Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Ilovelife19 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2023 04:48 AM · On: Jealousy

Looooove

Reviewer: BBQueen (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2019 04:37 PM · On: Fire

Looking forward for updates. Like all your stories just really wish you would finish them. Most are not complete.  Great writer

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 06:40 PM · On: Jealousy

cant wait for update

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2017 03:07 AM · On: Jealousy

Hi, just finished reading this story and loved it.  Can't wait untill you update again.  Thank you for giving us such good stories.

Reviewer: Luvable (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2016 08:58 PM · On: Jealousy

Please continue.

Love the story so far.

 

Keep on Writing.

 

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2016 10:34 AM · On: Jealousy

Loving this story.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2015 05:57 PM · On: Jealousy

are you still writing and are you planing on finishing your stories

Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2015 02:46 PM · On: Jealousy

Would love to see where this was going.

Reviewer: 6frog (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2015 04:40 AM · On: Jealousy

                                                                         This is one of my favorite stories (I love all your fics actualy) but I wish you would write at least one more chapter... I do realize that Brian intends Justin to stay and he'll get his way but it would be lovely reading about it.

Love from 6frog                                                                               

Reviewer: Twinkminded (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2015 06:09 AM · On: Fire

How I wish for an update! I love Edom's work!

Reviewer: e (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2013 04:11 PM · On: Jealousy

Update ssssssssssssssssoon

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2013 08:09 PM · On: Jealousy

I hope all is well with you.

As one of my favorite authors, I hope you come back to MW.

I tried the other sites I found but they are harder to search , and I didn't see that any of the WIP here were finished elsewhere.

I just reread this and read Criminal for the first time.

I would love to see this finished and more on Moon and Master and Criminal.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I am well, but my muse is a fickle bitch, just don't tell her I called her that ;) I do plan to finish my stories, just as soon as inspiration strikes again.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 06:57 PM · On: Jealousy

any idea when you might be updating any of your stories?

Reviewer: Hannah (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 03:47 AM · On: Jealousy

please please finish this! i am loving your writing :D



Author's Response: Thank you so much, I will :)

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2012 02:30 AM · On: Jealousy

Please, Please Please finsh this story. If there is anything i can do to stimulate your muse please let me know.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. RL is kicking my ass at the moment, but I'll try to get my muse to cooperate as soon as possible.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2012 06:09 PM · On: Jealousy

I have only been part of MW for a short time but I think I have read everything you have written here. I love your writing, will your go back and finish all the outstanding stories please? I particularly like ‘Justin is Home’ as it will continue the series. Thank you.

Cheers

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I will go back and finish all my stories, just as soon as I can get my muse to cooporate :)

Reviewer: Christinalin (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 04:46 PM · On: Jealousy

I like your story :) its interesting and i love the caring brian :). But we nees a little bit more action or drama, than it would be perfect! 

 

Greetings from germany



Author's Response: Thank you. It's not really an action kind of story, but I'll keep that in mind :)

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2012 12:25 AM · On: Jealousy

Wonderful chapter. Nice return to QAF stories. I like that Brian made the two slips he made, " your side of the bed" and " do you wnt me low you?" hope you update soon, and maybe ? Update other stories?  Welcome back!

Reviewer: mariana (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2012 12:53 PM · On: Jealousy

Almost 3 years between updates. Thank you but it's not for me.

I'll wait for this story to be finished before I'll read it. I'd enjoy many of your stories over the years.

message to mariana:

שלום

הדוא"ל שלך לא עובד

אם תצטרף והיכנס, אתה יכול למחוק הערות סקירה שלך

~Admin

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Author's Response: That's ok. I can understand that.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 10:49 PM · On: Jealousy

This was a delight to read.  Lots of possibilities.  I look forward to the next chapter!

All the best,

Laura



Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2012 01:59 AM · On: Jealousy

Let me write a review comment so you can try to answer it and see if my advice works for you.

