Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2017 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 20
Can you please kill off Mel my god I hate her so much.
Brian please stop pretending, plz you are breaking my heart in to bits.
get back to Justin.
you see really evoking emotions in my I'm in bits crying xx
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2012 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 20
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 20
I have to finish the story today and see where we got with it. God, I'm so tired; two days awake with your work.
Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 20
OK, I'm ready for things to get going! I know what you said about the set up but I can't stand that the great Doc hasn't met Brian yet and be able to see soe hope for Brian! Keep it coming, it's great!
Reviewer: Sab123 (Anonymous) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 20
HI, it´s great to find another update of your story. I really appreciate your style and the complex storytelling. From a dramatic point of view I would say, that your story is just at the beginning from act two of a three-act story. Way to go till the climax and a lot of subplots to watch. I wish you all the energy, phantasy and the time you will need to finish this extraordinary work.
Reviewer: Scheffie88 (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 20
Just read all 20 chapters in 2,5 days... Beautiful! This is seriously the best fanfic I've ever read! I love the way you take your time to describe thoughts, scenerys etc. Keep up the good work!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 20
another great chapter- I hate Mel- hopefully Cynthia will realize that Ted is being manipulated - and Ted can use his love of Brian to stop her. Justin is in for a fight from Brian and I hope he can convince him- love the angst and your wirting- thanks for the update
Reviewer: gonzosgirrl (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 20
Wow. That was quite a chapter. I've always been a Ted fan, and I hope that I can still be one when this story is over. I have a feeling he'll come to do the right thing. *is hopeful* Melanie, though? Ugh. It's a testament to your writing how much I despise her at this moment. Grrrr!!!!
I'm looking forward to Emmett's appraisal of the new boytoy. REALLY looking forward to Justin's first encounter. And soon, the arrival of the Great Surgeon.
Happy holidays to you, dear author. I hope you'll find time to take pity on your eager readers over the next couple weeks.
Reviewer: Pastrychef4 (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 20
Another outstanding chapter! I really hate Mel, and Ted is truly a disappointment. I hope that Cynthia will be able to recognize Ted's resentment, and keep an eye on him. He obviously cannot be trusted. Justin is getting on my nerves - it just seems like he is having a pity party for himself, rather than worry about how Brian is progressing. Focus on the bigger picture, Justin! With that said, I am intriqued by McClaren. I can't wait to see more interaction between Brian and his beard, lol. Also can't wait for the plastic surgeon (Turnage) to make his grand debut.
Cyn, you continue to outdo yourself. Merry Christmas to you, and I look forward to reading more soon! Hugs!
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 20
Love the plot and the story; not sure though about all the new, hot OMCs all turning up around the place and having great interest in the "great" Brian Kinney. I mean, they are what we would normally call the "mary sues" of fanfiction, but these ones are the male types. Do they always have to be perfect, sexy, handsome, interesting, and useful? I can understand what you are trying to point out here about the flaws of Brian's friends and lover. Hell, I loathe the lesbians, but give me a break here. Brian is hardly a saint himself. He is not Clark Kent that he really, really needs to push people away to protect his secret or something! Give us a little more balanced characterization. Show everyone's flaws and very good points and let us decide for ourselves. Other than this, I think you are a very imaginative and intriguing writer. Still, balance of characterization has always been a number one key point for me in truly enjoying a story.
Also, bearing that face forever will surely prove to Brian himself who will stick around for him no matter what.
I hope you are not offended by my honesty. If you are, I'm sorry.
Author's Response: Oh, please don't apologize. I'm not offended in the least. And if I have given the impression that I think Brian is 'perfect' then I haven't managed to get my message across. Not yet, anyway. But I would point out that we have not yet really dug into the subtext beneath Brian's attitudes and behavior. That will come soon, but we're not there yet. As for all the new characters being focused on him, that's because the primary action, so far, revolves around the attack on him. The 'fascination' will dissipate in time, as the public image of the man is superceded by the person beneath the facade. I hope, anyway.
And the OCs are meant to flesh out the bones of the story - to provide mirrors in which the primary characters can, eventually, see themselves. That may not make much sense at the moment, but I hope it will, in time. They are not, I assure you, meant to be the "Mary Sue" perfect substitutes for the flawed original characters. Instead, they're meant to be spice, for lack of a better term, to enhance the original flavors.
Thank you so much for speaking up. A writer who strives to improve is always appreciative of thought-provoking comments.
