Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2018 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 50
still routing for Chris
Reviewer: Angelstar2 (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2011 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 50
OMG this story is just like one of the best things ever. Granted it was REALLY hard for me to read at first because of the violence to our dear Brian it was so hard to follow the warehouse scene that put this whole epic tale into motion that I almost flounced. But I took a few days and came back to it because no way it would be horriable throughout without some resolution. This story and this Brian is beautiful and loving and so much growth. From where this tale began I never imagined the twists and turns that would make it end up here. But i have stayed up reading all night (seriously 3 am) and looking like a zombie at work attempting to in less than a week and a half to complete this but man what an understaking. But in the end its just too good to stop. I am reviewing now because this is not marked complete and i am SOOO sad wondering if the next chapter will end at a stopping place. I dont know if you as an aurthor mointor this account but if you do PLEASE TELL ME just in a sentence or two if they live healthy and happily ever after!
Author's Response: Sorry - didn't mean to skip this one. OK - I never, never give assurances about how something will end, mainly because I'm never 100% sure, until it actually comes to me as I write it. Do I want them to live happily ever after? Yes, I do. Do I believe that they belong together, that they've earned the right to walk into the sunset hand in hand? Again, I do. And I hope that will be the final resolution. But I have to be honest. If it works out that way, it still may be a long time coming, as I have not entirely decided that this story will end with this one piece of fiction. There may be others yet to come.
But I do hope you continue to enjoy the ride, and I thank you for your interest.
CYN
Reviewer: cynical21 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 50
A big hello to all, preceeding an apology which is probably getting to be an old familiar song by this time. Nevertheless, it's necessary. The next chapter is in progress - I promise - but it's not done yet. Unfortuntely, real life gets to be a drag this time of year, when auditors and government budgetary constraints get into the mix. In a word, it's been crazy, so I just haven't had the time to spend composing and polishing.
But it is coming along, and I'm hoping it will be ready to post by next week-end. If I weren't so detail-fixed (some might say compulsive) it would be easier, I guess, but I just can't post it until I feel like I've made it the best it can be. I hope you'll forgive the delay and enjoy the end result.
As always, my gratitude for your interest and your patience.
CYN
Reviewer: Eucebo (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2011 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 50
I've finally caught up with this story, even though it took me a while because there was just soooo much to read before getting to the good parts!! ;P hahaha Just kidding!
Anyway, I'm finally here with the rest of you, so I'm screaming for an update already!! it's been exactly a month since this last chapter was posted so is about time for a new one!
CYN, you can imagine by now what a big pain in the ass I'm going to be, insisting on updates all the time becuase I was used to read some part of this everyday and now... now I'm going to have to wait with the rest of your fans here, mere mortal readers, eager to experience a little bit more of the B&J timeless story....
So please, update already!!! ;D
see ya!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2011 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 50
This is just me but I really feel that using God and Jesus Christ name in story like this or any story should be replace with other word's or names.
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 50
OK I am more than happy for this installment, buuuuut I am not happy that you are giving us another cliffhanger!
Why did they not check Jackson? Why was it Cynthia who figured it out first? How come Redding knew about it? ARRRGGGGG!
I love this story but you are driving me mad with it....
Keep it coming!
Marla
Reviewer: argentine65 (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2011 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 50
My friend: you made us suffer during these two chapters but finally Brian is going to be OK. But I wonder how Cynthia and Chris knew Brian was in danger. And what about Babylon, it is ok?. Thank you so much for sharing. Martha
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 50
OMG this story is so hard at times and I only have to read it you write it!. Thank you for saving Brian but OMG this is so scary the bastards are so determined to kill him. Loved that Brian had to wake from the coma because Justin just would not shut the fuck up lol xoxoxoxox thank you so much Chris
Reviewer: Sean (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2011 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 50
I love this story. Its my first ever Queer as folk story and its amazing :) Im already obsessed!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2011 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 50
You are the best!
Thank you.
about: "...It would only happen again over his dead body, and that was a promise..."
oh my... those words...
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 50
thank you for not leaving us with another cliff-hanger! excellent as ever
Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 50
Oh my! Where to begin? At the beginning!
Jackson? Jackson was the mole? You could've knocked me over with a feather! I had no idea something was wrong until he went in the kitchen and looked at the item in the tote bag! At first I thought everything up until then was going to be an attempt to seduce him, then when he looked at the item in the tote bag, I got a bad feeling; I thought maybe he was going to rape him but when he just coldly killed him (he thought) I was absolutely stunned! That was delightful!! (your writing, I mean, not killing Brian! LOL)
And, OMG! How on earth did you make it so exhilarating to read about the race to save Brian's life? I already know it's not a death fic so I knew that ultimately he wouldn't die from what Jackson did; but if you aren't the master at getting a reader's adrenaline pumping, then I don't know who is!
The alternating Brian's thoughts/Justin's speech parts were sheer and utter brilliance! I could feel the progression of Brian coming up out of his subconcious mind to the surface. I LOVED that the first thing he said to Justin was to shut the fuck up! Classic Brian! Genius YOU! I am so glad you let him wake up in this chapter! I can imagine that it was tempting for you to leave it for next time but you were probably afraid we'd find you and burn your house down! LOL
Also, who can resist protective!Justin! He was hot when he had the big bad FBI agent in a choke-hold up against the wall! :-D
All in all, a very satisfying chapter! I've already decided that when the whole thing is over, I'm going to re-read it from the beginning coz' I know there's probably a ton of litle details I've overlooked.
Hugs, hugs, hugs!! Cindy
Reviewer: Joe (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 50
Wonderful chapter with a lot of drama and a lot of excitement. I really like how you played it out with the set up of Jackson and the way he carried out his plan. I also loved the mind talking within Brian and how he worked through his coma and came out of it in such a way. As for missing the missing link in the horrible things that happened well, we all are human and I think it may lead to more informatiion in the end that may help him out. Joe
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 50
I knew it had to be the PT guy! Because he was a last minute replacement right? I so love Emmett and Cynthia. And Justin's in and out of a coma speech..that was great.
Look forward to the next chapter. I want to know how it ends but I don't want it to end. Sort of like QAF in general (with some modifications of course on the case of the show.).
Reviewer: Helenann23 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 50
I LOVE THIS STORY.....I WAIT ON PINS AND NEEDLES TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
I HAVEN'T REVEWED FOR AWHILE BUT I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW I HAVE NEVER LOSS INTEREST IN THE STORY AND AM ALREADY DREADING THE ENDING. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!
HELENANN23
Reviewer: Jessie (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 50
I've followed this story from the beginning and I'm a fan of it and this makes it even harder to write...I know that I might have an attention span of a gnat, but I just can't follow this story any longer...I was excited about it at first, it seem so fresh and new ,but now it seems so neverending....I keep wishing you finally end it and don't mean to be harsh, but it just seems like too much is happening and maybe, I just like my stories simple but you seem to be in love with your own writing...I guess what I'm trying to say though you're a good writer and you deserved that blue ribbon, I've just lost my interest in this story.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2011 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 50
you really should just kill him off. make it better and easier for all concerned.
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