 



Author's Response: Thanks, I hope it works :)

 

 

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 11:09 PM · On: Jealousy

I'M SO GLAD YOU ARE BAAAAAACK. I've missed you so much, and because of no update from you, I had to re-read your stories a few times over. Well I had fun doing it. Waiting for more, hugs, Metka



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Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:43 PM · On: Jealousy

i love your story.

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Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:11 PM · On: Jealousy

This is a really nice story - sure hope I'm not sorry I started it - the updates seem to be very spread out - and I hate having to read an entire story to remember it before moving on to the next chapter.

I love the pacing here - not rushing in to fix things with Justin and Brian - but giving them...and us...the little glimpses of hope that things will work out just the way we know is the only acceptable.

Brian making that last admission so easily - even though he couched it with a concern for the nurses' professionalism and not the fact that he can't stand anyone coming on to HIS Justin...let's us know that he might be more willing to open up his heart to Justin in a way he never could on the show at this stae of the game - we can only hope.

great writing - hoping to hear more very soon

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

 

 

Edom is having issues with our text editors. I'm trying to help her with it.

~admin

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2012 08:03 PM · On: Jealousy

hey ru updateing any more i love ur site i read this story 10 times justin is a hero  he saved gus he loves gus  thanku  kim



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Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2012 11:07 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

update soon

I hope Brian doesn't take Justin back too easily. Justin should know how much of an ass he was for leaving and cheating on Brian. And how he hurt Brian so much. 



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2012 03:38 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER BUT YOU HAVE A LOT OF UNFINISH STORIES WHEN WILL YOU FINISH THEM



Author's Response:

Reviewer: sansastark (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2011 07:40 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

i really hope you plan to continue this at some point!!!



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Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2011 12:56 PM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

I like this story!!!

I really want read more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I promise to finish :)

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 05:42 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

I am looking forward to more. Please update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I will continue, I just don't quite know when, sorry.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 01:38 PM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

I finally got around to reading the updates on this story.  I love it so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2010 11:42 PM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

Hi Edom!

I am hoping you will complete this great story.

I continue to re-read all  you stories because I feel they are great.

Please keep up the great work.

Have a nice summer!

Debbie

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:17 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

Hi Edom!

I love your stories and just finished this chapter. I am hoping you will write more for the story.

I love it that Justin saved Gus from the fire and both Brian and him will be together again. I also love your hatred for Michael. I too thought he was a whinning, ungrateful, spoiled, mom's boy who never grew up and did not appreciate Ben. Great work on that that part.

Please keep on writing any of your storied because I think you are a great writer. i would rate your stories a 100% if I could.

Have a nice Spring!!

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:03 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

Edom,

I am hoping you will continue this story as well as the Dare series too.

You are truly a gifted writer. I love your stories.

I am hoping you have Gus coming over to visit Justin at the loft. Plus, Brian being a devoted partner to Justin while he is recovering from his broken hip.

Again, please continue your gifted writing.

Have a  Happy Holiday and coming new year!

Debbie



Author's Response:

I am so sorry that I haven't responded to this before now. I don't get the e-amils telling me I have a new review, no idea why.

I will continue and finish all my WIP's, that's a promise. I hate to start a story and then find out it's never going to be finished, I'll never do that to people.

I really don't know what will happen next in this story, but I promise it will be a happy ending, I never do anything else :)

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 02:29 PM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

Justin moving back into the loft and with Nurse NightingKinney to bring him back to health.



Author's Response:

I know, it's just to delicious to contemplate :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 06:59 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

Mikey and Debbie reacted to the news in typical fashion..... Mikey like a clueless idiot...and Debbie making enough food to feed an army... I hope Brian makes it clear to Justin... that he is doing all this because he really cares about him...and not because he saved Gus's life.... 



Author's Response:

That they did, Deb is convinced that food cures all :) Typical Italian mother from what I hear ;)

Oh, I'm sure Justin will get the picture at some point :D

Thanks.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 06:57 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

"try not to be too big an inconvenience to Brian." that won't happen if brian let's him breathe.

if i were brian, i'd ban michael from setting foot anywhere near the loft. EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! neither one needs his bullshit, now or later.



