Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2017 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 6
I'm glad Brian has those guys back in the Pitts and yet I feel dread coming and even before I read this for the first time you cauldron feel it, yet again I'm so gripped in this incredible story.
Reviewer: Adrian Mack (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2012 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow, just wow!
Reviewer: Shauna Lease (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2011 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh my gosh! Now I really have to go on and keep reading even though I have homework to do. Wow, right before you ended Justin's part in this chapter, I felt hit with such strong emotions based on the flashbacks of that scene of them making love, up until his reaction of it and how he realized he had to let Brian go. I felt the heartwrenching emotion and that rarely happens to me in stories, actually I think this is the first time it has hit me this hard. Really well done!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
Cliffie....you weave a plot like fine silk...
Reviewer: scrub13 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love your writing style and the almost lyrical way it flows, but I felt very depressed after reading this chapter. Justin seemed so very weak in character and wishy-washy almost like the woman who can't live without being in a relationship, while still in love with the last "Mr. Right". Justin doesn't love Steven, he doesn't even seem to like or respect his, but he does treat him like crap,
To me the strength of Brian and Justin was always their strength independent of each other. And hurting Emmett? Hmmmmmmm.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comments and your opinions. This is a period of transition, up until this point, a time in which our heroes are trying to find their way through virgin (excuse the expression) territory. They're in a period of "becoming" - learning to deal and to cope, and it's still a bit new to them, a bit uncertain. They still must learn how to exist each within their own spheres - with or without each other. I hope the journey and the process will seem believable as time goes on. But they will, I hope, ultimately be true to themselves, refusing to bend before the trials of life.
Thanks again for speaking up.
CYN
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
You hurt Emmett how could you, that’s a sure way to get Justin back to the Putt.You know how much Justin love Emmett. I was getting to think this story was another only about Brian and not Brian and Justin thing. It getting better now.
Author's Response: Glad you're interested, and thanks for the encouragement. Although I do adore Brian and Justin, I think that there are many rich, vivid characters in this saga that deserve some time and space of their own. I plan to introduce some original characters of my own, to add to the flavor so to speak, and continue to fill in the blanks for all of them.
Thanks for your interest.
CYN
Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow, you certainly know how to keep us coming back. Quite the cliffhanger!
Author's Response: Sorry about that. I don't usually do cliffhangers, but this one just seemed natural. I promise not to leave you hanging for long.
CYN
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