Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2017 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 9
Brian listen to them and use the extra security please. You really are stubborn when it comes to you needing help, you matter as well you know. Let people help you.
Reviewer: misseshermionemalfoy (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2015 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 9
I've had a lot of thoughts about this story so far. I mean a lot. At some points I thought you were mixing oil and vinegar by making Brian pine for Justin. At some points I was frustrated that you didn't know Jim Beam is bourbon not whiskey. At at others I was concerned that characters were being used to voice your personal headcanons and thoughts and ideas about relationships.
Then I read this fucking amazing- beautiful- out of this word monologue and I think all my criticism of your style was pretty much stopped. When Brian talks about clipping Justin's wings and keeping him dirtbound I thought I was sitting next to THE Brian Kinney. It was perfect.
Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 9
I was listening to As I Am (from The Big Gay Musical) as I was reading Emmett's conversation with Brian, completely by accident, but it was the most perfect coincidence and combination.
As much as I love quick happy ending fics (you know, where after like a month of being apart, one decides they can't live without the other and move to whether they are to be together forever), I love yours (from what I've read so far) because it's more true to how I believe Brian and Justin would actually act. (But I do have to admit to skipping right to the end, just to see, before starting to read properly.)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 9
I love how with this story, with every chapter you become closer and loser to the truth - and begin to piece the story together.
However, it also turns out with every chapter that your theory evolves into something almost completely new.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 9
I am so far on the edge of my seat it's a miracle I don't fall on my ass.
Reviewer: Lizzie (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 9
I have to say, this is a beautifully written, but depressing chapter. The Christmas memory was a great read, it brought tears to my eyes. And I'm very worried for Brian. :(
Reviewer: scrub13 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 9
I agree with some of the others that the relationship between Brian and Justin is very disfunctional and not healthy for either. Brian seems to get it that Justin often uses Brian as a fall back when other relationships don't work out. His parents, his dad, Ethan, LA, other men, etc.... Justin came back to Brian, but not by choosing him rather by default.
"He's never coming, you know," he whispered. "And I'm tired of watching the door, watching the clock, watching . . . time slipping away from me."
He's using Brian not being there as an excuse to go with the other guy...nothing about loving this guy or truly wanting this life. It's convienient, so that's the way Justin goes. This Justin is years away from knowing himself and being brave enough to be in an equal relationship. He's not a lost soul, he's just sad and passionless.
"Letting go" stories are tough, but you've really nailed the angst of love lost. Brian has a core group of friends who will stick with him and the danger aspect is a bonus.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 9
We'll it certainly is growing darker, AND more complex! So someone is after Brian...very ominous, and dark! Of course the suspense is killing me!
Love the conversation between Emmett and Brian. Very revealing, mostly on Brian's part. For Emmett, (like Brian said) Yeah, we figured for all the reason's Brian mentioned, but to hear Brian say that Justin only comes back to him when his wings are broken, well that was harsh. Harsh because it's the truth when you think about it. He's right. Justin keeps leaving him only to come back when things don't go well for him. And as for Justin, I'm thinking on some level he knows this. That's why he told his new boyfriend that he can't go back to Brian this time until he's the man Brian thinks he should be, other wise Brian would think Justin was returning once again, because he failed. Seem's those two know each other better then anyone realizes. Hopefully, they will find a way to communicate and be together. No reason why Justin can't fly with Brian by his side.
Again please let me say how much I'm enjoying this story! You truly have a gift for bringing these characters and their emotions to life. The convoluted situation with B/J, the mystery surrounding Brian. (Who has it out for him?) And the complex relationships surrounding everyone in this story!
Great job, and thank you for the weekly updates!
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 9
I like darker the more the better, Good Justin and Brain should be apart they really do have a sick relationship they very much love each other but, I will comment once I read the next chapter………..
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