Author's Response:

I know, but Justin doesn't not at this point; he'll get the picture, eventually ;)

Michael is an ass who talks before he thinks. They really don't need his bullshit, but at least Ben called back to find out what was wrong.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2009 05:19 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

Brian is really going to have to tell Justin his feelings and show him, else Justin's just going  to think he's an inconvience and that Brian is doing it for Gus.

Great chapter. Mikie.... he needs some St. John's wort



Author's Response:

He really is, Justin is very uncertain about his place in Brian's life as it is right now.

Mikey is an idiot, he should have realized that Brian was concerned since he actually called about it, fuckhead.

Thanks.

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 05:07 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

You are welcome, and thanks for the comment :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 04:36 AM · On: The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with a Single Step

Great update! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you :D

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:44 PM · On: The female invasion

Loved seeing the boys band together against all those people who claim to know what's best for them. Wonderful job yet again. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Yeah, if they had only done that in canon :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:21 AM · On: The female invasion

when is everyone going to realize that no matter what may have happened between them or is going to happen between them, they are what each other needs. be it good or bad it's what they crave. have to have.

liked this chapte alot. justin is old enough to decide what is best for him.



Author's Response:

I'm not sure they all will going to realize that. They are always going to interfere, one way or another.

Thank you so much, and yes he is :)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:29 AM · On: The female invasion

Great Job!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Waking up in the hospital

Great job! Justin so knows Brian!



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yes, he really does :)

Reviewer: indigo556 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 12:11 AM · On: The female invasion

:) I loved your depictions of the girls. So true. 

I also loved Justin telling his mother "more forcefully' than he meant to; I can imagine he'd be very defensive considering everything and wants to minimize the Brian-bashing, so to speak. 

 

And Brian with "I might want that twat back in my bed." That makes me laugh. Sure, Brian..."maybe" you do. :) 

Good chapter! :)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you thought my character portraits were acurate, I'm always scared that it's going to be hard to recognise people.

Justin is seriously tired of the blame Brian game everybody seams to play all the time, like he never messes up himself ;)

Yeah, Brian is not quite ready to admit he wants Jusitn back, not even to himself.

Thanks.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:56 PM · On: The female invasion

 

That went well... Jennifer needs to get over herself.. I realize Justin is her son.. but.. that doesn't give her the right to ask embarrassing questions and act snippy towards Brian... I can't wait to see how Lindsay and Debbie react to the news... 



Author's Response:

It went better than Brian had expected I think :)

Jennifer suffers from you're-my-son-I-know-what's-best-for-you-itis ;)

Deb and Linz should be fun to write :Oh and Michael

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:17 PM · On: The female invasion

great story. just because justin is jennifers son, she has to learn to accept the fact that he is an adult and the fact that brian is in justins life.. her attitude really pisses me off sometimes.. and yes justin belongs with brian and everyone knows it including brian...

can't wait to read more...



Author's Response:

I think that's a universal parent thing :) BUt, yeah, Jennifer has it in abundance.

Oh, they belong together alright, they just have to figure out how to talk to each other.

Thank you.

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:29 PM · On: The female invasion

Hi Edom!

I love this story. Please keep up the great writing!

I cannot wait until the gang especially Debbie comes to see her Sunshine.

I love it when Brian and Justin get together. So, am hoping for a happy ending.

Thanks again for all the great stories you keep on writing like the series, Justin comes home, etc.

Have a nice August.

Debbie



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thank you so much. It means a lot to me that people like my writing.

The meeting with Deb should be interesting :)

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Waking up in the hospital

I was so happy to see an update and even more thrilled once I read it. Eagerly looking forward to your next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like this.

