Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Timeless
Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2011 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 48

Hi,


 


Thanks for another terrific.


 


Sometimes you throw a line or two out there they just seem a little


weird.  Being the terrific writer you are, I bet they have a special


meaning that we will soon find out.


 


Describing the therapist, what does this have to do with anything?


              “Cynthia noticed that he looked very different today.”


You go on to describe his mode of dress.  Ooooh! This does seem kind


of strange.


 


In that last paragraph we read,


       “……with Jackson moving toward the deck,


         pushing a gurney carrying a plastic carry-all, and she felt


         a faint flicker of memory stir in her mind. But it was only


         a flicker,…..”



Oooops, is there are message in that line?  What does that mean? 


 


Of course I do not expect or even want a reply.  Let the story answer


my suspicions.


 


I hope you take this as a compliment to your writing how deeply I read


this wonderful story.


 


Thanks again,


DavidR


 


 

Reviewer: sxynbtful (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2011 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 48

Let me say I check everyday for updates.  I have read this story over and over again and when I get to the end and realize it is not done I wish I never did.  This needs to be a movie. It is the best one on this webstie and I have read alot. It really stays true to the characters fromt he show where some stories does not.  You keep them just the way they are and that is good.  I wish you can give us 3 chapters at a time instead of those 1 chapter teasers.  Maybe you sdo rough drafts and someone types it.  IDK. YOU SHOULD REALLY TRY SHOPPING THIS INTO A BOOK OR MOVIE.  I THINK IT IS REALLY THAT GOOD. PLOT AND STORY LINE IS GREAT.

P.S. almost cried in this chapter. kind of reminded me of the last episode of the series

 

Reviewer: ycorgigirl (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2011 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 48

While I have to admit that I don't like to wait so long for a new chapter, they are always worth the wait.  While not a lot actually happened in this chapter is has set up a number of things for upcoming chapters very well.  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: fantastic (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2011 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 48

wow, that final scene with Brian and McFed is a killer.... is he really REALLY going to go blind?!

Reviewer: inabluefunk (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2011 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 48

Well if that wasn't a cliffhanger, I don't know what is!!!!

It is always good to follow up on Timeless, and so if you need your time with the story, I for one have absolutely no problem waiting for the new update.

Now on the story, what is gonna happen to Brian? I need to know by the next update *pretty please* don't keep us waiting.

As for the story with Mel and the hearing, I would also love to see it resolved in one update, as there more important features to your story to explore, such as Ted and The Club thing and of course the return of the mighty Kinney in the Pitts.

Now that I think about this, I can see of the top of my head a confrontation of The Club with Ron Peterson as he reveals secrets of the Club to the police and maybe have Lindsey and Gus be kidnapped and held until Brian can make a hasty return to Pittsburg to resolve the situation and solve his case... *I am watching too much TV LOL*

I'll be waiting for the next update.

Marla

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2011 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 48

Fantastic!  I had tears in my eyes at the end of this latest installment.

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2011 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 48

I check almost daily to see when the next chapter will show up. Don't want to miss it. I usually print it up and sit back and read with enjoyment until the end. I never want the chapters to end, and then half the time I feel anxious because I don't like those "distant shadow was forming on the horizon far out to sea, the first harbinger of a rising storm." endings. Our boys have been through so much I don't want to think of them having to endure more pain. LOL I am always looking for that fairy tale ending.

Reviewer: Terri, Sydney, Australia (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 48

I always do a snoopy dance and read the new chapter immediately - I'm not into delayed gratification, though every one of your chapters is worth waiting for.  Keep going, don't stop!  I really can't imagine how difficult it must be to keep track of such an intricate and complex plot - I have to keep going back and re-reading previous chapters, which in no way detracts from the enjoyment of the story.  And you really don't need a beta, you're doing great!!!! Awaiting the next installment with bated breath ................

Terri

PS is installment one "l" or two?

ps2 I really liked Ted in the show - is there no way he can redeem himself?

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 48

I guess I will wait any length of time for an update if they continue to be as good as this one.

I loved the stuff with Mel but then I love anything that makes her look bad.

I hope Brian is wrong and the storm coming is not as bad as he is sure it will be. I need a happy ending and not just for Brian and Justin but for Brian and Gus as well.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 48

Another brilliant chapter I loved the pain shown by everyone at the thought of being apart. I will be so sad when this ends thank you so much for such a wonderful fic we are so privliaged to be able to read it. thanks Chris

Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 48

Just wonderful, I loved the way Gus and Brian discussed things and well  Mr. Peterson is learning and growing himself even though hard to accept I think he is making progress.  I do feel for Michael, Ben and Debbie they are so scared of losing JR and well I think Iam is a talented man it may be a hard battle.   Although I also think they have a chance especially if Lindsay takes the stand for them.   As for Brian and the therapist I fear something terrible is going to happen even more so than the prospect of his vision being gone.  I fear that someone will make an attempt on his life again and come closer this time.   If he does lose his vision I think he will still have an eye for beauty that is something that comes from within anyhow.  Thank you for continuing to write and I look forward to more.  Joe

Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 48

Beautiful chapter!!  This is easily my favorite story.  I am in no hurry for this story to end.  Sorry for not commenting on the last few chapters...real life got in the way.  I get so excited when I see an update.  Thank you for this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 48

As always a wonderfully written, nice long chapter.  It's like seeing a picture and eperiencing their emotions just reading this.  Okay, here's to hopes that Melanie gets her comeupance.  That we learn what Emmett is up to.  I wonder if JR misses Gus and will she miss her mama once it's all said in done.  And how Brian's developing loss of sight, I'm just guessing here, developes. Great, great, great chapter and looking forward to more when ever you post it.

Reviewer: kris (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 48

this story needs to be wrapped up.  i have been reading it forever once in a whilke.  i've about given up.  so finish it already.

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2011 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 48

Another beautiful chapter, Cyn. I really like the way you are protraying all of these characters. They are all so well rounded and have so much depth. The dramatic irony here is killing me, though! :)

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