Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2017 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 14

Justin is far more stringer then people think and if anyone can succeed in getting to Brian to Brian's real truth real heart it's him. Brian needs him now nore then ever and got love anyone who stands in his way.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2016 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 14

OMG THIS STORY IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!   I wanted to comment on every chapter but i think i'll start my commenting now.   just wow.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh my God, Justin...

Reviewer: Liseron ( Mireille) (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 14

So sorry to miss both time and appropriate words to let you know how much this Story means to me now .

You're such a gifted writer : you know perfectly how to use the plots , how to settle , how to go on , and just when you should do it !:)

So both the Story and the Characters remain fascinating to follow .

I always been sorry that we didn't  learn more about Brian's past during the Show because I thought it would have been totally interesting to feature why he was so ... our Brian :)

I came to the Show very recently just like you and 'devour' it just the same... this is why I remain so hungry to hear about anything that could be related to my favorite Characters : they're in my mind A LOT every day .

Thank you for helping me so well about it .

Mireille.

Reviewer: Q_dicted (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 14

Hi there. I've never tired commenting on this site before, but your story is so compelling and so well written that I simply had to. Your telling of the brutality committed against Brian was horrifying - and I mean that as the highest of compliments. I am a big fan of the angsty/hurt fiction and this is absolutely one of the best I've read. I found myself holding my breath so many times over these last few chapters. Just... wow. Can't wait to hear Justin start shouting.

Bravo!

Reviewer: Kitty_Ballou (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 14

NO! No way!!! You can't stop this story at this point!! That's - so unfair!!

*cries*

You have to tell us RIGHT NOW what's going on with Brian! PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!



Author's Response:

I'm working on it as we speak.  But, just in case anyone is wondering, I would rather cut off my own right arm than harm Brian, with whom I am totally in love.

New chapter will be up this week=end, provided I don't write myself into a corner.  Thanks for your interest.

CYN

Reviewer: templeton_ma (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 14

Just beautiful. I don't know how else to describe this chapter.

Steven - the relatively short appearance of him in this chapter actually painted this character in so much detail artfully. I found myself actually falling a bit for the guy, which took me completely by surprise since I am 200% with the Brian camp.

Justin - I love the way how the realization came. I would use the word dramatic to describe it. But it was more like mature. Yes. The whole chapter gave me a sense of maturity.

Linds & Cynthia. I love the little interaction in Brian's office. These are the 2 blonde female in Brian's life who could touch his heart.

I have a hunch on who that decision maker behind the scene is. Although I think you may actually surprise me.

Finally, I whole-hearted thank you, for giving me this pleasure to read your story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment and your support.  It's always lovely for a writer to hear that they've managed to make a reader look at something from a slightly shifted perspective.

As for the decision maker behind the scenes, I should say that I haven't actually tried to conceal that person's identity, from my readers.  I'm pretty sure that you and several others have already figured it out.  But the point is that the cast of characters has not.  When the identity is revealed, THEY are going to be surprised, possibly confused, and maybe even a bit angry.  What fun, huh?

And though I want to tell you that you're very welcome, it actually should be me thanking you for your enthusiasm and your support.

CYN

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 14

NICE …..That’s MY Justin  do what you have to do to get back to your man and who ever get in your way tell them to fuck off big time  whether it Michael or Lindsey and even  if  Brain  try to push ,     Justin better push back hard .



Author's Response:

Yes, we are beginning to see the real Justin.  I don't think he's there quite yet.  He's still not allowing himself to face the ultimate truth - that he almost lost Brian, and that there are no guarantees that a person can always go back and reclaim what they left behind.  But he will, and I think he'll make us all proud.

Thanks for your comment.

CYN

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 14

another great chapter-  thanks for the update-  so many thoughts run through my head as I read the story-  things that have to be taken care of- etc-  can't wait to read the next installment

 

sfscarlet



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment.  I hope it continues to please you.

CYN

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 14

first, I hope you're feeling better!  You have to be careful with the flu this year.  stay warm, and lots of rest and fluids!

Again, another great chapter.  It's too bad it took something like this to happen to Brian to make Justin realize whats truly important to him.  Brian's coma induced dreams were very telling.  And I have to say, made me dislike Justin, immensely. However, I do understand Justin's actions over the past several years.  We, (me) tend to forget that Justin was just 17 when he fell in love with Brian.  He had a lot to learn, and one only learns through trial and error. Justin made a lot of errors through his trials but learned a lot of lessons along the way.

I believe the reason he keeps leaveing Brian is because deep inside, he believes that he would never, could never, really ever lose Brian for good. He took for granted that Brian and he would always together.   Now, after this incident, he's not taking anything for granted anymore. 

It also breaks my heart to hear Lindsy thoughts.  She too is becoming to realize what shits the family have been to Brian.  Always judging his life, telling him how he should live his life, yet going on wiht their own lifes with no thought to how he felt about their decisions. Like moving to Canada, taking his son away from him.  I'm glad Lins remembered how she chastised Brian for wanting to leave his family to go to NY, yet she just up and left her family when it suited her.  Hypocritcal bitch!  Yet, she isn't all bad if she is coming to terms with her own past sins.  (though it doesn't stop her from still putting her hand out for money.  Why does she need to stay in a hotel?  Deb can't put her up? Or Ben and Michael?)

Again, great chapter. Lots to think about.   Get well soon! And as always, I will be anxiously awaitng your next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Hon.  It's always wonderful to receive such thoughtful commentary from such a gifted writer.  And I'm delighted that you are picking up on the clues I'm dropping.  I agree completely that Justin had a lot to learn, from the beginning, and he did do some things that caused Brian a l;ot of distress.  But I always believed it was from ignorance and inexperience, rather than deliberate malice.  The malice - the blaming Brian fro everything yet being perfectly willing to use him whenever the need arose, came from the other characters in the series.  Justin just didn't know any better, but he did learn as he went along, although he still retained a quality that I found disturbing.  Like you, I do believe he always believed that Brian would always be there for him; he used that to allow him to explore other options, while holding on to Brian as teh bedrock of his existence.  Even in this story, he still has not quite realized that there are no guarantees - that Brian, no matter how strong and invincible -- might be taken from him.  He needs to learn that, and I hope he will, so that the two of them can learn and grow together.

And you are so right about Lindsey and the rest of the crew.  Can't tell you how much it pissed me off when they were all so quick to dismiss the value of Brian's dreams (like going to New York) when they forgot all about him when the shoe was on the other foot.  Hopefully, they are all going to learn some valuable lessons soon.

Hope you continue to enjoy and follow along.

CYN

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