away.   I'm very concerned over how the children were in danger that close to the compound and where are they going to send Gus to so he will be safe and Justin and well all of them are in danger in my book because I think this club is getting desperate to go after everyone Brian loves and cares for including the Novotny's  Joe

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 46

omg, omg, omg!  What an intense chapter!  Was sitting on the edge of my seat the whole time!

No wonder he sent Justin away...AGAIN!  arrrgghhh!  The man definately needs a therapist!

Great update!  And for what it's worth, this story could NEVER be boring or predictable!

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 46

NOTHING........BUT NOTHING has been boring about this story. I wait, with great fervor for the monthly chapter. I only hope the conclusion is no where in the near future!  Just LOVE this story and your writing is so outstanding.  Thank you so much for this treasure..................

Reviewer: Nisa (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2011 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 4

oh dear! justin has another?

Reviewer: Shauna Lease (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2011 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 6

Oh my gosh! Now I really have to go on and keep reading even though I have homework to do. Wow, right before you ended Justin's part in this chapter, I felt hit with such strong emotions based on the flashbacks of that scene of them making love, up until his reaction of it and how he realized he had to let Brian go. I felt the heartwrenching emotion and that rarely happens to me in stories, actually I think this is the first time it has hit me this hard. Really well done!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 45

Thank God that there is going to be a TBC.  I wanna know what has Briggs run off to and why.  Was the fireworks next story intentional.  What happened to Katy!!!!!

Wendy and Tinkerbell, so what was Sharon's nickname...did you ever say?

Fantabulous chapter.

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2011 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 45

Oh my not what I should be reading just before going to bed. My heart was pounding, but what fate lies for beautiful Katy. Was she shot? Did she fall and hit her head? The waiting is torture.

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 45

My God, from the height of happiness to the depths of fear in less than 30 minutes! My heart was pounding and I was saying "please, please, please find him" under my breath the whole time Gus was thinking out loud!  I thought one of the bad people had kidnapped him!  And then Katy!  What happened?  How'd she get hurt?  How bad is it?  Will she make it?  I'm torn to pieces!  

Marvelous chapter!!  (If a chapter doesn't make me feel joy, sorrow, gladness, and pain then it hasn't done it's job, imo!  Each one of yours always do that for me!

Hugs, Cindy

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 45

amazing chapter. very tense.  love your story.  thanks DEB

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2011 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 45

great chapter!  Can't wait to see what happened to Katy.

 

 

Reviewer: Cherie (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 45

Don't know what you are talking about. You are right on time. But you are really wierding me out with what you said about the ending. I guess it must be coming soon. But I will REALLY MISS this story. I hope you are up to jumping in again with something else asap. Sorry to be so thoughtless about your RL. I am selfish. Can't be helped. Or you could be an average writer, instead of weaving the tales you do.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 45

so happy you wrote another chapter

Reviewer: mander3_swish (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great chapter! so much going on!

Hilarious AND gut-wrenching. So glad the kids were alright...and Beau was found too...phew!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2011 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 45

Holy smokes, I think I chewed all of my nails on this update! I'm so glad you got a chance to update, Cyn :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 45

OMG I was so scared for Gus, Katy and Brian it really made me cry with fear. You are just amazing thank you

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 45

The story is really good. Please let Brian be okay. Glad the kids were found. Please keep Brian and Justin together, the way they belong.

You write when you can, you have a life and need to stay healthy.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 45

awww.... so glad they found the kids!   Great update.  I was however, hoping for more information on whats wrong with Brian.  He was suppose to see the doc wasn't he?  You never said what he 'felt' was wrong.. I'm probably just being impatient~! lol  I look forward to the next update!

Reviewer: ycorgigirl (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2011 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 44

I've been reading and enjoying but I haven't commented lately.  I am loving this story and can't wait to find out what Brian has been hidely medically.  Thanks so much for the update.

Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2011 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 44

The whole thing Justin vs. Chris thing is getting out of control in my opinion. Justin's jealously is getting out of hand but it's understandable because Brian hasn't done anything to make him feel otherwise. I mean it's obvious that he loves Justin but they really need to talk and settle things out. Chris needs to butt out. His feelings for Brian is pretty damn obvious and he is taking out his fustrations on Justin ( I really doubt those two will ever get along ). He has to start getting over Brian soon. I'm being completely biased but I want my favorite couple to work things out (namely the Chris issue) without Chris getting in the way or straining their relationship. If Brian reassures Justin and talk things out with him. Then I'm sure Justin would have no reason to be jealous and it wouldn't get in the way of Brian's safety. Those two deserve to be happy. This is all of my fustrations with the story that I need to get out, but it has nothing to do with you or your awesome writing :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2011 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 44

I almost regret ever reading the first chapter of this tale, almost.  I get nervous when I don't see an update for awhile.  I have this irrational fear that you will be called away by real life and have to abandon all of these wonderfully written characters. 