CYN
Author's Response: Oh, please don't apologize. I'm not offended in the least. And if I have given the impression that I think Brian is 'perfect' then I haven't managed to get my message across. Not yet, anyway. But I would point out that we have not yet really dug into the subtext beneath Brian's attitudes and behavior. That will come soon, but we're not there yet. As for all the new characters being focused on him, that's because the primary action, so far, revolves around the attack on him. The 'fascination' will dissipate in time, as the public image of the man is superceded by the person beneath the facade. I hope, anyway.
And the OCs are meant to flesh out the bones of the story - to provide mirrors in which the primary characters can, eventually, see themselves. That may not make much sense at the moment, but I hope it will, in time. They are not, I assure you, meant to be the "Mary Sue" perfect substitutes for the flawed original characters. Instead, they're meant to be spice, for lack of a better term, to enhance the original flavors.
Thank you so much for speaking up. A writer who strives to improve is always appreciative of thought-provoking comments.
CYN
Reviewer: F (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 20
I think Brian shines in stories that show his strengths without demonizing the other characters.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment. I'm not sure if you mean that I am 'demonizing' the other characters. I certainly don't intend to do that. As I've mentioned before, I really, really never liked Melanie, so, if I'm demonizing her, it might be because I think she earned it in the course of the series. From my perspective, she was consistently focused on her own selfish ends, and proved herself willing to take advantage of everyone around her, including her partner, her friends, and her professional associates in order to get what she wanted.
But thanks for following along and speaking up.
CYN
Reviewer: Erdmut1 (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 20
This is one of the best stories ever! can't wait until the next installment.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your enthusiasm, and I'll try not to keep you waiting too long.
CYN
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 20
I am beginning to hate Ted, Mel is a twisted bitch. I love Emmett I think he is the best thing that can happen to Brian and Justin. Can't wait for the Dr. to arrive and to see what Justin is going to do about the "new" man.
Author's Response: Yes, it's probab ly obvious to everyone that I am not a member of the Mel fan club. But Ted has always been a bit of an enigma to me. I really, completely disliked his tendency to wrap himself in martyrdom and to blame everyone for everything in his life that didn't suit him, and I also thought he was too conventional and too easily manipulated in his thinking. But underneath everything, I do think he wanted to be a decent person and a good friend. In this story, he is still a work in progress, and even I don't quite know whre he'll ultimately choose to go.
Thanks so much for your comment and your continued support.
CYN
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 20
Damm who’s mature in this story Gus and Justin. Justin should tell all of them to kiss his ass and before leaving tell brain he will always love him but to go fuck himself and tha he's to old to be playing let hurt Justin again games than leave for good or find someone who is mature and is much better than brain.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment, but I confess to being curious why you'd keep reading. If I dislike a story, I generally go find something that I DO like to read in its place. Nevertheless, you are welcome to comment and to your opinion. That's primarily what QaF was all about, wasn't it?
CYN
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 20
Wow! Wow! Wow! Ok, so much here. First, I don't care if everyone hates me but I sincerely hope Chris and Brian get it on! There are sparks flying there! You cant' tell me Chris didn't feel something when he kissed Brian. Pretend or not, it's fucking Brian Kinney! lol Oh PLEASE develop a very complex, hot, sexy, relationship between the two! I think if thier farce becomes real, that will be the REAL Test for B/J's love, wouldn't it? Justin will be forced to fight hard. Fight Brian and fight Chris for Brian! Talk about a love triangle! My knees are weak just thinking about it! lol
Ok, now the bad news...Ted.. WTF???!!! You're making me despise him. Mel, I can understand. She's a cunt and is out for revenge. But Ted? Brian saved his ass! He knows it and still he's only thinking of saving his own ass, and the business, which I don't think he gets yet that it's BRIAN'S business! Who the fuck does Ted think he is? I hope Cyn catches on to what a fucking weasle he is and kicks is ass.
And Justin, wow. So painfully 'human'. I can't believe he actually thought, 'why do I have to fight?' Sorry, but that seem a bit ooc for me. Justin always fought for Brian. Ok, stalked, but in his mind same thing. I can't believe he actually wondered why he should have to fight? Yes, he answered his own question, 'because he never really did before' but the fact that he even had to ask himself that question makes me concerned. If he decides to fight for Brian, the question now is, how hard? And we'll only know how hard he's willing to fight if he's up against real competition. (hint..hint) Winning Brian's love should NOT be easy for Justin. And he should be tested. Loving Brian is a monumental task. Is Justin up for it? Right now, I'm not so sure. I hope so.
Another great chapter. Enjoy the holidays! Come back afterwards and thrill us some more with your wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment - and I always think joy is sweeter if preceeded by heartbreak, so I hope you'll be pleased in the end.
CYN
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 20
I am addicted to this story. Truly, even though at the moment it is breaking my heart.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting. It will get better, I promise, but not necessarily right away.
CYN
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