Thanks.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Waking up in the hospital

 

Great start.... I am glad that Gus was ok and Justin didn't put up too much af a fight about staying at the loft... all that time together hopefully.. will be more than enough to get their relationship back on track..



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yeah, Gus was never supposed to get hurt in this ;)

THey will at least have a lot of time to talk :)

Reviewer: indigo556 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Waking up in the hospital

I love their conversation -- it really reflects the way they are together. Brian is right there, ready to see him through the recovery....it really shows how much growth he's made.... and Justin is more sensitive to what Brian is trying to give...

A great chapter!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yeah, they've both realized what they threw away when they didn't ask for what they REALLY wanted, not what everybody else thought they should have.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Waking up in the hospital

alot can happen in 12 weeks at the loft.

can you tell i'm smiling here just at the thought? yay.



Author's Response:

Oh, yeah, 12 weeks is a really long time :D

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Waking up in the hospital

more more more



Author's Response:

Very soon, promise.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Waking up in the hospital

yeah, not so snarky Brian.



Author's Response:

LOL, yeah, he figured he had to tell Mel what had happened.

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Waking up in the hospital

I didn´t think that Justin would accept Brian´s help so easily but I´m happy he did. It´s the best solution for both of them and it gives them the opportunity to talk. And I think Justin´s thrilled to hear that after all Brian calls himself his partner. He´s still onto him. I hope there won´t be much interferences from their friends. that´s always where the problems started before.

I´m looking forward to the next chapter,Sunny



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Justin is an inteligent man, and he loves Brian. Those two facts contributed to him accepting the help with as little fuss as he did.

Oh, we'll see how much interference there'll be :)

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Fire

wow, exciting, and a major cliffhanger, can't wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yeah, I'm evil that way :)



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yeah, I'm evil that way :)



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yeah, I'm evil that way :)

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Fire

PLEASE update soon!!!!!



Author's Response:

I will :D

Reviewer: Marieta (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Fire

Hi, this is going to be one more goooooood story you have been writing all along. I'm waiting for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Fire

Oh my gosh! I can't believe the swell of unique and brilliant stories lately. This is awesome. Update soon please? I can't wait to see what happens when Justin wakes up.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot :)

I've already started chapter 2 :D

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Fire

beautiful. can't wait to see how this goes. love your stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Fire

Another great story in the making!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks and update more, please..........



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

I will, promise :)

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Fire

good start



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Fire

Oh my god! MORE MORE MORE



Author's Response:

Thanks :D

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Fire


Edom,

I love your stories and I hope the Brian and Justin do get together in this one. I love the concept of Justin saving Gus and possible Brian and Justin get together. I never did like the fiddler.

This will definitely be good if not great story.

I know it will be because I have stated before, YOU ARE GREAT!!!

Please keep this and the other stories coming.

Thanks!

Debbie



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like my work :)

I never liked the fiddler either ;)

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: veglogic (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Fire

Amazing start. I can't wait for an update.



Author's Response:

Thank you :D

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Fire

Great first chapter. i don't think justin would really care if brian lied to the doctors of who he is.. thank god they are alright.. can't wait to see where this goes..



Author's Response:

Thank you.

I don't think Justin will mind all that much either :)

Reviewer: indigo556 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Fire

Oooh, what an exciting story! Kids have a hard time even in fire drills sometimes, so I really sympathized with Justin on this one -- he was so calm in a tough situation. :)

And I love how easily Brian uses the word "partner" in this context!

 

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter (and really, really glad that Justin and Ethan are broken up... :) ). 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Yeah, Justin knew that he needed to stay calm for Gus.

Brian knew it was the only way to get information, and he has used that frase about himself once :)

Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Fire

well it sounds good to me and i'm looking forward to read an update soon! i always like your ff and i read them all!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :D

It's always nice to hear that people like my stuff :)

Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Fire

omg... don't stop now next chapter pleeease



Author's Response:

Thank you :D

Reviewer: jay (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Fire

Wow,  great story so far. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I'm glad you like it.

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