That being said, damn, I do love this story!  I check everyday and when there is one up I am fixated until the last word.  Well done, again. 

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 44

Amazing as always!! Your writing is sooooo great!! The whole story to me is like an excellent m/m romantic suspense book and I love it so much.

Reviewer: ariana (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2011 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 44

Happy NewYear! and all you wish for 2011.

And than you forwrite.

 

Ariana

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 44

Another chapter under our belt and onward we go! I'm so afraid of whatever it is that Brian's going to see Turnage about; and now this about sweet old Simon?  I think Chris is right about him to be suspicious; that information was just a little too much to be coincidence!  I think Simon must have said something to someone and that's how they found out where Brian was! 

Speaking of Chris ... I understand completely why he and Justin are always at odds.  They both love Brian and feel threatened by the other.  Brian doesn't love Chris but that's not necessarily a good thing for Justin because Brian wouldn't hesitate to leave Justin and Gus to keep them safe; but for Brian to be safe, he needs Chris.  What a delicious tangled triangle!  :-D   You see, I LOVE and ADORE my Brian and Justin but ... yeah ... Brian and McFed ... they're pretty fucking hot together! hee!

Anyway, you go right ahead and take your time.  Usually when I start thinking, "hmm, I wonder when the next chapter of Timeless will be posted" it pops up within a week or so.

Hugs, Cindy

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 44

<Happy dance> another chapter!!!  Did I miss something?  Why does Brian need to see Dr. Turnage so desperately?  I'll be willing to wait as long as necessary to find out. 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2011 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 44

amazing as always. my only critisism is the wait between postings..... real life is a bitch!!!!  thanks DEB

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 44

OMG it just never ends the constant vigilance and adrenalin fear. What is going on with Brian's health??? Your writing is amazing keeping us so frustrated like Cynthia at the missing pieces that are simmering below the surface. As usual I eagerly await the next chapter I am so going to enjoy this story when I can re read it altogether lol Cheers Chris

Reviewer: Chloris01 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 44

I really like your original characters. Especially McLaren. And I'm amazed by the way you can give to all of them a whole story to tell.

One  again, your writting is brilliant, and I particularly love your description of Brian's feelings (complicated...) on the beach.

But, really, I'm afraid for him...Another obstacle to overcome ?

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2011 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 44

wow an up-date - and a great one at that! thanks so much... I thought you'd given up on us. Hope you are well. happy new year

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 44

oh what a wonderful and frustrating chapter!  Justin is just plain out pissing me off!  twice in this chapter he let his jealously overrule Brian's safty!  Just the mention that simmon had connects with the ppl who tried to kill Brian would be enough for me to tear his head off! Instead Justin protects him? WTF!?   Chris (and Brian's doctors') seems to be the only ones who truly gives a shit about Brian...   

Seriously, not liking Justin in this chapter.  Love the chapter, not loving Justin.  And I'm surprised at Brian too.  Just the fact that Simmon lied when first questioned would have been enough for me to fire his ass.  all sorts of red flags should have went up, yet Brian was oddly passive about the man's deciet.   His son almost got killed by a shooter, and there was a man on his staff that lied about his connections in Pitts.... I think something is wrong with Brian...more wrong than he's leading on. I hope he's not permanatly damaged by the attack, like his doc suggested.  I'm worried about him. 

Don't worry about the long wait...It's been ages since I updated my story too.   holidays', family stuff....*sigh*   This chapter was definately worth the wait!

Reviewer: Kathleen (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow -- what an amazing story!  I just found out about this last week and have been reading to my heart's content well into the night every single night (which probably explains why my apartment is disgusting and why I have no clean clothes).  I cannot wait for the next chapter!  And I just have to say - I really really love all of the new characters you've written -- they're all so intense and complex and interesting.  I just know that when I think of QAF from now on, I'm also going to think of Katy, Liam, Lance, Chris, Trina, etc., etc., etc.  I'm already starting to confuse myself with what was on the show and what's in your story!  I know a lot of other people don't like Chris's relationship with Brian, but I loved it!  It served so many purposes in this story, but it was also nice to see him let his guard down with someone other than Justin.  I hope everyone doesn't kill me for saying this, but I was actually rooting for Chris to steal Brian's heart for awhile -- but after reading the reunion between him and Justin I think I prefer Justin, but only slightly, over Chris.  My only complaint is about Ted -- I think I just love the actor who played Ted so much that I don't want to see him be such a little shit.  And I love how you've characterized Melanie -- least favorite of all the characters imo.  Thanks a bunch -- I look forward to reading more! 

Reviewer: Ellen (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

I check this site almost every day to see if there is a new chapter and am disappointed when I see that you haven't updated.  I hope when you finish "Timeless", you seriously consider starting a new story.  You are one of the best authors that I have read in the QAF fandom.  I hope real life doesn't get too much for you that you stop writing.  I anxiously await your next update.

You must login (register) to review.